Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRM09ZBMQ0E0B6JSYTX74G

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Duration:
13.2s
Cost:
$0.003226
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was unusually quiet for a Friday night. Most of the regulars had already stumbled home, leaving behind a smattering of patrons nursing their drinks in the dimly lit corners. Silas Blackwood surveyed the room from his usual spot at the end of the bar, his hazel eyes scanning the shadows. The familiar creak of the door drew his attention, and he watched as a slender figure slipped inside, pulling a battered leather jacket tighter against the chill. "Rory?" The name left Silas' lips before he could stop it, a hint of surprise colouring his low, gravelly voice. Aurora Carter froze, her bright blue eyes widening as they landed on the tall, grey-haired man. For a moment, she was that same twenty-year-old girl who had stumbled into his bar all those years ago, terrified and alone. But the years had hardened her, carving sharp angles where there had once been soft curves. "Silas." Her voice was steady, guarded. She moved towards the bar, sliding onto a stool a few seats down from him. "Been a while." "That it has." Silas studied her, the wheels in his mind turning. "What brings you back to London?" Rory shrugged, her gaze flicking to the rows of liquor bottles behind the bar. "Work, mostly. And..." She paused, her brow furrowing slightly. "I guess I needed a change of scenery." Silas nodded, understanding the unspoken weight of her words. He poured a generous measure of whisky into a tumbler and slid it across the bar towards her. "On the house." Rory's lips curved into a faint smile as she accepted the glass, her fingers curling around the cool surface. "Thanks." They lapsed into silence, the only sound the quiet clinking of glass as Rory took a sip. Silas watched her, noting the changes time had wrought. The straight, shoulder-length black hair he remembered had been replaced by a shorter, choppier style, the faint silver streaks at her temples a stark contrast. Her face, once open and expressive, now bore a guarded, almost hardened edge. "You look well," Silas finally said, breaking the stillness. Rory's eyes flicked up to meet his, a hint of amusement dancing in their depths. "Funny. I was just thinking the same thing about you." Silas chuckled, the sound low and rumbling. "Well, it's been a while since you've graced these halls. Can't say I'm not a little surprised to see you." "I'm sure you are." Rory took another sip of her whisky, the liquid amber catching the soft light. "Thought I'd left this city behind for good, didn't you?" Silas shook his head, the ghost of a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "Didn't think you had it in you to stay away for long." Rory's lips curved into a wry smile. "Guess you know me better than I know myself." She paused, her gaze drifting towards the grimy windows. "Still, it's been a long time. A lot's changed." "That it has." Silas followed her gaze, his own thoughts drifting back to the past. "You always did have a way of finding trouble, Rory." Rory's eyes narrowed, a hint of steel in her voice. "I seem to recall you being the one who dragged me into it." Silas inclined his head, conceding the point. "Perhaps. But you never seemed to mind too much at the time." Rory's lips thinned, the muscle in her jaw twitching. "A lot's changed since then, Silas. I'm not that same naive kid anymore." Silas studied her, noting the subtle shifts in her demeanour. "So I see." He paused, his gaze searching her face. "What happened, Rory?" Rory's grip tightened around the glass, her knuckles turning white. "Life, I suppose. Things...didn't go as planned." Silas nodded slowly, understanding dawning in his eyes. "I see." He poured himself a measure of whisky, the amber liquid swirling as he lifted the glass to his lips. "We all have our demons, don't we?" Rory's gaze flickered to the scar on her left wrist, the faint crescent-shaped mark a stark reminder of a past she'd long since buried. "Some more than others." Silas watched her, the weight of unspoken regret hanging heavy in the air between them. "I'm sorry, Rory. For whatever it's worth." Rory's lips curved into a mirthless smile. "Don't be. It's not your fault." She drained the last of her whisky, the amber liquid burning down her throat. "It's just..." She shook her head, her gaze fixed on the empty glass. "I guess I thought I'd have it all figured out by now, you know? The perfect job, the perfect life. But..." She trailed off, her shoulders sagging slightly. Silas reached out, his hand coming to rest on her arm. "Hey. You're still standing, aren't you? That's more than a lot of people can say." Rory lifted her head, her eyes meeting his. "I suppose." She managed a faint smile, the vulnerability in her expression a stark contrast to the hardened edges Silas had seen earlier. "Guess some things never change, huh?" Silas chuckled, the sound rumbling deep in his chest. "That they don't." He squeezed her arm gently, his own eyes softening. "It's good to see you, Rory." Rory's smile widened, the tension in her shoulders easing slightly. "You too, Silas." She paused, her gaze flicking towards the door. "Although I'm not sure how long I'll be sticking around this time." Silas followed her gaze, a wry smile tugging at his lips. "Well, you know where to find me if you change your mind." Rory nodded, her fingers drumming against the bar as she slid off the stool. "I'll keep that in mind." She hesitated, her eyes searching his face. "Take care of yourself, yeah?" Silas inclined his head, his own gaze unwavering. "You too, Rory. And remember..." He paused, his lips curving into a faint smile. "You're always welcome here." Rory's eyes softened, a flicker of gratitude passing across her features. With a final nod, she turned and headed for the door, the weight of the years seeming to lift from her shoulders with each step. Silas watched her go, a wistful expression on his face. It was good to see her again, even if the reunion was tinged with the bittersweet ache of time and the ghosts of the past.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:04.517Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:04 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.045
76.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"furrowing"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"stark"
count3
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count2
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"unwavering"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"tinged"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"familiar"
2"chill"
3"furrowing"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"stark"
8"flicked"
9"dancing"
10"depths"
11"flickered"
12"reminder"
13"perfect"
14"tension"
15"unwavering"
16"flicker"
17"tinged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1049
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount736
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Friday1
Blackwood1
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory15
Silas18
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.277
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1049
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean31.79
std16.39
cv0.516
sampleLengths
080
120
254
324
418
531
630
720
864
99
1025
1127
1228
1328
1434
1525
1623
1719
1822
1923
2017
2136
2228
2322
2468
2526
2637
2727
2833
2923
3031
3126
3271
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"been replaced"
1"was tinged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences84
ratio0
matches(empty)
65.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount296
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.08783783783783784
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.010135135135135136
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean12.49
std6.08
cv0.487
sampleLengths
010
122
221
327
420
516
622
716
86
915
103
1112
126
1314
149
158
169
1718
183
1919
201
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229
2325
2413
259
2615
2710
287
2920
3018
3110
3216
3312
347
3518
369
3715
3810
3910
4013
417
4212
439
4413
4510
4610
473
4810
497
72.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.44047619047619047
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences58
matches
0"Her voice was steady, guarded"
1"She moved towards the bar,"
2"She paused, her brow furrowing"
3"He poured a generous measure"
4"They lapsed into silence, the"
5"Her face, once open and"
6"She paused, her gaze drifting"
7"He paused, his gaze searching"
8"He poured himself a measure"
9"She drained the last of"
10"She shook her head, her"
11"She trailed off, her shoulders"
12"She managed a faint smile,"
13"He squeezed her arm gently,"
14"She paused, her gaze flicking"
15"She hesitated, her eyes searching"
16"He paused, his lips curving"
17"It was good to see"
ratio0.31
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was unusually"
1"Silas Blackwood surveyed the room"
2"The familiar creak of the"
3"The name left"
4"Aurora Carter froze, her bright"
5"Her voice was steady, guarded"
6"She moved towards the bar,"
7"Silas studied her, the wheels"
8"Rory shrugged, her gaze flicking"
9"She paused, her brow furrowing"
10"Silas nodded, understanding the unspoken"
11"He poured a generous measure"
12"Rory's lips curved into a"
13"They lapsed into silence, the"
14"Silas watched her, noting the"
15"The straight, shoulder-length black hair"
16"Her face, once open and"
17"Silas finally said, breaking the"
18"Rory's eyes flicked up to"
19"Silas chuckled, the sound low"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"For a moment, she was that same twenty-year-old girl who had stumbled into his bar all those years ago, terrified and alone."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"The name left, a hint of surprise colouring his low, gravelly voice"
1"She paused, her brow furrowing slightly"
2"Rory took, the liquid amber catching the soft light"
3"She paused, her gaze drifting towards the grimy windows"
4"Silas followed, his own thoughts drifting back to the past"
5"He paused, his gaze searching her face"
6"She drained, the amber liquid burning down her throat"
7"She trailed, her shoulders sagging slightly"
8"He squeezed, his own eyes softening"
9"She paused, her gaze flicking towards the door"
10"She hesitated, her eyes searching his face"
11"He paused, his lips curving into a faint smile"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.6749%