Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRK2BD0EGZC62RYN6G8TNB

Run Details

Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.014542
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moon hung high, painting Richmond Park with shades of silver and shadow. Aurora Carter tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant dangling from her neck, its warmth a whisper against her skin. She'd come here to the Fae Grove for answers, driven by a sense both nagging and insistent. Eva had mentioned it in passing — a place of whispered secrets and hidden truths. But standing there now, beneath the skeletal sprawl of ancient oaks, Aurora couldn’t shake the feeling something was watching. Her footsteps whispered over the carpet of fallen leaves, each one a crisp reminder of her intrusion. She noted the oak standing stones that marked the grove's boundary, gnarled and imposing, as if they've borne witness to centuries of secrets. The whisper of the wind through them sounded almost like voices speaking in soft, lilting tones. She checked her wrist; sure enough, the scar there formed a familiar crescent caught in the pale moon's light. Touching it grounded her, even as the night pressed in. The wildflowers that should have lent a comforting, natural smell to the air were oddly scentless, their vibrant colors pallid in the darkness. Even the air here seemed thicker, more oppressive. Her breath clouded in front of her, merging with the mist that curled around her legs like the tendrils of some half-formed thought. Rory knew she was alone — she'd seen to that. It was deliberate. Yet, the night refused to let her feel it. A twig snapped sharply to her right, rattling her thoughts. She stiffened, turning her head sharply, but saw only shadows swaying in the breeze. Carry on, she urged herself, dragging in a lungful of cold, damp air. Only the wind. Yet her skin prickled with unease. A spectral laughter floated on the air, so faint it could have been another trick of the wind. Aurora paused, angling her head, listening harder, the sound melting into the rustle of leaves overhead. She stifled the temptation to call out. Only silence hummed back, the grove holding its secrets close. Closer now to the heart of the grove, Aurora's heartbeat matched the gentle pulse of the pendant around her neck. Her eyes, by now adjusted to the dim light, picked out something unusual. A flicker of movement low to the ground, gone too quick to grasp but unmistakable. Someone was here. She peered into the shadows, searching for confirmation. “Show yourself,” she whispered between clenched teeth, though her voice faltered before dissipating into the night. Nothing responded but the distant hoot of an owl — or was it an owl? — the very sound of it curling under her skin like a threat. She took a calculated step forward, each footfall a measured invitation for whatever lurked to reveal itself. The mist seemed to thicken, snake-like, as if aware that she was closing in on the grove's secrets. Somewhere to her left, a shuffle, the sound of leaves stirred by an unseen foot. Her sharp blue eyes darted toward the sound, her imagination weaving shapes from darkened shadows. “You’re getting jumpy,” she whispered, her dry laugh swallowed by the night. Keeping on, she forced herself deeper into the grove, drawn by the promise of something she didn't yet understand, her hands curled into fists to ward off the chill seeping into her bones. The standing stones loomed closer, marking a center, a point of resonance she couldn’t deny. Without warning, the pendant burned hot against her chest, a sharp, insistent pulse. She flinched, surprised by the flash of energy. It was a warning, she realized, just a fraction too late. Something shifted behind her, the whisper of cloth against bark unmistakable. “Who’s there?” Rory’s voice, firm now, cut through the air with a new strength. Silence answered once more, the grove holding its breath. Her shoulders tensed, every muscle taut with anticipation. Around her, the shapes in the darkness seemed to close in, each step forward matched by the sound of something retreating just beyond sight. Rory turned in a slow circle, her eyes sweeping the darkness, her every instinct screaming to leave. But the pendant pulsed again, demanding attention. Its glow cut through the shadows, illuminating paths that hadn’t existed an eye-blink before. Her feet moved instinctively, the grove's secrets guiding her deeper into its heart. The pulse of the Heartstone led her to the tallest of the standing stones, its surface etched with sigils long forgotten by time. Rory traced a finger over one, the stone surprisingly warm, as if retaining the heat of a sun that never touched it. Another sound, closer this time — a breath, soft but undeniably human. Her gaze snapped towards it, every sense alight. A silhouette loomed at the edge of her vision, indistinct but undeniably present. Her heart beat a rhythm of warning. “Show yourself,” her voice commanded again, stronger now, fueled by the knowledge that she was right — she was not alone. The figure stood still for a moment longer, just outside the reach of shadow, before merging into the darkness. As if this had been a test, one she didn’t understand but had passed nonetheless. Silence and stillness returned to the grove, pressing down around her once more. Aurora Carter stood her ground, the Heartstone’s glow reflecting in her sharp blue gaze, heart thundering as the wrongness of the night settled heavy around her like a shroud. She could turn back, abandon this chase and return to the safety of the night’s embrace. Yet something in the air, heavy with unseen consequence and promise, compelled her to remain, rooted in place as the clock of the grove ticked onward. Whatever had started this night, it wasn’t over. Not yet. And Rory knew — deep in her bones — that whatever lay at the heart of this darkness would not hide for long.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"her voice commanded again [again]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
84.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount971
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount971
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"imposing"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"spectral"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"pulse"
count3
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"calculated"
count1
13
word"footfall"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"loomed"
count2
17
word"resonance"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
19
word"pulsed"
count1
20
word"etched"
count1
21
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"whisper"
2"footsteps"
3"reminder"
4"imposing"
5"familiar"
6"comforting"
7"oppressive"
8"spectral"
9"silence"
10"pulse"
11"flicker"
12"calculated"
13"footfall"
14"measured"
15"chill"
16"loomed"
17"resonance"
18"anticipation"
19"pulsed"
20"etched"
21"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences68
matches
0"d with unease"
1"t with anticipation"
79.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords976
ratio0
matches(empty)
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Carry on, she urged herself, dragging in a lungful of cold, damp air."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount967
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter2
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora5
Keeping1
Silence2
Rory5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Aurora"
4"Keeping"
5"Silence"
6"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed thicker more oppressive"
1"as if retaining the heat of a sun that never touched it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount976
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
70.36% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean48.8
std19.34
cv0.396
sampleLengths
084
185
254
368
451
559
661
748
812
948
1043
1114
1241
1351
1445
1540
1621
1747
1871
1933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was watching"
1"was closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences68
ratio0.118
matches
0"Eva had mentioned it in passing — a place of whispered secrets and hidden truths."
1"She checked her wrist; sure enough, the scar there formed a familiar crescent caught in the pale moon's light."
2"Rory knew she was alone — she'd seen to that."
3"Nothing responded but the distant hoot of an owl — or was it an owl?"
4"— the very sound of it curling under her skin like a threat."
5"Another sound, closer this time — a breath, soft but undeniably human."
6"“Show yourself,” her voice commanded again, stronger now, fueled by the knowledge that she was right — she was not alone."
7"And Rory knew — deep in her bones — that whatever lay at the heart of this darkness would not hide for long."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount962
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.034303534303534305
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010395010395010396
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean14.35
std6.25
cv0.436
sampleLengths
013
120
217
315
419
517
623
716
819
910
1023
118
1223
1310
143
159
1610
1714
1813
193
206
2118
2216
237
2410
2520
2613
2715
283
298
3016
3115
3213
3317
3418
3515
3615
3712
3833
3915
4013
418
4211
4311
4414
459
468
4724
4817
497
78.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences67
matches
0"Even the air here seemed"
1"Only the wind."
2"Only silence hummed back, the"
3"Somewhere to her left, a"
ratio0.06
82.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences67
matches
0"She'd come here to the"
1"Her footsteps whispered over the"
2"She noted the oak standing"
3"She checked her wrist; sure"
4"Her breath clouded in front"
5"It was deliberate."
6"She stiffened, turning her head"
7"She stifled the temptation to"
8"Her eyes, by now adjusted"
9"She peered into the shadows,"
10"she whispered between clenched teeth,"
11"She took a calculated step"
12"Her sharp blue eyes darted"
13"she whispered, her dry laugh"
14"She flinched, surprised by the"
15"It was a warning, she"
16"Her shoulders tensed, every muscle"
17"Its glow cut through the"
18"Her feet moved instinctively, the"
19"Her gaze snapped towards it,"
ratio0.343
86.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences67
matches
0"The moon hung high, painting"
1"Aurora Carter tightened her grip"
2"She'd come here to the"
3"Eva had mentioned it in"
4"Her footsteps whispered over the"
5"She noted the oak standing"
6"The whisper of the wind"
7"She checked her wrist; sure"
8"The wildflowers that should have"
9"Her breath clouded in front"
10"Rory knew she was alone"
11"It was deliberate."
12"A twig snapped sharply to"
13"She stiffened, turning her head"
14"A spectral laughter floated on"
15"Aurora paused, angling her head,"
16"She stifled the temptation to"
17"Her eyes, by now adjusted"
18"A flicker of movement low"
19"Someone was here."
ratio0.746
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Yet, the night refused to"
1"As if this had been"
ratio0.03
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The wildflowers that should have lent a comforting, natural smell to the air were oddly scentless, their vibrant colors pallid in the darkness."
1"Her breath clouded in front of her, merging with the mist that curled around her legs like the tendrils of some half-formed thought."
2"Aurora paused, angling her head, listening harder, the sound melting into the rustle of leaves overhead."
3"The mist seemed to thicken, snake-like, as if aware that she was closing in on the grove's secrets."
4"Its glow cut through the shadows, illuminating paths that hadn’t existed an eye-blink before."
5"Rory traced a finger over one, the stone surprisingly warm, as if retaining the heat of a sun that never touched it."
6"Aurora Carter stood her ground, the Heartstone’s glow reflecting in her sharp blue gaze, heart thundering as the wrongness of the night settled heavy around her…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, though her voice faltered before dissipating into the night"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
75.5360%