Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJ7NXA90M9B5ZZ0NSW8D8

Run Details

Duration:
7.1s
Cost:
$0.000225

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp stone and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang of old blood. Detective Quinn’s boots crunched over broken glass as she stepped over the yellow tape, her sharp jaw set in a line of disapproval. The scene wasn’t just messy; it was *wrong*. “You sure this is the right place?” DS Carter’s voice cut through the silence, his breath fogging in the cold air. He adjusted his cap, the brim casting a shadow over his face. “No signs of forced entry, no signs of struggle—just a body.” Quinn didn’t look at him. Her gaze locked onto the figure sprawled on the tracks, arms splayed like a starfish, fingers twitching. The man’s skin had that unnatural pallor, the kind that didn’t fade even in the dim emergency lights. His eyes were open, glassy, staring at nothing. “He’s been dead a while,” Carter murmured, crouching beside the body. “But not long enough to explain this.” Quinn crouched too, her gloved fingers brushing the man’s wrist. No pulse. No rigor. Just the faintest hint of warmth, like embers in ash. She lifted his sleeve, exposing a thin, jagged scar along his forearm—too precise to be accidental. A ritual mark, maybe. Or a brand. “You think it’s supernatural?” Carter asked, his voice careful. Quinn didn’t answer. She knelt closer, her sharp eyes tracing the edges of the body. The man’s clothes were torn, but not by struggle. They were *cut*—neat, surgical slits along the seams, as if someone had been inside him before he died. Her stomach twisted. “Look at his hands,” she said, her voice low. Carter leaned in. The man’s fingers were splayed wide, nails blackened at the tips, as if he’d been holding something small and dark when he died. Something that had burned away. “Like he was holding a candle,” Carter said slowly. Quinn didn’t agree or disagree. She stood, her boots crunching again as she moved to the far wall, where a single bone token lay half-buried in the dirt. The kind that got you into the Veil Market. “You ever hear of that place?” she asked, not waiting for an answer. Carter shook his head. “Should I have?” “No.” Quinn’s voice was sharp. She crouched beside the token, her fingers hovering. The bone was smooth, almost too perfect, like it had been carved from something alive. “This isn’t just a crime scene. This is a message.” She stood, her gaze sweeping over the tracks. The body wasn’t the only thing out of place. The air hummed with something—static, like a radio caught between stations. Quinn pulled her watch from her wrist, the leather strap worn smooth from years of service. The timepiece glowed faintly, the face etched with sigils she didn’t recognise. “What the hell is that?” Carter asked, following her gaze. Quinn didn’t look away from the watch. “Not mine.” A shadow moved at the edge of her vision. She turned just in time to see a figure slip into the station, their silhouette too tall, too lean. The person wore a long coat, the collar turned up against the cold, their face obscured by the brim of a hat. “You shouldn’t be here,” Quinn called, her voice cutting through the silence. The figure didn’t stop. They moved with purpose, their boots silent on the broken glass. Quinn’s hand twitched toward her sidearm, but she hesitated. Something about the way they moved—too precise, too *controlled*. Carter must have seen it too. “Quinn—” “Stay back,” she ordered, her voice low. The figure reached the body, crouching beside it with the same careful precision as Quinn had. They didn’t touch the man. Instead, they reached into their coat and pulled out a small brass compass, its casing etched with sigils. The needle spun wildly before settling, pointing not at the body, but at the far wall—a place where the stone had been disturbed, where something dark and pulsing seeped through the cracks. Quinn’s breath caught. She knew that compass. “You’ve got three seconds to explain yourself,” she said, her voice dangerously calm. The figure didn’t turn. “I’m here to help.” “Bullshit.” Quinn’s hand found her gun, her finger tightening around the grip. “Who are you?” The figure finally looked up, their face half-hidden in shadow. “Eva Kowalski,” they said. “And you’re about to get a lot more than you bargained for.” The needle on the compass spun again, faster this time, the brass casing glowing faintly in the dark. The air around them thickened, the static growing louder, the body on the tracks beginning to *shift*, the skin peeling back like wet paper to reveal something beneath—something that wasn’t human. Quinn’s finger tightened on the trigger. “Run,” Eva said, her voice urgent. Carter didn’t wait. He bolted for the exit, his boots pounding against the stone. Quinn didn’t move. She kept her gun trained on the figure, her sharp eyes locked on the compass, the sigils glowing brighter, the air around them warping like heat off pavement. “You’re going to regret that,” she said, her voice a low growl. Eva didn’t flinch. “Maybe. But you’re going to regret not listening.”
total_cost0.0002252

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Carter said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.56
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
94.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount867
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount867
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"tracing"
4"stomach"
5"perfect"
6"etched"
7"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords858
ratio0.005
matches
0"wrong"
1"cut"
2"controlled"
3"shift"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount737
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn15
Carter9
Veil1
Market1
Eva2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.482
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
83.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.166
wordCount858
matches
0"not at the body, but at the far wall"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"knew that compass"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean24.51
std18.34
cv0.748
sampleLengths
050
144
248
318
447
59
645
79
831
99
1037
1113
127
1338
1456
1510
169
1750
1812
1933
207
217
2271
237
2413
258
2615
2726
2849
296
306
3114
3231
3312
3411
86.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences74
matches
0"were torn"
1"were splayed"
2"been carved"
3"been disturbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences84
ratio0.095
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp stone and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang of old blood."
1"The scene wasn’t just messy; it was *wrong*."
2"She lifted his sleeve, exposing a thin, jagged scar along his forearm—too precise to be accidental."
3"They were *cut*—neat, surgical slits along the seams, as if someone had been inside him before he died."
4"The air hummed with something—static, like a radio caught between stations."
5"Something about the way they moved—too precise, too *controlled*."
6"The needle spun wildly before settling, pointing not at the body, but at the far wall—a place where the stone had been disturbed, where something dark and pulsing seeped through the cracks."
7"The air around them thickened, the static growing louder, the body on the tracks beginning to *shift*, the skin peeling back like wet paper to reveal something beneath—something that wasn’t human."
99.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.040268456375838924
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009395973154362415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean10.21
std6.82
cv0.668
sampleLengths
019
123
28
321
412
511
65
717
818
98
1011
117
1210
132
142
1510
1616
174
183
199
203
2112
229
2318
243
259
263
2723
285
299
305
3123
329
3313
344
353
365
378
3815
3910
408
419
4211
4316
4412
4510
467
472
489
4919
57.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.36904761904761907
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners31
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Just the faintest hint of"
1"Instead, they reached into their"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences71
matches
0"He adjusted his cap, the"
1"Her gaze locked onto the"
2"His eyes were open, glassy,"
3"She lifted his sleeve, exposing"
4"She knelt closer, her sharp"
5"They were *cut*—neat, surgical slits"
6"Her stomach twisted."
7"she said, her voice low"
8"She stood, her boots crunching"
9"she asked, not waiting for"
10"She crouched beside the token,"
11"She stood, her gaze sweeping"
12"She turned just in time"
13"They moved with purpose, their"
14"she ordered, her voice low"
15"They didn’t touch the man."
16"She knew that compass."
17"she said, her voice dangerously"
18"He bolted for the exit,"
19"She kept her gun trained"
ratio0.296
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences71
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Detective Quinn’s boots crunched over"
2"The scene wasn’t just messy;"
3"DS Carter’s voice cut through"
4"He adjusted his cap, the"
5"Quinn didn’t look at him."
6"Her gaze locked onto the"
7"The man’s skin had that"
8"His eyes were open, glassy,"
9"Carter murmured, crouching beside the"
10"Quinn crouched too, her gloved"
11"She lifted his sleeve, exposing"
12"A ritual mark, maybe."
13"Carter asked, his voice careful"
14"Quinn didn’t answer."
15"She knelt closer, her sharp"
16"The man’s clothes were torn,"
17"They were *cut*—neat, surgical slits"
18"Her stomach twisted."
19"she said, her voice low"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The man’s skin had that unnatural pallor, the kind that didn’t fade even in the dim emergency lights."
1"The man’s fingers were splayed wide, nails blackened at the tips, as if he’d been holding something small and dark when he died."
2"The air around them thickened, the static growing louder, the body on the tracks beginning to *shift*, the skin peeling back like wet paper to reveal something …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Carter asked, his voice careful"
1"she said, her voice low"
2"she asked, not waiting for an answer"
3"Quinn called, her voice cutting through the silence"
4"she ordered, her voice low"
5"she said, her voice dangerously calm"
6"Quinn’s hand found, her finger tightening around the grip"
7"Eva said, her voice urgent"
8"she said, her voice a low growl"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Carter murmured (murmur)"
1"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.16
78.0824%