Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJEF2844NFF31K0EFFWPA

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.002311
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The soft glow of the neon sign outside cast a verdant hue across the shadowy interior of The Raven's Nest. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door, the familiar scent of cedar and whiskey enveloping her as she stepped inside. Her eyes scanned the dimly lit room, drawn to the flickering candles that dotted the tables and the old maps and photographs that adorned the walls. A flutter of unease stirred in her stomach as she made her way to the bar, the weight of the past pressing against her with each step. She had avoided this place for so long, unwilling to confront the ghosts that lingered here. But tonight, the pull had been too strong to ignore. Rory's gaze settled on a figure seated at the far end of the bar, his back to her. Auburn hair streaked with grey, a broad frame that had once carried an easy confidence. Her breath caught in her throat, a tightness gripping her chest as she recognized him. "Silas," she breathed, the name escaping her lips before she could stop it. The man turned, hazel eyes widening in surprise as they settled on her face. "Rory..." His voice was low, tinged with a hint of disbelief. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the years that had passed stretching between them like a chasm. Rory felt a flicker of the old familiarity, the comfort she had once found in his steady presence. But it was tinged with a sorrow she couldn't quite place. "I... I didn't expect to see you here," Silas said, shifting in his seat, the leather creaking beneath him. Rory offered him a rueful smile. "Neither did I." She glanced around the bar, the weight of history pressing down on her. "It's been a long time." "Too long." Silas's gaze searched her face, a hint of wistfulness in his expression. "You look... different." Rory ran a hand self-consciously through her hair, the familiar strands now dyed a rich, inky black. "I suppose I am." She hesitated, unsure of how to bridge the gulf that had opened between them. "How have you been, Silas?" He let out a heavy sigh, his fingers drumming against the scarred wooden surface of the bar. "Surviving, I suppose." A wry smile tugged at the corner of his mouth. "The bar keeps me busy, at least." Rory nodded, the corners of her lips lifting in a small, understanding smile. "I'm glad to hear it." Her gaze drifted to the silver signet ring on his right hand, a remnant of the life he had once led. "I didn't think you'd still be here, to be honest." Silas followed her gaze, his expression growing pensive. "Funny how things turn out, isn't it?" He paused, his brow furrowing slightly. "And you, Rory? What have you been up to all this time?" Rory's shoulders tensed, a shadow passing over her features. "Oh, you know, this and that." She shrugged, the nonchalance in her tone not quite reaching her eyes. "Trying to keep busy, I suppose." Silas studied her, his gaze perceptive. "I see." He reached for his glass, the amber liquid within swirling as he tilted it. "You always were good at that." Rory felt the familiar sting of guilt, the weight of her secrets pressing against her. She opened her mouth, wanting to say something – anything – to bridge the chasm that had formed between them. But the words caught in her throat, and she found herself faltering. Silas's expression softened, a hint of understanding flickering in his eyes. "It's good to see you, Rory," he said quietly, raising his glass in a silent toast. Rory swallowed hard, her own glass trembling slightly in her hand as she mirrored the gesture. "You too, Silas." She took a sip, the familiar burn of the whiskey a momentary distraction from the turmoil within. The silence that settled between them was heavy, laden with unspoken words and the weight of time. Rory felt the pull of the past, the memories that had once brought her comfort now tinged with a bittersweet sorrow. "I'm sorry," she said suddenly, the words escaping her before she could stop them. "For... for everything." Silas held her gaze, his expression unreadable. "You don't have to apologize, Rory." He paused, his fingers tightening around the glass. "We all make choices, for better or for worse." Rory felt the familiar sting of tears, her throat tightening as she struggled to find the words. "But I..." She broke off, shaking her head. "I should have..." Silas reached out, his hand coming to rest on her arm, the warmth of his touch a silent reassurance. "What's done is done, lass." His voice was low, tinged with a gentle understanding that cut through the haze of her guilt. "We can't change the past, no matter how much we might wish to." Rory felt the weight of his words settle over her, a bittersweet acceptance slowly taking root. She nodded, her fingers tightening around the glass as she took a steadying breath. "You're right," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I just..." She paused, the unspoken regret hanging heavy in the air between them. Silas's grip on her arm tightened, his expression softening. "I know," he murmured, the weight of years reflected in his gaze. For a long moment, they simply sat there, the silence a testament to the unbreakable bond that had once existed between them. Rory felt the familiar pull of the past, the memories of a time when everything had seemed so much simpler. But the distance that had grown between them was a gaping chasm, one that she wasn't sure they could ever truly bridge. Silas's hand slipped away, and Rory felt a sudden pang of loss. She met his gaze, the familiar warmth in his eyes a bittersweet comfort. "I'm glad you're here, Rory," he said quietly. "Even if..." He trailed off, the unspoken words hanging between them. Rory nodded, a small, sad smile tugging at the corners of her lips. "Me too, Silas." She took another sip of her drink, the burn of the whiskey a welcome distraction from the turmoil of her thoughts. As the minutes ticked by, the two old friends sat in a contemplative silence, the weight of the past and the uncertainty of the future pressing down on them. But in the flickering light of the candles and the soft hum of the bar, there was a glimmer of hope – a reminder that even in the darkest of times, the bonds of friendship could endure.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:54:13.479Z" 2/19/2026, 10:54:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
