Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJC6G7F9W8KWXJPQ6NRSS

Run Details

Duration:
23.1s
Cost:
$0.014923
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to many as Rory, stood at the edge of a grove veiled in the midnight hues of Richmond Park. The crescent moon loomed overhead, casting a dim glow over the sparse patches of bloomed wildflowers that dared to challenge the creeping shadows. A gentle breeze tugged at her straight, shoulder-length black hair, sending a shiver racing down her spine. Once a sanctuary of untamed beauty, The Fae Grove now exuded an unsettling aura — invisible fingers reaching to clutch at her senses, dripping with unease. The ancient oak standing stones, weathered yet regal, marked the boundary of this enigmatic realm. Rory hesitated at their threshold, the heartstone pendant around her neck pulsating lightly against her skin. Its warmth was unnerving, a constant reminder of truths she hadn't fully grasped. Or perhaps refused to. "I need answers," she mumbled, eyes scanning the dimly lit expanse. Why she’d agreed to Eva’s impulsive idea of seeking out this place so late at night, Rory couldn't say. Desperation clung to her like a second skin, near suffocating. The moment she stepped into the grove, time slipped its usual hold. Reality warped subtly yet profoundly. Her senses swirled, grounded by the earth beneath her boots, yet afloat on the ethereal whispers surrounding her. "Be smart, keep it together," she scolded herself, steeling her resolve. Her heart hammered with the rhythm of fright, its echoes in her ears unnaturally loud. The world beyond the standing stones faded, swallowed by shadows until only the grove existed, isolated, sentient. As Rory ventured deeper, the sounds of the park dissipated, replaced by an eerie symphony — rustling leaves and distant echoes of a melody unknown yet familiar. Each note was a whisper on the breeze, spoken by lips long silent. "Come closer," it seemed to croon, every syllable threading into her thoughts with unnatural clarity. "Just my imagination," Rory murmured, seeking reassurance in her own voice but finding it faltering. Her steps grew cautious, the underbrush crackling beneath her feet like the bones of ancient legends. A soft rustle from her peripheral vision forced her to halt, squinting into the fluctuating gloom. Flickers of movement — shadows scampering just beyond sight, lovers of the dusk avoiding the moonlight’s embrace. They were gone before she could blink, leaving only questions in their wake. "Not alone," her mind insisted but the defiant urge to dismiss it clawed at her slowly eroding confidence. Everything about tonight felt misaligned. The air too thick, time too fluid. Nothing felt grounded anymore. Even the wildflowers, their vibrant defiance a mocking presence, seemed hungry for her secret fears. How those fears lingered, unfounded yet so real in the still twilight. She walked further, heartstone pendant guiding her ever forward as it pulsed with unyielding warmth. Then a sudden crack of a branch shattered the night’s serenity, sending her heart racing anew. "Who’s there?" Rory called, voice stronger than her courage warranted. Silence pooled around her words, the grove holding its breath. A shadow flashed at the edge of her vision and vanished again, teasing, a specter playing at the edges of her restraint. Deep inside, a childhood notion resurfaced — the kind that lay dormant under adult reasoning but never truly gone. Myths and scribbles of fae and lost realms from books her mother used to keep. Could they be more than whispered tales? The dance at the edge of her sight continued, amorphous forms twisted against the night. They tugged at the frayed corners of reality until crack! Another sound, closer this time. Rory felt the ground firm beneath her, heartbeat syncing to a rhythm not her own. Even the crickets fell silent, complicit in the watchful stillness pressing heavier upon her. "What do you want?" Rory’s voice trembled now, tinged with an edge only vulnerability could sharpen. The air answered with a shiver, a flicker of chill across her exposed skin. Emotion flared, a mix of fear and defiance tinged by perpetual curiosity driving her forward. Unseen watchers crowded her senses. Thoughts tangled, contrasting emotions tearing her logic. Her fingers brushed the heartstone pendant, its persistent warmth both a comfort and an accusation of ignorance. She froze, unsure whether she felt it first or saw it first. A figure, clothed in shadows, stood at the grove’s center. Eyes dark as midnight bore into her, yet their origin shifted, offering no clear image but leaving an imprint, as if staring not at her but through her very being. "Why?" her mind dared, too dry for sound. The entity did not advance, merely watched with intangible presence, aware of secrets and histories that no living being had any right to encounter. Time ceased to exist, the world below slowing to an ethereal heartbeat. Slowly, the figure turned away, fading into the gloom with the thickness of the air retracting its grip. The grove sighed in relief, silence renewing as if heralding the knowledge that Rory had entered a world not meant for the likes of her. Just then, at the point of disappearance, a whisper, no more than a thought, crossed her mind. "Return when heart and stone align." She stood alone once again. Beneath the unwavering glow of the crescent moon, the wildflowers whispered with secrets, untouched by the winds. Rory Carter left the grove, footfalls echoing a return to a realm less tangible, stillness enveloping her as reality rethreaded around her like a cloak. As she passed the ancient stones, hesitating ever briefly, the heartstone pendant ceased its feverish pulse, settling into a tranquil warmth against her chest. Richness of earth, cold under night’s hold, crept into her thoughts as she emerged once more from the bewildering sanctuary of the Fae Grove. And so the silence fell into place — a waiting shroud drawn over the mysteries yet hidden beyond her understanding. Though questions remained, unspoken words etched deeper still at the edge of discovery.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"her mind dared too [too]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.889
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
74.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount980
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slowly"
2"truly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount980
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"racing"
count2
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count2
4
word"enigmatic"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count4
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"echoes"
count2
10
word"symphony"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"gloom"
count2
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"silence"
count3
17
word"dance"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"tinged"
count2
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
22
word"encounter"
count1
23
word"unwavering"
count1
24
word"echoing"
count1
25
word"tangible"
count1
26
word"pulse"
count1
27
word"unspoken"
count1
28
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"racing"
2"down her spine"
3"sanctuary"
4"enigmatic"
5"warmth"
6"reminder"
7"scanning"
8"resolve"
9"echoes"
10"symphony"
11"familiar"
12"whisper"
13"gloom"
14"pulsed"
15"shattered"
16"silence"
17"dance"
18"trembled"
19"tinged"
20"flicker"
21"chill"
22"encounter"
23"unwavering"
24"echoing"
25"tangible"
26"pulse"
27"unspoken"
28"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
99.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences66
matches
0"g with unease"
1"d in relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords984
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount956
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Rory10
Richmond1
Park1
Fae2
Grove2
Eva1
Silence1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.977
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed hungry for her secret fears"
1"as if staring not at her but through her very being"
2"as if heralding the knowledge that Rory had entered a world not meant for the likes of her"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.049
wordCount984
matches
0"Not alone,\" her mind insisted but the defiant urge to dismiss it clawed at her slowly eroding"
1"not at her but through her very being"
2"no clear image but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean33.93
std19.69
cv0.58
sampleLengths
088
148
240
335
426
557
615
731
846
918
1031
1112
1231
1320
1422
1541
1645
1714
1816
1929
2029
2152
228
2324
2412
2560
266
2771
2857
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"were gone"
1"being had"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was unnerving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences67
ratio0.075
matches
0"Once a sanctuary of untamed beauty, The Fae Grove now exuded an unsettling aura — invisible fingers reaching to clutch at her senses, dripping with unease."
1"As Rory ventured deeper, the sounds of the park dissipated, replaced by an eerie symphony — rustling leaves and distant echoes of a melody unknown yet familiar."
2"Flickers of movement — shadows scampering just beyond sight, lovers of the dusk avoiding the moonlight’s embrace."
3"Deep inside, a childhood notion resurfaced — the kind that lay dormant under adult reasoning but never truly gone."
4"And so the silence fell into place — a waiting shroud drawn over the mysteries yet hidden beyond her understanding."
89.48% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount952
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay dormant under adult reasoning"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.045168067226890755
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014705882352941176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean14.69
std6.08
cv0.414
sampleLengths
022
123
217
326
415
516
613
74
811
919
1010
1112
125
1318
1411
1515
1617
1727
1813
1915
2015
2116
2216
2317
2413
2518
265
277
284
2915
3012
3115
3216
3310
3410
3522
3619
3715
387
3915
4010
415
4215
4314
4416
4514
4615
475
487
4917
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6567164179104478
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences66
matches
0"Once a sanctuary of untamed"
1"Even the wildflowers, their vibrant"
2"Then a sudden crack of"
3"Even the crickets fell silent,"
4"Slowly, the figure turned away,"
5"Just then, at the point"
ratio0.091
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences66
matches
0"Its warmth was unnerving, a"
1"she mumbled, eyes scanning the"
2"Her senses swirled, grounded by"
3"she scolded herself, steeling her"
4"Her heart hammered with the"
5"it seemed to croon, every"
6"Her steps grew cautious, the"
7"They were gone before she"
8"her mind insisted but the"
9"She walked further, heartstone pendant"
10"They tugged at the frayed"
11"Her fingers brushed the heartstone"
12"She froze, unsure whether she"
13"her mind dared, too dry"
14"She stood alone once again."
ratio0.227
88.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences66
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to many"
1"The crescent moon loomed overhead,"
2"A gentle breeze tugged at"
3"The ancient oak standing stones,"
4"Rory hesitated at their threshold,"
5"Its warmth was unnerving, a"
6"she mumbled, eyes scanning the"
7"Desperation clung to her like"
8"The moment she stepped into"
9"Reality warped subtly yet profoundly."
10"Her senses swirled, grounded by"
11"she scolded herself, steeling her"
12"Her heart hammered with the"
13"The world beyond the standing"
14"Each note was a whisper"
15"it seemed to croon, every"
16"Rory murmured, seeking reassurance in"
17"Her steps grew cautious, the"
18"A soft rustle from her"
19"Flickers of movement — shadows"
ratio0.742
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Though questions remained, unspoken words"
ratio0.015
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The crescent moon loomed overhead, casting a dim glow over the sparse patches of bloomed wildflowers that dared to challenge the creeping shadows."
1"Once a sanctuary of untamed beauty, The Fae Grove now exuded an unsettling aura — invisible fingers reaching to clutch at her senses, dripping with unease."
2"Then a sudden crack of a branch shattered the night’s serenity, sending her heart racing anew."
3"Eyes dark as midnight bore into her, yet their origin shifted, offering no clear image but leaving an imprint, as if staring not at her but through her very bei…"
4"The grove sighed in relief, silence renewing as if heralding the knowledge that Rory had entered a world not meant for the likes of her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she mumbled, eyes scanning the dimly lit expanse"
1"it seemed, every syllable threading into her thoughts with unnatural clarity"
2"Rory called, voice stronger than her courage warranted"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she mumbled (mumble)"
1"she scolded (scold)"
2"Rory murmured (murmur)"
3"her mind insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.8
76.2308%