Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKB8PFPCBB39XAXAQ4NWJ

Run Details

Duration:
12.2s
Cost:
$0.028930
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the edge of The Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like silent sentinels in the moonlight. The air felt thick, almost tangible, as if the grove itself was breathing. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its faint warmth a small comfort against the chill that crept up her spine. She had come here for a reason, though the specifics eluded her in the haze of the night. Eva had mentioned something about the grove, something important, but the details were fuzzy. Rory took a deep breath, her breath visible in the cold air, and stepped forward, crossing the threshold marked by the standing stones. The moment she entered, the world seemed to shift. The wildflowers that bloomed year-round glowed faintly, their colors more vibrant than any she had seen in the daylight. The trees whispered secrets in a language she couldn't understand, their leaves rustling in a breeze that didn't touch her skin. Time moved differently here, she knew that much, but the disorientation was immediate and unsettling. She walked deeper into the grove, her footsteps muffled by the soft, mossy ground. The pendant pulsed gently against her chest, a rhythmic reminder of its presence. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows that seemed to dance just out of reach. The grove was beautiful, but there was an undercurrent of wrongness that she couldn't shake. A twig snapped behind her, and she whirled around, her heart pounding. Nothing. Just the trees and the flowers, swaying gently as if mocking her. She shook her head, trying to dispel the unease that gnawed at her. "Get a grip, Rory," she muttered to herself, her voice sounding small and fragile in the vastness of the grove. She continued walking, her senses on high alert. The sounds of the night seemed amplified here—the rustle of leaves, the distant hoot of an owl, the soft murmur of a stream she couldn't see. But there were other sounds too, sounds that didn't belong. A faint whispering, like voices carried on the wind, and the occasional rustle of something moving just out of sight. Rory's grip on the pendant tightened. She had faced danger before, but this was different. This was an ancient, primal fear, the kind that made her want to turn and run. But she couldn't. She had come here for a reason, and she needed to see it through. As she walked, the grove seemed to close in around her. The trees grew denser, their branches intertwining to form a canopy that blocked out the moonlight. The darkness was almost complete, broken only by the faint glow of the wildflowers and the soft light emanating from the Heartstone Pendant. She stumbled over a root, catching herself just in time. Her heart raced, and she took a moment to steady herself. "Focus," she whispered, her voice barely audible. She couldn't afford to lose her nerve now. A sudden gust of wind swept through the grove, carrying with it a low, mournful wail. Rory froze, her blood turning to ice. The sound was unlike anything she had ever heard, a mix of sorrow and anger that seemed to resonate deep within her. She turned slowly, her eyes wide with fear. There, at the edge of her vision, something moved. A shadow, darker than the night, flitted between the trees. She blinked, and it was gone. Her breath came in shallow gasps, and she forced herself to move, to keep going. She couldn't let the fear paralyze her. The whispering grew louder, more insistent. It seemed to come from all around her, a cacophony of voices that made her head spin. She pressed her hands to her ears, trying to block out the sound, but it was no use. The voices were inside her head, echoing in her mind. "Rory," they whispered, her name distorted and twisted. "Rory, come to us." She shook her head violently, trying to clear her thoughts. "No," she said, her voice trembling. "I won't." The pendant pulsed more urgently, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold that seeped into her bones. She clung to it like a lifeline, drawing strength from its presence. She had to keep moving, had to find whatever it was that had brought her here. The grove seemed to stretch on forever, an endless maze of trees and shadows. She had lost all sense of direction, her only guide the faint glow of the pendant. The wrongness pressed in on her, a suffocating weight that made it hard to breathe. She stumbled again, this time falling to her knees. The ground was cold and damp, and she could feel the chill seeping through her clothes. She looked up, her eyes searching the darkness for any sign of hope. And then she saw it. A faint light, flickering in the distance. It was small, barely more than a glimmer, but it was enough. She pushed herself to her feet, her legs trembling, and started towards it. The light grew brighter as she approached, revealing a small clearing in the heart of the grove. In the center of the clearing stood a stone altar, ancient and weathered. The light came from a single candle, its flame dancing in the breeze. Rory stepped into the clearing, her eyes fixed on the altar. The pendant pulsed in time with her heartbeat, its glow matching the candle's flame. She felt a strange sense of calm wash over her, the fear receding like a tide. She approached the altar, her footsteps slow and deliberate. The whispering had stopped, replaced by a heavy silence that seemed to hang in the air. She reached out, her fingers brushing the surface of the stone. The moment she touched it, a surge of energy coursed through her. The pendant flared brightly, its warmth spreading through her body. She gasped, her eyes widening in shock. And then she heard it. A voice, clear and strong, speaking directly to her. "Aurora Carter," it said, "you have been chosen." She looked around, but there was no one there. The voice seemed to come from the altar itself, resonating in her mind. "Chosen for what?" she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper. "To protect the balance," the voice replied. "To guard the boundary between worlds." She shook her head, confusion and fear warring within her. "I don't understand." "You will," the voice said. "In time, you will." The light from the candle flickered, and the pendant's glow began to fade. The energy that had surged through her ebbed away, leaving her feeling drained and exhausted. She stepped back from the altar, her mind reeling. The grove seemed to shift around her, the trees and shadows blurring together. She felt a pull, a gentle tug that guided her back the way she had come. She followed it, her steps unsteady. The whispering had returned, but it was softer now, almost soothing. The wrongness that had plagued her was gone, replaced by a sense of purpose. As she crossed the threshold of the standing stones, the world shifted again. The night air was crisp and clear, the moonlight bright and reassuring. She took a deep breath, the familiar scents of Richmond Park grounding her. She looked back at the grove, the ancient oaks standing silent and still. The pendant around her neck was cool now, its glow barely visible. She touched it gently, a small smile playing on her lips. She had come here for a reason, and she had found it. The fear and uncertainty were still there, but they were tempered by a newfound resolve. She had a purpose now, a mission. And she would see it through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1292
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1292
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"tangible"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"chill"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count3
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"dance"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"cacophony"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count3
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count1
19
word"dancing"
count1
20
word"silence"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
22
word"flickered"
count1
23
word"familiar"
count1
24
word"newfound"
count1
25
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"sentinels"
2"tangible"
3"warmth"
4"chill"
5"footsteps"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"reminder"
9"scanning"
10"dance"
11"pounding"
12"raced"
13"cacophony"
14"echoing"
15"stark"
16"sense of"
17"weight"
18"could feel"
19"dancing"
20"silence"
21"whisper"
22"flickered"
23"familiar"
24"newfound"
25"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences103
matches
0"e with fear"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount11
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1249
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Richmond1
Park1
Rory4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"shadows that seemed to dance just out of reach"
1"as if mocking her"
2"seemed amplified here—the rustle of leaves, the distant hoot of an owl, the soft murmur of a stream she couldn't see"
3"anger that seemed to resonate deep within her"
4"silence that seemed to hang in the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1290
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"knew that much"
92.93% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean35.83
std17.03
cv0.475
sampleLengths
057
155
264
360
458
564
648
750
836
953
1047
1151
1212
1318
1446
1545
1638
1737
1843
1941
2036
2129
2214
238
2422
2512
2613
2713
289
2928
3038
3131
3238
3336
3434
356
95.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"were tempered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was breathing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences108
ratio0.009
matches
0"The sounds of the night seemed amplified here—the rustle of leaves, the distant hoot of an owl, the soft murmur of a stream she couldn't see."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1251
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03597122302158273
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012789768185451638
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.94
std5
cv0.418
sampleLengths
022
113
222
318
414
523
69
719
821
915
1014
1113
1218
1315
1412
151
1612
1713
1820
198
2026
2110
2220
236
249
2516
263
2714
2811
2916
3023
3110
3211
337
348
3516
367
3722
388
399
4010
416
4215
437
446
4517
4618
4710
488
494
37.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2222222222222222
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners24
33.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just the trees and the"
ratio0.01
45.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences101
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She had come here for"
2"She walked deeper into the"
3"She glanced around, her bright"
4"She shook her head, trying"
5"she muttered to herself, her"
6"She continued walking, her senses"
7"She had faced danger before,"
8"She had come here for"
9"She stumbled over a root,"
10"Her heart raced, and she"
11"she whispered, her voice barely"
12"She couldn't afford to lose"
13"She turned slowly, her eyes"
14"She blinked, and it was"
15"Her breath came in shallow"
16"She couldn't let the fear"
17"It seemed to come from"
18"She pressed her hands to"
19"they whispered, her name distorted"
ratio0.436
4.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences101
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood at the"
1"The air felt thick, almost"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3"She had come here for"
4"Eva had mentioned something about"
5"Rory took a deep breath,"
6"The moment she entered, the"
7"The wildflowers that bloomed year-round"
8"The trees whispered secrets in"
9"Time moved differently here, she"
10"She walked deeper into the"
11"The pendant pulsed gently against"
12"She glanced around, her bright"
13"The grove was beautiful, but"
14"A twig snapped behind her,"
15"She shook her head, trying"
16"she muttered to herself, her"
17"She continued walking, her senses"
18"The sounds of the night"
19"A faint whispering, like voices"
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The air felt thick, almost tangible, as if the grove itself was breathing."
1"The wildflowers that bloomed year-round glowed faintly, their colors more vibrant than any she had seen in the daylight."
2"The trees whispered secrets in a language she couldn't understand, their leaves rustling in a breeze that didn't touch her skin."
3"She shook her head, trying to dispel the unease that gnawed at her."
4"The pendant pulsed more urgently, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold that seeped into her bones."
5"The wrongness pressed in on her, a suffocating weight that made it hard to breathe."
6"She felt a pull, a gentle tug that guided her back the way she had come."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
1"they whispered, her name distorted and twisted"
2"she said, her voice trembling"
3"she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.375
69.4227%