Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJ3SA37BYV7W109WHTQCG

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13.8s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter's heart raced as she fumbled with the keys to Eva's flat, her hands trembling slightly. The three deadbolts clattered open, each one a reminder of the security Eva insisted upon. She pushed the door ajar, the familiar scent of old books and curry wafting through the air. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, meowed in greeting, weaving between her legs. But it wasn't the cat that made her pause. It was the figure standing in the middle of the cluttered room, his silhouette framed by the dim light filtering through the window. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood with his back to her, examining a scroll with the same meticulous care he applied to everything. His tailored charcoal suit fit him like a second skin, the ivory-handled cane resting against the table beside him. Aurora's breath caught in her throat. It had been months since she'd last seen him, since their paths had diverged in a whirlwind of emotions and unspoken words. Yet here he was, in Eva's flat, as if summoned by some unseen force. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. He turned slowly, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — meeting hers with an intensity that made her pulse quicken. "Aurora," he replied, his voice smooth, carrying the faintest trace of his French origins. "What are you doing here?" She stepped further into the room, closing the door behind her. The click of the latch seemed to echo in the silence. Lucien placed the scroll down, his gaze never leaving hers. "Eva mentioned you might be here. I thought it prudent to pay a visit." "Prudent?" Aurora crossed her arms, a defensive gesture she couldn't quite control. "You always did have a way with words." He smiled, a small, enigmatic curve of his lips. "And you always had a way of seeing through them." The tension between them crackled like static electricity, the air thick with the weight of their shared past. Aurora remembered the nights spent in whispered conversations, the stolen glances, the moments when the world seemed to fade away, leaving only the two of them. But those memories were tainted by the abruptness of their parting, the unresolved feelings that lingered like shadows. "Why now, Lucien?" she asked, her voice softer, tinged with curiosity and a hint of vulnerability. He took a step closer, the polished floorboards creaking under his weight. "Because some things cannot remain unsaid forever." Aurora's heart skipped a beat. She had imagined this moment countless times, rehearsed the words she might say, the questions she might ask. But now, faced with the reality of his presence, her mind was a blank canvas, waiting for the first stroke. "Eva's not here," she said, a statement of fact that felt inadequate in the face of their history. "I know," Lucien replied, his gaze unwavering. "I came to see you." The admission hung in the air, a delicate thread connecting them across the room. Aurora felt the pull of it, the undeniable attraction that had always simmered beneath the surface. But there was hurt too, a lingering ache that refused to be ignored. "You left," she said, the words escaping before she could stop them. "Without a word." Lucien's expression shifted, a flicker of regret passing through his eyes. "I had my reasons." "Reasons you never shared," Aurora countered, her voice gaining strength. "You just disappeared." He sighed, a sound that carried the weight of unspoken truths. "I thought it was for the best. For both of us." Aurora shook her head, frustration bubbling up inside her. "You thought wrong." Silence enveloped them, the only sound the distant hum of traffic from Brick Lane below. Lucien's gaze softened, the sharp edges of his demeanour giving way to something more vulnerable. "I never intended to hurt you, Aurora," he said, his voice low, sincere. She wanted to believe him, wanted to trust the sincerity in his words. But trust was a fragile thing, easily shattered and difficult to rebuild. "Why now?" she asked again, needing an answer that made sense of the chaos in her heart. Lucien hesitated, his gaze dropping to the floor for a moment before meeting hers once more. "Because I realised that some things are worth fighting for. Even if it means facing the past." Aurora's resolve wavered, the walls she'd built around her heart beginning to crumble. She took a step forward, closing the distance between them, her eyes searching his for the truth she desperately needed. "And what is it you want, Lucien?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. He reached out, his fingers brushing against her wrist, tracing the crescent-shaped scar that marked her skin. The touch was gentle, familiar, a reminder of the connection they once shared. "I want a chance," he said, his words a plea wrapped in determination. "A chance to make things right." Aurora's heart ached with the weight of his request, the possibility of redemption hanging in the balance. She wanted to say yes, to embrace the hope that flickered in his eyes. But fear held her back, the fear of repeating past mistakes, of opening herself up to pain once more. "Lucien," she began, her voice trembling with the uncertainty of her emotions. He silenced her with a look, his gaze filled with a promise she couldn't ignore. "I know it's a lot to ask. But I'm willing to prove myself, if you'll let me." The sincerity in his words was undeniable, a beacon of hope in the darkness of their shared history. Aurora felt the pull of it, the desire to believe in second chances, to trust in the possibility of a future together. She took a deep breath, the decision forming in her mind, her heart guiding her towards the answer she knew she wanted to give. "Alright," she said, her voice steady, resolute. "But it's going to take time." Lucien nodded, a smile breaking through the tension, a promise of better days ahead. "Time is something I'm willing to give." Aurora returned his smile, the warmth of it spreading through her chest, dispelling the shadows of doubt. She knew it wouldn't be easy, that the road ahead would be fraught with challenges. But for the first time in months, she felt a glimmer of hope, a chance to rewrite their story. As they stood together in the cluttered flat, surrounded by the remnants of Eva's research, Aurora realised that sometimes, the most complicated paths led to the most rewarding destinations. And with Lucien by her side, she was ready to embark on the journey, one step at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped further [further]"
1"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
86.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"raced"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"enigmatic"
count1
9
word"tension"
count2
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"skipped a beat"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"carried the weight"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"wavered"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
21
word"tracing"
count1
22
word"flickered"
count1
23
word"beacon"
count1
24
word"desire"
count1
25
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"raced"
1"reminder"
2"familiar"
3"unspoken"
4"intensity"
5"pulse"
6"echo"
7"silence"
8"enigmatic"
9"tension"
10"weight"
11"tinged"
12"skipped a beat"
13"unwavering"
14"flicker"
15"carried the weight"
16"shattered"
17"sense of"
18"resolve"
19"wavered"
20"whisper"
21"tracing"
22"flickered"
23"beacon"
24"desire"
25"warmth"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken truth"
1"hung in the air"
2"a glimmer of hope"
99.36% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences65
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
1"d in determination"
98.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount942
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva5
Moreau1
Frenchman1
French1
Lucien8
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora13
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Frenchman"
4"Lucien"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.81
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite control"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1107
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean28.38
std15.7
cv0.553
sampleLengths
060
173
242
310
436
527
624
720
819
962
1016
1119
1243
1318
1412
1543
1615
1715
1813
1922
2012
2130
2213
2325
2417
2533
2633
2715
2830
2919
3050
3112
3232
3340
3424
3513
3621
3751
3848
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"were tainted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences80
ratio0.013
matches
0"He turned slowly, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — meeting hers with an intensity that made her pulse quicken."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.028662420382165606
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0074309978768577496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.62% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.84
std5.49
cv0.397
sampleLengths
017
115
217
311
49
523
622
719
86
922
1014
1110
1222
1314
1416
1511
1610
1714
1812
198
209
2110
2218
2326
2418
2516
2612
277
285
2918
3020
3118
327
335
3414
3516
3613
3712
383
3911
404
4110
423
4311
4411
459
463
4715
4815
4913
50.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences65
matches
0"She pushed the door ajar,"
1"It was the figure standing"
2"His tailored charcoal suit fit"
3"It had been months since"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"He turned slowly, his heterochromatic"
6"he replied, his voice smooth,"
7"She stepped further into the"
8"He smiled, a small, enigmatic"
9"she asked, her voice softer,"
10"He took a step closer,"
11"She had imagined this moment"
12"she said, a statement of"
13"she said, the words escaping"
14"He sighed, a sound that"
15"he said, his voice low,"
16"She wanted to believe him,"
17"she asked again, needing an"
18"She took a step forward,"
19"she asked, her voice barely"
ratio0.431
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences65
matches
0"Aurora Carter's heart raced as"
1"The three deadbolts clattered open,"
2"She pushed the door ajar,"
3"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, meowed"
4"It was the figure standing"
5"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood"
6"His tailored charcoal suit fit"
7"Aurora's breath caught in her"
8"It had been months since"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"He turned slowly, his heterochromatic"
11"he replied, his voice smooth,"
12"She stepped further into the"
13"The click of the latch"
14"Lucien placed the scroll down,"
15"Aurora crossed her arms, a"
16"He smiled, a small, enigmatic"
17"The tension between them crackled"
18"Aurora remembered the nights spent"
19"she asked, her voice softer,"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He turned slowly, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — meeting hers with an intensity that made her pulse quicken."
1"But those memories were tainted by the abruptness of their parting, the unresolved feelings that lingered like shadows."
2"Aurora felt the pull of it, the undeniable attraction that had always simmered beneath the surface."
3"Lucien hesitated, his gaze dropping to the floor for a moment before meeting hers once more."
4"She took a step forward, closing the distance between them, her eyes searching his for the truth she desperately needed."
5"He reached out, his fingers brushing against her wrist, tracing the crescent-shaped scar that marked her skin."
6"She took a deep breath, the decision forming in her mind, her heart guiding her towards the answer she knew she wanted to give."
7"Aurora returned his smile, the warmth of it spreading through her chest, dispelling the shadows of doubt."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
1"Lucien replied, his gaze unwavering"
2"she said, the words escaping before she could stop them"
3"Aurora countered, her voice gaining strength"
4"he said, his voice low, sincere"
5"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"he said, his words a plea wrapped in determination"
7"she began, her voice trembling with the uncertainty of her emotions"
8"she said, her voice steady, resolute"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.8506%