Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJ4417AHVR4KGQ2ZZ07YP

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.000658
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door to The Raven’s Nest swung open with a familiar jingle, metal catching a sliver of dim yellow light as it clanged shut behind a figure. Aurora Carter paused briefly in the doorway, blinking against the haze of cigarette smoke and muted amber lamps that draped the room. Her black hair caught a flicker of neon, shadows shadowing her bright blue eyes, giving her an almost spectral appearance as she stepped inside. She hadn’t been here in years, not since before the night her hand was sliced by that reckless boy and everything else spiraled out of control. She moved slowly, senses sharpened, memories flickering like static in her mind. The bar was quieter than she remembered, just a handful of patrons clustered in the shadows, lost to their own drinks and secrets. A jukebox played something faint and far away, the bass hum resonating beneath her skin. She found the familiar scent of aged whisky and old leather promising safety, even here. Her eyes swept over the room, settling on the corner where Silas Blackwood always sat. The man looked up from behind the bar, his hazel eyes narrowing before an unmistakable flicker of recognition crossed his face. The lines around his eyes deepened as he pushed off the barstool, older but still calm, still guarded. Aurora hesitated, then made her way over. The space between them shrank with each step, thick with unspoken histories. Silas reached out, one hand resting on the bar’s edge as he looked her over with quiet scrutiny. His voice was gravelly, but smooth with an undercurrent of curiosity. “Rory.” It was the nickname she had long buried, buried beneath years of moving on, of burying herself deep into this new life. She nodded, unable to speak at first, a ghost of a smile flickering. “Silas.” He gestured to the empty stool beside him. “Long time.” She perched on the edge, unconventional for her usual composure. “Too long.” Her voice was softer than she expected. He studied her face, the subtle shift in her expression. “You look different. Changed somehow.” Her gaze dropped onto her hands, fidgeting with the cuff of her jacket. “Life does that,” she said vaguely, then took a steadying breath. “I didn’t mean to run into you like this.” His eyes flicked to her scar, a small crescent on her wrist visible with her sleeve rolled back. “That scar.” She touched it absentmindedly, the memory flickering sharp and bitter. “Thought I’d outlive its story. Guess I was wrong.” Silas looked away briefly, fingers tapping the bar. “People change. That’s what life presses into you.” Aurora nodded again, though her jaw clenched. “Sometimes, it feels like I’m carrying someone else’s history, not my own.” He studied her silently, then reached into his pocket, producing a small glass of amber liquid. “How about a drink?” She shook her head slightly. “No, thanks. I’m not really here to drink.” He let out a low chuckle, dry and regretful. “You’re always such a troublemaker, Rory. Even now.” His eyes darkened briefly, and his voice turned intimate, quiet enough to hide behind the low hum of conversation. “What’s really brought you back?” She hesitated, then let her gaze drift past him, over the photographs on the wall—black and white shots of spies and locations, stories she once knew intimately. “Just passing through. Needed the familiar.” He studied her again, his expression unreadable. “You’ve been on the run since Cardiff. That’s a long way to come for just the comfort of a bar.” Her laugh was short, humorless. “Sometimes, comfort is just a memory. I wanted to see if you’re still around.” “I’m around,” Silas said softly, voice a whisper, “but I don’t think I’m the same anymore. And maybe neither are you.” She looked at him sharply, momentarily caught off guard. "What makes you think that?" He rubbed his beard thoughtfully. “You look different. Less of the girl who ran her head into trouble, more of someone who’s learned how to hide it. I can see it in the way you carry yourself. You’re not fleeing anymore. You’ve decided to stand still, even for a moment.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “Maybe I just ran out of places to run.” He nodded, as if that explained everything, but she sensed he knew more. “Ever think about what would’ve happened if you stayed? Tried to make peace with what you left behind?” Her eyes flashed, tinged with something undefinable. “No. I didn’t stay. I ran so I wouldn’t be buried under all that regret.” Silas leaned forward, elbows on the bar. “Regret doesn’t go away. It gets darker. You learn to live with it.” She looked away, the words interior blueprints of her struggle. “Living with it’s the hardest part.” She paused, then spun a little, fixing her gaze on the flickering neon sign outside the window. “I came here for a reason, Silas. I didn’t just want to see an old friend. I need help.” His face didn’t change, but his fingers traced the signet ring on his hand. “Help’s not exactly what I give out easily, Rory.” “I know.” She pressed her fingers against her thigh, trying to find solid ground. “But I’m not asking for much. Just... advice. The kind only you can give.” He studied her deeper now, the lines of his face softening for a moment. “Advice has come at a price.” “I’ve paid enough.” Silas exhaled slowly, eyes narrowing. “Whatever’s chasing you—” “It’s not chasing me,” she interrupted quietly. “It’s waiting, and it’s the reason I can’t stay still anymore.” For a beat, Silas looked at her in silence. A flicker of something—concern? Understanding?