Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRM53G71JR6CWDZMZ5JNKB

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Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora paused mid-reach for the last slice of pizza, her fingers hovering over the greasy cardboard. The distant hum of traffic slipped through the open window, but it all faded when she heard a sudden knock. Each rap echoed like a hammer against her resolve. She dropped her hand. “Who's that?” Ptolemy, the tabby, stretched lazily on the cluttered table, his tail flicking dismissively. Rory swiped a stray piece of hair behind her ear, shrugging off the knot of anxiety twisting in her stomach. “Could be the delivery guy.” But she knew better. The delivery cutoff was long past. When another knock sounded—louder and more insistent—she took a sharp breath. “Hold on, Pto.” She slipped off her stool and trudged towards the door, a sense of dread swirling in her chest. She peeked through the peephole, and her heart skipped, pounding against her ribcage. The figure standing there wore a tailored charcoal suit, and just behind it, the glint of an ivory-handled cane caught the soft glow of the overhead light. Lucien. What was he doing here? She hesitated. It had been years since their lives twisted apart, years filled with silent calls and unreturned messages. Her pulse thrummed against her skin. “Rory? I know you’re in there,” Lucien's voice, smooth and rich, laced through the door. He always had that way of filling a space, even one as cramped as her flat. Rory composed herself, shifted her weight onto one hip, and unlatched the three deadbolts. The door swung open, revealing his tall frame silhouetted by the dim hallway light. “Luc.” She straightened, refusing to show the whirlwind inside her. His lip twitched, a half-smile flirting with his features, but the amber of his heterochromatic eyes darkened at her guarded stance. “Have you missed me?” “Hardly.” The word slipped out sharper than she intended, like a slap. His gaze flicked to the mess around her—books and scrolls piled precariously on every surface, dishes stacked in the sink. “Looks like life treated you well.” Rory crossed her arms. “You don’t get to judge my flat.” Lucien’s amusement faded. “I came here for a reason.” “Do explain.” She stepped back, opening the door wider, a silent invitation. Suddenly, the cramped space felt smaller, the air heavier. He stepped inside, bringing with him a presence that stirred distant memories—coffee, late nights, and whispered secrets tangled in the glow of her old desk lamp. He leaned against the wall, cane fixed in front of him like a deliberate barrier between them. “I can see you're busy. I won’t take up too much of your time.” “That’s considerate of you,” she retorted, the sarcasm draping across the words like an old, familiar cloak. His brow furrowed. “Rory. I’m here to help.” “Help? Since when do you want to help? What’s the catch?” Her bitterness thickened the air, layering their words with tension. He pushed off the wall, closing the distance between them, the cane swaying slightly as he moved. “I need your skills. It’s urgent.” She raised a brow, challenging him. “You think I’d drop everything for you after... after everything?” “Things were complicated.” “‘Complicated’ doesn’t quite cut it.” He sighed, frustration bleeding through his carefully composed facade. “We both made mistakes.” “Nice of you to finally acknowledge that.” She fought against the bittersweet memories flickering in the back of her mind—nights full of laughter, sudden arguments, and the way he’d looked at her when he thought she wasn't watching. She broke the eye contact, biting her lip as she shifted her weight again. “You didn’t just walk away, Luc. You disappeared.” “In my defense, I had my reasons.” “Which were?” “None of your business.” His tone sharpened like the blade hidden in his cane. “Right. Let’s just avoid talking about it. Or anything that really matters. Classic Luc.” He took a step closer, the remnants of their shared history hanging dangerously in the air. “I didn’t have a choice. You think I wanted to turn my back?” “You didn’t even try!” The words hung heavy between them, an echo of years spent apart. Her heart thudded in the silence, betraying the strength she tried to project. She turned away, fists clenching at her sides. “Just… get to the point.” Lucien shifted closer, lowering his voice. “I’m being watched. It’s bad for me, and by extension, it’s bad for you.” “Great. Just wonderful.” She rolled her eyes but halted as an unexpected chill swept through her. “What does that mean?” “They know where you are,” he exhaled, the weight of those words sinking in the space between them. Rory stepped back, her pulse racing. “What do you mean, ‘they?’ Are you in trouble?” “This involves more than just me.” Her chest tightened. “What’s going on?” “Let’s discuss this somewhere else.” “Now you want to run?” “Rory, listen—” “Why should I listen to you?” He ran a hand through his slicked-back hair, an unmistakable sign of frustration. “Because, despite everything, I care. You need to trust me.” Trust hung between them like a fragile thread, fraying at the edges. Rory’s mind raced with hesitance, each thought clashing against the memories of heartbreak and stolen glances. The pulse of attraction still lingered, but so did the scars of their past. “Trust? You lost that privilege a long time ago.” “I get it. But this is real. People are watching. They’re dangerous.” “Why now? Why come back at all?” “Because I don’t want to see you hurt,” he said, softer now, almost vulnerable. A glance he threw her way, laden with lingering affection, caught her off guard. “Can’t you just go back to being, I don’t know, the ‘Frenchman’ who appears when it’s convenient?” “That’s not who I am with you.” Rory halted, grappling with the shards of what they once shared and what they had become. Seconds stretched as he searched for the right words, agony reflecting in his eyes. “I need you to help me figure out who’s after me. We can’t do this alone,” he finally said. With no other choice weighing heavier than the memories and emotions tangled inside, she met his gaze. “Alright,” she relented, her voice seeming to echo against the walls. At least in deciding, she could feel her heart beat a little steadier. Lucien stepped closer again, his words near a whisper. “Thank you, Rory. You won’t regret it.” She almost believed him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"the cluttered table his tail flicking dismissively [dismissively]"
