Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKXD1FWQ7PVDPCPSSY5XA

Run Details

Duration:
25.1s
Cost:
$0.014637
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, and the soft strains of a jazz tune playing from an old jukebox in the corner. The dim lighting cast long shadows across the walls, where old maps and black-and-white photographs hung like silent witnesses to the stories unfolding below. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, slipped through the crowd with the ease of someone who had spent countless nights navigating the bar's labyrinthine layout. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, searching for a familiar face. She found him at the far end of the bar, nursing a drink and staring into the middle distance. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner and her mentor, stood behind the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light as he moved. Rory approached, her heart skipping a beat as she recognized the man sitting at the bar. "Rory?" The voice was deeper than she remembered, but the surprise in it was unmistakable. "Evan," she replied, her voice steady despite the sudden rush of memories. "It's been a while." Evan turned to face her, his eyes widening in recognition. He looked different—older, more worn. His once-boyish features had hardened, and there was a new tension in his posture, as if he carried an invisible weight on his shoulders. "Yeah, it has," he said, a hint of a smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "You look... well." Rory nodded, unsure of what to say. The last time they'd seen each other, things had ended badly. She'd left Cardiff and the life they shared behind, seeking refuge in London and the anonymity it offered. Now, standing before him, she felt the years stretch between them like a chasm. Silas, ever perceptive, approached with a knowing look. "Can I get you two something?" he asked, his voice smooth and unhurried. "I'll have a pint," Evan said, glancing at Rory. "And whatever she's having." "Just a soda for me," Rory replied, her eyes meeting Silas's for a brief moment. He nodded, understanding the unspoken request for space, and moved away to prepare their drinks. "So," Evan began, turning back to her. "What brings you to London?" Rory hesitated, the question loaded with implications. "Work, mostly. Needed a change of scenery." "Right," Evan said, his gaze dropping to the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "I heard you were working at a restaurant." "Part-time," she confirmed, resisting the urge to cover the scar with her other hand. "It's not glamorous, but it pays the bills." Silas returned with their drinks, setting them down with a nod before retreating to the other end of the bar. Rory took a sip of her soda, the bubbles fizzing against her tongue. "And you?" she asked, her curiosity getting the better of her. "What have you been up to?" Evan shrugged, a shadow passing over his features. "This and that. Moved around a bit. Ended up back in Cardiff for a while, but it didn't stick." Rory nodded, sensing the unspoken stories behind his words. "It's good to see you," she said, surprising herself with the sincerity of the statement. "Yeah," Evan replied, his voice softer now. "You too." They fell into a silence, the noise of the bar filling the space between them. Rory studied him, noting the lines etched into his face, the way his hands gripped the glass as if it were a lifeline. She wondered what had brought him here, to this bar, on this night. "Do you ever think about the old days?" Evan asked suddenly, his eyes meeting hers with an intensity that made her heart skip. "Sometimes," Rory admitted, the memories flooding back. "It feels like a lifetime ago." "It does," he agreed, his voice tinged with regret. "I was a different person back then." "We both were," Rory said, the words hanging in the air like a truth neither could deny. Evan nodded, his gaze dropping to the bar. "I made a lot of mistakes," he said, his voice barely audible over the din. "I hurt you." Rory felt a pang of old hurt, the scars of their past still tender beneath the surface. "We were young," she said, choosing her words carefully. "We didn't know any better." "Still," Evan insisted, his eyes searching hers for something she couldn't quite name. "I'm sorry, Rory. For everything." She took a deep breath, the weight of his apology settling over her like a heavy cloak. "I appreciate that," she said, her voice steady. "But we've both moved on. We're different people now." "Yeah," Evan said, a hint of a smile returning to his lips. "I guess we are." They lapsed into silence again, the tension between them easing into something more comfortable. Rory felt a sense of closure, the ghosts of their past finally laid to rest. "Do you think we could be friends?" Evan asked, his tone hopeful. Rory considered the question, the possibilities it held. "I think we could try," she said, a small smile playing at her lips. Evan returned her smile, the years of distance and regret fading away. "I'd like that," he said, raising his glass in a silent toast. Rory clinked her glass against his, the sound ringing out like a promise. As they sat together, the noise of the bar fading into the background, she felt a sense of peace she hadn't known she needed. Silas watched from the other end of the bar, a satisfied smile on his lips. The Raven's Nest had seen many stories unfold within its walls, but this one felt different—like the beginning of something new.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:01.541Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:01 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Evan asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.585
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
89.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount945
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount945
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"navigating"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"tinged"
count1
10
word"pang"
count1
11
word"comfortable"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count2
highlights
0"navigating"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"tension"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"silence"
7"etched"
8"intensity"
9"tinged"
10"pang"
11"comfortable"
12"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences59
matches
0"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords938
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount759
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory15
Blackwood1
Evan12
Cardiff1
London1
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.512
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
93.39% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.066
wordCount938
matches
0"not glamorous, but it pays the bills"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean26.8
std16.15
cv0.603
sampleLengths
093
157
215
316
439
520
650
721
813
930
1012
1114
1221
1322
1433
1517
1627
1724
189
1951
2023
2113
2216
2317
2426
2531
2618
2734
2816
2929
3012
3122
3224
3337
3436
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
67.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences76
ratio0.026
matches
0"He looked different—older, more worn."
1"The Raven's Nest had seen many stories unfold within its walls, but this one felt different—like the beginning of something new."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02091503267973856
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006535947712418301
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean12.34
std6.14
cv0.497
sampleLengths
030
124
227
312
419
522
616
715
812
94
1010
115
1224
1317
143
157
1611
1718
1814
198
2013
219
224
2315
2415
257
265
277
287
2913
308
3114
328
3320
3413
3511
366
378
3819
399
4015
417
422
4315
4423
4513
4623
477
486
499
59.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.39473684210526316
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences59
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
1"She found him at the"
2"she replied, her voice steady"
3"He looked different—older, more worn."
4"His once-boyish features had hardened,"
5"he said, a hint of"
6"She'd left Cardiff and the"
7"he asked, his voice smooth"
8"He nodded, understanding the unspoken"
9"she confirmed, resisting the urge"
10"she asked, her curiosity getting"
11"she said, surprising herself with"
12"They fell into a silence,"
13"She wondered what had brought"
14"he agreed, his voice tinged"
15"he said, his voice barely"
16"she said, choosing her words"
17"She took a deep breath,"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"They lapsed into silence again,"
ratio0.373
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences59
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The dim lighting cast long"
2"Aurora Carter, known to her"
3"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
4"She found him at the"
5"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner"
6"Rory approached, her heart skipping"
7"The voice was deeper than"
8"she replied, her voice steady"
9"Evan turned to face her,"
10"He looked different—older, more worn."
11"His once-boyish features had hardened,"
12"he said, a hint of"
13"Rory nodded, unsure of what"
14"The last time they'd seen"
15"She'd left Cardiff and the"
16"Silas, ever perceptive, approached with"
17"he asked, his voice smooth"
18"Evan said, glancing at Rory"
19"Rory replied, her eyes meeting"
ratio0.966
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Now, standing before him, she"
ratio0.017
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, slipped through the crowd with the ease of someone who had spent countless nights navigating the bar's labyrinthine…"
1"His once-boyish features had hardened, and there was a new tension in his posture, as if he carried an invisible weight on his shoulders."
2"Silas returned with their drinks, setting them down with a nod before retreating to the other end of the bar."
3"Rory studied him, noting the lines etched into his face, the way his hands gripped the glass as if it were a lifeline."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady despite the sudden rush of memories"
1"he asked, his voice smooth and unhurried"
2"she asked, her curiosity getting the better of her"
3"Evan replied, his voice softer now"
4"he said, his voice barely audible over the din"
5"she said, her voice steady"
6"Evan said, a hint of a smile returning to his lips"
7"Evan asked, his tone hopeful"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she confirmed (confirm)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
2"he agreed (agree)"
3"Evan insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.537
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
77.2452%