| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 74.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 776 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 776 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "roaring" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 770 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 758 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.906 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "shapes that seemed to watch her" | | 1 | "as if hiding something" | | 2 | "as if straining to reach her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 770 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 27.5 | | std | 22.94 | | cv | 0.834 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 5 |
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| 93.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "were wilted" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been here before—once, years ago, when Eva had dragged her through on a dare." | | 1 | "But then it came again—a murmur, just beyond the edge of hearing." | | 2 | "There, between the trees—a figure." | | 3 | "She could hear it now—the thing behind her." | | 4 | "Its face—if it even had one—was a blur of shadows." |
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| 77.46% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 764 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.058900523560209424 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011780104712041885 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 8.85 | | std | 5.08 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 39.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.2413793103448276 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a whisper." | | 1 | "Just the damp earth, the" | | 2 | "Just a sound, like something" | | 3 | "Then it stepped forward, its" | | 4 | "Then the grove was gone." |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 96.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She’d been here before—once, years" | | 2 | "She stepped past the stones." | | 3 | "Her breath misted in front" | | 4 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 6 | "She exhaled sharply, her pulse" | | 7 | "She just had to find" | | 8 | "She squinted into the darkness," | | 9 | "She took a step back," | | 10 | "She jerked away, stumbling." | | 11 | "Her hand flew to her" | | 12 | "She swallowed hard, forcing herself" | | 13 | "She broke into a run." | | 14 | "It had to be." | | 15 | "She turned slowly, her breath" | | 16 | "It didn’t move toward her." | | 17 | "It just stood there, watching." | | 18 | "She backed away, her pulse" | | 19 | "She could hear it now—the" |
| | ratio | 0.309 | |
| 21.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones of the" | | 3 | "She’d been here before—once, years" | | 4 | "This was different." | | 5 | "The air smelled too sweet," | | 6 | "The wildflowers that usually carpeted" | | 7 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant," | | 8 | "A Hel portal was near." | | 9 | "That’s why she’d come." | | 10 | "That’s why she’d lied to" | | 11 | "She stepped past the stones." | | 12 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 13 | "Her breath misted in front" | | 14 | "The grove stretched out before" | | 15 | "The usual hum of insects" | | 16 | "The sound had been so" | | 17 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 19 | "The pendant flared against her" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees seemed to lean in, their branches creaking as if straining to reach her." | | 1 | "The pendant burned hot against her skin, its glow pulsing in time with her racing heart." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |