Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJKSK5XVABMHPMQKMJ2J0

Run Details

Duration:
4.0s
Cost:
$0.000168

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something older—like iron and crushed petals. Aurora’s boots crunched over gravel as she stepped between the last of the standing stones, their gnarled bark clawing at the moonless sky. The pendant at her collar warmed, a pulse of heat against her skin, though the night held no warmth. She adjusted the strap, fingers brushing the crimson gemstone. *Just a delivery. Just a favour.* The grove opened before her like a wound in the world, wildflowers glowing faintly under the pale light of the moon. The air hummed, thick with the wrongness of it. Her pulse quickened, but she didn’t stop. Not yet. The address on the note had been scrawled in ink that looked too deliberate, too *intentional*. *Golden Empress. Midnight. Bring the pendant.* She’d told herself it was just another odd job. But the way the pendant had warmed in her pocket the moment she’d read the note—like it had *known*—had made her stomach twist. A rustle from the undergrowth. Aurora froze. The sound came again, closer this time, though nothing moved in the shadows. Her breath hitched. *Probably just a fox.* She stepped deeper into the grove, the pendant’s glow flickering against the dark. The trees here were taller, their branches twisting like skeletal fingers. The air grew colder. She pulled her jacket tighter, the fabric clinging to her skin. Then the whispers started. Not words—just a low, wet sound, like something breathing through its teeth. Aurora’s skin prickled. She turned, scanning the darkness, but the grove stayed still. Too still. A branch snapped behind her. She spun, heart hammering, but the trees were empty. The pendant pulsed harder, the warmth seeping into her collarbone. She clenched her fists. *Get a grip. It’s just the wind.* The whispers came again, closer now, slithering through the leaves like fingers dragging over bark. Aurora’s breath came fast, shallow. She forced herself forward, each step heavier than the last. The grove seemed to stretch around her, the path narrowing, the trees leaning in. Then she saw it. A figure stood at the edge of the clearing, its silhouette too tall, too *wrong*. It didn’t move, just stood there, watching. Aurora’s breath caught. The pendant burned against her skin, the heat radiating outward. She lifted a hand, fingers trembling, and the figure tilted its head—just slightlyas if listening. The whispers turned to something else then. A sound like wet lips smacking together. Something *hungry*. Aurora’s legs locked. She couldn’t move. The figure took a step forward, its boots sinking into the damp earth. The pendant glowed brighter, the crimson stone pulsing like a heartbeat. And then the ground trembled. Not an earthquake—something *moving* beneath her. The trees groaned, their roots twisting, splitting the earth. The figure raised a hand, long fingers curled like claws, and the air between them *ripped*. Aurora stumbled back, but her boots caught on something hidden in the leaves. She fell hard, the pendant digging into her collar. The figure was closer now, its breath a wet rasp in the dark. The last thing she saw was the way its mouth stretched too wide, too many teeth glinting in the faint light. Then the world went still.
total_cost0.0001678

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount540
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount540
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"the last thing"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"quickened"
3"stomach"
4"scanning"
5"pulsed"
6"trembled"
7"the last thing"
8"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.79% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords29
totalWords536
ratio0.054
matches
0"Just a delivery. Just a favour."
1"intentional"
2"Golden Empress. Midnight. Bring the pendant."
3"known"
4"Probably just a fox."
5"Get a grip. It’s just the wind."
6"wrong"
7"hungry"
8"moving"
9"ripped"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount536
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Empress1
Aurora7
persons
0"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.847
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if listening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount536
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean28.21
std18.82
cv0.667
sampleLengths
070
161
232
327
439
54
627
75
830
944
104
1150
1216
1330
145
1531
1635
1721
185
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"been scrawled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences62
ratio0.081
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—like iron and crushed petals."
1"But the way the pendant had warmed in her pocket the moment she’d read the note—like it had *known*—had made her stomach twist."
2"Not words—just a low, wet sound, like something breathing through its teeth."
3"She lifted a hand, fingers trembling, and the figure tilted its head—just slightly—as if listening."
4"Not an earthquake—something *moving* beneath her."
84.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount540
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.05740740740740741
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005555555555555556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean8.65
std5.7
cv0.659
sampleLengths
013
123
219
39
43
53
621
79
87
92
1016
112
121
133
149
1523
165
172
1813
193
204
2113
2211
234
2411
254
2612
273
2810
292
305
319
3210
334
343
354
3615
375
3810
3914
404
4115
427
433
4410
4515
467
477
482
493
40.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2903225806451613
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners18
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences56
matches
0"*Just a delivery."
1"Just a favour.*"
2"*Probably just a fox.*"
3"Then the whispers started."
4"Then she saw it."
5"Then the world went still."
ratio0.107
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences56
matches
0"She adjusted the strap, fingers"
1"Her pulse quickened, but she"
2"She’d told herself it was"
3"Her breath hitched."
4"She stepped deeper into the"
5"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
6"She turned, scanning the darkness,"
7"She spun, heart hammering, but"
8"She clenched her fists."
9"It’s just the wind.*"
10"She forced herself forward, each"
11"It didn’t move, just stood"
12"She lifted a hand, fingers"
13"She couldn’t move."
14"She fell hard, the pendant"
ratio0.268
67.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences56
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora’s boots crunched over gravel"
2"The pendant at her collar"
3"She adjusted the strap, fingers"
4"The grove opened before her"
5"The air hummed, thick with"
6"Her pulse quickened, but she"
7"The address on the note"
8"She’d told herself it was"
9"A rustle from the undergrowth."
10"The sound came again, closer"
11"Her breath hitched."
12"She stepped deeper into the"
13"The trees here were taller,"
14"The air grew colder."
15"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
16"Aurora’s skin prickled."
17"She turned, scanning the darkness,"
18"A branch snapped behind her."
19"She spun, heart hammering, but"
ratio0.786
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The address on the note had been scrawled in ink that looked too deliberate, too *intentional*."
1"She lifted a hand, fingers trembling, and the figure tilted its head—just slightly—as if listening."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1780%