| 96.55% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's voice drifted around [around]" | | 1 | "Isolde answered simultaneously [simultaneously]" | | 2 | "they said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.107 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 81.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "synchronized" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1361 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.80% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 998 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 13 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 2 | | London | 3 | | Aurora | 20 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Keeper | 8 | | Keepers | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Keeper" | | 5 | "Keepers" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.498 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "path that seemed to form itself beneath their feet" | | 1 | "not quite human, not quite animal" | | 2 | "not quite animal" | | 3 | "material that seemed to shift between leather and liquid metal" | | 4 | "felt like walking on clouds" | | 5 | "as if holding their breath" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.735 | | wordCount | 1361 | | matches | | 0 | "not tearing like the Veil, but unfolding like origami" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.81% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 25.68 | | std | 12.01 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow sliding through the tear as if it were merely walking through a doorway, while Isolde's passage made no sound at all, her feet never quite touching the ground." | | 1 | "The Fae Grove stretched out like a fever dream—a forest cathedral where massive trees twisted upward, their trunks wider than London flats." | | 2 | "The forest floor was carpeted with flowers that should never bloom together—snow-white lilies nestled against summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums twined with spring daffodils." | | 3 | "Between the branches, faces appeared and disappeared—not quite human, not quite animal." | | 4 | "Instead, each stone showed different images—landscapes that shifted and changed as Aurora approached." | | 5 | "The ground beneath her feet changed with each step—first soft grass, then sand, then something that felt like walking on clouds." | | 6 | "\"We're not here for Dymas,\" Aurora reminded them, touching the small crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit." | | 7 | "The air split open—not tearing like the Veil, but unfolding like origami." | | 8 | "Aurora squinted, making out only vague impressions—one tall and reed-thin, one broad-shouldered and massive, one child-sized but somehow radiating the most authority." | | 9 | "Images formed within—London streets Aurora recognized, but with shadowy tears hovering in the air." | | 10 | "Through these tears, hands reached out—long-fingered, elegant, but wrong somehow." | | 11 | "The smallest Keeper placed something on the crystal surface—a small stone that resembled Aurora's pendant but in midnight blue rather than crimson." |
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| 98.86% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1017 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04129793510324484 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01376597836774828 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 12.04 | | std | 5.79 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 67.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.45132743362831856 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 41.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, each stone showed different" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow" | | 1 | "It pulsed with unusual warmth" | | 2 | "Their bark shimmered with veins" | | 3 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 4 | "She placed her hand on" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes scanned the" | | 6 | "Their voice carried an unusual" | | 7 | "she asked, drawing the Fae-Forged" | | 8 | "they said simply" |
| | ratio | 0.113 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the Veil," | | 1 | "Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her hand instinctively" | | 3 | "It pulsed with unusual warmth" | | 4 | "Isolde observed, her silver hair" | | 5 | "The landscape before them bore" | | 6 | "The Fae Grove stretched out" | | 7 | "Their bark shimmered with veins" | | 8 | "Aurora whispered, her breath visible" | | 9 | "Nyx's voice drifted around them," | | 10 | "Aurora tucked a strand of" | | 11 | "The forest floor was carpeted" | | 12 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "The wildflowers parted before them," | | 15 | "Isolde pointed toward what appeared" | | 16 | "Aurora felt the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 17 | "She placed her hand on" | | 18 | "Nyx whispered, their shadowy form" | | 19 | "Their violet eyes scanned the" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow sliding through the tear as if it were merely walking through a doorway, while Isolde's passage made no sound at a…" | | 1 | "The forest floor was carpeted with flowers that should never bloom together—snow-white lilies nestled against summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums twined with sp…" | | 2 | "They moved deeper into the forest, following a path that seemed to form itself beneath their feet." | | 3 | "Instead, each stone showed different images—landscapes that shifted and changed as Aurora approached." | | 4 | "The ground beneath her feet changed with each step—first soft grass, then sand, then something that felt like walking on clouds." | | 5 | "Isolde approached the crystal table, her hands hovering above its surface without touching it." | | 6 | "The clearing grew darker, the bioluminescent flowers dimming as if holding their breath." | | 7 | "The smallest Keeper placed something on the crystal surface—a small stone that resembled Aurora's pendant but in midnight blue rather than crimson." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her hand instinctively moving to the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx's voice drifted around, their shadowy form condensing and expanding with each syllable" | | 2 | "said the smallest one, their voice sounding like several people speaking in perfect harmony" | | 3 | "Nyx added, their form growing more solid with tension" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 5 | "she warned (warn)" | | 6 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" | | 8 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 9 | "Nyx added (add)" | | 10 | "the tall Keeper announced (announce)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.362 | | leniency | 0.724 | | rawRatio | 0.524 | | effectiveRatio | 0.379 | |