| 9.52% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She glanced around [around]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 3 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.19 | | effectiveRatio | 0.19 | |
| 72.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1098 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1098 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "tinged" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "furrowing" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "testament" | | 13 | "pang" | | 14 | "reminder" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of his words" | | 1 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1100 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 936 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.699 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "not quite reaching her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.22% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 36.67 | | std | 15.03 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 64 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 66 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "She opened her mouth, wanting to say something – anything – to bridge the chasm that had formed between them." | | 1 | "But in the flickering light of the candles and the soft hum of the bar, there was a glimmer of hope – a reminder that even in the darkest of times, the bonds of friendship could endure." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 934 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.029978586723768737 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01284796573875803 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 14.47 | | std | 6.38 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 55.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.34210526315789475 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes scanned the dimly" | | 1 | "She had avoided this place" | | 2 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 3 | "she breathed, the name escaping" | | 4 | "His voice was low, tinged" | | 5 | "She glanced around the bar," | | 6 | "She hesitated, unsure of how" | | 7 | "He let out a heavy" | | 8 | "Her gaze drifted to the" | | 9 | "He paused, his brow furrowing" | | 10 | "She shrugged, the nonchalance in" | | 11 | "He reached for his glass," | | 12 | "She opened her mouth, wanting" | | 13 | "he said quietly, raising his" | | 14 | "She took a sip, the" | | 15 | "she said suddenly, the words" | | 16 | "He paused, his fingers tightening" | | 17 | "She broke off, shaking her" | | 18 | "His voice was low, tinged" | | 19 | "She nodded, her fingers tightening" |
| | ratio | 0.422 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The soft glow of the" | | 1 | "Rory pushed through the heavy" | | 2 | "Her eyes scanned the dimly" | | 3 | "A flutter of unease stirred" | | 4 | "She had avoided this place" | | 5 | "Rory's gaze settled on a" | | 6 | "Auburn hair streaked with grey," | | 7 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 8 | "she breathed, the name escaping" | | 9 | "The man turned, hazel eyes" | | 10 | "His voice was low, tinged" | | 11 | "Rory felt a flicker of" | | 12 | "Silas said, shifting in his" | | 13 | "Rory offered him a rueful" | | 14 | "She glanced around the bar," | | 15 | "Silas's gaze searched her face," | | 16 | "Rory ran a hand self-consciously" | | 17 | "She hesitated, unsure of how" | | 18 | "He let out a heavy" | | 19 | "A wry smile tugged at" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 81.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes scanned the dimly lit room, drawn to the flickering candles that dotted the tables and the old maps and photographs that adorned the walls." | | 1 | "Auburn hair streaked with grey, a broad frame that had once carried an easy confidence." | | 2 | "For a long moment, they simply sat there, the silence a testament to the unbreakable bond that had once existed between them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name escaping her lips before she could stop it" | | 1 | "She glanced around, the weight of history pressing down on her" | | 2 | "Silas's gaze searched, a hint of wistfulness in his expression" | | 3 | "Her gaze drifted, a remnant of the life he had once led" | | 4 | "He paused, his brow furrowing slightly" | | 5 | "she said suddenly, the words escaping her before she could stop them" | | 6 | "He paused, his fingers tightening around the glass" | | 7 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "She paused, the unspoken regret hanging heavy in the air between them" | | 9 | "he murmured, the weight of years reflected in his gaze" | | 10 | "He trailed, the unspoken words hanging between them" |
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| 92.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |