Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJPDPTS6S957GDHWYCWE5

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Duration:
9.1s
Cost:
$0.025120
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her eyes adjusting to the dim, aqueous light. Grit crunched under her boots as she moved deeper into the tunnel. Despite the wear of decades, the air carried a tang, a whisper of old horrors and forgotten deals. "Quinn, over here," called Detective Keith Daley, his voice echoing softly in the vast, vaulted space. Daley stood by a circle of flickering LED lanterns surrounding a body. He pulled his wool coat tighter, his face flushed. "Looks like another Veil Market mess." "Another?" Quinn's keen eyes swept over the scene, noting the blood pooling under the victim’s contorted form. "Aye, second this month," Daley confirmed. "Some bloke's been gutted. Makes no sense, though. Looks like a robbery, but his valuables are untouched." Quinn crouched beside the body, her fingers brushing the brass casing of a pocket watch in the victim’s hand. Her brow furrowed. "Where's the point of entry?" "Gets stranger. There isn’t one," Daley answered, exhaling sharply. "No bone tokens, no trace of someone entering or leaving." Quinn peered closer, spotting faint, intricate markings on the ground—a summoning circle, half-scuffed by dragging feet and the fall of heavy objects. It glowed faintly in the dying light. "Looks more like a summoning gone wrong," she muttered, tracing the sigils with her eyes. "Did anyone see anything?" "A few words, bits and bobs. Some regulars saw a guy matching the description duck into the back lane. But he was still alive then," Daley said, running a hand through his hair. Quinn stood and regarded the scene, her breath steady, eyes narrowing. "You bring anyone who can read arcane sigils?" Daley shook his head. "No one's that foolhardy, even for extra pay, you know how it is with this kind of work." "That's what we're facing, then," she replied, her tone evening out the implications. "A ritualist who doesn’t understand boundaries. Keepers stuck onto someone and otherworldly debts involved." "Always willing to learn something new, eh, detective?" Daley jested, trying to lighten the mood. "Close your mouth, open your eyes, you might see more," Quinn advised gently. "Let's get Eva down here." Daley's chuckle was soft. "You think she'll come?" Before Quinn could respond, a soft voice spoke from the shadows. "I’m already here." Eva Kowalski stepped into the light, her green eyes glinting behind round glasses, hair tumbling in wild curls as she moved. A worn leather satchel hung from her shoulder. "So many curious things in one place," Eva said, drawing forth a notebook. "This still is broadly within standard fare, Quinn?" "Hoping you can verify," Quinn showed the markings to Eva, crossing her arms and tapping her fingers on her bicep. Eva crouched, her fingers gingerly touching the sigils, eyes narrowing. "Shade runes, bound by elemental anchors. Someone was pulling energy, but it sparked and misfired. I think the victim was a novice." "Meaning perpetrator and victim might be unknown to each other," Quinn pointed out, deep in thought. Eva nodded somberly. "Possibly. However, these markings—see this curious curve? —are unique. Someone layered them. They're intricately designed to prevent accidental activation—a deliberate trap." "A false note in the summoning song," Quinn noted. "Crafty, leaving things tucked out of sight. Let's take another look." The detective scanned every inch beneath her precise steely gaze, her steps measured. The other officers stood back, watching her work. Quinn stopped by one of the broader sigils, her eyes tracing the faint outlines. "Looks like there are parts of an ancient ward here." Eva followed, her senses absorbing the symbols. "By the Seven Shades, they lade this whole site," she murmured. "This circle’s a part of something larger, secondary for diverting energy." Quinn’s keen mind raced. Hidden intentions, no one knowing they’d walked into a trap. Calculated placement to ensnare the victim. "So, we identify distinctive signatures and hooked runes, extrapolate possible regions, then we segment." "Didn’t peg you as a warding specialist," Daley threw in, eyebrow raised. "I’m not," Quinn replied curtly, "but I see enough in the field to notice patterns." She moved closer to the edge, eyeing faint, almost ethereal shadows where walls crossed—a residue. Quinn tapped the spot where energetic threads seemed to meet at oblique angles, holding structural dispersal as Eva mentioned. The ward held a signature too intentional to be rift matter. "A rigged circuit, latched energy," Eva confirmed as a verification that aligned with Quinn’s deduction cues, a deep nod of agreement. "We need to investigate those who'd profit from it, find a list of those tracked into the Veil Market recently," Quinn started. "A reliable Source’s who'll have dealt tokens." "Then it's to Barnes," Daley suggested, "respected subterranean informer." "It's clandestine, making everyone involved hush," Quinn turned to Eva. "Stand witness to reclaim reasonable clearance clearance Eva for browsing artifacts from the restricted archives." Eva looked reluctantly sober, but solid. "I'll see what I can dig up that crosses residue transitioning sigils," she voiced assuredly. Quinn's eyes burned with trace details piecing the narrative. Steps materialized in her mind's deliberate analysis. "Daley, double-check records passing unnoticed entries," she directed. "Practical request," Daley recognized the gravitas of her instruction. Eva jotted down mental maps and layered histories. "Every unique marking needs transmitting," she added analytically. "A field of calculated deviation," Quinn stated, nodding up toward her colleagues. "Persevere for unearthing groundbreaking reality," the pursuit leading her through an unforgiving environment; Harlow mettle transcended the ordinary line-duty outsider. Solutions lay in crossing barriers to reveal elusive truths—Artiste fragments upheld by specific perspectives scouting peculiar energies drawing someone’s grand design. Subjugated by past tragedies, refusing unsettlement, the characters propelled further on labyrinthine investigations, Harlow exposed slowly the enigmatic shadow embeddings stripping revelations.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Quinn advised gently [gently]"
1"Quinn replied curtly [curtly]"
2"she voiced assuredly [assuredly]"
3"she added analytically [analytically]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
73.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount961
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
2"gently"
3"reluctantly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount961
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count2
12
word"eyebrow"
count1
13
word"aligned"
count1
14
word"clandestine"
count1
15
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"echoing"
2"furrowed"
3"intricate"
4"tracing"
5"otherworldly"
6"glinting"
7"standard"
8"scanned"
9"measured"
10"raced"
11"calculated"
12"eyebrow"
13"aligned"
14"clandestine"
15"enigmatic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords953
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount543
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow3
Quinn19
Tube1
Camden1
Detective2
Keith1
Daley11
Kowalski1
Eva11
Solutions1
Artiste1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Detective"
3"Keith"
4"Daley"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
7"Solutions"
8"Artiste"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
95.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.049
wordCount953
matches
0"not,\" Quinn replied curtly, \"but I see enough in the field to notice patterns"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
63.23% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean22.69
std8.42
cv0.371
sampleLengths
049
116
227
317
423
527
619
729
819
933
1019
1122
1227
1315
1418
158
1614
1729
1821
1920
2032
2116
2224
2320
2421
2524
2629
2734
2812
2915
3045
3121
3229
339
3425
3521
3624
379
3816
3932
4021
4122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences79
ratio0.051
matches
0"Quinn peered closer, spotting faint, intricate markings on the ground—a summoning circle, half-scuffed by dragging feet and the fall of heavy objects."
1"She moved closer to the edge, eyeing faint, almost ethereal shadows where walls crossed—a residue."
2"\"Persevere for unearthing groundbreaking reality,\" the pursuit leading her through an unforgiving environment; Harlow mettle transcended the ordinary line-duty outsider."
3"Solutions lay in crossing barriers to reveal elusive truths—Artiste fragments upheld by specific perspectives scouting peculiar energies drawing someone’s grand design."
98.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount548
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.029197080291970802
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.021897810218978103
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean12.06
std5.91
cv0.49
sampleLengths
019
112
218
316
412
59
66
717
86
917
1019
113
125
139
1410
1522
167
1715
184
1933
2011
218
224
2318
2413
2514
2615
2713
285
294
304
3111
323
3321
348
3513
368
3720
3810
3922
4016
413
4221
439
4411
4513
468
4714
4810
497
97.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5949367088607594
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences53
matches
0"He pulled his wool coat"
1"Her brow furrowed."
2"It glowed faintly in the"
3"she muttered, tracing the sigils"
4"she replied, her tone evening"
5"She moved closer to the"
6"she voiced assuredly"
7"she added analytically"
ratio0.151
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked into"
1"Grit crunched under her boots"
2"Daley stood by a circle"
3"He pulled his wool coat"
4"Quinn's keen eyes swept over"
5"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
6"Her brow furrowed."
7"Daley answered, exhaling sharply"
8"Quinn peered closer, spotting faint,"
9"It glowed faintly in the"
10"she muttered, tracing the sigils"
11"Daley said, running a hand"
12"Quinn stood and regarded the"
13"Daley shook his head."
14"she replied, her tone evening"
15"Daley jested, trying to lighten"
16"Quinn advised gently"
17"Daley's chuckle was soft."
18"Eva Kowalski stepped into the"
19"A worn leather satchel hung"
ratio0.887
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Before Quinn could respond, a"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Quinn crouched beside the body, her fingers brushing the brass casing of a pocket watch in the victim’s hand."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"called Detective Keith Daley, his voice echoing softly in the vast, vaulted space"
1"Daley jested, trying to lighten the mood"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Daley confirmed (confirm)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Quinn advised gently (advise)"
3"Quinn noted (note)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"Eva confirmed (confirm)"
6"Daley suggested (suggest)"
7"she voiced assuredly (voice)"
8"she added analytically (add)"
9"Quinn stated (state)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.435
75.7667%