Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKDCHG0AV9WNFF15AY7FQ

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Duration:
6.0s
Cost:
$0.000421

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the hushed heart of Richmond Park, where the world held its breath, Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stepped into the Fae Grove. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers and ancient secrets, the silence so profound it hummed in their ears. The standing stones that marked the boundary loomed like sentinels, their gnarled roots drinking deep from the earth's magic. Rory's boots sank into the soft moss as she took her first steps into the grove. Her eyes, bright blue and sharp as a hawk's, drank in the alien beauty. "It's like... stepping into a dream," she murmured, her voice barely disturbing the quiet. Nyx, a living shadow, shifted beside her. Their form rippled, the faintly glowing violet of their eyes the only constant. "The Fae leave their mark on places like this," they whispered, their voice like wind through leaves. "It's not quite of our world, yet not quite of theirs." Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae, glided ahead. Her silver hair shimmered in the dappled light, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the wildflowers that bloomed year-round. She left no footprints, her steps silent as a falling leaf. "Time moves differently here," she said, her voice a soft, lilting song. "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. Tread carefully, mortals." Rory's hand went to the Heartstone Pendant at her throat, a gift from a mysterious benefactor. It pulsed faintly, warm against her skin. She glanced at Nyx, who nodded, their form solidifying. "We're close," they said, their gaze fixed on the pendant. The grove was a symphony of color and scent, a riot of life that defied the chill of winter. Trees bore fruit and blossomed simultaneously, their branches heavy with the weight of seasons compressed into one. A stream burbled, its water crystal clear, reflecting the dappled sunlight like a thousand tiny jewels. Rory knelt, cupping her hands to drink. The water was cool, sweet, and tasted of magic. She felt it course through her, invigorating, alive. She stood, wiping her mouth, and caught Nyx watching her. "What?" she asked, a hint of a smile playing on her lips. Nyx looked away, their form flickering. "Nothing," they said, their voice barely audible. "Just... not used to seeing mortals here. It's... refreshing." Isolde led them deeper, her steps sure, her gaze distant. She seemed to follow an unseen path, her fingers brushing against leaves, her head tilting as if listening to whispers only she could hear. They came to a clearing where a tree stood alone, its trunk wide, its branches stretching out like welcoming arms. Its leaves were silver, its fruit crimson, pulsing with a faint inner glow. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing the fruit. It was warm, throbbing with life. She looked at Isolde, questions in her eyes. "This is why we're here, isn't it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde nodded, her eyes reflecting the fruit's crimson glow. "Yes," she said, her voice a soft sigh. "The Heartstone calls to it. It's a fruit of the Fae, grown in the mortal world. It's... rare." Nyx stepped closer, their form solidifying. They reached out, their fingers brushing the fruit. It pulsed under their touch, the glow intensifying. "It's a key," they said, their voice barely audible. "A key to Hel." Rory's hand went to the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, the gift from Isolde. It was cold to the touch, its moonsilver blade faintly luminescent in the dappled light. She felt a shiver run down her spine, a mix of unease and excitement. "We need to take it," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. Isolde looked at her, her eyes serious. "Yes," she said. "But be quick. The Fae will know if it's taken. We must leave before they find us." Rory nodded, her fingers closing around the fruit. It was warm, throbbing with life and magic. She felt it pulse in her hand, a rhythm that echoed in her chest. She looked at Nyx, who nodded, their form flickering. "Ready?" she asked, her voice steady. Nyx nodded, their form solidifying. "Ready," they said, their voice a soft whisper. And together, the three of them stepped deeper into the Fae Grove, their hearts pounding with anticipation and unease, their eyes fixed on the prize that would take them to the realm of Hel.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.684
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount728
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount728
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"symphony"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"profound"
2"loomed"
3"sentinels"
4"shimmered"
5"pulsed"
6"symphony"
7"chill"
8"weight"
9"crystal"
10"whisper"
11"down her spine"
12"pulse"
13"echoed"
14"pounding"
15"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
94.70% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences55
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"g with anticipation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords725
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount612
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory7
Nyx8
Isolde7
Fae4
Grove2
Half-Fae1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Half-Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Heartstone"
5"Fae-Forged"
globalScore0.846
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if listening to whispers only she could hear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount725
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
32.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean45.31
std11.99
cv0.265
sampleLengths
062
144
248
359
442
552
646
722
867
937
1035
1135
1257
1327
1445
1547
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount615
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.024390243902439025
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.016260162601626018
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean11.89
std5.61
cv0.472
sampleLengths
022
121
219
316
414
514
67
713
817
911
106
1118
1211
1312
1412
1516
167
179
1810
1919
2017
2116
227
239
248
2510
2612
276
287
299
3010
3124
3220
3313
348
356
368
3715
389
398
4018
416
428
438
449
454
4614
4715
4814
4914
59.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her eyes, bright blue and"
1"she murmured, her voice barely"
2"Their form rippled, the faintly"
3"they whispered, their voice like"
4"Her silver hair shimmered in"
5"She left no footprints, her"
6"she said, her voice a"
7"It pulsed faintly, warm against"
8"She glanced at Nyx, who"
9"they said, their gaze fixed"
10"She felt it course through"
11"She stood, wiping her mouth,"
12"she asked, a hint of"
13"they said, their voice barely"
14"She seemed to follow an"
15"They came to a clearing"
16"Its leaves were silver, its"
17"It was warm, throbbing with"
18"She looked at Isolde, questions"
19"she asked, her voice barely"
ratio0.593
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences54
matches
0"The air was thick with"
1"The standing stones that marked"
2"Rory's boots sank into the"
3"Her eyes, bright blue and"
4"she murmured, her voice barely"
5"Nyx, a living shadow, shifted"
6"Their form rippled, the faintly"
7"they whispered, their voice like"
8"Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae, glided"
9"Her silver hair shimmered in"
10"She left no footprints, her"
11"she said, her voice a"
12"Rory's hand went to the"
13"It pulsed faintly, warm against"
14"She glanced at Nyx, who"
15"they said, their gaze fixed"
16"The grove was a symphony"
17"Trees bore fruit and blossomed"
18"A stream burbled, its water"
19"Rory knelt, cupping her hands"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The standing stones that marked the boundary loomed like sentinels, their gnarled roots drinking deep from the earth's magic."
1"Her silver hair shimmered in the dappled light, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the wildflowers that bloomed year-round."
2"The grove was a symphony of color and scent, a riot of life that defied the chill of winter."
3"She seemed to follow an unseen path, her fingers brushing against leaves, her head tilting as if listening to whispers only she could hear."
4"They came to a clearing where a tree stood alone, its trunk wide, its branches stretching out like welcoming arms."
5"She felt it pulse in her hand, a rhythm that echoed in her chest."
6"And together, the three of them stepped deeper into the Fae Grove, their hearts pounding with anticipation and unease, their eyes fixed on the prize that would …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she murmured, her voice barely disturbing the quiet"
1"she said, her voice a soft, lilting song"
2"she asked, a hint of a smile playing on her lips"
3"they said, their voice barely audible"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she said, her voice a soft sigh"
6"they said, their voice barely audible"
7"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
8"she asked, her voice steady"
9"they said, their voice a soft whisper"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.684
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
70.9718%