| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 60.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsms | 45 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "depths" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "amidst" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "tangible" | | 15 | "solace" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "chilled" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "footsteps" | | 21 | "charged" | | 22 | "quickened" | | 23 | "silk" | | 24 | "resolve" | | 25 | "velvet" | | 26 | "racing" | | 27 | "echo" | | 28 | "stark" | | 29 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1119 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1079 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | London | 2 | | Irritation | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Irritation" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.99 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.84% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 43.04 | | std | 18.63 | | cv | 0.433 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove held an eerie beauty — vibrant hues that defied night, petals trembling in an absent breeze." | | 1 | "Yet, as she turned back, there was movement at the corner of her vision—a flicker of something pale, dancing between the trees." | | 2 | "Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed just out of sight, out of reach like a shadow refusing to be pinned by light." | | 3 | "There was a movement—a shift of shadows—and Aurora dared not breathe." | | 4 | "Cloaked in shadow, it didn’t follow; it simply watched, the blue of its eyes stark against the night as the grove reclaimed her presence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1087 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.035878564857405704 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014719411223551058 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 88.32% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 15.76 | | std | 5.84 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 76.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.49295774647887325 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the depths, an" | | 1 | "Suddenly, a low, continuous rustle" | | 2 | "Just the shadow-drenched clearing, undisturbed" | | 3 | "Further ahead, the grove thickened," | | 4 | "Then, like the breaking of" |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She was in The Fae" | | 1 | "She took a cautious step" | | 2 | "she muttered to herself, trying" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "She turned, blue eyes scanning" | | 5 | "Her fingers brushed against it," | | 6 | "Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed" | | 7 | "She moved cautiously, skirting the" | | 8 | "She could feel it now," | | 9 | "She thought about returning, about" | | 10 | "She squeezed her eyes shut" | | 11 | "Her gaze darted to her" | | 12 | "Her name never sounded so" | | 13 | "she demanded, yet strength faltered" | | 14 | "Her mouth moved, but the" | | 15 | "She didn't respond, her mind" | | 16 | "Her heart beat wildly, like" | | 17 | "Her instincts screamed for escape," |
| | ratio | 0.269 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant felt heavier" | | 1 | "She was in The Fae" | | 2 | "She took a cautious step" | | 3 | "The grove held an eerie" | | 4 | "Aurora folded her arms tightly" | | 5 | "she muttered to herself, trying" | | 6 | "Eva's voice had echoed over" | | 7 | "Irritation simmered beneath Aurora's skin." | | 8 | "She had come here for" | | 9 | "Eva had sounded worried, and" | | 10 | "The feeling began as a" | | 11 | "The trees around her stood" | | 12 | "Aurora listened to her own" | | 13 | "She turned, blue eyes scanning" | | 14 | "Aurora called, her voice barely" | | 15 | "The pendant seemed to tighten" | | 16 | "Her fingers brushed against it," | | 17 | "Her pursuer—or perhaps her imagination—stayed" | | 18 | "She moved cautiously, skirting the" | | 19 | "Rory was not alone." |
| | ratio | 0.657 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dim moonlight" | | 1 | "Yet, instead of relief, that" | | 2 | "Yet, as she turned back," | | 3 | "Just as suddenly, it died," |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove held an eerie beauty — vibrant hues that defied night, petals trembling in an absent breeze." | | 1 | "Her name never sounded so alien, parsed with a knowing comfort that unnerved, each syllable unpacking her resolve." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the voice coaxed, the mists wrapping tighter around her feet" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde's grove murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "the voice coaxed (coax)" | | 4 | "the voice murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.833 | |