Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJ73WVWFVR8K29S6MZJC5

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29.5s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Chapter 7: The Fae Grove's Unsettling Hush** Aurora Carter stepped out of the mist-shrouded darkness, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the eerie, silver-tinged illumination within the Fae Grove. Ancient oak standing stones, like nature's own sentinels, loomed around her, marking the boundary of this peculiar place. She had arrived seeking solitude, hoping to unravel the mystifying dreams that had plagued her for weeks, ever since receiving the Heartstone Pendant from an unknown benefactor. The trees, adorned with wildflowers that bloomed defiantly year-round, seemed to lean in, as if sharing a sinister secret. Rory's hand instinctively rose to the pendant, now a constant companion, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly against her skin. The sensation was almost reassuring, except for the unsettling conviction that it had guided her here, to this forsaken grove, at precisely 11:47 PM. "Time works differently here," Rory muttered to herself, recalling Eva's hushed warnings about the grove's bizarre time behavior. Could an hour here indeed stretch into days outside? The thought sent a shiver down her spine, but she stood firm, her eyes scanning the clearing for any sign of... whatever had drawn her. The silence was almost palpable, broken only by the soft, mournful sighs of the wind through the oaks. Rory took a step forward, the crunch of gravel beneath her boots jarringly loud in the stillness. She paused, her head cocked to one side, as a faint rustling emerged from the underbrush. The sound was too light, too deliberate, to be merely the wind or small nocturnal creatures. "A century of solitude might make anyone chatty," Rory said with a wry smile, attempting to dispel the growing unease. Her voice, however, seemed to swallow itself whole, leaving behind an even thicker, more oppressive silence. Rory ventured deeper, the standing stones casting long, ominous shadows on the ground. With each step, the rustling grew louder, though its source remained elusive. She quickened her pace, a decision driven more by the accumulating tension than any clear destination in mind. As she walked, the wildflowers seemed to close in, their usually vibrant petals muted in the dim light, resembling more the pallid faces of unseen observers. The air, heavy with the scent of damp earth and blooming flowers, began to feel suffocating. Rory's breaths came in shorter gasps, her heart pounding out a rhythm that echoed the growing murmurs of the grove. Suddenly, the rustling ceased. The silence that followed was complete, a void so profound it seemed to have a presence of its own, watching her. Rory spun around, her eyes desperate to pinpoint any movement, but there was nothing. Just the trees, the stones, and the unblinking, silentflowers. "Hello?" The word left her lips barely above a whisper, yet in this vacuum, it reverberated like a challenge. The response was not what she expected. From the corner of her eye, Rory caught a flutter of movement near one of the oaks. She turned sharply, only to find nothing. Yet, the sensation persisted—a nagging feeling that she was being led, her attention manipulated by unseen hands. "Enough games," Rory said, her voice steady, though her heart now raced with anticipation. As if in response, the darkness itself appeared to thicken around her, the shadows twisting into forms that teased at the edge of her vision. A soft, ethereal glow began to emanate from the wildflowers, casting the grove in an unearthly light. The air vibrated with an otherworldly energy, a power that seemed to be stirring, awakening all around her. In the midst of this, Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant's pulse quicken, synchronizing with the burgeoning power of the Fae Grove. It was then she saw it—or thought she did—a figure, tall and imposing, standing just beyond the reach of the flickering, flower-born light. "Who's there?" Rory called out, her voice firm, though a thread of trepidation wove its way through her words. There was no answer. Only the escalating hum of the grove's energy, the pounding of her heart, and the unshakeable conviction that whatever stood at the edge of the light was not of this world... and was waiting for her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount696
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"suddenly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount696
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"unravel"
count1
4
word"sinister"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count2
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"reverberated"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
20
word"otherworldly"
count1
21
word"pulse"
count1
22
word"imposing"
count1
23
word"trepidation"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"sentinels"
2"loomed"
3"unravel"
4"sinister"
5"down her spine"
6"scanning"
7"silence"
8"palpable"
9"oppressive"
10"quickened"
11"tension"
12"pounding"
13"echoed"
14"profound"
15"whisper"
16"reverberated"
17"raced"
18"anticipation"
19"vibrated"
20"otherworldly"
21"pulse"
22"imposing"
23"trepidation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences42
matches
0"d with anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences42
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords689
ratio0.01
matches
0"Chapter 7: The Fae Grove's Unsettling Hush"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount672
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove3
Unsettling1
Aurora1
Carter1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Eva1
Could1
Rory11
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Pendant"
globalScore0.682
windowScore0.833
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sharing a sinister secret"
1"power that seemed to be stirring, awakening all around her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount689
matches(empty)
87.30% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"feeling that she"
82.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean43.06
std18.84
cv0.438
sampleLengths
07
167
263
352
467
536
643
762
848
919
1048
1114
1260
1344
1419
1540
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"being led"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs107
matches
0"was waiting"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences42
ratio0.048
matches
0"Yet, the sensation persisted—a nagging feeling that she was being led, her attention manipulated by unseen hands."
1"It was then she saw it—or thought she did—a figure, tall and imposing, standing just beyond the reach of the flickering, flower-born light."
82.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"eerie, silver-tinged illumination"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05154639175257732
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.022091310751104567
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences42
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.29% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences42
mean16.4
std6.49
cv0.396
sampleLengths
07
122
218
327
419
520
624
718
89
921
104
1118
1217
1316
1416
1520
1616
1713
1812
1918
2026
2116
2220
234
2421
2514
269
2719
287
2917
307
3117
3214
3325
3417
3518
3621
3723
3819
394
4031
415
99.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5952380952380952
totalSentences42
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences42
matches
0"Suddenly, the rustling ceased."
1"Just the trees, the stones,"
2"Only the escalating hum of"
ratio0.071
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences42
matches
0"She had arrived seeking solitude,"
1"She paused, her head cocked"
2"Her voice, however, seemed to"
3"She quickened her pace, a"
4"She turned sharply, only to"
5"It was then she saw"
ratio0.143
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences42
matches
0"**Chapter 7: The Fae Grove's"
1"Aurora Carter stepped out of"
2"She had arrived seeking solitude,"
3"The trees, adorned with wildflowers"
4"Rory's hand instinctively rose to"
5"The sensation was almost reassuring,"
6"Rory muttered to herself, recalling"
7"The thought sent a shiver"
8"whatever had drawn her."
9"The silence was almost palpable,"
10"Rory took a step forward,"
11"She paused, her head cocked"
12"The sound was too light,"
13"Rory said with a wry"
14"Her voice, however, seemed to"
15"Rory ventured deeper, the standing"
16"She quickened her pace, a"
17"The air, heavy with the"
18"Rory's breaths came in shorter"
19"The silence that followed was"
ratio0.69
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"Yet, the sensation persisted—a nagging"
1"As if in response, the"
ratio0.048
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She had arrived seeking solitude, hoping to unravel the mystifying dreams that had plagued her for weeks, ever since receiving the Heartstone Pendant from an un…"
1"The trees, adorned with wildflowers that bloomed defiantly year-round, seemed to lean in, as if sharing a sinister secret."
2"The air vibrated with an otherworldly energy, a power that seemed to be stirring, awakening all around her."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steady, though her heart now raced with anticipation"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
76.7333%