Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKJRB4CHPTGPPDHKEG1DK

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Duration:
36.3s
Cost:
$0.013048

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, the scent of fried garlic and soy sauce still clinging to her fingers. She leaned against the bar, scanning the room out of habit—old instincts die hard. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the windows, painting the faces of the patrons in shades of jade. Then she saw him. Evan stood near the jukebox, his back to her, fingers tapping against his thigh like he was counting seconds. The years had carved sharper angles into his face, the boyish softness she remembered replaced by something harder, leaner. His dark hair was shorter now, cropped close to his skull, and the leather jacket he wore looked expensive, the kind that didn’t crease when you moved. Her stomach twisted. She should’ve left. Slipped out the back, pretended she hadn’t seen him. But her feet stayed rooted to the floor, her pulse thrumming in her throat. Evan turned. His eyes locked onto hers, and for a second, neither of them moved. Then his mouth curved into something that wasn’t quite a smile. “Rory.” His voice was the same—low, smooth, the kind that used to make her stomach flutter. Now it just made her skin prickle. She crossed her arms. “What are you doing here?” “Same as you, I imagine.” He gestured to the bar. “Drinking. Avoiding my life.” She exhaled through her nose. “You don’t drink.” “People change.” “Not that much.” He stepped closer, close enough that she caught the scent of him—cedar and something sharp, like gun oil. “You look good.” “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” “Don’t do that.” She turned away, busying herself with straightening a stack of coasters. “You don’t get to show up after four years and act like we’re catching up over coffee.” Evan leaned against the bar, his shoulder brushing hers. She didn’t flinch. She wouldn’t give him the satisfaction. “You’re still here,” he said. “Working for Silas.” “It’s a job.” “It’s beneath you.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “Says the man who used to tell me I was wasting my potential.” “You were.” “And now?” He studied her, his gaze lingering on the crescent scar on her wrist. “Now I think you’re exactly where you want to be.” The words hit too close. She grabbed a rag and scrubbed at a nonexistent stain on the counter. “You don’t know what I want.” “No?” He reached out, his fingers hovering just above her wrist before dropping away. “You used to tell me everything.” “That was before.” “Before what?” She met his eyes. “Before you decided I was more trouble than I was worth.” Silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. The jukebox switched to an old jazz record, the saxophone wailing like a ghost. Evan rubbed his jaw. “I deserved that.” “You think?” “I was an idiot.” “Past tense?” She raised an eyebrow. “You’ve changed that much?” He didn’t answer. Instead, he nodded toward the back of the bar. “Can we talk? Somewhere quieter.” She hesitated. The last time she’d followed him into a back room, it hadn’t ended well. But curiosity gnawed at her. “Fine. But I’m not staying long.” The hidden door behind the bookshelf creaked as Evan pushed it open. The secret room was exactly as she remembered—dim, windowless, the air thick with the scent of aged paper and whiskey. A single lamp cast long shadows across the walls. Rory leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. “So. Talk.” Evan paced, his hands flexing at his sides. “I heard about what happened. With your parents.” She stiffened. “Who told you?” “Does it matter?” “Yes.” He stopped, his hazel eyes locking onto hers. “Silas mentioned it. In passing.” “Of course he did.” She pushed off the doorframe, her boots thudding against the wooden floor. “That man can’t keep his mouth shut to save his life.” “He cares about you.” “He’s nosy.” Evan smirked. “That too.” She exhaled, rubbing her temples. “What do you want, Evan? Really?” He hesitated, then reached into his jacket. Rory tensed, but all he pulled out was a folded piece of paper. He held it out to her. She didn’t take it. “What’s that?” “A job offer.” She laughed. “You’re joking.” “It’s legitimate. High-paying. Safe.” “Safe?” She snatched the paper from his hand, unfolding it with sharp, jerky movements. The letterhead was sleek, embossed with a logo she didn’t recognize. “Since when do you care about safe?” “Since I realized how much I fucked up.” She looked up, her fingers tightening around the paper. “You don’t get to say that.” “Why not?” “Because it’s too late.” He stepped closer, his voice dropping. “It’s never too late.” She wanted to believe him. God, she wanted to. But the past four years had taught her otherwise. “You left, Evan. You walked away when things got hard. And now you waltz back in here like nothing happened?” “I made a mistake.” “A mistake?” She crumpled the paper in her fist. “You broke my wrist. You called me a liar. You told me I was imagining things. That’s not a mistake. That’s a pattern.” His jaw tightened. “I know.” “Do you?” “I do now.” She shook her head, turning away. “I don’t need your apologies. I don’t need your job offers. I don’t need you.” “Rory—” “No.” She whirled back around, her voice shaking. “You don’t get to come back here and act like you’re the one who’s been wronged. You don’t get to play the hero after everything you did.” Evan’s face darkened. “I never said I was a hero.” “Then what are you?” He was silent for a long moment. Then, quietly: “I’m trying to be better.” She wanted to scream. She wanted to hit him. She wanted to walk away and never look back. But she just stood there, her chest heaving, the crumpled paper digging into her palm. The lamp flickered, casting his face in shadow. “I’m not asking for forgiveness,” he said. “I’m asking for a chance.” She opened her mouth, but no words came out. The weight of the past four years pressed down on her, heavy and suffocating. She thought of all the nights she’d lain awake, wondering if she’d ever feel safe again. She thought of the way her parents had looked at her when she’d finally told them the truth—disappointment, pity, the quiet horror of realizing their daughter had been broken by someone they’d trusted. She thought of Silas, of the way he’d taken her in without question, given her a job, a place to stay, a purpose. She thought of the girl she’d been before Evan—bright-eyed, ambitious, unafraid. And then she thought of the woman she was now. She smoothed out the crumpled paper, her fingers trembling. “What’s the job?” Evan’s eyes flickered with something like hope. “Security consulting. For a private firm.” “Doing what?” “Bodyguard work. Risk assessment. The kind of thing you’re good at.” She scoffed. “I deliver takeout.” “You’re smarter than that.” “And you’re still a liar.” He flinched. “I deserve that.” She folded the paper again, tucking it into her pocket. “I’ll think about it.” “That’s all I’m asking.” She nodded toward the door. “You should go.” He hesitated, then turned to leave. At the threshold, he paused. “For what it’s worth… I’m sorry.” She didn’t answer. The door clicked shut behind him. Rory stood in the dim room, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The silence pressed in around her, thick and oppressive. She pressed her fingers to her temples, her mind racing. Then she pulled the crumpled paper from her pocket and smoothed it out one last time. The ink blurred under the lamplight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She turned away [away]"
1"She whirled back [back]"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.119
leniency0.238
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.048
96.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"potential"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"stomach"
2"pulse"
3"potential"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"flickered"
7"weight"
8"oppressive"
9"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences171
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1288
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount871
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Evan10
Silas1
Rory4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.926
windowScore1
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite a smile"
1"something like hope"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1288
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean13.56
std14.2
cv1.047
sampleLengths
071
14
265
33
426
526
61
722
89
914
108
112
123
1321
141
152
1631
1718
188
193
203
2118
222
232
2423
2524
2620
273
282
2915
3021
317
322
334
3410
3517
3627
3741
389
3916
405
413
421
4313
4427
454
462
474
4811
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"been broken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was counting"
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences171
ratio0.035
matches
0"She leaned against the bar, scanning the room out of habit—old instincts die hard."
1"His voice was the same—low, smooth, the kind that used to make her stomach flutter."
2"He stepped closer, close enough that she caught the scent of him—cedar and something sharp, like gun oil."
3"The secret room was exactly as she remembered—dim, windowless, the air thick with the scent of aged paper and whiskey."
4"She thought of the way her parents had looked at her when she’d finally told them the truth—disappointment, pity, the quiet horror of realizing their daughter had been broken by someone they’d trusted."
5"She thought of the girl she’d been before Evan—bright-eyed, ambitious, unafraid."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount878
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03416856492027335
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004555808656036446
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences171
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences171
mean7.53
std5.82
cv0.773
sampleLengths
015
120
214
322
44
519
619
727
83
93
109
1114
122
1313
1411
151
1615
177
184
195
2010
214
225
233
242
253
2618
273
281
292
3014
3117
329
333
346
355
363
373
383
395
4013
412
422
4313
4410
455
4613
476
4814
496
42.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.28654970760233917
totalSentences171
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then his mouth curved into"
2"Instead, he nodded toward the"
3"Then she pulled the crumpled"
ratio0.045
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences88
matches
0"She leaned against the bar,"
1"His dark hair was shorter"
2"Her stomach twisted."
3"She should’ve left."
4"His eyes locked onto hers,"
5"His voice was the same—low,"
6"She crossed her arms."
7"He gestured to the bar"
8"She exhaled through her nose."
9"He stepped closer, close enough"
10"She turned away, busying herself"
11"She didn’t flinch."
12"She wouldn’t give him the"
13"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
14"He studied her, his gaze"
15"She grabbed a rag and"
16"He reached out, his fingers"
17"She met his eyes."
18"She raised an eyebrow"
19"He didn’t answer."
ratio0.557
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences88
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"She leaned against the bar,"
3"The green neon sign outside"
4"Evan stood near the jukebox,"
5"The years had carved sharper"
6"His dark hair was shorter"
7"Her stomach twisted."
8"She should’ve left."
9"His eyes locked onto hers,"
10"His voice was the same—low,"
11"She crossed her arms."
12"He gestured to the bar"
13"She exhaled through her nose."
14"He stepped closer, close enough"
15"She turned away, busying herself"
16"Evan leaned against the bar,"
17"She didn’t flinch."
18"She wouldn’t give him the"
19"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
ratio0.864
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now it just made her"
ratio0.011
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Evan stood near the jukebox, his back to her, fingers tapping against his thigh like he was counting seconds."
1"His voice was the same—low, smooth, the kind that used to make her stomach flutter."
2"But she just stood there, her chest heaving, the crumpled paper digging into her palm."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He reached out, his fingers hovering just above her wrist before dropping away"
1"She pushed, her boots thudding against the wooden floor"
2"She whirled back, her voice shaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7651%