Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJCFY84QK9Q48ZSR8FKJ8

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.020932
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
There was a flutter of fabric as Aurora pressed through the narrow gap between two ancient oaks, their massive trunks draped in creeping ivy and midnight shadows. The Heartstone pendant felt heavier around her neck, its faint inner glow providing little comfort. Even in the dim moonlight filtering through the dense canopy, the blood-red stone seemed to pulse with a life of its own. She was in The Fae Grove, a place that existed on the edge of reality, where time flowed like a stubborn trickle, or sometimes not at all. She took a cautious step further into the grove, hearing the soft crunch of wildflowers and dry leaves underfoot. The grove held an eerie beauty — vibrant hues that defied night, petals trembling in an absent breeze. Somewhere in the depths, an owl’s hoot echoed, a forlorn note that faded too quickly into silence. Yet, instead of relief, that silence loomed oppressive and full, like waiting for thunder after lightning's charge. Aurora folded her arms tightly as if that could shield her from the intangible unease wrapping around her. "This was a mistake," she muttered to herself, trying to reason with the prickling tension that spread through her limbs. "Rory," Eva's voice had echoed over the phone, barely audible over the commotion of London traffic. "I need you to check it out. The Grove… It's different now. Just—be careful." Irritation simmered beneath Aurora's skin. She had come here for answers, but now found herself questioning every step. Eva had sounded worried, and for her childhood friend, Aurora had taken the call to heart. Yet here, standing amidst the strange beauty of The Fae Grove, there was little to show for her efforts but an escalating sense of wrongness. The feeling began as a tickle at the edges of perception, growing stronger with each step deeper into the grove. The trees around her stood like silent sentinels, their gnarled branches baring claw-like fingers against the star-flecked sky. Aurora listened to her own breath, controlled and careful, her heartbeat resonating like a drumbeat in her chest. Suddenly, a low, continuous rustle made her freeze. She turned, blue eyes scanning behind her. Nothing. Just the shadow-drenched clearing, undisturbed except for her presence. Yet, as she turned back, there was movement at the corner of her vision—a flicker of something pale, dancing between the trees. “Hello?” Aurora called, her voice barely a whisper, swallowed quickly by the vastness around her. No answer came, but the rustle continued, a sound like dry paper crumpling. The pendant seemed to tighten around her throat, a tangible pulse syncing to hers. Her fingers brushed against it, finding no solace in the cool metal. Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed just out of sight, out of reach like a shadow refusing to be pinned by light. Further ahead, the grove thickened, shrouded in the mist floating upon the ground like spilled milk. She moved cautiously, skirting the boundaries marked by ancient oak standing stones. Rory was not alone. She could feel it now, the unsettling certainty hardening like ice in her veins. Someone, something, watched her from the recesses, the grove's natural shadows deepened unnaturally, intent on swallowing her whole. "They don’t come here for a reason," an old warn about Isolde's grove murmured in her memory. Aurora dismissed it as myth, a tale for damp nights huddled by the fire. But here, standing amidst the whispers and silence, the weight of untold stories pressed heavily on her. She thought about returning, about retracing her steps to the grove’s entrance and disappearing into the city's unyielding glow. But her feet remained anchored to the ground, caught between instinct and obligation. A breeze stirred, cold and ethereal, wrapping around her as if with a lover’s touch. The leaves shuddered, a hushed chorus speaking in an elfin tongue that chilled. Just as suddenly, it died, the silence filled with a ghostly chill that crept under her skin. Aurora turned sharply, convinced she heard the soft tread of footsteps behind her. The air thickened, a charged presence so close that the hairs on her arm stood at rigid attention. She squeezed her eyes shut for a moment, then opened them, bracing for a confrontation that didn't materialise. A hiss, low and sibilant, broke the silence. Her gaze darted to her wrist where the crescent-shaped scar ached, a relic of past wounds merging with present fears. Aurora realized she had started to retreat, moving backwards through the grove's tensioned embrace, each step matched by that unseen presence. The pulse of the pendant seared against her skin, a steady drumbeat that quickened in response to terror. And then, she heard it: "Aurora." The name was a whisper wrapped in silk, a call that slithered through the grove's silence and brought everything to a standstill. Her name never sounded so alien, parsed with a knowing comfort that unnerved, each syllable unpacking her resolve. “Who's there?” she demanded, yet strength faltered through her words. Her mouth moved, but the grove seemed to swallow sound, muting everything like a velvet blanket. Silence. Utter and complete. "You know," the voice coaxed, the mists wrapping tighter around her feet. "If you wish to leave, simply ask." She didn't respond, her mind racing to form strategies against phantoms she could not grasp. Her heart beat wildly, like a cornered animal seeking escape from an invisible cage. “Simple,” the voice murmured with a humourless chuckle, like wind through leaves, an echo resonant in the air. There was a movement—a shift of shadows—and Aurora dared not breathe. Then, like the breaking of clouds, a path opened before her, leading out into darkness, away from this verdant prison. Her instincts screamed for escape, and she took the path quickly, heart hammering her ribcage in desperate rebellion. With a final glance over her shoulder, she saw it: a figure standing among dappled moonlight and brooding trees. Cloaked in shadow, it didn’t follow; it simply watched, the blue of its eyes stark against the night as the grove reclaimed her presence. An overwhelming sense of being judged, weighed, and quantified settled over her. Propelled by sheer determination, she reached the grove's edge, lungs burning for the routine comforts of the familiar. And suddenly, silence reigned again, the tension dissipating like fog in morning sun, although the echo of her name lingered like rust upon her tongue. Aurora Carter stepped back into the world, the grove's secrets clinging to her like the scent of smoke. And as she fled into the safety of London's sprawling embrace, The Fae Grove remained silent, its watchers returning to their world, its mysteries untampered and secure. And yet that knowing voice remained, anchored with the unwelcome promise of return.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
60.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count3
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count3
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"tightly"
2"suddenly"
3"cautiously"
4"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsms45
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"depths"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"silence"
count8
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"tension"
count2
7
word"amidst"
count2
8
word"sense of"
count2
9
word"sentinels"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"dancing"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"tangible"
count1
15
word"solace"
count1
16
word"could feel"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"chilled"
count1
19
word"chill"
count1
20
word"footsteps"
count1
21
word"charged"
count1
22
word"quickened"
count1
23
word"silk"
count1
24
word"resolve"
count1
25
word"velvet"
count1
26
word"racing"
count1
27
word"echo"
count2
28
word"stark"
count1
29
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"depths"
2"echoed"
3"silence"
4"loomed"
5"oppressive"
6"tension"
7"amidst"
8"sense of"
9"sentinels"
10"scanning"
11"flicker"
12"dancing"
13"whisper"
14"tangible"
15"solace"
16"could feel"
17"weight"
18"chilled"
19"chill"
20"footsteps"
21"charged"
22"quickened"
23"silk"
24"resolve"
25"velvet"
26"racing"
27"echo"
28"stark"
29"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
60.04% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1119
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1079
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Heartstone1
Fae3
Grove3
Eva2
London2
Irritation1
Isolde1
Carter1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Irritation"
3"Isolde"
4"Carter"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
globalScore0.99
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1119
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
80.84% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean43.04
std18.63
cv0.433
sampleLengths
091
171
238
330
459
556
647
728
847
964
1048
1132
1245
1349
1467
1546
1626
174
1819
1929
2029
2138
2255
2343
2445
2513
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences71
ratio0.07
matches
0"The grove held an eerie beauty — vibrant hues that defied night, petals trembling in an absent breeze."
1"Yet, as she turned back, there was movement at the corner of her vision—a flicker of something pale, dancing between the trees."
2"Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed just out of sight, out of reach like a shadow refusing to be pinned by light."
3"There was a movement—a shift of shadows—and Aurora dared not breathe."
4"Cloaked in shadow, it didn’t follow; it simply watched, the blue of its eyes stark against the night as the grove reclaimed her presence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.035878564857405704
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014719411223551058
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
88.32% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean15.76
std5.84
cv0.371
sampleLengths
027
115
222
327
419
518
617
717
818
920
1016
1114
125
1313
1416
1525
1620
1718
1818
198
207
211
229
2322
2415
2513
2614
2712
2821
2916
3012
314
3214
3318
3417
3514
3617
3719
3813
3915
4013
4117
4213
4318
4418
458
4620
4721
4818
4928
76.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.49295774647887325
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences67
matches
0"Somewhere in the depths, an"
1"Suddenly, a low, continuous rustle"
2"Just the shadow-drenched clearing, undisturbed"
3"Further ahead, the grove thickened,"
4"Then, like the breaking of"
ratio0.075
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences67
matches
0"She was in The Fae"
1"She took a cautious step"
2"she muttered to herself, trying"
3"She had come here for"
4"She turned, blue eyes scanning"
5"Her fingers brushed against it,"
6"Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed"
7"She moved cautiously, skirting the"
8"She could feel it now,"
9"She thought about returning, about"
10"She squeezed her eyes shut"
11"Her gaze darted to her"
12"Her name never sounded so"
13"she demanded, yet strength faltered"
14"Her mouth moved, but the"
15"She didn't respond, her mind"
16"Her heart beat wildly, like"
17"Her instincts screamed for escape,"
ratio0.269
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences67
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant felt heavier"
1"She was in The Fae"
2"She took a cautious step"
3"The grove held an eerie"
4"Aurora folded her arms tightly"
5"she muttered to herself, trying"
6"Eva's voice had echoed over"
7"Irritation simmered beneath Aurora's skin."
8"She had come here for"
9"Eva had sounded worried, and"
10"The feeling began as a"
11"The trees around her stood"
12"Aurora listened to her own"
13"She turned, blue eyes scanning"
14"Aurora called, her voice barely"
15"The pendant seemed to tighten"
16"Her fingers brushed against it,"
17"Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed"
18"She moved cautiously, skirting the"
19"Rory was not alone."
ratio0.657
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences67
matches
0"Even in the dim moonlight"
1"Yet, instead of relief, that"
2"Yet, as she turned back,"
3"Just as suddenly, it died,"
ratio0.06
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The grove held an eerie beauty — vibrant hues that defied night, petals trembling in an absent breeze."
1"Her name never sounded so alien, parsed with a knowing comfort that unnerved, each syllable unpacking her resolve."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the voice coaxed, the mists wrapping tighter around her feet"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Isolde's grove murmured (murmur)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"the voice coaxed (coax)"
4"the voice murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.833
84.2454%