—crossed his face before he leaned back. “Then we’re both running from shadows,” he finally said, voice low. “And shadows aren’t easy to outrun.” Aurora met his gaze, her voice steady. “It’s not about outrunning. It’s about finding a way to live with them.” The silence between them grew thick with the weight of shared history, unspoken regrets pressing into the space. The door to the bar swung open again, faintly, wind slipping inside, bringing with it a cold breath and the distant, familiar hum of London night. They both turned, the moment suspended, caught between what was and what might never be.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:54:02.885Z" 2/19/2026, 10:54:02 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said vaguely [vaguely]"
1"His eyes darkened briefly [briefly]"
2"Silas said softly [softly]"
3"She paused then [then]"
4"she interrupted quietly [quietly]"
5"he finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.316
66.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1047
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1047
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"flicker"
count3
2
word"spectral"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flicker"
2"spectral"
3"unspoken"
4"flicked"
5"jaw clenched"
6"unreadable"
7"whisper"
8"tinged"
9"traced"
10"silence"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1045
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount704
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Aurora5
London1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1045
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.88
std14.16
cv0.569
sampleLengths
073
138
253
354
419
530
636
710
819
915
1033
1120
1219
1316
1419
1520
1613
1741
1833
1927
2019
2121
2214
2350
2412
2513
2618
2722
2820
2952
3023
3128
3220
333
348
3518
3620
3717
3820
3918
4026
4115
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was sliced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"She hesitated, then let her gaze drift past him, over the photographs on the wall—black and white shots of spies and locations, stories she once knew intimately."
1"A flicker of something—concern?"
2"Understanding?—crossed his face before he leaned back."
78.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount706
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.059490084985835696
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.025495750708215296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.15
std7.55
cv0.621
sampleLengths
027
122
224
326
412
523
615
715
815
921
1018
117
1212
1318
1411
151
1622
1713
181
198
202
2110
229
2310
245
2513
2611
279
2818
292
3010
319
328
338
347
3512
3616
374
385
398
409
4127
425
4327
446
457
4620
475
4814
4921
65.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4186046511627907
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her black hair caught a"
1"She hadn’t been here in"
2"She moved slowly, senses sharpened,"
3"She found the familiar scent"
4"Her eyes swept over the"
5"His voice was gravelly, but"
6"It was the nickname she"
7"She nodded, unable to speak"
8"He gestured to the empty"
9"She perched on the edge,"
10"Her voice was softer than"
11"He studied her face, the"
12"Her gaze dropped onto her"
13"she said vaguely, then took"
14"His eyes flicked to her"
15"She touched it absentmindedly, the"
16"He studied her silently, then"
17"She shook her head slightly."
18"He let out a low"
19"His eyes darkened briefly, and"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences56
matches
0"The door to The Raven’s"
1"Aurora Carter paused briefly in"
2"Her black hair caught a"
3"She hadn’t been here in"
4"She moved slowly, senses sharpened,"
5"The bar was quieter than"
6"A jukebox played something faint"
7"She found the familiar scent"
8"Her eyes swept over the"
9"The man looked up from"
10"The lines around his eyes"
11"Aurora hesitated, then made her"
12"The space between them shrank"
13"Silas reached out, one hand"
14"His voice was gravelly, but"
15"It was the nickname she"
16"She nodded, unable to speak"
17"He gestured to the empty"
18"She perched on the edge,"
19"Her voice was softer than"
ratio0.964
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She pressed, trying to find solid ground"
1"he finally said, voice low"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"she interrupted quietly (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.105
71.9625%