| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "her mind dared too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.889 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 74.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 980 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "truly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 980 | | totalAiIsms | 40 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "enigmatic" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "resolve" | | 9 | "echoes" | | 10 | "symphony" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "shattered" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "dance" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "tinged" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "chill" | | 22 | "encounter" | | 23 | "unwavering" | | 24 | "echoing" | | 25 | "tangible" | | 26 | "pulse" | | 27 | "unspoken" | | 28 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 99.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "g with unease" | | 1 | "d in relief" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 984 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.70% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 956 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.977 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed hungry for her secret fears" | | 1 | "as if staring not at her but through her very being" | | 2 | "as if heralding the knowledge that Rory had entered a world not meant for the likes of her" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.049 | | wordCount | 984 | | matches | | 0 | "Not alone,\" her mind insisted but the defiant urge to dismiss it clawed at her slowly eroding" | | 1 | "not at her but through her very being" | | 2 | "no clear image but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 33.93 | | std | 19.69 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 71 | | 28 | 57 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "Once a sanctuary of untamed beauty, The Fae Grove now exuded an unsettling aura — invisible fingers reaching to clutch at her senses, dripping with unease." | | 1 | "As Rory ventured deeper, the sounds of the park dissipated, replaced by an eerie symphony — rustling leaves and distant echoes of a melody unknown yet familiar." | | 2 | "Flickers of movement — shadows scampering just beyond sight, lovers of the dusk avoiding the moonlight’s embrace." | | 3 | "Deep inside, a childhood notion resurfaced — the kind that lay dormant under adult reasoning but never truly gone." | | 4 | "And so the silence fell into place — a waiting shroud drawn over the mysteries yet hidden beyond her understanding." |
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| 89.48% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 952 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay dormant under adult reasoning" |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.045168067226890755 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014705882352941176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 14.69 | | std | 6.08 | | cv | 0.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6567164179104478 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Once a sanctuary of untamed" | | 1 | "Even the wildflowers, their vibrant" | | 2 | "Then a sudden crack of" | | 3 | "Even the crickets fell silent," | | 4 | "Slowly, the figure turned away," | | 5 | "Just then, at the point" |
| | ratio | 0.091 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Its warmth was unnerving, a" | | 1 | "she mumbled, eyes scanning the" | | 2 | "Her senses swirled, grounded by" | | 3 | "she scolded herself, steeling her" | | 4 | "Her heart hammered with the" | | 5 | "it seemed to croon, every" | | 6 | "Her steps grew cautious, the" | | 7 | "They were gone before she" | | 8 | "her mind insisted but the" | | 9 | "She walked further, heartstone pendant" | | 10 | "They tugged at the frayed" | | 11 | "Her fingers brushed the heartstone" | | 12 | "She froze, unsure whether she" | | 13 | "her mind dared, too dry" | | 14 | "She stood alone once again." |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 88.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to many" | | 1 | "The crescent moon loomed overhead," | | 2 | "A gentle breeze tugged at" | | 3 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 4 | "Rory hesitated at their threshold," | | 5 | "Its warmth was unnerving, a" | | 6 | "she mumbled, eyes scanning the" | | 7 | "Desperation clung to her like" | | 8 | "The moment she stepped into" | | 9 | "Reality warped subtly yet profoundly." | | 10 | "Her senses swirled, grounded by" | | 11 | "she scolded herself, steeling her" | | 12 | "Her heart hammered with the" | | 13 | "The world beyond the standing" | | 14 | "Each note was a whisper" | | 15 | "it seemed to croon, every" | | 16 | "Rory murmured, seeking reassurance in" | | 17 | "Her steps grew cautious, the" | | 18 | "A soft rustle from her" | | 19 | "Flickers of movement — shadows" |
| | ratio | 0.742 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Though questions remained, unspoken words" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent moon loomed overhead, casting a dim glow over the sparse patches of bloomed wildflowers that dared to challenge the creeping shadows." | | 1 | "Once a sanctuary of untamed beauty, The Fae Grove now exuded an unsettling aura — invisible fingers reaching to clutch at her senses, dripping with unease." | | 2 | "Then a sudden crack of a branch shattered the night’s serenity, sending her heart racing anew." | | 3 | "Eyes dark as midnight bore into her, yet their origin shifted, offering no clear image but leaving an imprint, as if staring not at her but through her very bei…" | | 4 | "The grove sighed in relief, silence renewing as if heralding the knowledge that Rory had entered a world not meant for the likes of her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she mumbled, eyes scanning the dimly lit expanse" | | 1 | "it seemed, every syllable threading into her thoughts with unnatural clarity" | | 2 | "Rory called, voice stronger than her courage warranted" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she mumbled (mumble)" | | 1 | "she scolded (scold)" | | 2 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "her mind insisted (insist)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |