Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRK960CGKG8Q4TR1ZSR9XB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.026550
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The grove resonated with an aura of tranquility, a deceptive serenity that settled over Aurora like an uninvited guest. Her footsteps crunched through the blanket of fallen leaves, the only sound in this secluded sanctuary, hidden away from London's urban chaos. She scanned the pale, towering stones marking the grove's perimeter—oddly akin to a cathedral's grandeur. A familiar warmth pulsed against her chest, beckoning her deeper. Aurora hesitated for a moment, her hand lingering on the heartstone pendant, a silent conversation unfolding. "Okay, you creepy little stone. Lead the way." Her soft whisper seemed to shatter the stillness, each word drawn into the night's eerie silence. She moved with stealth, guiding herself through the stone maze, her body language alert. Every rustle of the wind carried whispers of a malevolent presence. Just a cold autumn breeze, she told herself, fighting the urge to glance behind. But then, the soft rustling of dried leaves persisted, crawling along the ground. Her heart quickened. Something tiny darted across her path, too fast to identify, leaving no trace but a shiver of unease. Aurora tightened her grip on the pendant, willing herself to stay focused. "Keep it together, Rory," she muttered, forcing the controlled calm that had earned her nickname. Her breath, caught in her throat, escaped in a controlled exhale. A figure emerged from the shadows, tall and ethereal, with skin the colour of moonlight. Its eyes shone with a divine luminance. This place is different, her mind screamed, venturing into forbidden territories. "Hello there. What brings you here?" Her voice wavered, her statement more of a question than a greeting. "Lost?" The creature laughed, its voice conjuring images of rushing rivers and whispering winds. She bristled at the sound, a tremor running down her spine. "Hardly," Aurora replied with more confidence than she felt. "Oh, but you are. Not here, not now, and certainly not in this body." The figure floated closer, drifting like mist. Aurora's breath caught as they stopped mere inches from her, their radiant gaze scrutinising every inch of her being. "You shouldn't be here." Her heart hammered against her ribcage, echoing the frantic cadence of the cicadas in the background. "You're trespassing, human." Aurora took an involuntary step back, stumbling on the uneven ground. "I... I didn't know," she stammered, reaching instinctively for the pendant. "Didn't you?" The fae's gaze fell to the glowing stone, their expression shifting. "Why did you bring that here, child? You're upsetting the balance." Her mind raced, considering her next move. "I... it was given to me," she whispered, mustering the same calm control she'd shown her ex, Evan, as she ended their five-month relationship on the spot due to his manipulative, gaslighting behaviour. "I didn't realise it would cause... issues," she finished, her tone pleading. The fae's laughter, musical and sharp, cut through the night, eliciting shivers of discomfort. "You brought chaos to the gates, human. But you're not completely foreign to our realm. Why do you wear my brother's gift?" They gestured toward the pendant. Aurora's grip on the stone tightened. "Your brother? Did he say I should find him here?" she pressed, hoping to unravel this enigma. The fae's eyes widened, their features hardening. "My brother is no friend to your kind. He seeks to exploit and deceive, taking advantage of mortals like you." Their voice grew menacing, each word a hissing blade. "You may call him Dymas." Recognition sparked in Aurora's mind, igniting a memory. "Dymas the Trickster..." She whispered, remembering stories told by Yu-Fei, the wise old Chinese owner of the Golden Empress, over a meal of hot chilli prawn stir-fry and green tea. The fae smiled, their features softening. "You have a friend, it seems. Not many humans are aware of the old names. You're an exceptional one, aren't you, child? What brought you here?" "I... need to find someone. I was told they'd be here." Aurora spoke carefully, her instincts screaming to tread lightly. The fae regarded her with an unreadable expression, their eyes glinting with a hidden mirth. "Do you, now? And who is this person you seek?" "Eva," Aurora replied without hesitation, her green thumb now useless in thumb war against frostbite. Her childhood best friend's face flashed in her mind — rosy cheeks and bright eyes — a stark contrast to her frequent thoughts of Evan. She faltered, stumbling over her words as the fae's gaze became impassive, devoid of emotion, a mask as impenetrable as the stones surrounding them. "Perhaps there is a reason this person is here. Perhaps they belong with us now." "No! She can't, I won't let her!" Aurora's voice echoed against the stones, carrying the unyielding determination she honed growing up with her strict barrister father Brendan. "I'm here to take her back!" The fae laughed again, their mirth echoing through the grove, an unsettling chorus joining the night's symphony. "Oh, brave little human. You think you can challenge the Fae? You think you can take what's rightfully ours?" They drifted closer, their eyes burning with an otherworldly power. "I think," Aurora shot back, drawing herself to her full height, "I have just as much right to take back what's mine." She met their piercing stare with unflinching resolve. "I came for Eva, and I won't leave without her." The fae's laughter ceased abruptly, replaced by a chilling silence. The air thickened, carrying the scent of freshly turned earth and decaying leaves. "Then you must pass the test." A ring of stones lit up, fiery crimson, marking out an arena, each pillar vivid and pulsing. Fear surged in Aurora's veins, a cold, heavy weight. She eyed the torpid display, "And what kind of test?" "A trial of wit and will. We shall see," the fae's tone rumoured with amusement, "whether you truly have the resolve to keep her." They gestured towards the glowing circle, a silent command. Aurora stepped forward, her chin held high, a decision made. "Then let's begin. I've never been one to back down from a challenge. I didn't walk away from an emerald snake 6-foot around and over 200-pounder when its owner was out cold in Plymouth during a rave, so not going to start now." She took her place in the centre of the arena, her heart thundering. "What do I have to do?" "A simple task," the fae replied, their voice echoing off the stones. "Face yourself. Your deepest fears, your darkest secrets. Conquer them, and Eva is yours to take. Fail, and you shall remain here, trapped with us for eternity." Aurora's throat constricted, suffocating her retort. Fear surged anew, pounding through her veins, but determination gripped her tighter. She nodded, ready to face whatever lay ahead. The Fae smiled, and the night's eerie melody shifted, each note a chill against her spine. "It begins," they whispered, and her world faded into darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora spoke carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.694
leniency1
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.04
82.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"carefully"
2"lightly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"resonated"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"radiant"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count3
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
16
word"enigma"
count1
17
word"unreadable"
count1
18
word"glinting"
count1
19
word"stark"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"symphony"
count1
22
word"otherworldly"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count2
24
word"chilling"
count1
25
word"weight"
count1
26
word"pounding"
count1
27
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"resonated"
1"footsteps"
2"sanctuary"
3"scanned"
4"familiar"
5"warmth"
6"pulsed"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"quickened"
10"wavered"
11"down her spine"
12"radiant"
13"echoing"
14"raced"
15"unravel"
16"enigma"
17"unreadable"
18"glinting"
19"stark"
20"echoed"
21"symphony"
22"otherworldly"
23"resolve"
24"chilling"
25"weight"
26"pounding"
27"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1142
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Just a cold autumn breeze, she told herself, fighting the urge to glance behind."
54.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount783
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
London1
Evan2
Recognition1
Yu-Fei1
Chinese1
Golden1
Empress1
Brendan1
Fear2
Fae1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Evan"
2"Recognition"
3"Brendan"
4"Fear"
5"Fae"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.542
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.876
wordCount1142
matches
0"no trace but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
73.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean35.69
std14.57
cv0.408
sampleLengths
056
150
255
356
451
525
69
744
819
922
1024
1152
1241
1323
1441
1538
1632
1720
1825
1940
2039
2133
2246
2340
2423
2523
2619
2733
2872
2939
3042
3110
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences74
ratio0.027
matches
0"She scanned the pale, towering stones marking the grove's perimeter—oddly akin to a cathedral's grandeur."
1"Her childhood best friend's face flashed in her mind — rosy cheeks and bright eyes — a stark contrast to her frequent thoughts of Evan."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount785
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.016560509554140127
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01019108280254777
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean15.43
std8.87
cv0.575
sampleLengths
019
122
215
310
416
524
614
711
814
913
103
1118
1212
1315
1411
1515
167
1711
1818
1914
2011
219
2221
2319
244
2516
263
2711
2811
2913
3011
317
3233
3312
3414
3527
366
3717
387
3929
405
418
4230
436
4426
4520
4615
4710
4815
4925
72.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4594594594594595
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners34
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Just a cold autumn breeze,"
ratio0.016
54.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her footsteps crunched through the"
1"She scanned the pale, towering"
2"Her soft whisper seemed to"
3"She moved with stealth, guiding"
4"Her heart quickened."
5"she muttered, forcing the controlled"
6"Her breath, caught in her"
7"Its eyes shone with a"
8"Her voice wavered, her statement"
9"She bristled at the sound,"
10"Her heart hammered against her"
11"she stammered, reaching instinctively for"
12"Her mind raced, considering her"
13"she whispered, mustering the same"
14"she finished, her tone pleading"
15"They gestured toward the pendant"
16"she pressed, hoping to unravel"
17"Their voice grew menacing, each"
18"She whispered, remembering stories told"
19"Her childhood best friend's face"
ratio0.413
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences63
matches
0"The grove resonated with an"
1"Her footsteps crunched through the"
2"She scanned the pale, towering"
3"A familiar warmth pulsed against"
4"Aurora hesitated for a moment,"
5"Her soft whisper seemed to"
6"She moved with stealth, guiding"
7"Every rustle of the wind"
8"Her heart quickened."
9"Something tiny darted across her"
10"Aurora tightened her grip on"
11"she muttered, forcing the controlled"
12"Her breath, caught in her"
13"A figure emerged from the"
14"Its eyes shone with a"
15"This place is different, her"
16"Her voice wavered, her statement"
17"The creature laughed, its voice"
18"She bristled at the sound,"
19"Aurora replied with more confidence"
ratio0.968
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The fae laughed again, their mirth echoing through the grove, an unsettling chorus joining the night's symphony."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"soft whisper seemed, each word drawn into the night's eerie silence"
1"Her voice wavered, her statement more of a question than a greeting"
2"The creature laughed, its voice conjuring images of rushing rivers and whispering winds"
3"The fae's gaze fell, their expression shifting"
4"she finished, her tone pleading"
5"she pressed, hoping to unravel this enigma"
6"They drifted, their eyes burning with an otherworldly power"
7"She took, her heart thundering"
8"the fae replied, their voice echoing off the stones"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"The creature laughed (laugh)"
2"she stammered (stammer)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she pressed (press)"
5"She whispered (whisper)"
6"Aurora spoke carefully (speak)"
7"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.444
75.2192%