Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJEJAWH2JB7EDJBJBKY8F

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Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000362

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn's face, each drop a stinging needle in the frigid night. Her breath misted in the chill, her heart pounding a rhythm that matched the drumroll of her boots on the slick cobblestones. She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera for what felt like miles, the former paramedic's olive skin and dark hair a fleeting shadow in the neon-lit labyrinth of Soho. Quinn's lungs burned, but she pushed on, her military precision bearing driving her forward. Herrera had slipped into an alley, and she could see the distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest looming at the end. She skidded to a halt, her worn leather watch glinting under the harsh streetlight. The bar was a known haunt of the clique, a group she suspected was involved in something far more sinister than their usual supernatural shenanigans. She could hear Herrera's ragged breaths echoing from the alley, see the faint glow of his phone lighting up the brick wall. He was waiting, probably planning his next move. Quinn's hand hovered over her gun, but she didn't draw it. Not yet. She needed answers, and she needed Herrera alive to give them. "Herrera!" she called out, her voice steady despite the adrenaline coursing through her veins. "It's over, Tommy. Come out with your hands up." Silence. Then, a low chuckle. "You're tenacious, I'll give you that, Detective." Herrera stepped into the light, his warm brown eyes gleaming with a mix of fear and defiance. "But you're out of your league here." Quinn stepped closer, her sharp jaw set. "I've been out of my league since the day I joined the force, Herrera. Now, tell me what you know about the clique's involvement in the Morris case." Herrera's gaze flickered, a hint of vulnerability flashing across his face. "I can't, Detective. I won't. You don't understand what you're dealing with." Quinn's patience was wearing thin. "Then enlighten me. But do it fast, because I'm running out of patience." Herrera looked at her, then at the bar, then back at her. He seemed to be weighing his options, his scarred left forearm flexing as he clenched and unclenched his fist. "Alright, Detective. But not here. Follow me." He turned and walked towards The Raven's Nest, leaving Quinn with a choice to make. Follow him into the lion's den, or let him disappear into the night, taking her only lead with him. Quinn took a deep breath, her brown eyes scanning the alley, the bar, the rain-soaked streets. Then, she followed Herrera, her hand never leaving her gun. The bar was dimly lit, the air thick with smoke and the hum of hushed conversations. The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, each one a testament to the city's sordid past. The patrons were a mix of humans and supernaturals, their eyes following Quinn as she walked in, her salt-and-pepper hair glistening with rain. Herrera led her to a booth in the back, his Saint Christopher medallion catching the light as he sat down. Quinn slid in opposite him, her eyes never leaving his face. "Talk," she said, her voice low. Herrera leaned in, his voice barely above a whisper. "The clique, they're involved in something big, Detective. Something that goes beyond the usual supernatural stuff. They're dealing in artifacts, powerful ones. And they're not the only ones." Quinn's grip tightened on her gun. "What does this have to do with Morris?" Herrera hesitated, then continued, "Your partner, he stumbled onto something he shouldn't have. Something that got him killed. And now, they're after me. I'm the only one left who knows the truth." Quinn felt a chill run down her spine, a cold dread settling in the pit of her stomach. She knew Morris's death had been no ordinary case, had felt the supernatural taint on it from the start. But she'd never imagined it would lead her here, to this hidden world of secrets and shadows. "So, what now?" she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. Herrera looked at her, his eyes filled with a mix of fear and determination. "Now, we go to the Veil Market. It's the only place we can find the answers we need. But it's not going to be easy, Detective. The Market, it's... different." Quinn took a deep breath, her mind racing. She could feel the weight of her gun in her hand, the familiar comfort of it grounding her. She thought of Morris, of the unsolved case that had haunted her for three years. She thought of the truth, of the justice she owed her partner. Then, she made her decision. "Alright, Herrera," she said, her voice filled with resolve. "Let's go to the Veil Market." Herrera nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "You're going to need this," he said, sliding a bone token across the table. "It's our ticket in." Quinn picked up the token, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings on it. She looked at Herrera, then at the bone token, then back at Herrera. She knew she was stepping into the unknown, into a world that was dangerous and unpredictable. But she also knew she had no choice. Not if she wanted to find the truth. She stood up, the bone token clutched in her hand. "Let's go," she said, her voice filled with determination. Herrera stood up as well, his eyes filled with a mix of fear and hope. "You won't regret this, Detective," he said, his voice filled with conviction. Quinn didn't respond, her mind already focused on the task ahead. She followed Herrera out of the bar, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath misting in the cold night air. The rain had stopped, but the streets were still slick, the neon lights reflecting off the wet cobblestones. They walked in silence, the city around them a blur of lights and shadows. Quinn could feel the weight of the bone token in her pocket, the promise of danger and discovery it held. She didn't know what lay ahead, didn't know what she would find at the Veil Market. But she knew she was one step closer to the truth, one step closer to justice. And for now, that was enough.
total_cost0.00036239999999999997

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Herrera hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.1
95.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"pounding"
count2
2
word"fleeting"
count1
3
word"looming"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"sinister"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"testament"
count1
12
word"glistening"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"down her spine"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count2
18
word"weight"
count2
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"resolve"
count1
21
word"tracing"
count1
22
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pounding"
2"fleeting"
3"looming"
4"glinting"
5"sinister"
6"echoing"
7"silence"
8"gleaming"
9"flickered"
10"scanning"
11"testament"
12"glistening"
13"whisper"
14"down her spine"
15"stomach"
16"racing"
17"could feel"
18"weight"
19"familiar"
20"resolve"
21"tracing"
22"intricate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched his fist"
59.90% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences64
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"filled with resolve"
2"d with resolve"
3"filled with determination"
4"d with determination"
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1044
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount838
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tomás1
Herrera17
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Silence1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris2
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Nest"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Silence"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.486
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like miles, the former paramedic's"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1044
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean36
std18.68
cv0.519
sampleLengths
066
176
254
323
436
535
623
718
838
934
1026
1158
1237
1337
1414
1532
1654
1713
1844
1953
205
2115
2227
2358
2419
2527
2650
2766
286
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"was involved"
58.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was wearing"
2"was stepping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount844
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02132701421800948
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004739336492890996
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean13.92
std6.77
cv0.487
sampleLengths
017
122
227
314
423
514
625
722
88
911
102
1111
1214
139
141
154
1624
177
187
1928
2011
2112
225
2313
2412
2519
267
2715
2819
2916
3010
3116
3219
3323
3420
3511
366
379
3828
396
408
4132
4218
4319
4417
4513
4614
4730
488
4918
43.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.29333333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then, a low chuckle."
1"Then, she followed Herrera, her"
2"Then, she made her decision."
ratio0.048
58.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her breath misted in the"
1"She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera"
2"She skidded to a halt,"
3"She could hear Herrera's ragged"
4"He was waiting, probably planning"
5"She needed answers, and she"
6"she called out, her voice"
7"He seemed to be weighing"
8"He turned and walked towards"
9"she said, her voice low"
10"She knew Morris's death had"
11"she asked, her voice steady"
12"She could feel the weight"
13"She thought of Morris, of"
14"She thought of the truth,"
15"she said, her voice filled"
16"he said, sliding a bone"
17"She looked at Herrera, then"
18"She knew she was stepping"
19"She stood up, the bone"
ratio0.403
32.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences62
matches
0"The rain lashed against Detective"
1"Her breath misted in the"
2"She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera"
3"Quinn's lungs burned, but she"
4"Herrera had slipped into an"
5"She skidded to a halt,"
6"The bar was a known"
7"She could hear Herrera's ragged"
8"He was waiting, probably planning"
9"Quinn's hand hovered over her"
10"She needed answers, and she"
11"she called out, her voice"
12"Herrera stepped into the light,"
13"Quinn stepped closer, her sharp"
14"Herrera's gaze flickered, a hint"
15"Quinn's patience was wearing thin."
16"Herrera looked at her, then"
17"He seemed to be weighing"
18"He turned and walked towards"
19"Quinn took a deep breath,"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her breath misted in the chill, her heart pounding a rhythm that matched the drumroll of her boots on the slick cobblestones."
1"She could hear Herrera's ragged breaths echoing from the alley, see the faint glow of his phone lighting up the brick wall."
2"The patrons were a mix of humans and supernaturals, their eyes following Quinn as she walked in, her salt-and-pepper hair glistening with rain."
3"She knew she was stepping into the unknown, into a world that was dangerous and unpredictable."
4"She followed Herrera out of the bar, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath misting in the cold night air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called out, her voice steady despite the adrenaline coursing through her veins"
1"she said, her voice low"
2"she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.1
77.5968%