| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 31 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She scoffed again [again]" | | 1 | "He stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.477 | | leniency | 0.954 | | rawRatio | 0.065 | | effectiveRatio | 0.062 | |
| 78.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1148 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1148 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "racing" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "unspoken" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "intensity" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "wavering" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "desire" | | 19 | "silence" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "down her spine" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of his words" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" | | 3 | "a spark of hope" |
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| 93.55% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "A flicker of relief" | | 1 | "a spark of hope" |
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| 88.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1145 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 705 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Lucien | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.23% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 27.26 | | std | 10.79 | | cv | 0.396 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 59 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "“Surprise,” he said, a smirk playing on his lips, but his eyes betrayed a flicker of something deeper—an emotion she couldn’t quite place." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 708 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.038135593220338986 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011299435028248588 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.47 | | std | 6.26 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 79.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5058823529411764 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, a smirk playing" | | 1 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 2 | "She hadn’t expected to see" | | 3 | "He gestured with his cane," | | 4 | "She could slam the door" | | 5 | "he remarked, his voice smooth," | | 6 | "she replied, crossing her arms" | | 7 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 8 | "She scoffed, the word bitter" | | 9 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 10 | "She narrowed her eyes, unwilling" | | 11 | "His voice dropped, the playful" | | 12 | "He stepped closer, the air" | | 13 | "She laughed, a harsh sound" | | 14 | "His voice softened, the edge" | | 15 | "She took a step back," | | 16 | "He ran a hand through" | | 17 | "She challenged, her voice rising" | | 18 | "His eyes locked onto hers," | | 19 | "She felt her resolve wavering," |
| | ratio | 0.66 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, and" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau, impeccably dressed in" | | 2 | "The air thickened with unspoken" | | 3 | "he said, a smirk playing" | | 4 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 5 | "She hadn’t expected to see" | | 6 | "The memories flooded back, sharp" | | 7 | "He gestured with his cane," | | 8 | "Rory hesitated, her mind racing." | | 9 | "She could slam the door" | | 10 | "The door creaked wider, and" | | 11 | "The cramped one-bedroom flat was" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, darted" | | 13 | "he remarked, his voice smooth," | | 14 | "she replied, crossing her arms" | | 15 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 16 | "She scoffed, the word bitter" | | 17 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 18 | "She narrowed her eyes, unwilling" | | 19 | "His voice dropped, the playful" |
| | ratio | 0.981 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 17 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, darted past Lucien’s feet, eyeing him with suspicion before disappearing into the shadows." | | 1 | "She pulled away, her heart racing, torn between the desire to push him away and the longing to pull him closer." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 31 | | uselessAdditionCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret" | | 1 | "He gestured, the ivory handle gleaming ominously" | | 2 | "She narrowed, unwilling to let him off the hook so easily" | | 3 | "He stepped, the air thickening with the heat of their proximity" | | 4 | "His voice softened, the edge of frustration giving way to something more vulnerable" | | 5 | "She took, her heart pounding in her chest" | | 6 | "She challenged, her voice rising" | | 7 | "His eyes locked, a fierce intensity igniting the space between them" | | 8 | "she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 9 | "He stepped back, his expression earnest" | | 10 | "His gaze bore, a mixture of vulnerability and desperation" | | 11 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 12 | "She scoffed, her heart pounding" |
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| 88.46% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 2 | "She challenged (challenge)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.108 | | leniency | 0.215 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.123 | |