1"His tone sharpened like [like]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.08
76.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"resolve"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count3
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"furrowed"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"echo"
count2
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"clenching"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
18
word"raced"
count1
19
word"affection"
count1
20
word"grappling"
count1
21
word"could feel"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"resolve"
2"stomach"
3"sense of"
4"pounding"
5"glint"
6"pulse"
7"weight"
8"flicked"
9"familiar"
10"furrowed"
11"tension"
12"facade"
13"echo"
14"silence"
15"clenching"
16"chill"
17"racing"
18"raced"
19"affection"
20"grappling"
21"could feel"
22"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of dread"
1"the weight of those words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"a sense of dread"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1064
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount739
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Lucien5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1064
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"had that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean15.88
std11.62
cv0.732
sampleLengths
045
14
215
335
411
53
658
71
830
915
1016
1128
1210
1325
1412
1526
1611
179
182
1945
2031
2117
228
2311
2410
2523
2616
273
285
2913
3038
3122
327
332
3414
3514
3629
374
3825
3913
4020
4120
4218
4315
446
456
465
475
482
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"wasn't watching"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"When another knock sounded—louder and more insistent—she took a sharp breath."
1"His gaze flicked to the mess around her—books and scrolls piled precariously on every surface, dishes stacked in the sink."
2"He stepped inside, bringing with him a presence that stirred distant memories—coffee, late nights, and whispered secrets tangled in the glow of her old desk lamp."
3"“Nice of you to finally acknowledge that.” She fought against the bittersweet memories flickering in the back of her mind—nights full of laughter, sudden arguments, and the way he’d looked at her when he thought she wasn't watching."
98.74% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount748
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04144385026737968
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0106951871657754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean10.64
std6.3
cv0.592
sampleLengths
016
120
29
34
415
520
69
76
811
93
1018
1113
1227
131
145
152
1617
176
1815
1916
2014
2114
2210
2321
244
2512
2620
276
284
297
303
316
322
3310
349
3526
3617
3714
3817
393
405
4111
4210
4317
446
456
4610
473
485
499
79.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.49
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Suddenly, the cramped space felt"
1"At least in deciding, she"
ratio0.033
10.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences61
matches
0"She dropped her hand."
1"She slipped off her stool"
2"She peeked through the peephole,"
3"It had been years since"
4"Her pulse thrummed against her"
5"He always had that way"
6"She straightened, refusing to show"
7"His lip twitched, a half-smile"
8"His gaze flicked to the"
9"She stepped back, opening the"
10"He stepped inside, bringing with"
11"He leaned against the wall,"
12"she retorted, the sarcasm draping"
13"His brow furrowed."
14"Her bitterness thickened the air,"
15"He pushed off the wall,"
16"She raised a brow, challenging"
17"He sighed, frustration bleeding through"
18"She fought against the bittersweet"
19"She broke the eye contact,"
ratio0.525
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"Aurora paused mid-reach for the"
1"The distant hum of traffic"
2"Each rap echoed like a"
3"She dropped her hand."
4"Ptolemy, the tabby, stretched lazily"
5"Rory swiped a stray piece"
6"The delivery cutoff was long"
7"She slipped off her stool"
8"She peeked through the peephole,"
9"The figure standing there wore"
10"It had been years since"
11"Her pulse thrummed against her"
12"Lucien's voice, smooth and rich,"
13"He always had that way"
14"Rory composed herself, shifted her"
15"The door swung open, revealing"
16"She straightened, refusing to show"
17"His lip twitched, a half-smile"
18"The word slipped out sharper"
19"His gaze flicked to the"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory swiped a stray piece of hair behind her ear, shrugging off the knot of anxiety twisting in her stomach."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She straightened, refusing to show the whirlwind inside her"
1"she relented, her voice seeming to echo against the walls"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.04
80.6517%