| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 696 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 696 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "unravel" | | 4 | "sinister" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "profound" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "reverberated" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "anticipation" | | 19 | "vibrated" | | 20 | "otherworldly" | | 21 | "pulse" | | 22 | "imposing" | | 23 | "trepidation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 689 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Chapter 7: The Fae Grove's Unsettling Hush" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 672 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Unsettling | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Could | 1 | | Rory | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.682 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sharing a sinister secret" | | 1 | "power that seemed to be stirring, awakening all around her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 689 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.30% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 82.16% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 43.06 | | std | 18.84 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 40 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 107 | | matches | | |
| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 42 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the sensation persisted—a nagging feeling that she was being led, her attention manipulated by unseen hands." | | 1 | "It was then she saw it—or thought she did—a figure, tall and imposing, standing just beyond the reach of the flickering, flower-born light." |
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| 82.15% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 679 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "eerie, silver-tinged illumination" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.05154639175257732 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022091310751104567 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 42 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 98.29% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 42 | | mean | 16.4 | | std | 6.49 | | cv | 0.396 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 5 |
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| 99.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5952380952380952 | | totalSentences | 42 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the rustling ceased." | | 1 | "Just the trees, the stones," | | 2 | "Only the escalating hum of" |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "She had arrived seeking solitude," | | 1 | "She paused, her head cocked" | | 2 | "Her voice, however, seemed to" | | 3 | "She quickened her pace, a" | | 4 | "She turned sharply, only to" | | 5 | "It was then she saw" |
| | ratio | 0.143 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "**Chapter 7: The Fae Grove's" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped out of" | | 2 | "She had arrived seeking solitude," | | 3 | "The trees, adorned with wildflowers" | | 4 | "Rory's hand instinctively rose to" | | 5 | "The sensation was almost reassuring," | | 6 | "Rory muttered to herself, recalling" | | 7 | "The thought sent a shiver" | | 8 | "whatever had drawn her." | | 9 | "The silence was almost palpable," | | 10 | "Rory took a step forward," | | 11 | "She paused, her head cocked" | | 12 | "The sound was too light," | | 13 | "Rory said with a wry" | | 14 | "Her voice, however, seemed to" | | 15 | "Rory ventured deeper, the standing" | | 16 | "She quickened her pace, a" | | 17 | "The air, heavy with the" | | 18 | "Rory's breaths came in shorter" | | 19 | "The silence that followed was" |
| | ratio | 0.69 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the sensation persisted—a nagging" | | 1 | "As if in response, the" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She had arrived seeking solitude, hoping to unravel the mystifying dreams that had plagued her for weeks, ever since receiving the Heartstone Pendant from an un…" | | 1 | "The trees, adorned with wildflowers that bloomed defiantly year-round, seemed to lean in, as if sharing a sinister secret." | | 2 | "The air vibrated with an otherworldly energy, a power that seemed to be stirring, awakening all around her." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice steady, though her heart now raced with anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |