| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "her voice commanded again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 84.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 971 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 971 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "imposing" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "spectral" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "calculated" | | 13 | "footfall" | | 14 | "measured" | | 15 | "chill" | | 16 | "loomed" | | 17 | "resonance" | | 18 | "anticipation" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "etched" | | 21 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "d with unease" | | 1 | "t with anticipation" |
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| 79.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 976 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Carry on, she urged herself, dragging in a lungful of cold, damp air." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Keeping | 1 | | Silence | 2 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Keeping" | | 5 | "Silence" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed thicker more oppressive" | | 1 | "as if retaining the heat of a sun that never touched it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 976 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.36% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 48.8 | | std | 19.34 | | cv | 0.396 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was closing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had mentioned it in passing — a place of whispered secrets and hidden truths." | | 1 | "She checked her wrist; sure enough, the scar there formed a familiar crescent caught in the pale moon's light." | | 2 | "Rory knew she was alone — she'd seen to that." | | 3 | "Nothing responded but the distant hoot of an owl — or was it an owl?" | | 4 | "— the very sound of it curling under her skin like a threat." | | 5 | "Another sound, closer this time — a breath, soft but undeniably human." | | 6 | "“Show yourself,” her voice commanded again, stronger now, fueled by the knowledge that she was right — she was not alone." | | 7 | "And Rory knew — deep in her bones — that whatever lay at the heart of this darkness would not hide for long." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 962 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.034303534303534305 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010395010395010396 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 14.35 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.436 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 78.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.47058823529411764 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the air here seemed" | | 1 | "Only the wind." | | 2 | "Only silence hummed back, the" | | 3 | "Somewhere to her left, a" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 82.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here to the" | | 1 | "Her footsteps whispered over the" | | 2 | "She noted the oak standing" | | 3 | "She checked her wrist; sure" | | 4 | "Her breath clouded in front" | | 5 | "It was deliberate." | | 6 | "She stiffened, turning her head" | | 7 | "She stifled the temptation to" | | 8 | "Her eyes, by now adjusted" | | 9 | "She peered into the shadows," | | 10 | "she whispered between clenched teeth," | | 11 | "She took a calculated step" | | 12 | "Her sharp blue eyes darted" | | 13 | "she whispered, her dry laugh" | | 14 | "She flinched, surprised by the" | | 15 | "It was a warning, she" | | 16 | "Her shoulders tensed, every muscle" | | 17 | "Its glow cut through the" | | 18 | "Her feet moved instinctively, the" | | 19 | "Her gaze snapped towards it," |
| | ratio | 0.343 | |
| 86.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung high, painting" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter tightened her grip" | | 2 | "She'd come here to the" | | 3 | "Eva had mentioned it in" | | 4 | "Her footsteps whispered over the" | | 5 | "She noted the oak standing" | | 6 | "The whisper of the wind" | | 7 | "She checked her wrist; sure" | | 8 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 9 | "Her breath clouded in front" | | 10 | "Rory knew she was alone" | | 11 | "It was deliberate." | | 12 | "A twig snapped sharply to" | | 13 | "She stiffened, turning her head" | | 14 | "A spectral laughter floated on" | | 15 | "Aurora paused, angling her head," | | 16 | "She stifled the temptation to" | | 17 | "Her eyes, by now adjusted" | | 18 | "A flicker of movement low" | | 19 | "Someone was here." |
| | ratio | 0.746 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the night refused to" | | 1 | "As if this had been" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that should have lent a comforting, natural smell to the air were oddly scentless, their vibrant colors pallid in the darkness." | | 1 | "Her breath clouded in front of her, merging with the mist that curled around her legs like the tendrils of some half-formed thought." | | 2 | "Aurora paused, angling her head, listening harder, the sound melting into the rustle of leaves overhead." | | 3 | "The mist seemed to thicken, snake-like, as if aware that she was closing in on the grove's secrets." | | 4 | "Its glow cut through the shadows, illuminating paths that hadn’t existed an eye-blink before." | | 5 | "Rory traced a finger over one, the stone surprisingly warm, as if retaining the heat of a sun that never touched it." | | 6 | "Aurora Carter stood her ground, the Heartstone’s glow reflecting in her sharp blue gaze, heart thundering as the wrongness of the night settled heavy around her…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, though her voice faltered before dissipating into the night" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |