Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKDRRTCR2KX7R3FM60AHP

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
43.0s
Cost:
$0.021336
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The clatter from behind the door snapped Aurora out of her research fugue. She knocked aside an open book on demon linguistics, heart juddering, and snatched up the nearest heavy object—a chipped mug with faded cursive that spelled out World’s Okayest Barrister. The cat bolted under the sofa as she crept forward, breathing sharp in her ears, trying to keep her footsteps masked by the rattle of curry house pans downstairs. The knock came again, knuckles wrapped and impatient. Not Eva’s knock—too rhythmic, too intentional. She edged the door open a crack, keeping her body braced behind the battered wood. Her gaze shot to each of the deadbolts. Locked, all three. Security layered, as always. "Aurora. I know you’re in there." Cold, continental vowels with an insouciant curl. The voice sent a hot-cold slice down her spine. She’d imagined it at her shoulder for weeks now, in the shower, in crowded tubes, in those ambiguous dreams where hunger and fear felt like the same thing. She let out her breath and undid the first deadbolt. "You should have called ahead, Lucien." He stepped into the hall’s sodium gloom, impeccable in his usual charcoal suit, platinum hair swept back as if not a single perfect strand would dare betray him. The ivory-handled cane tap-tapped once against the skirting. One heterochromatic eye assessed her—amber, sly, alive. The other, black as pitch, unreadable. "That would have spoiled the surprise." She sucked her teeth, hand still on the last bolt. "Surprises usually mean someone's bled out in Shoreditch again. Or you need a place to hide what you call evidence." Something in his mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. "Neither. May I?" She stood aside in a slow, feline movement, keeping her back straight as he entered. He barely glanced at the ramshackle chaos: the desk groaning under academic paper, the cluster of tea cups, the cat’s loose fur nesting in book spines. His gaze slid right to her. The air contracted between them, thick with memory. She set the mug down and folded her arms. "If you’re here about the Orphic Key, you’re early. Eva still has the cipher." He made a soft, dismissive noise. "You think me so unoriginal? I have business, yes, but also—" His scarf flared as he moved deeper into the room, pausing where a sunbeam picked out glass dust on the floor. "You look tired, ma minette." She flinched at the old nickname, then sharpened herself with sarcasm. "Comes with not sleeping. Or did you forget I'm still cleaning up after your last leak?" He chuckled, low and knowing. "Leaking requires less effort than you think." His hand swept over the back of her battered armchair, then he perched with precise grace, cane across his knees. "Sit. Unless you’d rather we argue standing." She thought about arguing the point—dignity, boundaries, the entire lexicon of ex-lovers who know the shape of each other’s sharp bits. She sat, instead, knees locked tight. Lucien’s eyes bored into her. "I need your help." She laughed, short and hard. "That’s a first." "A first with witnesses, perhaps," he said. "The French have a saying…" She rolled her eyes. "Spare me the proverbs. You’re not here for philosophy." The cat, emboldened, slunk out from under the sofa and began furiously cleaning its paw on Lucien’s shoe. He watched with distant amusement. He leaned forward. "A contact of mine is missing. I traced his trail to this end of Brick Lane. I want you to help retrieve him." Her heart, traitorous, sped up. "Your contacts tend to combust or vanish when it suits. Why not ring up your usual muscle?" His gaze sharpened. "This one matters." A pause. "He knows about Avaros. Too much. For both our sakes, I want him found before the wrong sort do." The room felt smaller, pressing her in. "You’re finally scared." She flexed her fingers, the crescent scar itching. He dropped his voice. "Not scared. Cautious. There’s a difference." She tried to force her tone flat, factual. "We’re barely speaking. Last time you left without a word." "You told me to go." "And you went." Her voice broke, the word like a snapped wire. His knuckles tightened on the cane’s pale handle. "You said it’d be easier." "Don’t act the martyr, Lucien. We both know you don’t do easy, or honest, or anything in between." A muscle worked in his jaw. "We were both bleeding, Aurora. I gave you space." She let the silence bite for a second. The cat, oblivious, began pawing at his ankle with determined affection. "Space heals nothing. Just lets wounds scab over dirty." She looked away. "Why not ask Eva? She loves an impossible task." He studied her, and the smirk faded to something raw. "I owe you the truth, at least. Last month, the incident at the Golden Empress—" "The summoning gone wrong. The body." Pieces clicked together mid-sentence. "That wasn’t a random surge. Someone sent it?" His nod was tight, almost reluctant. "The same someone who’s after my contact." She ran both hands through her hair, the short, straight locks falling over her brow in a calculated mess. "Of course. So you want me to risk my neck extracting him, while you—" "While I protect you from what hunts him," he cut in, voice velvet but with teeth. "Protect. You mean hover and interfer, then disappear before explaining anything." He breathed a soft, French expletive. "Do you want my help or my absence?" "You can’t keep picking and choosing," she snapped. "You don’t get to turn up, drop the world in my lap, and act like nothing happened between us." He blinked, slow and considering. "I intend nothing of the sort." She let out a bitter laugh. "You always intend, Lucien. Intent’s cheap." His mouth found the remnants of a smile. "Not with you." She fought the urge to hurl something heavy. Instead, she pressed him with a stare that was all the artillery she had left. "Give me names. If I’m in this, I want all of it. Not half-truths, not riddles. And don’t vanish this time." He stood. For a heartbeat he hesitated, then reached out. His knuckles brushed her forearm—the scar—deliberate, like a confession. His voice softened, almost human. "You have my word." A sharp crack cut through the tangled tension—a pane shuddered, glass scored by something metal on the fire escape. Both of them fell silent. Ptolemy hissed under the sofa. Lucien moved to the window in a single, predatory motion, cane drawn and thumb poised over the hidden blade. Aurora followed, anger draining away to cold, clinical alertness. Outside, something inhuman clawed up the brick, eyes glinting violet in the dark. It hissed—a sound halfway between prayer and threat. Lucien’s jaw set. "Get back. Now." He threw the window open, cane raised. Aurora snatched up the mug, pulse drumming in her throat. Below, claws scrabbled for purchase. "Stay behind me, Aurora." She braced herself, refusing to flinch. The creature lunged, long-fingered and shrieking. Aurora lifted the mug, ready to smash. Everything happened at once.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.191
leniency0.383
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.043
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"affection"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"rhythmic"
2"down her spine"
3"gloom"
4"perfect"
5"unreadable"
6"traced"
7"silence"
8"determined"
9"affection"
10"calculated"
11"velvet"
12"tension"
13"glinting"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount762
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora4
World1
Okayest1
Barrister1
Eva1
Lucien4
French1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"World"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the same thing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1177
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean19.95
std13.62
cv0.683
sampleLengths
071
114
230
36
444
516
649
76
830
912
1047
118
1223
1343
1427
1539
1627
179
188
1912
2013
2123
2226
2322
2427
2518
2610
2718
285
2912
3013
3118
3215
3340
3425
3518
3613
3733
3816
3911
4014
4127
4211
4312
4411
4544
4619
479
4829
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences120
ratio0.058
matches
0"She knocked aside an open book on demon linguistics, heart juddering, and snatched up the nearest heavy object—a chipped mug with faded cursive that spelled out World’s Okayest Barrister."
1"Not Eva’s knock—too rhythmic, too intentional."
2"One heterochromatic eye assessed her—amber, sly, alive."
3"She thought about arguing the point—dignity, boundaries, the entire lexicon of ex-lovers who know the shape of each other’s sharp bits."
4"His knuckles brushed her forearm—the scar—deliberate, like a confession."
5"A sharp crack cut through the tangled tension—a pane shuddered, glass scored by something metal on the fire escape."
6"It hissed—a sound halfway between prayer and threat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount775
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003870967741935484
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean9.81
std6.63
cv0.676
sampleLengths
013
129
229
38
46
515
68
73
84
96
107
119
1228
1310
146
1528
168
177
186
196
2010
2120
225
234
243
2515
2626
276
288
299
3014
316
3232
335
3411
3516
365
3727
387
3921
406
415
424
435
443
457
465
474
489
4918
58.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38333333333333336
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners46
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Instead, she pressed him with"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences79
matches
0"She knocked aside an open"
1"She edged the door open"
2"Her gaze shot to each"
3"She’d imagined it at her"
4"She let out her breath"
5"He stepped into the hall’s"
6"She sucked her teeth, hand"
7"She stood aside in a"
8"He barely glanced at the"
9"His gaze slid right to"
10"She set the mug down"
11"He made a soft, dismissive"
12"His scarf flared as he"
13"She flinched at the old"
14"He chuckled, low and knowing."
15"His hand swept over the"
16"She thought about arguing the"
17"She sat, instead, knees locked"
18"She laughed, short and hard."
19"She rolled her eyes."
ratio0.57
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"The clatter from behind the"
1"She knocked aside an open"
2"The cat bolted under the"
3"The knock came again, knuckles"
4"She edged the door open"
5"Her gaze shot to each"
6"Security layered, as always."
7"The voice sent a hot-cold"
8"She’d imagined it at her"
9"She let out her breath"
10"He stepped into the hall’s"
11"The ivory-handled cane tap-tapped once"
12"The other, black as pitch,"
13"She sucked her teeth, hand"
14"Something in his mouth twitched."
15"She stood aside in a"
16"He barely glanced at the"
17"His gaze slid right to"
18"The air contracted between them,"
19"She set the mug down"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The cat bolted under the sofa as she crept forward, breathing sharp in her ears, trying to keep her footsteps masked by the rattle of curry house pans downstair…"
1"He stepped into the hall’s sodium gloom, impeccable in his usual charcoal suit, platinum hair swept back as if not a single perfect strand would dare betray him…"
2"She thought about arguing the point—dignity, boundaries, the entire lexicon of ex-lovers who know the shape of each other’s sharp bits."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She flexed, the crescent scar itching"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.085
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.043
79.2418%