Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJN04TTRN6YT17XH6METD

Run Details

Duration:
2.1s
Cost:
$0.000062

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick and unnatural. She exhaled sharply, her fingers tightening around the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant. The crimson glow pulsed faintly, steady and warm, but the moment she glanced up, the trees around her seemed to lean in. A whisper slithered through the undergrowth—not wind, not rustling leaves, but something *else*. Something that slithered. Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat. She’d come here for the portal. For the way the standing stones hummed when the air shifted just right. But now, the silence was wrong. Too still. Too *wrong*. She stepped forward, her boots sinking into the damp earth. The grove stretched before her, the ancient oaks casting jagged shadows that didn’t match the moonlight. The standing stones loomed at the center, their carvings worn smooth by time, but their edges seemed to pulse, like veins of something darker beneath. A sound. A wet, clicking noise from the trees. Aurora froze. Her breath fogged the air in front of her. The whisper came again, closer this time, closer to her left shoulder. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the darkness. Nothing. But the trees *breathed*. Her scar on her wrist prickled. A memory flickered—her father’s voice, warning her about the things that lurked in the edges of places like this. *Don’t go where the light doesn’t reach.* Aurora swallowed hard. The pendant’s glow flickered, brighter now. She reached up, her fingers brushing the crimson stone. A twig snapped. She didn’t look. She didn’t need to. The whisper was right behind her now, a voice that wasn’t quite human, not quite anything. It slithered into her ear, warm and wet, and she stumbled back. The standing stones loomed closer, their edges shifting, the carvings twisting into something that wasn’t there before. The air hummed, vibrating in her skull, and the trees *moved*—not with leaves, but with something deeper, something that slithered through the roots. Aurora’s grip on the pendant tightened. The pendant pulsed, its glow now a deep, unnatural crimson, like blood on fire. She turned. And the trees *laughed*. The sound was wet, guttural, and it came from everywhere at once. The branches twisted, their shadows stretching unnaturally long, and the standing stones *moved*, their carvings rearranging themselves into something that wasn’t carved at all. Aurora’s heart pounded against her ribs. She didn’t know what was real. What was coming. All she knew was that she wasn’t alone anymore. And the thing behind her was smiling.
total_cost0.00006168

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
76.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount422
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount422
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"whisper"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"loomed"
5"scanning"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences46
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords13
totalWords420
ratio0.031
matches
0"else"
1"wrong"
2"breathed"
3"Don’t go where the light doesn’t reach."
4"moved"
5"laughed"
6"moved"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount420
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Heartstone1
persons
0"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.786
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite human, not quite anything"
1"not quite anything"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords7.143
wordCount420
matches
0"not wind, not rustling leaves, but something *else*"
1"not rustling leaves, but something *else*"
2"not with leaves, but with something deeper, something"
94.20% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean21
std16.06
cv0.765
sampleLengths
052
116
235
351
49
531
61
74
832
918
103
117
1228
1340
1420
152
164
1736
1824
197
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs72
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences46
ratio0.065
matches
0"A whisper slithered through the undergrowth—not wind, not rustling leaves, but something *else*."
1"A memory flickered—her father’s voice, warning her about the things that lurked in the edges of places like this."
2"The air hummed, vibrating in her skull, and the trees *moved*—not with leaves, but with something deeper, something that slithered through the roots."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount422
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.037914691943127965
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.009478672985781991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean9.13
std6.45
cv0.707
sampleLengths
016
114
222
313
43
56
66
713
86
92
102
1110
1216
1325
142
157
162
179
1812
198
201
214
226
2319
247
253
266
279
283
293
304
3116
3212
3317
3423
356
3614
372
384
3912
4024
416
426
433
449
457
41.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.32608695652173914
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences40
matches
0"She exhaled sharply, her fingers"
1"She’d come here for the"
2"She stepped forward, her boots"
3"Her breath fogged the air"
4"She turned slowly, her eyes"
5"Her scar on her wrist"
6"She reached up, her fingers"
7"She didn’t look."
8"She didn’t need to."
9"It slithered into her ear,"
10"She didn’t know what was"
ratio0.275
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences40
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"She exhaled sharply, her fingers"
2"The crimson glow pulsed faintly,"
3"A whisper slithered through the"
4"Something that slithered."
5"Aurora’s pulse hammered in her"
6"She’d come here for the"
7"She stepped forward, her boots"
8"The grove stretched before her,"
9"The standing stones loomed at"
10"A wet, clicking noise from"
11"Her breath fogged the air"
12"The whisper came again, closer"
13"She turned slowly, her eyes"
14"Her scar on her wrist"
15"A memory flickered—her father’s voice,"
16"Aurora swallowed hard."
17"The pendant’s glow flickered, brighter"
18"She reached up, her fingers"
19"A twig snapped."
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The standing stones loomed closer, their edges shifting, the carvings twisting into something that wasn’t there before."
1"The air hummed, vibrating in her skull, and the trees *moved*—not with leaves, but with something deeper, something that slithered through the roots."
2"The branches twisted, their shadows stretching unnaturally long, and the standing stones *moved*, their carvings rearranging themselves into something that wasn…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.9936%