Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRK58XS33SA88Q681206Y2

Run Details

Duration:
21.5s
Cost:
$0.018580
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sound of a doorbell pierced the quiet confines of Eva's flat on Brick Lane, its intrusion making Aurora startle, nearly upsetting a precarious tower of books. Her heart, already thrumming from an afternoon of chasing down delivery quotas, skipped a beat. Uninvited visits were as rare as an empty table at the curry house downstairs during dinner hours. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, stirred from a slumber on the windowsill, flicking his tail in mild curiosity before settling back into indifference. Aurora's hand hesitated on the knob, fingers tracing the cold metal as a whisper of dread unfurled. Whoever stood on the other side was not meant for a casual meeting over late-night tea. She drew a breath, channelling a calm she didn't feel, and flung the door open. Lucien Moreau stood framed by the narrow hallway, an insouciant figure against the dim staircase lights. His tailored charcoal suit embedded with shadows like secrets. The ivory-handled cane—a deceptive thing hiding a blade—leaned elegantly against his leg. And those eyes, one amber, one black, met hers, sparking with a blend of old understanding and new enigma. "I didn't expect you." Her voice managed steadiness, although they both knew why he stood there drenched in unresolved chapters. He inclined his head, a subtle concession to ceremonial gestures. "Expectations often lead to predictable outcomes, don't you think, Aurora?" His accented English was gentle, an alluring cadence that masked sharp intent. "London's a big city," she countered, stepping aside to let him in. "Yet here you are." He moved past her, his presence adding an almost tactile tension to the cramped flat. The ornate wallpaper, a cascade of twirling vines and floral tendrils, seemed to lean in, curious about the crescendo of memories and tensions resurfacing. "It is Rosemary." Lucien commented, leaning on his cane, feet ensconced in polished leather shoes. "Quaint." "Eva likes it," Aurora answered, closing the door. "What brings you to a place like this?" His presence here seemed misplaced, like a Picasso in a second-hand shop. "The city has layers, Aurora, as do its residents." His gaze drifted pointedly to the mess of books and notes trailing across every surface. "Your hideout has a certain charm, albeit buried beneath your chaos." "It's not mine," she corrected, pulling a stray book upright on the shelf. "And what brings you unannounced?" "I require your help." Her laugh was a dry, quick thing. "You know how to ask for help?" "Ah, still sharp-tongued. Some traits do endure." He approached the makeshift desk crammed under a swathe of newspaper clippings. "The matter is com—” His sentence shattered midsyllable, attention snared by a scroll half-obscured under a loose sheet of paper. Aurora's eyes followed, recognition flashing. She lunged to reclaim it, but Lucien's nimble fingers were swifter. "A celestial mapping?" His voice glossed the question, turning it to a teasing lilt as he unfurled the parchment just enough to glimpse complex star alignments. "Eva's research," she interjected, wresting the scroll back, her pulse quickening. Too close—close to truths he had no right to exploit. Unruffled, Lucien relinquished it with a faint, predatory smile. "Then onto mine: a certain artefact vanished, and whispers of its whereabouts converge here. Pity it's tied to rather unsavoury consequences for both our worlds." "Of course, it's not about tea and biscuits with you," she retorted, trying to cloak wary annoyance with bravado. "And you think it’s here?" "Indeed, though you seem surprised. As if you hadn't heard the same enticing rumours." Her guard slipped for a fraction—a glance, glistening with mutual comprehension. He caught it, as he always did, visible amusement grazing his lips. The unspoken language between them danced in the air, tugging at threads of shared history. "No. I haven't,” she responded carefully, tersely shutting the door on that part of their long, complicated past. "But if I had?" “Then we would be partners again,” he replied, a soft promise wrapped in silk. "And I remember our last collaboration had...productive results." "Skipping details, as usual." Her crossed arms echoed a betrayed stance, a relic from a chapter they'd never closed. Lucien moved with serpentine grace, shortening the space between them until she caught his subtle aftershave; something woody, spiked with a spicy undernote. "Aurora," he murmured, half-charmed half-dangerous, "this isn't simply about me trusting your instincts, impressive though they are. It's about me trusting you—an altogether different risk." His confession elicited a sharp intake of breath. A tantalizing thread of their past wafted into the present: late-night schemes in whisper-lit rooms, each plotting around the other, yet always somehow aligned. "Given little choice, are we?" Aurora said, a defiant smirk clashing with the trepidation in her eyes. He nodded, the weight of necessity shared and unspoken. "And fate, it seems, has bound our stars tighter than most." Unable to fight the tug of their entwined destinies, she nodded, her hand slipping from the door handle. "Then get comfortable, Lucien," she conceded with a reluctant smile, "those stars won't untangle themselves." Unexpectedly, Ptolemy, hitherto uninterested, ambled to Lucien’s feet, his feline curiosity piqued. Lucien’s eyes danced with impish delight, meeting Aurora's once again. “An auspicious sign,” he quipped, chuckling softly. “Let’s see how our fates align—or unravel.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His gaze drifted pointedly [pointedly]"
1"she responded carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
88.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount882
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount882
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"skipped a beat"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"enigma"
count1
4
word"predictable"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"lilt"
count1
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"glistening"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"tantalizing"
count1
16
word"aligned"
count1
17
word"trepidation"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"comfortable"
count1
20
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"skipped a beat"
1"tracing"
2"whisper"
3"enigma"
4"predictable"
5"tension"
6"charm"
7"shattered"
8"lilt"
9"complex"
10"pulse"
11"glistening"
12"unspoken"
13"silk"
14"echoed"
15"tantalizing"
16"aligned"
17"trepidation"
18"weight"
19"comfortable"
20"unravel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords867
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount640
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora6
Moreau1
English1
Picasso1
Lucien7
Unexpectedly1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Moreau"
3"Picasso"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.953
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed misplaced like a Picasso in a second-hand shop"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount867
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean27.09
std14.1
cv0.52
sampleLengths
080
148
256
320
432
516
639
716
828
935
1018
114
1214
1323
1432
1526
1621
1734
1824
1914
2038
2122
2222
2319
2423
2525
2632
2717
2820
2933
3022
3114
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences63
ratio0.063
matches
0"The ivory-handled cane—a deceptive thing hiding a blade—leaned elegantly against his leg."
1"Too close—close to truths he had no right to exploit."
2"Her guard slipped for a fraction—a glance, glistening with mutual comprehension."
3"Lucien moved with serpentine grace, shortening the space between them until she caught his subtle aftershave; something woody, spiked with a spicy undernote."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"half-charmed half-dangerous, His"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03067484662576687
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010736196319018405
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean13.76
std6.42
cv0.466
sampleLengths
027
115
217
321
417
516
615
716
89
912
1019
1120
1210
1322
1412
154
1615
1724
1815
191
208
2120
2224
2311
2413
255
264
277
287
2919
304
3116
325
3311
3426
3511
3610
379
3825
3919
405
4114
4211
4312
4415
4518
464
4714
488
4919
95.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5714285714285714
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"Too close—close to truths he"
1"Unexpectedly, Ptolemy, hitherto uninterested, ambled"
ratio0.041
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her heart, already thrumming from"
1"She drew a breath, channelling"
2"His tailored charcoal suit embedded"
3"Her voice managed steadiness, although"
4"He inclined his head, a"
5"His accented English was gentle,"
6"she countered, stepping aside to"
7"He moved past her, his"
8"His presence here seemed misplaced,"
9"His gaze drifted pointedly to"
10"she corrected, pulling a stray"
11"Her laugh was a dry,"
12"He approached the makeshift desk"
13"His sentence shattered midsyllable, attention"
14"She lunged to reclaim it,"
15"His voice glossed the question,"
16"she interjected, wresting the scroll"
17"she retorted, trying to cloak"
18"Her guard slipped for a"
19"He caught it, as he"
ratio0.571
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences49
matches
0"The sound of a doorbell"
1"Her heart, already thrumming from"
2"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, stirred from"
3"Aurora's hand hesitated on the"
4"She drew a breath, channelling"
5"Lucien Moreau stood framed by"
6"His tailored charcoal suit embedded"
7"The ivory-handled cane—a deceptive thing"
8"Her voice managed steadiness, although"
9"He inclined his head, a"
10"His accented English was gentle,"
11"she countered, stepping aside to"
12"He moved past her, his"
13"The ornate wallpaper, a cascade"
14"Lucien commented, leaning on his"
15"Aurora answered, closing the door"
16"His presence here seemed misplaced,"
17"His gaze drifted pointedly to"
18"she corrected, pulling a stray"
19"Her laugh was a dry,"
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Whoever stood on the other"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The sound of a doorbell pierced the quiet confines of Eva's flat on Brick Lane, its intrusion making Aurora startle, nearly upsetting a precarious tower of book…"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora said, a defiant smirk clashing with the trepidation in her eyes"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Lucien commented (comment)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"she interjected (interject)"
3"she retorted (retort)"
4"she responded carefully (respond)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
6"she conceded (concede)"
7"he quipped (quip)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.485
82.8399%