| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 76.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 422 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 422 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 420 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "else" | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "breathed" | | 3 | "Don’t go where the light doesn’t reach." | | 4 | "moved" | | 5 | "laughed" | | 6 | "moved" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 420 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.786 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite human, not quite anything" | | 1 | "not quite anything" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 7.143 | | wordCount | 420 | | matches | | 0 | "not wind, not rustling leaves, but something *else*" | | 1 | "not rustling leaves, but something *else*" | | 2 | "not with leaves, but with something deeper, something" |
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| 94.20% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 21 | | std | 16.06 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 72 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 46 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "A whisper slithered through the undergrowth—not wind, not rustling leaves, but something *else*." | | 1 | "A memory flickered—her father’s voice, warning her about the things that lurked in the edges of places like this." | | 2 | "The air hummed, vibrating in her skull, and the trees *moved*—not with leaves, but with something deeper, something that slithered through the roots." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 422 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.037914691943127965 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009478672985781991 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 46 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 46 | | mean | 9.13 | | std | 6.45 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 7 |
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| 41.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.32608695652173914 | | totalSentences | 46 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled sharply, her fingers" | | 1 | "She’d come here for the" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 3 | "Her breath fogged the air" | | 4 | "She turned slowly, her eyes" | | 5 | "Her scar on her wrist" | | 6 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 7 | "She didn’t look." | | 8 | "She didn’t need to." | | 9 | "It slithered into her ear," | | 10 | "She didn’t know what was" |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "She exhaled sharply, her fingers" | | 2 | "The crimson glow pulsed faintly," | | 3 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 4 | "Something that slithered." | | 5 | "Aurora’s pulse hammered in her" | | 6 | "She’d come here for the" | | 7 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 8 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 9 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 10 | "A wet, clicking noise from" | | 11 | "Her breath fogged the air" | | 12 | "The whisper came again, closer" | | 13 | "She turned slowly, her eyes" | | 14 | "Her scar on her wrist" | | 15 | "A memory flickered—her father’s voice," | | 16 | "Aurora swallowed hard." | | 17 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, brighter" | | 18 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 19 | "A twig snapped." |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 17 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their edges shifting, the carvings twisting into something that wasn’t there before." | | 1 | "The air hummed, vibrating in her skull, and the trees *moved*—not with leaves, but with something deeper, something that slithered through the roots." | | 2 | "The branches twisted, their shadows stretching unnaturally long, and the standing stones *moved*, their carvings rearranging themselves into something that wasn…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |