| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.684 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 728 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 728 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "symphony" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "down her spine" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 94.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "g with anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 725 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 612 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.31 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Fae-Forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.846 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening to whispers only she could hear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 725 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 45.31 | | std | 11.99 | | cv | 0.265 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 615 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.024390243902439025 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016260162601626018 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 11.89 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 59.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.39344262295081966 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes, bright blue and" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 2 | "Their form rippled, the faintly" | | 3 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 4 | "Her silver hair shimmered in" | | 5 | "She left no footprints, her" | | 6 | "she said, her voice a" | | 7 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 8 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 9 | "they said, their gaze fixed" | | 10 | "She felt it course through" | | 11 | "She stood, wiping her mouth," | | 12 | "she asked, a hint of" | | 13 | "they said, their voice barely" | | 14 | "She seemed to follow an" | | 15 | "They came to a clearing" | | 16 | "Its leaves were silver, its" | | 17 | "It was warm, throbbing with" | | 18 | "She looked at Isolde, questions" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.593 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "The standing stones that marked" | | 2 | "Rory's boots sank into the" | | 3 | "Her eyes, bright blue and" | | 4 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 5 | "Nyx, a living shadow, shifted" | | 6 | "Their form rippled, the faintly" | | 7 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 8 | "Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae, glided" | | 9 | "Her silver hair shimmered in" | | 10 | "She left no footprints, her" | | 11 | "she said, her voice a" | | 12 | "Rory's hand went to the" | | 13 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 14 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 15 | "they said, their gaze fixed" | | 16 | "The grove was a symphony" | | 17 | "Trees bore fruit and blossomed" | | 18 | "A stream burbled, its water" | | 19 | "Rory knelt, cupping her hands" |
| | ratio | 0.963 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones that marked the boundary loomed like sentinels, their gnarled roots drinking deep from the earth's magic." | | 1 | "Her silver hair shimmered in the dappled light, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the wildflowers that bloomed year-round." | | 2 | "The grove was a symphony of color and scent, a riot of life that defied the chill of winter." | | 3 | "She seemed to follow an unseen path, her fingers brushing against leaves, her head tilting as if listening to whispers only she could hear." | | 4 | "They came to a clearing where a tree stood alone, its trunk wide, its branches stretching out like welcoming arms." | | 5 | "She felt it pulse in her hand, a rhythm that echoed in her chest." | | 6 | "And together, the three of them stepped deeper into the Fae Grove, their hearts pounding with anticipation and unease, their eyes fixed on the prize that would …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice barely disturbing the quiet" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a soft, lilting song" | | 2 | "she asked, a hint of a smile playing on her lips" | | 3 | "they said, their voice barely audible" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "she said, her voice a soft sigh" | | 6 | "they said, their voice barely audible" | | 7 | "she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 9 | "they said, their voice a soft whisper" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.684 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |