Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJNWFAS14Q3DABXP9MDB1

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Duration:
42.8s
Cost:
$0.000857
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was unusually busy for a Tuesday night. Rory scanned the crowd as she maneuvered through the sea of bodies, clutching a tray of empty glasses. The din of raucous laughter and clinking glassware enveloped her, a cacophony that had once been music to her ears but now just sounded like noise. She spotted Silas at the end of the bar, his silver signet ring glinting under the dim lights as he wiped down glasses with a well-worn rag. She caught his eye and tilted her head towards the hidden door leading to the back room, silently asking for permission to slip away. He gave her a curt nod, and she slipped through the crowd, the heavy bookshelf swinging open to reveal her sanctuary. It had been weeks since she'd last passed through this door, seeking solitude away from prying eyes. She sank into the leather armchair, cradling her head in her hands as she closed her eyes and let out a shaky breath. How had it come to this? The click of heels on wood afforded her no warning before a familiar voice pierced the silence. "Rory Carter, as I live and breathe." Her eyes flew open, the voice pulling her from the past and anchoring her firmly in the present. There, standing in the doorway, was a ghost from her former life. Eva looked every bit the high-powered attorney she'd become, dressed in an immaculate black suit, her brunette hair pulled back into a sleek ponytail. Rory stood, taking tentative steps towards her childhood friend before they embraced, the years melting away like ice under the summer sun. "I thought I recognized that black hair from across the bar," Eva chuckled, holding Rory at arm's length. "You look different, though. What's new?" Rory couldn't help but laugh at the irony. Different? She was living a completely different life than the one she'd left behind in Cardiff. But how could she explain that to Eva, who knew nothing of the horrors she'd faced at Evan's hands? "I could ask you the same question," Rory deflected, gesturing to Eva's expensive attire. "What brings a hotshot lawyer to my humble abode?" Eva's smile faltered as she glanced around the room, taking in the old maps and pictures lining the walls. "I'm on a case in London. Thought I'd come by and see how you're doing, maybe catch up over a drink?" The mere suggestion of alcohol turned Rory's stomach, memories of Evan's drunken rages flooding her mind. She shoved them away, forcing a smile onto her face. "I don't drink anymore, but I can make you something non-alcoholic." Eva raised an eyebrow, curiosity written across her features. "Since when?" "Since I realized it was never really my thing," Rory lied, moving towards the small bar in the corner. "What'll it be? Soda? Juice?" "A soda's fine," Eva replied, her tone suggesting she didn't quite believe Rory's explanation. She waited for Rory to mix the drink before continuing, "So, how've you been? What've you been doing since you ran off to London?" Ran off. The words echoed in Rory's mind, eliciting a wry chuckle. "I didn't run off. I just needed a change of scenery." "And this was the best you could do?" Eva gestured around the room, her distaste for the dilapidated surroundings clear on her face. Rory bit back a sharp retort, reminding herself that Eva knew nothing of Silas' true nature or the solace he'd provided her during her darkest hours. "It suited me at the time," she said instead, handing Eva her drink before sitting back down. Eva took a sip, her gaze never leaving Rory's face. "And now?" "Now, I'm happy where I am." It wasn't entirely true, but it was close enough. She'd found a measure of peace working for Yu-Fei and living above Silas' bar, even if the nightmares still plagued her on occasion. They fell into an awkward silence, the years stretching between them like taut wire. Rory searched for a neutral topic, something to break the tension. "How's your family?" Eva shrugged, taking another sip of her soda. "Mam's still teaching, Dad's still arguing cases before the Supreme Court. You know, same old." "And your sister? How's Grace?" A shadow crossed Eva's face, her fingers tightening around the glass. "She's... she's not doing well, actually. Got mixed up with some bad people, ended up in rehab." Rory's heart twisted, remembering the bubbly blonde girl who had once followed them around like a devoted puppy. "I'm so sorry, Eva. That must be hard on your family." "It is, but we're managing." Eva cleared her throat, obviously eager to change the subject. "Enough about me. What about you? Are you seeing anyone?" The question caught Rory off guard, sending a jolt of pain through her chest as memories of Evan flashed through her mind. She swallowed hard, shaking her head. "No, I... I don't think I'll ever be ready for that again." Eva's eyes widened, realization dawning on her face. "Rory, what happened? Did he... did Evan do something to you?" "He didn't do anything I didn't let him," Rory whispered, her voice cracking under the weight of guilt and regret. "I stayed because I thought I loved him, even when he started hitting me." Tears welled up in Eva's eyes, spilling down her cheeks as she reached out for Rory's hand. "Why didn't you tell me? I would've helped you, Rory. You should've told me." Rory shook her head, a bitter laugh escaping her lips. "And say what? That I was too weak to leave him, that I let him hurt me over and over again?" "You weren't weak, Rory. You were... you were being abused. That's not your fault." But it was her fault. She'd stayed, she'd let him hurt her, she'd let him tear her apart piece by piece until there was nothing left but broken fragments of the girl she'd once been. The tears came then, flooding her eyes and spilling down her face as she crumpled into Eva's arms. They held each other, crying for the years they'd lost, the friendship they'd let fall by the wayside, the pain they'd both endured. "I missed you, Eva," Rory whispered, her voice muffled by Eva's jacket. "I missed you so much." "I missed you too, Rory," Eva murmured, stroking her hair as she rocked her back and forth. "I promise, I'll never let anything like that happen to you again. I'll keep you safe, no matter what." They stayed like that for a long moment, two old friends bound by the weight of time and unspoken regret, finally finding solace in each other's arms. When they finally pulled away, Eva wiped her cheeks, offering Rory a watery smile. "I have to go back to my hotel, but I want you to call me, Rory. Anytime, day or night. I'll always be there for you." Rory nodded, knowing that Eva meant every word. She watched as her childhood friend stood up, smoothing her suit before she turned to leave. "Eva, wait," Rory called out, her voice trembling. "Thank you. For everything." Eva paused at the door, looking back at Rory with a soft smile. "It's what friends do, Rory. It's what we should've done a long time ago." With a final nod, she slipped through the bookshelf, leaving Rory alone once more. Rory sank back into the armchair, her body wracked with sobs as she let the tears flow freely. She cried for the girl she'd been, the one who'd let love blind her to the truth of Evan's cruelty. She cried for the friend she'd lost, the one she'd pushed away during her darkest hours. And she cried for the future she feared, the one where she'd never be able to trust again, to love again. But as the tears began to subside, a glimmer of hope flickered in the depths of her heart. She'd survived Evan, she'd survived her own self-loathing and despair, and now, with Eva by her side once more, she knew she could survive anything. She stood up, taking a deep breath as she squared her shoulders and faced the bookshelf. It was time to face the world again, to step out of the shadows and into the light. And so, with a final glance at the room that had been her refuge for so long, Rory stepped through the door and into the bar, ready to begin the next chapter of her life.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured around [around]"
1"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.103
92.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"cacophony"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"firmly"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"solace"
count2
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"cacophony"
2"glinting"
3"sanctuary"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"firmly"
7"stomach"
8"eyebrow"
9"echoed"
10"solace"
11"tension"
12"weight"
13"unspoken"
14"flickered"
15"depths"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"couldn't help but laugh"
2"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1017
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Silas1
Rory26
Cardiff1
Eva23
Evan5
Ran1
Yu-Fei1
Tears1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Tears"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.222
windowScore0
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like noise"
1"quite believe Rory's explanation"
2"ed her throat, obviously eager to change the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1418
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
80.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean32.23
std13.95
cv0.433
sampleLengths
054
172
246
324
430
546
624
743
823
940
1037
1111
1224
1338
1423
1523
1643
1712
1838
1928
2023
215
2228
2329
2425
2540
2619
2734
2831
2931
3014
3135
3241
3317
3436
3527
3640
3724
3812
3941
4075
4143
4234
4335
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was living"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03680981595092025
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007668711656441718
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean15.09
std7.13
cv0.472
sampleLengths
010
118
226
327
424
521
617
723
86
917
107
1118
1212
1324
1422
1518
166
178
181
1915
2019
2114
229
2319
2421
2516
2610
2711
289
292
3019
315
3214
3324
342
3510
3611
3723
3826
3917
4010
412
4215
4323
4414
4511
463
478
4815
495
42.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2872340425531915
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences67
matches
0"She spotted Silas at the"
1"She caught his eye and"
2"He gave her a curt"
3"It had been weeks since"
4"She sank into the leather"
5"Her eyes flew open, the"
6"She was living a completely"
7"She shoved them away, forcing"
8"She waited for Rory to"
9"she said instead, handing Eva"
10"It wasn't entirely true, but"
11"She'd found a measure of"
12"They fell into an awkward"
13"She swallowed hard, shaking her"
14"She'd stayed, she'd let him"
15"They held each other, crying"
16"They stayed like that for"
17"She watched as her childhood"
18"She cried for the girl"
19"She cried for the friend"
ratio0.343
19.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences67
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was unusually"
1"Rory scanned the crowd as"
2"The din of raucous laughter"
3"She spotted Silas at the"
4"She caught his eye and"
5"He gave her a curt"
6"It had been weeks since"
7"She sank into the leather"
8"The click of heels on"
9"Her eyes flew open, the"
10"There, standing in the doorway,"
11"Eva looked every bit the"
12"Rory stood, taking tentative steps"
13"Eva chuckled, holding Rory at"
14"Rory couldn't help but laugh"
15"She was living a completely"
16"Rory deflected, gesturing to Eva's"
17"Eva's smile faltered as she"
18"The mere suggestion of alcohol"
19"She shoved them away, forcing"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The din of raucous laughter and clinking glassware enveloped her, a cacophony that had once been music to her ears but now just sounded like noise."
1"And so, with a final glance at the room that had been her refuge for so long, Rory stepped through the door and into the bar, ready to begin the next chapter of…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva replied, her tone suggesting she didn't quite believe Rory's explanation"
1"Rory whispered, her voice cracking under the weight of guilt and regret"
2"Rory called out, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Eva chuckled (chuckle)"
1"Rory lied (lie)"
2"She waited (wait)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"Eva murmured (murmur)"
6"Rory called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.778
effectiveRatio0.359
72.5825%