| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" | | 1 | "Isolde’s form flickered again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 755 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 755 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "lurch" | | 15 | "glinting" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.06% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 66 | | totalWords | 746 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Wear it. You’ll know when." | | 1 | "Just in case." | | 2 | "Find the grove. Ask for Isolde." | | 3 | "“Aurora.”" | | 4 | "inside" | | 5 | "“You’ve come so far.”" | | 6 | "wrong" | | 7 | "“Isolde,”" | | 8 | "“And you’ve brought me such a pretty gift.”" | | 9 | "“Everything is for me, little moth. Even you.”" | | 10 | "“Do you know what you’re wearing, Aurora? Do you know what it *does" | | 11 | "“Oh, my sweet, naive thing.”" | | 12 | "“It’s not a warning. It’s a *key" | | 13 | "“Welcome home.”" | | 14 | "black" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 678 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.836 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a sound, more like the memory of one" | | 1 | "as if answering a question Rory hadn’t asked" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 746 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 25.72 | | std | 24.57 | | cv | 0.955 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the thing—it had arrived in a padded envelope three days ago, no note, no return address, just the crimson gem nestled in black velvet." | | 1 | "The same one, night after night: a grove of ancient oaks, their branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach clench, and a voice—soft, feminine, amused—whispering her name." | | 2 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting flowers, with an undercurrent of something metallic." | | 3 | "Another sound—this one wet, like something dragging itself through the undergrowth." | | 4 | "Something moved within it—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, its limbs bending at angles that made her stomach lurch." | | 5 | "One moment, she was tall and regal, her hair a cascade of silver; the next, she was small, almost childlike, her eyes too large, too dark." | | 6 | "Isolde—or whatever she was—laughed, a sound like wind chimes and breaking glass." | | 7 | "The last thing Rory saw before the darkness swallowed her was the pendant’s glow—no longer crimson, but a sickly, pulsating *black*." |
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| 89.15% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 687 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.05240174672489083 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004366812227074236 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 9.44 | | std | 6.23 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 54.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.379746835443038 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just in case.* The pendant’s" | | 1 | "Just the wind, probably." | | 2 | "Then, the voice." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 1 | "You’ll know when.* She’d laughed" | | 2 | "She’d done her research." | | 3 | "She froze, fingers tightening around" | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 6 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 7 | "She hissed, jerking back." | | 8 | "She clapped her hands over" | | 9 | "Her pulse roared in her" | | 10 | "She stumbled back, torchlight flickering" | | 11 | "Her voice cracked" | | 12 | "She smiled, and Rory’s breath" | | 13 | "She tried to step back," | | 14 | "She tried to scream, but" |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 55.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 2 | "The note inside had been" | | 3 | "You’ll know when.* She’d laughed" | | 4 | "The same one, night after" | | 5 | "The standing stones of the" | | 6 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "She’d done her research." | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "She froze, fingers tightening around" | | 11 | "The beam wavered, slicing through" | | 12 | "Another sound—this one wet, like" | | 13 | "Her breath hitched." | | 14 | "The torchlight caught a flash" | | 15 | "A shadow, maybe." | | 16 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 17 | "Rory exhaled through her nose" | | 18 | "The grove’s boundary was just" | | 19 | "She’d come here for answers," |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 73.53% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The same one, night after night: a grove of ancient oaks, their branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach clench, and a voice—soft, feminine, amused—w…" | | 1 | "Something moved within it—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, its limbs bending at angles that made her stomach lurch." | | 2 | "The standing stones groaned, the symbols on their surfaces flaring to life, pulsing in time with the pendant." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "the woman said, as if answering a question Rory hadn’t asked" | | 1 | "Isolde’s form flickered again, her edges blurring" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |