Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKHF1NQ1MEX4RSFSB21D4

Run Details

Duration:
43.3s
Cost:
$0.037395
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the Veil, the air shivering around her like disturbed water. Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow sliding through the tear as if it were merely walking through a doorway, while Isolde's passage made no sound at all, her feet never quite touching the ground. "Is everyone alright?" Aurora asked, her hand instinctively moving to the Heartstone Pendant. It pulsed with unusual warmth against her skin, its crimson center glowing brighter than she'd ever seen. "The Veil is exceptionally thin here," Isolde observed, her silver hair floating as if underwater despite the lack of breeze. "Winter solstice approaches. We must be cautious." The landscape before them bore little resemblance to the Richmond Park they'd left behind. The Fae Grove stretched out like a fever dream—a forest cathedral where massive trees twisted upward, their trunks wider than London flats. Their bark shimmered with veins of luminescent blue, pulsing slowly like heartbeats. "This isn't what I expected," Aurora whispered, her breath visible as delicate frost patterns that lingered in the air before dissolving. "What were you expecting, little mortal?" Nyx's voice drifted around them, their shadowy form condensing and expanding with each syllable. "Stories of fairy circles and mushroom rings? The Grove is much older than human tales." Aurora tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, her bright blue eyes wide as she took in their surroundings. The forest floor was carpeted with flowers that should never bloom together—snow-white lilies nestled against summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums twined with spring daffodils. All pulsed with faint bioluminescence, casting rainbow shadows across the grove. "We should move," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes scanning the trees. "Time flows differently here. What feels like minutes could be hours outside the Grove—or days." They moved deeper into the forest, following a path that seemed to form itself beneath their feet. The wildflowers parted before them, then closed again behind like water healing a wound. "The standing stones should be ahead," Isolde pointed toward what appeared to be a clearing in the distance. "Ancient oak transmuted by old magic." Aurora felt the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip grow colder, the moonsilver metal almost painful against her skin even through the leather sheath. She placed her hand on its hilt, drawing comfort from its presence. "Something watches us," Nyx whispered, their shadowy form compressing into something more human-shaped, more solid. Their violet eyes scanned the canopy above. "Many somethings." Aurora looked up. Between the branches, faces appeared and disappeared—not quite human, not quite animal. Eyes blinked in synchronized patterns, following their progress through the Grove. "Fae Guardians," Isolde explained. "They mean no harm unless provoked." The clearing opened before them, revealing seven massive standing stones arranged in a perfect circle. Each stood at least fifteen feet tall, the wood polished to a mirror finish that reflected nothing of the forest around them. Instead, each stone showed different images—landscapes that shifted and changed as Aurora approached. "Don't touch them," Isolde warned. "Those are doorways to other parts of the Fae Realms. Some beautiful, some... less so." In the center of the circle sat a table carved from a single piece of crystal, its surface rippling like water though it remained solid. Atop it rested an ornate silver chalice and a book bound in material that seemed to shift between leather and liquid metal. "The Seeing Table," Isolde's voice dropped to reverence. "I never thought I'd see it again." Aurora approached carefully. The ground beneath her feet changed with each step—first soft grass, then sand, then something that felt like walking on clouds. "What is this place, Isolde? Really?" "A confluence point," the half-Fae answered, her silver hair lifting in an invisible current. "Where multiple realms brush against each other. The Fae Courts, Hel, your mortal world—all pressed together like pages in a book." Nyx moved to one of the standing stones, their shadowy form reflecting dozens of times within its surface. "This one leads to Dymas." Their voice carried an unusual edge. "I can smell the feasts. Feel the warmth." The stone showed rolling amber hills covered in vineyards and elaborate pavilions where figures danced in slow motion. Aurora's Heartstone Pendant throbbed almost painfully against her chest. "We're not here for Dymas," Aurora reminded them, touching the small crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit. "We need information about the Veil tears in London." Isolde approached the crystal table, her hands hovering above its surface without touching it. The book's cover rippled in response. "Knowledge has its price here," she warned. "The Fae do not give without taking." A sound like distant wind chimes filled the clearing, growing louder until it surrounded them. The flowers at their feet began to glow brighter, pulsing in rhythm with the sound. "They're coming," Isolde whispered. The air between the standing stones thickened, taking on a gossamer quality. Aurora felt pressure building in her ears, like descending too quickly in an airplane. "Who's coming?" she asked, drawing the Fae-Forged Blade. The dagger gleamed with moonlight though there was no moon visible through the canopy. "The Keepers," Nyx and Isolde answered simultaneously. The air split open—not tearing like the Veil, but unfolding like origami. Three figures stepped through, their forms too bright to look at directly. Aurora squinted, making out only vague impressions—one tall and reed-thin, one broad-shouldered and massive, one child-sized but somehow radiating the most authority. "Visitors," said the smallest one, their voice sounding like several people speaking in perfect harmony. "Rare to have a trinity—shadow, half-blood, and mortal." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. The Heartstone Pendant burned against her skin, and the Fae blade in her hand hummed with energy. "We seek knowledge," Isolde spoke, bowing deeply. "About the weakening Veil in London." The tallest Keeper circled them, moving without seeming to take steps. "Knowledge is precious here, half-blood. You were exiled for giving it away too freely." Isolde's face remained impassive, but Aurora saw pain flash in her lavender eyes. "The Veil tears are not natural," the broad Keeper said, their voice like stones grinding together. "Someone pulls from the other side." "Who?" Aurora asked, immediately regretting speaking as all three Keepers turned toward her. "The mortal speaks." The small Keeper approached, hovering rather than walking. "Curious. You carry Dymasian craft against your heart, yet Fae steel in your hand. Contradictions wrapped in human skin." Aurora stood her ground despite every instinct screaming to retreat. "The tears are appearing throughout London. People are disappearing. We need to know why." The Keepers exchanged glances, communicating without words. The clearing grew darker, the bioluminescent flowers dimming as if holding their breath. "Show her," the small Keeper finally said. "She carries the right tools, though she knows not why." The crystal table began to glow, its surface changing from solid to liquid. Images formed within—London streets Aurora recognized, but with shadowy tears hovering in the air. Through these tears, hands reached out—long-fingered, elegant, but wrong somehow. The images shifted to show a map of London, with tears forming a specific pattern. "A summoning circle," Nyx whispered, their violet eyes wide. "Someone's turning London into a gateway." "But to where?" Aurora asked, staring at the table. "Hel? The Fae Realms?" "Worse," the broad Keeper rumbled. "To what lies between." The table's surface suddenly boiled, the images dissolving into chaos. The smallest Keeper placed something on the crystal surface—a small stone that resembled Aurora's pendant but in midnight blue rather than crimson. "Balance," they said simply. "One opens, one closes. You'll need both." Aurora looked between her pendant and the new stone. "I don't understand." Isolde's expression had gone pale. "They're giving us a key, Aurora." "And a warning," Nyx added, their form growing more solid with tension. "Something comes through those tears. Something that shouldn't be here." The forest around them began to shift, the trees swaying without wind. The faces in the canopy multiplied, watching with increasing intensity. "Time grows short," the tall Keeper announced. "Take what's offered and depart. Return only when all doors are closed." The smallest Keeper gestured to the blue stone. "Take it, mortal. You now walk between worlds—might as well have the tools for the journey."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
96.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Nyx's voice drifted around [around]"
1"Isolde answered simultaneously [simultaneously]"
2"they said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.483
leniency0.966
rawRatio0.107
effectiveRatio0.103
81.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"quickly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"synchronized"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"crystal"
count4
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"shimmered"
3"scanning"
4"scanned"
5"synchronized"
6"perfect"
7"crystal"
8"throbbed"
9"tension"
10"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1361
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount998
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil2
Nyx7
Isolde13
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Richmond1
Park1
Fae5
Grove2
London3
Aurora20
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Keeper8
Keepers2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Pendant"
3"Aurora"
4"Keeper"
5"Keepers"
places
0"Veil"
1"Heartstone"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
6"London"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"path that seemed to form itself beneath their feet"
1"not quite human, not quite animal"
2"not quite animal"
3"material that seemed to shift between leather and liquid metal"
4"felt like walking on clouds"
5"as if holding their breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1361
matches
0"not tearing like the Veil, but unfolding like origami"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
90.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean25.68
std12.01
cv0.468
sampleLengths
046
130
227
348
421
535
655
727
831
924
1035
1124
1226
1310
1450
1520
1647
1715
1830
1935
2037
2127
2227
2334
2430
254
2626
2722
287
2946
3023
3123
3213
3325
3413
3522
3613
3730
3824
3920
4017
4152
4215
4313
449
4532
4611
4712
4811
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was carpeted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences113
ratio0.106
matches
0"Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow sliding through the tear as if it were merely walking through a doorway, while Isolde's passage made no sound at all, her feet never quite touching the ground."
1"The Fae Grove stretched out like a fever dream—a forest cathedral where massive trees twisted upward, their trunks wider than London flats."
2"The forest floor was carpeted with flowers that should never bloom together—snow-white lilies nestled against summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums twined with spring daffodils."
3"Between the branches, faces appeared and disappeared—not quite human, not quite animal."
4"Instead, each stone showed different images—landscapes that shifted and changed as Aurora approached."
5"The ground beneath her feet changed with each step—first soft grass, then sand, then something that felt like walking on clouds."
6"\"We're not here for Dymas,\" Aurora reminded them, touching the small crescent scar on her wrist—a nervous habit."
7"The air split open—not tearing like the Veil, but unfolding like origami."
8"Aurora squinted, making out only vague impressions—one tall and reed-thin, one broad-shouldered and massive, one child-sized but somehow radiating the most authority."
9"Images formed within—London streets Aurora recognized, but with shadowy tears hovering in the air."
10"Through these tears, hands reached out—long-fingered, elegant, but wrong somehow."
11"The smallest Keeper placed something on the crystal surface—a small stone that resembled Aurora's pendant but in midnight blue rather than crimson."
98.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04129793510324484
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01376597836774828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean12.04
std5.79
cv0.481
sampleLengths
013
133
213
317
420
57
614
722
812
921
1020
1115
1221
1323
1411
1512
1615
1717
1814
1918
206
2123
2212
2315
247
252
263
2712
2811
294
306
3115
3222
3313
345
3515
3625
3722
388
397
403
4121
426
4314
4421
4518
4611
478
4818
499
67.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.45132743362831856
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners51
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Instead, each stone showed different"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow"
1"It pulsed with unusual warmth"
2"Their bark shimmered with veins"
3"They moved deeper into the"
4"She placed her hand on"
5"Their violet eyes scanned the"
6"Their voice carried an unusual"
7"she asked, drawing the Fae-Forged"
8"they said simply"
ratio0.113
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences80
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the Veil,"
1"Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow"
2"Aurora asked, her hand instinctively"
3"It pulsed with unusual warmth"
4"Isolde observed, her silver hair"
5"The landscape before them bore"
6"The Fae Grove stretched out"
7"Their bark shimmered with veins"
8"Aurora whispered, her breath visible"
9"Nyx's voice drifted around them,"
10"Aurora tucked a strand of"
11"The forest floor was carpeted"
12"Isolde said, her pale lavender"
13"They moved deeper into the"
14"The wildflowers parted before them,"
15"Isolde pointed toward what appeared"
16"Aurora felt the Fae-Forged Blade"
17"She placed her hand on"
18"Nyx whispered, their shadowy form"
19"Their violet eyes scanned the"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Her companions followed—Nyx's formless shadow sliding through the tear as if it were merely walking through a doorway, while Isolde's passage made no sound at a…"
1"The forest floor was carpeted with flowers that should never bloom together—snow-white lilies nestled against summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums twined with sp…"
2"They moved deeper into the forest, following a path that seemed to form itself beneath their feet."
3"Instead, each stone showed different images—landscapes that shifted and changed as Aurora approached."
4"The ground beneath her feet changed with each step—first soft grass, then sand, then something that felt like walking on clouds."
5"Isolde approached the crystal table, her hands hovering above its surface without touching it."
6"The clearing grew darker, the bioluminescent flowers dimming as if holding their breath."
7"The smallest Keeper placed something on the crystal surface—a small stone that resembled Aurora's pendant but in midnight blue rather than crimson."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora asked, her hand instinctively moving to the Heartstone Pendant"
1"Nyx's voice drifted around, their shadowy form condensing and expanding with each syllable"
2"said the smallest one, their voice sounding like several people speaking in perfect harmony"
3"Nyx added, their form growing more solid with tension"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"Isolde observed (observe)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde explained (explain)"
4"Isolde warned (warn)"
5"she warned (warn)"
6"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
7"Isolde spoke (speak)"
8"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
9"Nyx added (add)"
10"the tall Keeper announced (announce)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.724
rawRatio0.524
effectiveRatio0.379
69.5282%