| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1060 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1060 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 11 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 1053 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Wrong." | | 1 | "Find what you’re looking for" | | 2 | "It’s here." | | 3 | "Footsteps." | | 4 | "Rationalise. It’s the park. Tourists. Drunks. A fox." | | 5 | "Isolde’s grove." | | 6 | "Don’t go in there" | | 7 | "Not even to play. Not ever." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.42% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1042 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | King | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 12 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "King" | | 2 | "Cross" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.924 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the moon’s path" | | 1 | "looked like hands reaching for each other" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to twist and writhe" | | 3 | "shadows that seemed to writhe and twist" | | 4 | "surface that seemed to absorb the light" | | 5 | "shadows that seemed to writhe and twist" | | 6 | "brand that seemed to burn through her clothes" | | 7 | "shadows that seemed to writhe and twist" | | 8 | "shadows that seemed to writhe and twist" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1053 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 22.4 | | std | 17.31 | | cv | 0.773 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 4 |
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| 96.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "been given" | | 1 | "were elongated" | | 2 | "was blurred" |
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| 26.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "were passing" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "were fighting" | | 3 | "were struggling" | | 4 | "were struggling" |
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| 25.76% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain had snagged on a root, the Heartstone pendant dangling just above the soil, its deep crimson glow pulsing faintly—like a heartbeat." | | 1 | "The sound came again—closer this time, deliberate." | | 2 | "Then—a whisper of movement." | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognise—spirals, knots, things that looked like hands reaching for each other." | | 4 | "Its skin was pale, almost translucent, and its face—when it turned to look at her—was a mask of smooth, featureless flesh." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1050 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.030476190476190476 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006666666666666667 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 8.62 | | std | 6.32 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 32.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2786885245901639 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pulse, steady and" | | 1 | "Then—a whisper of movement." | | 2 | "Just a smooth, unbroken surface" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 88.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come for answers, not" | | 1 | "she muttered, wiping her palm" | | 2 | "She’d been given it in" | | 3 | "She should’ve known better." | | 4 | "Her breath hitched, but she" | | 5 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 6 | "It’s the park." | | 7 | "She flexed her fingers, half-expecting" | | 8 | "she said, voice quieter than" | | 9 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 10 | "She’d needed answers, and the" | | 11 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 12 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 13 | "She should leave." | | 14 | "She should run." | | 15 | "she started, but the words" | | 16 | "Its limbs were elongated, its" | | 17 | "Its skin was pale, almost" | | 18 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 19 | "She fell to her knees," |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand" | | 2 | "The silver chain had snagged" | | 3 | "The word slithered through her" | | 4 | "The air here smelled wrong," | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 6 | "She’d come for answers, not" | | 7 | "she muttered, wiping her palm" | | 8 | "The pendant’s warmth seeped through" | | 9 | "She’d been given it in" | | 10 | "She should’ve known better." | | 11 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 12 | "Her breath hitched, but she" | | 13 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, brighter." | | 14 | "The sound came again—closer this" | | 15 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 16 | "It’s the park." | | 17 | "The kind of empty where" | | 18 | "The pendant’s warmth intensified, pressing" | | 19 | "She flexed her fingers, half-expecting" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand back as if burned, fingers curling into the damp earth where she’d dropped it." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks casting skeletal shadows that didn’t quite match the moon’s path." | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognise—spirals, knots, things that looked like hands reaching for each other." | | 3 | "The pendant’s glow pulsed again, brighter this time, casting jagged shadows that seemed to twist and writhe." | | 4 | "The scent of damp earth and something older, something that made her skin prickle." | | 5 | "But the pendant was a weight around her neck, pulling her forward, urging her to keep going." | | 6 | "The trees at the edge of the grove seemed to ripple, their branches bending unnaturally, as if something were passing through them." | | 7 | "The pendant’s glow intensified, casting long, wavering shadows that seemed to writhe and twist." | | 8 | "The figure tilted its head, its movements jerky and unnatural, as if it were trying to understand her." | | 9 | "The figure hesitated, its movements stuttering, as if it were fighting against something." | | 10 | "The figure’s form flickered, its edges blurring, as if it were struggling to maintain its shape." | | 11 | "The pendant’s warmth seared against her skin, a brand that seemed to burn through her clothes." | | 12 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, casting long shadows that seemed to writhe and twist." | | 13 | "Its form was blurred, its edges flickering, as if it were struggling to maintain its shape." | | 14 | "She raised the pendant, its glow intensifying, casting jagged shadows that seemed to writhe and twist." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice quieter than she meant" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "she started, but the words died in her throat" | | 3 | "she began, but the word dissolved into a scream as the figure lunged" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |