Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJ9VJ071B81QWSGS25H93

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000235

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a groan of old hinges, the brass handle cold beneath Rory’s fingers. She froze, her breath catching as the dim glow of the hallway spilled into the dimness of the flat. A figure stood silhouetted against the light, tall and broad-shouldered, the faint scent of rain and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—wafting toward her. “You’re early,” Lucien said, his voice smooth as aged whiskey, the French lilt just thick enough to make her pulse jump. Rory’s grip tightened on the doorframe. “You’re not supposed to be here.” “Neither are you.” He stepped inside, the cane tapping once against the wooden floor. The flat smelled of stale coffee and the faint tang of something metallic—blood, maybe, or old iron. Not his usual cologne. “But here we are.” She should’ve closed the door. Should’ve turned and walked away before he could see the way her chest tightened, the way her fingers twitched at her sides. But the air between them hummed, charged, and she couldn’t look away. Lucien’s amber eye caught the light as he tilted his head, studying her. “You look like hell.” Rory exhaled through her nose, a sharp laugh escaping her. “Thanks. You clean up nice.” His lips quirked, just for a second, before smoothing back into that infuriatingly controlled mask. “I always do.” The silence stretched, thick with things unsaid. The last time they’d been in the same room, it had ended with her slamming a door in his face—or at least, that’s what she’d thought. But the truth was, she’d run. And now he was standing in her flat, uninvited, as if he’d never left. “You wanted to see me,” she said, voice steadier than she felt. “Yes.” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, the one she always kept hidden beneath her sleeve. “I did.” Rory’s stomach twisted. She pulled her arm back, as if the movement alone could erase the memory of his fingers brushing against it that night in the alley. The night he’d kissed her. The night she’d kissed him back. “What do you want, Lucien?” His expression darkened, just slightly. “Information.” “About what?” “About you.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping again, closer than she’d expected. “About why you left.” The air between them shifted, charged. Rory’s breath hitched. “That’s not your business.” “Isn’t it?” His voice dropped, rougher now. “You came to me, Rory. You begged me for help. And then you walked away like I didn’t exist.” She swallowed hard, her throat suddenly dry. “I didn’t know what I was doing.” “No.” His gaze locked onto hers, unflinching. “You knew exactly what you were doing.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She should’ve known better. Should’ve known he’d see through her lies. But she’d been so desperate, so scared, that she’d let herself believe he’d understand. “You don’t get to play the martyr,” she snapped, her voice shaking. “You’re the one who left me hanging.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “I left you with a choice.” “A choice?” She laughed, bitter and hollow. “A choice between you and the devil? That’s not a choice. That’s a trap.” His eyes flashed, the amber one burning brighter. “You chose the devil.” Rory’s hands clenched into fists. “And look where that got me.” “Alive,” he said, quiet but firm. “You’re still alive.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him she wasn’t alive at all, not really—not since she’d walked away from him. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien stepped back, the tension between them snapping like a drawn bowstring. “I need to know what you know about the Blackthorn coven.” The name sent a shiver down her spine. She’d heard whispers of them—superstitious warnings from old women in the markets, the way people crossed themselves when the name was mentioned. But she’d never thought she’d have to deal with them. Not here. Not now. “Why?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Because they’re digging up old bones,” he said, his tone grim. “And I don’t like what they’re finding.” Rory’s mind raced. The Blackthorn coven—long dead, or so they said. But if they were digging up bones, if they were stirring up the past, then they were dangerous. And if they were dangerous, then they were dangerous to her. “What do you want me to do?” she asked, her voice steadier now. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, intense and unyielding. “Find out what they’re looking for. And stop them.” Rory nodded, her mind already racing with possibilities. She could do this. She had to do this. “When do I start?” Lucien’s lips curled into a smile, sharp and predatory. “Now.” The door to the flat creaked open behind her, and she turned just in time to see Eva’s tabby cat, Ptolemy, slink into the room, tail high. The cat’s green eyes locked onto Lucien, and he froze, his body going rigid. “What the hell is that?” he asked, his voice low and dangerous. Rory followed his gaze. Ptolemy’s fur stood on end, his ears flattened against his skull. He hissed, low and threatening, his eyes never leaving Lucien. “He’s just a cat,” Rory said, her voice calm. “He doesn’t like strangers.” Lucien’s gaze flicked back to her, his expression unreadable. “Strangers?” “You’re not a stranger,” she said, her voice steady. “Not to me.” Lucien’s eyes darkened, the amber one burning brighter. “No,” he said, his voice low and dangerous. “I’m not.” The air between them cracketed with tension, the cat’s hiss echoing in the silence. Rory could feel Lucien’s presence like a living thing, like a storm rolling in. She could see the way his chest rose and fell, the way his fingers tightened around the cane. “You’re going to regret this,” she said, her voice steady. Lucien’s lips curled into a smile, sharp and predatory. “I already do.”
total_cost0.0002345

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"charged"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"tension"
count2
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"pulse"
2"charged"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"stomach"
6"tension"
7"down her spine"
8"whisper"
9"raced"
10"racing"
11"unreadable"
12"echoing"
13"could feel"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords981
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount764
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory11
French1
Lucien12
Blackthorn1
Eva1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Blackthorn"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.715
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount981
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean20.44
std13.42
cv0.656
sampleLengths
060
121
212
339
439
517
615
718
853
912
1021
1139
125
136
142
1517
1613
1726
1814
1914
2035
2119
229
2321
2412
2511
269
2728
2823
2944
309
3118
3240
3313
3417
3517
364
3710
3841
3912
4025
4113
4210
4312
4418
4546
4610
4712
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was mentioned"
57.14% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was standing"
1"were digging were stirring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences108
ratio0.056
matches
0"A figure stood silhouetted against the light, tall and broad-shouldered, the faint scent of rain and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—wafting toward her."
1"The flat smelled of stale coffee and the faint tang of something metallic—blood, maybe, or old iron."
2"The last time they’d been in the same room, it had ended with her slamming a door in his face—or at least, that’s what she’d thought."
3"Wanted to tell him she wasn’t alive at all, not really—not since she’d walked away from him."
4"She’d heard whispers of them—superstitious warnings from old women in the markets, the way people crossed themselves when the name was mentioned."
5"The Blackthorn coven—long dead, or so they said."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount771
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03631647211413749
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00648508430609598
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean9.08
std5.94
cv0.654
sampleLengths
017
119
224
321
46
56
614
717
84
94
105
1122
1212
1313
144
1510
165
1715
183
197
2026
216
2214
2312
2419
252
263
2725
285
296
305
315
321
332
3413
354
366
373
384
397
4019
417
427
437
447
4510
464
477
4814
4912
39.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.28703703703703703
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences76
matches
0"She froze, her breath catching"
1"He stepped inside, the cane"
2"She should’ve closed the door."
3"His lips quirked, just for"
4"she said, voice steadier than"
5"His gaze flicked to the"
6"She pulled her arm back,"
7"His expression darkened, just slightly."
8"He stepped closer, the cane"
9"His voice dropped, rougher now"
10"She swallowed hard, her throat"
11"His gaze locked onto hers,"
12"She should’ve known better."
13"she snapped, her voice shaking"
14"She laughed, bitter and hollow"
15"His eyes flashed, the amber"
16"he said, quiet but firm"
17"She wanted to argue."
18"She’d heard whispers of them—superstitious"
19"she asked, her voice barely"
ratio0.395
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences76
matches
0"The door swung open with"
1"She froze, her breath catching"
2"A figure stood silhouetted against"
3"Lucien said, his voice smooth"
4"Rory’s grip tightened on the"
5"He stepped inside, the cane"
6"The flat smelled of stale"
7"She should’ve closed the door."
8"Lucien’s amber eye caught the"
9"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
10"His lips quirked, just for"
11"The silence stretched, thick with"
12"The last time they’d been"
13"she said, voice steadier than"
14"His gaze flicked to the"
15"Rory’s stomach twisted."
16"She pulled her arm back,"
17"The night he’d kissed her."
18"The night she’d kissed him"
19"His expression darkened, just slightly."
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"And now he was standing in her flat, uninvited, as if he’d never left."
1"She pulled her arm back, as if the movement alone could erase the memory of his fingers brushing against it that night in the alley."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"He stepped, the cane tapping once against the wooden floor"
1"she said, voice steadier than she felt"
2"He stepped, the cane tapping again, closer than she’d expected"
3"she snapped, her voice shaking"
4"he said, quiet but firm"
5"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"he said, his tone grim"
7"she asked, her voice steadier now"
8"he asked, his voice low and dangerous"
9"Rory said, her voice calm"
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"he said, his voice low and dangerous"
12"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.083
72.5540%