| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped further [further]" | | 1 | "she asked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 86.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
| | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "raced" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "enigmatic" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "tinged" | | 12 | "skipped a beat" | | 13 | "unwavering" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "carried the weight" | | 16 | "shattered" | | 17 | "sense of" | | 18 | "resolve" | | 19 | "wavered" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "tracing" | | 22 | "flickered" | | 23 | "beacon" | | 24 | "desire" | | 25 | "warmth" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of unspoken truth" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 99.36% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "a flicker of regret" | | 1 | "d in determination" |
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| 98.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 942 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Moreau | 1 | | Frenchman | 1 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Aurora | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Frenchman" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.81 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 28.38 | | std | 15.7 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 48 |
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| 99.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "He turned slowly, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — meeting hers with an intensity that made her pulse quicken." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 942 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.028662420382165606 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0074309978768577496 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 98.62% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 13.84 | | std | 5.49 | | cv | 0.397 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 50.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3125 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed the door ajar," | | 1 | "It was the figure standing" | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal suit fit" | | 3 | "It had been months since" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 5 | "He turned slowly, his heterochromatic" | | 6 | "he replied, his voice smooth," | | 7 | "She stepped further into the" | | 8 | "He smiled, a small, enigmatic" | | 9 | "she asked, her voice softer," | | 10 | "He took a step closer," | | 11 | "She had imagined this moment" | | 12 | "she said, a statement of" | | 13 | "she said, the words escaping" | | 14 | "He sighed, a sound that" | | 15 | "he said, his voice low," | | 16 | "She wanted to believe him," | | 17 | "she asked again, needing an" | | 18 | "She took a step forward," | | 19 | "she asked, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.431 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter's heart raced as" | | 1 | "The three deadbolts clattered open," | | 2 | "She pushed the door ajar," | | 3 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, meowed" | | 4 | "It was the figure standing" | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood" | | 6 | "His tailored charcoal suit fit" | | 7 | "Aurora's breath caught in her" | | 8 | "It had been months since" | | 9 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 10 | "He turned slowly, his heterochromatic" | | 11 | "he replied, his voice smooth," | | 12 | "She stepped further into the" | | 13 | "The click of the latch" | | 14 | "Lucien placed the scroll down," | | 15 | "Aurora crossed her arms, a" | | 16 | "He smiled, a small, enigmatic" | | 17 | "The tension between them crackled" | | 18 | "Aurora remembered the nights spent" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice softer," |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "He turned slowly, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — meeting hers with an intensity that made her pulse quicken." | | 1 | "But those memories were tainted by the abruptness of their parting, the unresolved feelings that lingered like shadows." | | 2 | "Aurora felt the pull of it, the undeniable attraction that had always simmered beneath the surface." | | 3 | "Lucien hesitated, his gaze dropping to the floor for a moment before meeting hers once more." | | 4 | "She took a step forward, closing the distance between them, her eyes searching his for the truth she desperately needed." | | 5 | "He reached out, his fingers brushing against her wrist, tracing the crescent-shaped scar that marked her skin." | | 6 | "She took a deep breath, the decision forming in her mind, her heart guiding her towards the answer she knew she wanted to give." | | 7 | "Aurora returned his smile, the warmth of it spreading through her chest, dispelling the shadows of doubt." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within" | | 1 | "Lucien replied, his gaze unwavering" | | 2 | "she said, the words escaping before she could stop them" | | 3 | "Aurora countered, her voice gaining strength" | | 4 | "he said, his voice low, sincere" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "he said, his words a plea wrapped in determination" | | 7 | "she began, her voice trembling with the uncertainty of her emotions" | | 8 | "she said, her voice steady, resolute" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.733 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |