Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKRQ5571075AJYH8EG4Z9

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The cold wind skimmed over Aurora Carter's skin, its chill seeping through the fabric of her hoodie as she stepped into the Fae Grove. The ancient standing stones that marked its boundary loomed in the gathering darkness, gnarled shadows that seemed to whisper secrets to those who dared to venture past their watch. An eerie stillness cloaked the grove, broken only by the occasional thunk of her boots against the forest floor. She flicked her eyes around, taking in the bloom of wildflowers that stood vibrant even under the modest cover of night. Why am I here? Rory thought to herself, clutching the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. Its faint warmth offered a ripple of solace against the biting cold. Eva's words echoed in her head, urging her to investigate the soft crimson gem and its peculiar properties. "Here, in Richmond Park? You better not be joking, Eva," Rory muttered to herself, stepping gingerly between the eerie masses of oak. Eva had been adamant that Rory explore the grove, convinced the pendant held some murky connection to the fae-touched land. Rory had agreed, despite the unease gnawing at her when she contemplated the trip. Time behaved oddly within the grove, an unsettling notion Rory could already sense. Her breath sawed in and out of her chest, the rhythm slightly off, like her body danced to an unseen beat foreign to that of her own world. She halted abruptly, the soft murmur of leaves rustling against the inner-boundary of the grove sounding less like nature’s symphony and more like a conspiratorial hush between unseen creatures. She squinted into the dimly lit grove. Did something move? Just beyond the reach of her vision, something slithered out of sight. The pendant pulsed in the hollow of her throat, its inner glow casting faint crimson light on her fingers as she gripped it. Rory scanned the grove once more, her eyes straining to think she might catch another glimpse of movement. A twig snapped. She jolted, spinning to her right. Nothing but encroaching darkness and tendrils of mist seeping through the spaces between trees. “Hello?” Rory's voice wavered as she called out, betraying the collected demeanor she prided herself on. No answer came, only the whispering winds carrying her words deeper into the grove where they dissolved into nothingness. Her instincts flared – this place was all wrong. She reconsidered her plan to leave. Yet, curiosity and a nagging sense of unfinished purpose rooted her to the spot. This couldn't all be for nothing. There was something here, something the pendant meant to show her. She trudged onward, her footfalls muffled by old moss and fallen leaves. Shadows thickened, poured over each other like liquid darkness, concealing whatever lurked within the depths. Each step seemed to stretch time, minutes bleeding into hours, dread intertwining itself into thoughts, pricking like anxious needles. Every so often she paused, heart hammering, tense muscles strung tight as a bowstring, and scanned her surroundings. She couldn’t shake the sensation of being watched, an unfathomable gaze tracking her movements through the grove. Once or twice she could've sworn she heard the soft patter of feet trailing behind her, always stopping just as she turned her head. “Eva better have a damn good explanation,” Rory muttered, pressing deeper into the grove. As she went, the once-vivid wildflowers seemed to take on a more morose, wilting character, petals drooping as she passed. Dread pooled in her gut, yet her steps didn’t falter. Another whisper of movement at the edge of her vision. Rory willed herself not to look. Instead, she pressed on, focusing on the faint warmth and pulse from her pendant, letting it guide her through the encroaching dark. A shuffle of fabric against bark. A breath too quickly retracted. With a steely resolve, Rory flicked a glance to her left. There it was again - a flicker of movement, too swift to be natural. The remaining light cast devilish forms among the trees, their branches transforming under her fraught gaze into skeletal hands. She picked up her pace, boots scraping the earth with determined ferocity. Every nerve in her body screamed at her, pulse racing in concert with her rising panic. A soft chuckle. Rory stopped dead, her eyes wide and breath ragged as she scanned the grove. The laughter was neither close nor distant, yet it sent ice dripping down her spine. She clenched her fists, keeping the warmth of the pendant close to her palm, a flicker of sanity in the growing madness. “Who's there?” she demanded, forcing strength into her voice. “If you think this is funny, you’re mistaken!” Silence answered her – thick, oppressive, swallowing her words whole. She resumed her march, teeth grit as she focused on nothing but the path in front of her and the promise of finding an exit. A shriek pierced the air, high-pitched and blood-chilling. Rory bolted, adrenaline coursing through her veins, urging her to go faster, escape the unseen predator. Her feet struck the ground in rapid succession, heartbeat roaring in her ears. Minutes felt like hours in the time-warped grove. She sprinted past ancient oaks and wilted flowers, the malaise of the clearing closing in tighter with every step. The laughter came again, this time closer. Rory veered wildly, disoriented in the labyrinthine grove and its shifting shadows. The pendant's glow intensified, painting her path in a ghostly red. It pulled her, guiding her around bends and through dense clutches of trees with instinctive precision. She burst through the foliage, nearly colliding with the standing stones that marked the boundary. Chest heaving, she stumbled against one of the ancient oaks, the bark rough beneath her trembling hands. The warmth from her pendant ebbed, the crimson glow fading as she crossed the threshold and left the grove behind. Rory glanced back at the grove, the terror within finally setting into shaking realization. Whatever inhabited Isolde's grove was far more malevolent than she'd anticipated. She pressed a hand against the pulsing pendant and vowed that answers would be found, but not tonight. Tonight, she would regroup and try to make sense of the darkness she had escaped. The wind howled through the grove behind her, a feral wail that followed Rory as she made her way out of the park, reluctantly returning to the safety of her familiar world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1062
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1062
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count4
5
word"solace"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"symphony"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count3
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count2
16
word"determined"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"silence"
count1
20
word"oppressive"
count1
21
word"chilling"
count1
22
word"predator"
count1
23
word"roaring"
count1
24
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"loomed"
2"whisper"
3"flicked"
4"warmth"
5"solace"
6"echoed"
7"symphony"
8"pulsed"
9"scanned"
10"wavered"
11"sense of"
12"depths"
13"pulse"
14"resolve"
15"flicker"
16"determined"
17"racing"
18"down her spine"
19"silence"
20"oppressive"
21"chilling"
22"predator"
23"roaring"
24"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
43.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1059
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1031
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Eva2
Rory15
Silence1
Isolde1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
5"Silence"
6"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.773
windowScore0.833
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to whisper secrets to those who dared to venture past their watch"
1"felt like hours in the time-warped grov"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.944
wordCount1059
matches
0"neither close nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"vowed that answers"
54.45% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean44.13
std15.03
cv0.341
sampleLengths
093
145
256
341
451
541
623
735
846
946
1059
1144
1238
1355
1428
1554
1617
1735
1845
1938
2027
2152
2258
2332
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
25.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences73
ratio0.041
matches
0"Her instincts flared – this place was all wrong."
1"There it was again - a flicker of movement, too swift to be natural."
2"Silence answered her – thick, oppressive, swallowing her words whole."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.033849129593810444
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013539651837524178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean14.51
std6.58
cv0.454
sampleLengths
024
129
219
321
44
511
612
718
822
920
1014
1113
1228
1329
147
153
1612
1723
1818
193
206
2114
2216
2319
249
256
2614
276
2811
2912
3015
3119
3218
3317
3424
3514
3620
3710
3810
396
4022
416
425
4311
4414
4519
4612
4716
483
4914
78.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4931506849315068
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Just beyond the reach of"
1"Once or twice she could've"
2"Instead, she pressed on, focusing"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences72
matches
0"She flicked her eyes around,"
1"Its faint warmth offered a"
2"Her breath sawed in and"
3"She halted abruptly, the soft"
4"She squinted into the dimly"
5"She jolted, spinning to her"
6"Her instincts flared – this"
7"She reconsidered her plan to"
8"She trudged onward, her footfalls"
9"She couldn’t shake the sensation"
10"She picked up her pace,"
11"She clenched her fists, keeping"
12"she demanded, forcing strength into"
13"She resumed her march, teeth"
14"Her feet struck the ground"
15"She sprinted past ancient oaks"
16"It pulled her, guiding her"
17"She burst through the foliage,"
18"She pressed a hand against"
ratio0.264
36.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences72
matches
0"The cold wind skimmed over"
1"The ancient standing stones that"
2"An eerie stillness cloaked the"
3"She flicked her eyes around,"
4"Rory thought to herself, clutching"
5"Its faint warmth offered a"
6"Eva's words echoed in her"
7"Rory muttered to herself, stepping"
8"Eva had been adamant that"
9"Rory had agreed, despite the"
10"Time behaved oddly within the"
11"Her breath sawed in and"
12"She halted abruptly, the soft"
13"She squinted into the dimly"
14"The pendant pulsed in the"
15"Rory scanned the grove once"
16"A twig snapped."
17"She jolted, spinning to her"
18"Nothing but encroaching darkness and"
19"Rory's voice wavered as she"
ratio0.847
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Yet, curiosity and a nagging"
ratio0.014
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She flicked her eyes around, taking in the bloom of wildflowers that stood vibrant even under the modest cover of night."
1"Instead, she pressed on, focusing on the faint warmth and pulse from her pendant, letting it guide her through the encroaching dark."
2"Every nerve in her body screamed at her, pulse racing in concert with her rising panic."
3"Rory bolted, adrenaline coursing through her veins, urging her to go faster, escape the unseen predator."
4"The wind howled through the grove behind her, a feral wail that followed Rory as she made her way out of the park, reluctantly returning to the safety of her fa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory's voice wavered (waver)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
80.7146%