9.52% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.19
72.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"familiar"
count7
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count7
4
word"tinged"
count4
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"furrowing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"unspoken"
count3
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"testament"
count1
13
word"pang"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
4"tinged"
5"flicker"
6"furrowing"
7"silence"
8"unspoken"
9"unreadable"
10"warmth"
11"whisper"
12"testament"
13"pang"
14"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"g in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1100
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount936
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory15
Silas9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.699
windowScore0.833
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"not quite reaching her eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1100
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
74.22% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean36.67
std15.03
cv0.41
sampleLengths
066
153
248
313
425
549
619
727
817
940
1037
1149
1233
1333
1428
1547
1627
1736
1838
1917
2030
2128
2254
2354
2421
2564
2625
2719
2837
2966
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"was tinged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
67.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences76
ratio0.026
matches
0"She opened her mouth, wanting to say something – anything – to bridge the chasm that had formed between them."
1"But in the flickering light of the candles and the soft hum of the bar, there was a glimmer of hope – a reminder that even in the darkest of times, the bonds of friendship could endure."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.029978586723768737
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01284796573875803
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean14.47
std6.38
cv0.441
sampleLengths
020
120
226
327
416
510
618
715
815
913
1014
1111
1220
1318
1411
1519
166
1716
185
1914
203
2117
2218
235
2417
2513
267
2713
2826
2910
308
3113
3212
339
3418
356
366
3716
386
3915
4020
4112
4211
4316
4416
4520
4617
4721
4814
493
55.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.34210526315789475
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her eyes scanned the dimly"
1"She had avoided this place"
2"Her breath caught in her"
3"she breathed, the name escaping"
4"His voice was low, tinged"
5"She glanced around the bar,"
6"She hesitated, unsure of how"
7"He let out a heavy"
8"Her gaze drifted to the"
9"He paused, his brow furrowing"
10"She shrugged, the nonchalance in"
11"He reached for his glass,"
12"She opened her mouth, wanting"
13"he said quietly, raising his"
14"She took a sip, the"
15"she said suddenly, the words"
16"He paused, his fingers tightening"
17"She broke off, shaking her"
18"His voice was low, tinged"
19"She nodded, her fingers tightening"
ratio0.422
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences64
matches
0"The soft glow of the"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"Her eyes scanned the dimly"
3"A flutter of unease stirred"
4"She had avoided this place"
5"Rory's gaze settled on a"
6"Auburn hair streaked with grey,"
7"Her breath caught in her"
8"she breathed, the name escaping"
9"The man turned, hazel eyes"
10"His voice was low, tinged"
11"Rory felt a flicker of"
12"Silas said, shifting in his"
13"Rory offered him a rueful"
14"She glanced around the bar,"
15"Silas's gaze searched her face,"
16"Rory ran a hand self-consciously"
17"She hesitated, unsure of how"
18"He let out a heavy"
19"A wry smile tugged at"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her eyes scanned the dimly lit room, drawn to the flickering candles that dotted the tables and the old maps and photographs that adorned the walls."
1"Auburn hair streaked with grey, a broad frame that had once carried an easy confidence."
2"For a long moment, they simply sat there, the silence a testament to the unbreakable bond that had once existed between them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she breathed, the name escaping her lips before she could stop it"
1"She glanced around, the weight of history pressing down on her"
2"Silas's gaze searched, a hint of wistfulness in his expression"
3"Her gaze drifted, a remnant of the life he had once led"
4"He paused, his brow furrowing slightly"
5"she said suddenly, the words escaping her before she could stop them"
6"He paused, his fingers tightening around the glass"
7"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"She paused, the unspoken regret hanging heavy in the air between them"
9"he murmured, the weight of years reflected in his gaze"
10"He trailed, the unspoken words hanging between them"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.114
71.1663%