Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJGAAQ15XKC1HX4FWJT2T

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14.0s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed open the heavy door to The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign casting an otherworldly glow behind her. The murmur of low conversations and the clinking of glasses greeted her. It had been a long day of navigating London's chaotic streets, delivering orders for Golden Empress. She hoped a drink in Silas' bar might provide some solace. The familiar scent of aged whisky and worn leather filled her lungs, grounding her. "Evening, Rory," Silas' voice rumbled from behind the bar. Aurora nodded towards him. "Hey, Si. How's the leg tonight?" Silas gave a wry smile, his hazel eyes twinkling under the dim overhead light. "As stubborn as ever. You know how it is." "Yeah, I do." She took a seat at the bar and drummed her fingers on the polished wood. "Can I get my usual?" Without another word, Silas turned to prepare her drink. Aurora glanced around, noting the familiar faces clustered at their usual spots, and then her eyes caught sight of someone she hadn't seen in years. Her breath hitched for a moment. It was Eva. Eva's hair was shorter, her once vibrant red locks now edged with silver. The sparkle in her eye had dimmed, replaced by something more akin to resignation. Aurora felt a pang of sorrow, remembering the wild dreams and infectious laughter of her youth. Noticing Aurora’s stare, Eva looked up and their eyes locked. "Aurora," Eva's voice carried a mixture of surprise and uncertainty, mingled with the faintest hint of a Welsh lilt. "Eva." She smiled, though it felt forced. The years between them stretched out like a chasm. Eva stood and walked over, each step hesitant as though she was testing unfamiliar ground. Aurora couldn't help but notice the frayed edges on Eva’s denim jacket and the battered leather satchel hanging off her shoulder. "Mind if I join you?" Eva’s voice was quiet. "Of course." Aurora gestured to the empty stool beside her. Silas placed her drink in front of her and raised an eyebrow at the new addition. "Just catching up with an old friend," Aurora explained. "Four years?" Eva winced as she took a seat. Aurora looked sideways at her, fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "Maybe five." Eva sighed, shoulders slumping. "I heard you were in London. Finally decided to hunt you down." "They keep you busy up north?" Aurora ventured. "Something like that." Eva's hands fidgeted with the strap of her satchel. "Spent some time in Glasgow after... you know... the thing with Evan." Aurora nodded. No need to rehash the past. "How's your family?" "They're good. Mum's still at the old school, Dad's retired." Eva kept her eyes fixed on the bar, avoiding Aurora's gaze. "And you? How've you been?" Aurora took a sip of her drink, letting the burn of the whisky settle her nerves. "Surviving. Delivering food, living above a bar." She laughed, but it felt hollow. "How’s the gallery? You always talked about running one." Eva chuckled, a bitter edge to it. "Got into curating after all. But it’s not the gallery I imagined. Mostly just end-of-year shows for art students." "Still, that's something." "Yeah," Eva muttered, more to herself than to Aurora. Silas drifted over to check if they needed anything else. Aurora shook her head, and he moved on with a knowing nod. "Do you ever think about Cardiff?" Eva finally asked, breaking the uncomfortable silence. "Sometimes," Aurora admitted. "More than I'd like to." "Do you remember that night at the pier?" Eva's voice softened with nostalgia. "We snuck in after hours with a couple of bottles." "Yeah..." Aurora’s eyes grew distant. "You and me, talking about how we’d conquer the world." Eva smiled ruefully. "The dreams we had..." "Big dreams." Aurora’s voice lowered, touched with regret. "Things change." Eva reached out tentatively, placing a hand on Aurora's wrist, just below the crescent-shaped scar. Aurora flinched but didn’t pull away entirely. "Can we... maybe... be friends again?" Eva asked, her voice brittle. "Rebuild what we had?" "Do you think we can?" Aurora's voice held an edge of challenge, mingled with hope. "We owe it to ourselves to try, don’t we?" Eva squeezed her wrist gently. The weight of unspoken regrets hung between them, heavier than any words could capture. Aurora searched Eva's face, looking for the spark of the girl she used to know. She searched her own heart for forgiveness for herself and for Eva. Silas' soft footfalls approached again. "Another round?" Aurora looked at Eva, silent communication passing between them. Eva nodded ever so slightly. "Yeah. Another round," Aurora affirmed, feeling the stirrings of something long-dormant within her. Silas poured the drinks and quietly moved on, a wise old man leaving the two friends to navigate their fragile truce. Eva spoke first. "Do you ever hear from Evan?" Aurora stiffened slightly. "No. I made sure he couldn't find me." "Good," Eva nodded. "He was bad news." "You don't need to remind me," Aurora muttered, finishing her first drink and pushing it aside. "I'm sorry. Really, Aurora. For leaving when you needed me." Eva's voice carried the weight of years of guilt. Aurora took a deep breath. "I know you are. And I'm not blameless. I shut you out." Eva took a long gulp of her drink, eyes watering slightly from the burn. "Maybe we were just kids dealing with big problems." "Yeah," Aurora conceded. "But we're not kids anymore." "No," Eva agreed. "We're not." They sat in silence for a while, the bar’s bustle drifting around them. The tension between past and present hummed, speaking volumes. "You know," Eva said softly. "I've never stopped wishing things were different." "Same here." Eva's face finally transformed into a small, tentative smile. "So, what now?" Aurora allowed herself a real smile this time. "We start fresh. One step at a time." Eva's grip on Aurora's wrist tightened for just a moment before letting go. "I’d like that." "Me too." Their conversation turned lighter, accompanied by easy laughter that felt almost foreign, yet familiar. Eva asked about Aurora's deliveries, and Aurora inquired about Eva's latest art show. The past never fully left, but it no longer gnawed at their every word. Silas observed from the periphery, a slight smile pulling at his lips. He saw the healing beginning with each exchanged glance, each hesitant laugh. The weight of time and unspoken regret still loomed, but its chain seemed to lighten with each passing second. Maybe, just maybe, old friends could bridge the gap. In the end, it wasn't about forgetting the past. It was about acknowledging it and choosing to move forward anyway. Aurora and Eva toasted the future, uncertain yet brimming with the possibility of renewal.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva finally asked [finally]"
1"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.915
rawRatio0.074
effectiveRatio0.068
73.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"ever so slightly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"solace"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"pang"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"unspoken"
count2
12
word"navigate"
count1
13
word"carried the weight"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"navigating"
2"chaotic"
3"solace"
4"familiar"
5"pang"
6"lilt"
7"eyebrow"
8"tracing"
9"silence"
10"weight"
11"unspoken"
12"navigate"
13"carried the weight"
14"tension"
15"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but notice"
84.35% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences82
matches
0"a pang of sorrow"
1"d with nostalgia"
2"d with regret"
3"d with hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount794
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity4.28
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity7.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas6
Eva34
Aurora33
Welsh1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1117
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean18.02
std12.92
cv0.717
sampleLengths
073
19
210
323
423
540
63
753
819
916
1036
119
1226
139
149
1514
1616
178
1824
1911
2026
2138
2226
233
249
2522
2613
278
2823
2915
307
3110
3222
3315
3415
3514
3641
377
3814
3913
4021
419
4211
437
4416
4519
4617
4723
488
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was testing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences115
ratio0
matches(empty)
96.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount250
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.044
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.016
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.71
std5.26
cv0.542
sampleLengths
020
112
216
311
414
59
64
76
814
99
1018
115
129
1325
146
153
1613
1714
1816
1910
2019
217
229
2315
2421
259
2610
2716
289
299
3012
312
324
3312
348
3512
3612
372
386
393
4021
415
4216
4313
449
457
4619
473
489
4910
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners46
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Maybe, just maybe, old friends"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences75
matches
0"It had been a long"
1"She hoped a drink in"
2"She took a seat at"
3"Her breath hitched for a"
4"It was Eva."
5"She smiled, though it felt"
6"She laughed, but it felt"
7"She searched her own heart"
8"They sat in silence for"
9"Their conversation turned lighter, accompanied"
10"He saw the healing beginning"
11"It was about acknowledging it"
ratio0.16
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences75
matches
0"Aurora pushed open the heavy"
1"The murmur of low conversations"
2"It had been a long"
3"She hoped a drink in"
4"The familiar scent of aged"
5"Aurora nodded towards him."
6"Silas gave a wry smile,"
7"She took a seat at"
8"Aurora glanced around, noting the"
9"Her breath hitched for a"
10"It was Eva."
11"Eva's hair was shorter, her"
12"The sparkle in her eye"
13"Aurora felt a pang of"
14"Eva's voice carried a mixture"
15"She smiled, though it felt"
16"The years between them stretched"
17"Eva stood and walked over,"
18"Aurora couldn't help but notice"
19"Eva’s voice was quiet"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eva stood and walked over, each step hesitant as though she was testing unfamiliar ground."
1"Their conversation turned lighter, accompanied by easy laughter that felt almost foreign, yet familiar."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva muttered, more to herself than to Aurora"
14.41% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Aurora explained (explain)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"Eva muttered (mutter)"
3"Aurora admitted (admit)"
4"Aurora's voice (aurora voice)"
5"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
6"Aurora conceded (concede)"
7"Eva agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.271
79.5169%