Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJQP87A4JPB1HECDP21RN

Run Details

Duration:
23.7s
Cost:
$0.008100

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow barely visible in the dim light of dusk. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, the weight of the takeout containers inside shifting with her movement. The standing stones of the Fae Grove loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that seemed to watch her. She’d been here before—once, years ago, when Eva had dragged her through on a dare. But that had been daylight. This was different. The air smelled too sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot. The wildflowers that usually carpeted the grove were wilted at the edges, their petals curled inward as if hiding something. Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant, its warmth pulsing faintly against her skin. A Hel portal was near. That’s why she’d come. That’s why she’d lied to Silas about needing to make a late delivery, why she’d taken the long route through Richmond Park instead of sticking to the main roads. She stepped past the stones. The moment she crossed the threshold, the temperature dropped. Her breath misted in front of her, though the night wasn’t cold. The grove stretched out before her, the trees too still, their branches tangled like skeletal fingers. The usual hum of insects was gone. No rustling of leaves, no distant call of night birds. Just silence. Then, a whisper. Rory froze. The sound had been so faint she almost convinced herself she’d imagined it. But then it came again—a murmur, just beyond the edge of hearing. She turned slowly, scanning the shadows between the trees. Nothing moved. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud in the stillness. The pendant flared against her skin, its glow brightening. She exhaled sharply, her pulse quickening. The portal was close. She just had to find it. A twig snapped. Rory spun, her heart hammering. The sound had come from behind her, near the standing stones. She squinted into the darkness, but the trees swallowed the light, leaving only shifting shadows. She took a step back, then another, her boots crunching over dead leaves. Something brushed against her ankle. She jerked away, stumbling. Her hand flew to her mouth to stifle a gasp. Nothing was there. Just the damp earth, the gnarled roots of the trees. She swallowed hard, forcing herself to breathe. The pendant’s glow flickered, dimming slightly. “Get it together,” she muttered. “It’s just the grove. It’s always like this.” But it wasn’t. The grove had never been like this. Another whisper, closer this time. A voice, but not a word. Just a sound, like something exhaling against the back of her neck. Rory whirled, her breath coming fast. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches creaking as if straining to reach her. She broke into a run. The ground sloped beneath her feet, the trees blurring together as she pushed forward. The pendant burned hot against her skin, its glow pulsing in time with her racing heart. The portal had to be here. It had to be. A shape moved in the corner of her vision. Rory skidded to a halt, her boots kicking up dirt. She turned slowly, her breath shallow. There, between the trees—a figure. Tall, too tall, its limbs too long, its silhouette shifting like smoke. It didn’t move toward her. It just stood there, watching. She backed away, her pulse roaring in her ears. The figure tilted its head, the movement too smooth, too fluid. Then it stepped forward, its footfalls silent. Rory turned and ran. The trees pressed in around her, their branches clawing at her arms, her face. The pendant’s glow flared bright, casting long, wavering shadows. She could hear it now—the thing behind her. Not footsteps. Something wetter, like something dragging itself through the undergrowth. She burst into a clearing. The portal was there, a jagged tear in the air, its edges shimmering like heat haze. The Heartstone’s glow burned so bright it hurt her eyes. She lunged for it, her fingers stretching toward the rippling light. Something grabbed her wrist. Rory screamed, twisting away. The grip was cold, too cold, its fingers digging into her skin. She wrenched free, stumbling back, her breath ragged. The figure stood at the edge of the clearing, its form flickering between solid and smoke. Its face—if it even had one—was a blur of shadows. The portal pulsed, its light flickering like a dying bulb. Rory didn’t hesitate. She threw herself forward, her body passing through the tear in the air. The last thing she saw was the figure’s hand reaching for her, its fingers stretching impossibly long. Then the grove was gone.
total_cost0.0081

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
74.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount776
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount776
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
10
word"wavering"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"whisper"
5"scanning"
6"pulse"
7"flickered"
8"racing"
9"roaring"
10"wavering"
11"footsteps"
12"pulsed"
13"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords770
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount758
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory9
Fae1
Grove1
Eva1
Hel1
Silas1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.906
windowScore1
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"shapes that seemed to watch her"
1"as if hiding something"
2"as if straining to reach her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount770
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean27.5
std22.94
cv0.834
sampleLengths
080
181
25
356
43
538
69
725
83
944
105
1140
1213
1310
1444
155
1640
179
1843
1927
204
2142
225
2337
244
2550
2643
275
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"were wilted"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences87
ratio0.057
matches
0"She’d been here before—once, years ago, when Eva had dragged her through on a dare."
1"But then it came again—a murmur, just beyond the edge of hearing."
2"There, between the trees—a figure."
3"She could hear it now—the thing behind her."
4"Its face—if it even had one—was a blur of shadows."
77.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount764
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.058900523560209424
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011780104712041885
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean8.85
std5.08
cv0.573
sampleLengths
019
118
220
315
45
53
611
720
812
95
104
1129
125
139
1412
1516
167
1710
182
193
202
2113
2212
239
242
259
269
276
284
296
303
315
3211
3315
3413
355
364
3710
383
3910
407
416
425
438
443
457
465
476
4812
496
39.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2413793103448276
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then, a whisper."
1"Just the damp earth, the"
2"Just a sound, like something"
3"Then it stepped forward, its"
4"Then the grove was gone."
ratio0.062
96.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences81
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She’d been here before—once, years"
2"She stepped past the stones."
3"Her breath misted in front"
4"She turned slowly, scanning the"
5"Her voice sounded too loud"
6"She exhaled sharply, her pulse"
7"She just had to find"
8"She squinted into the darkness,"
9"She took a step back,"
10"She jerked away, stumbling."
11"Her hand flew to her"
12"She swallowed hard, forcing herself"
13"She broke into a run."
14"It had to be."
15"She turned slowly, her breath"
16"It didn’t move toward her."
17"It just stood there, watching."
18"She backed away, her pulse"
19"She could hear it now—the"
ratio0.309
21.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences81
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones of the"
3"She’d been here before—once, years"
4"This was different."
5"The air smelled too sweet,"
6"The wildflowers that usually carpeted"
7"Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant,"
8"A Hel portal was near."
9"That’s why she’d come."
10"That’s why she’d lied to"
11"She stepped past the stones."
12"The moment she crossed the"
13"Her breath misted in front"
14"The grove stretched out before"
15"The usual hum of insects"
16"The sound had been so"
17"She turned slowly, scanning the"
18"Her voice sounded too loud"
19"The pendant flared against her"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The trees seemed to lean in, their branches creaking as if straining to reach her."
1"The pendant burned hot against her skin, its glow pulsing in time with her racing heart."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
73.6448%