Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKAE836RQ9ED2D42S6DMJ

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Duration:
28.2s
Cost:
$0.001027

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses punctuating the air like a heartbeat. Dim light flickered from the green neon sign outside, casting a soft glow on the faces of patrons scattered across the bar. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a practiced ease. He caught sight of Rory as she slipped through the door, her straight black hair framing her bright blue eyes, a stark contrast to the muted tones of the bar. “Rory!” Silas called, a grin breaking across his face. He wiped his hands on a towel and leaned against the bar, his slight limp barely noticeable as he moved toward her. “Si,” she replied, a smile tugging at her lips, though it didn’t quite reach her eyes. She stepped closer, the familiar scent of aged wood and whiskey wrapping around her like a long-lost embrace. “It’s been a while.” “Too long,” he said, his voice low and warm. “You look good. How’s the delivery gig treating you?” “Busy,” she shrugged, glancing around the bar. “But it pays the bills. How’s the Nest?” “Still standing, somehow,” he chuckled, gesturing to the walls adorned with maps and photographs. “You know how it is. A few new faces, a few old stories.” Rory nodded, her gaze drifting to a group of men in the corner, their laughter echoing like ghosts of a past she couldn’t quite shake off. She turned back to Silas, her expression shifting. “I didn’t expect to see you here tonight.” “Neither did I,” he admitted, his eyes narrowing slightly. “But I’m glad you did. You’ve been keeping a low profile.” “Just trying to figure things out,” she said, her voice steady but laced with an undercurrent of something unspoken. “You know how it is.” Silas studied her, the way her fingers fidgeted with the hem of her shirt, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light. “You’ve changed, Rory. You’re not the same girl who left Cardiff.” “Neither are you,” she shot back, a hint of challenge in her tone. “You’re not just a bar owner anymore, are you?” He chuckled softly, the sound tinged with a hint of regret. “Old habits die hard. But I’m not in the field anymore. Just trying to keep my head above water.” “Is that what you call it?” she asked, her brow furrowing. “You’ve built a whole network here.” “Let’s just say I know a few people,” he replied, his expression shifting to something more serious. “And I keep my ear to the ground. You should be careful, Rory. London can be a dangerous place.” “I can handle myself,” she said, her voice firm. “I’ve had to.” Silas raised an eyebrow, a knowing look passing between them. “And what about Evan? Is he still… around?” Rory’s jaw tightened. “No. I left him behind.” “Good,” he said, his tone softening. “You deserve better than that.” “Do I?” she shot back, her voice rising slightly. “I’ve made my choices, Si. I’m not looking for pity.” “Not pity,” he replied, his gaze steady. “Just concern. You were always the smart one, Rory. But sometimes, even the smartest get lost.” She turned away, her eyes scanning the bar again, avoiding the weight of his words. “I’m not lost. Just… different.” “Different how?” he pressed, leaning closer, his voice low. “You used to be so full of life. Now it feels like you’re just… existing.” Rory clenched her fists, the tension in the air thickening. “Life isn’t always about being full of life, Si. Sometimes it’s about survival.” “Survival?” he echoed, his brow furrowing. “Is that really all you want?” “I want to be free,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “Free from the past, free from the mistakes I made.” “Then let’s talk about it,” he urged, his expression earnest. “You don’t have to carry that weight alone.” “I don’t want to talk about it,” she snapped, her frustration bubbling to the surface. “What’s done is done. I’m here now, and that’s what matters.” Silas sighed, running a hand through his grey-streaked auburn hair. “You can’t just bury it, Rory. It’ll come back to haunt you.” “Maybe I want it to haunt me,” she shot back, her eyes flashing. “Maybe I need that reminder.” “Why?” he asked, his voice steady. “What good does it do you?” “It reminds me of who I was,” she replied, her voice softening. “And who I don’t want to be again.” Silas studied her, the weight of their shared history hanging in the air. “You’re stronger than you think. You’ve always been.” “Strength doesn’t mean I’m not scared,” she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. “I’m terrified, Si. Every day is a battle.” “Then let me help you fight,” he offered, his eyes earnest. “You don’t have to do this alone.” Rory hesitated, the walls she had built around herself trembling. “I don’t know if I can trust anyone again.” “Trust takes time,” he said gently. “But I’m here. I always have been.” She looked into his hazel eyes, searching for the boy she once knew, the one who had promised to always have her back. “You’ve changed too, you know. You’re not just a friend anymore. You’re… something else.” “Maybe we both are,” he replied, a hint of sadness in his voice. “But that doesn’t mean we can’t find a way back to each other.” Rory took a deep breath, the air thick with unspoken words. “I don’t know if I want to go back.” “Then let’s move forward,” he suggested, his tone hopeful. “Together.” She looked away, the weight of his gaze pressing against her. “I need time, Si. I’m not ready to open up.” “Take all the time you need,” he said, his voice steady. “I’ll be right here.” Rory nodded, the tension between them shifting, but the past still lingered like a shadow. She glanced around the bar, the laughter and chatter fading into the background. “I should get back to work.” “Of course,” he replied, stepping back, giving her space. “But don’t be a stranger, okay?” “I won’t,” she promised, though uncertainty lingered in her voice. She turned to leave, the door swinging shut behind her, leaving Silas standing alone, the weight of their conversation hanging in the air like a ghost.
total_cost0.00102705

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.033
effectiveRatio0.028
67.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"furrowing"
count2
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"weight"
count5
11
word"tension"
count2
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"practiced ease"
3"stark"
4"familiar"
5"echoing"
6"unspoken"
7"tinged"
8"furrowing"
9"eyebrow"
10"weight"
11"tension"
12"echoed"
13"whisper"
14"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1062
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount581
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory7
Silas8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.812
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach her eyes"
1"quite shake off"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1062
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.6
std12.88
cv0.546
sampleLengths
090
131
238
318
415
527
642
720
824
936
1022
1130
1217
1336
1412
1518
168
1711
1819
1923
2020
2124
2223
2312
2423
2518
2626
2722
2818
2912
3020
3121
3222
3318
3419
3513
3637
3726
3820
3910
4021
4115
4234
4315
4436
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences95
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount584
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0410958904109589
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011986301369863013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.18
std5.53
cv0.494
sampleLengths
020
122
218
330
49
522
616
718
84
99
109
117
128
1314
1413
1526
168
178
189
1911
2019
215
2225
2311
2413
259
2611
2719
2811
296
3017
3119
329
333
3410
358
363
375
386
395
409
4110
427
4316
4415
455
469
4715
4810
4913
62.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3894736842105263
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences53
matches
0"He caught sight of Rory"
1"He wiped his hands on"
2"she replied, a smile tugging"
3"She stepped closer, the familiar"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"she shrugged, glancing around the"
6"he chuckled, gesturing to the"
7"She turned back to Silas,"
8"he admitted, his eyes narrowing"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"she shot back, a hint"
11"He chuckled softly, the sound"
12"she asked, her brow furrowing"
13"he replied, his expression shifting"
14"she said, her voice firm"
15"he said, his tone softening"
16"she shot back, her voice"
17"he replied, his gaze steady"
18"She turned away, her eyes"
19"he pressed, leaning closer, his"
ratio0.736
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences53
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Silas stood behind the counter,"
2"He caught sight of Rory"
3"Silas called, a grin breaking"
4"He wiped his hands on"
5"she replied, a smile tugging"
6"She stepped closer, the familiar"
7"he said, his voice low"
8"she shrugged, glancing around the"
9"he chuckled, gesturing to the"
10"Rory nodded, her gaze drifting"
11"She turned back to Silas,"
12"he admitted, his eyes narrowing"
13"she said, her voice steady"
14"Silas studied her, the way"
15"she shot back, a hint"
16"He chuckled softly, the sound"
17"she asked, her brow furrowing"
18"he replied, his expression shifting"
19"she said, her voice firm"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory nodded, her gaze drifting to a group of men in the corner, their laughter echoing like ghosts of a past she couldn’t quite shake off."
1"She turned away, her eyes scanning the bar again, avoiding the weight of his words."
2"She turned to leave, the door swinging shut behind her, leaving Silas standing alone, the weight of their conversation hanging in the air like a ghost."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount22
matches
0"Silas called, a grin breaking across his face"
1"he said, his voice low and warm"
2"he admitted, his eyes narrowing slightly"
3"she shot back, a hint of challenge in her tone"
4"she asked, her brow furrowing"
5"he replied, his expression shifting to something more serious"
6"she said, her voice firm"
7"he said, his tone softening"
8"she shot back, her voice rising slightly"
9"he replied, his gaze steady"
10"he echoed, his brow furrowing"
11"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
12"he urged, his expression earnest"
13"she snapped, her frustration bubbling to the surface"
14"she shot back, her eyes flashing"
15"he asked, his voice steady"
16"she replied, her voice softening"
17"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
18"he offered, his eyes earnest"
19"he replied, a hint of sadness in his voice"
20"he suggested, his tone hopeful"
21"he said, his voice steady"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he chuckled (chuckle)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he pressed (press)"
3"he urged (urge)"
4"she snapped (snap)"
5"she admitted (admit)"
6"he suggested (suggest)"
7"she promised (promise)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.222
69.1836%