Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRM5S1R37WKGWB788C4G2R

Run Details

Duration:
31.1s
Cost:
$0.000897

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, the air thick with an unsettling stillness. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting against the night sky. She had come here for answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her. The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness. Each step felt heavy, as if the ground itself resisted her presence. She paused, scanning the clearing. Shadows danced at the edges of her vision, flickering like candle flames. “Just the wind,” she muttered, though the words felt hollow. A rustle came from the underbrush, sharp and sudden. Aurora’s heart raced. She turned, eyes darting, but nothing emerged. Just the whisper of leaves, the distant croak of a frog. “Get a grip, Rory,” she whispered to herself, forcing her feet to move forward. She had to find the portal, the one that would lead her to the answers she sought. The Heartstone pulsed gently against her thigh, urging her onward. As she ventured deeper into the grove, the air thickened, wrapping around her like a shroud. The sounds of the outside world faded, replaced by an eerie silence that pressed against her ears. She could almost hear her heartbeat, a steady thrum that echoed in the stillness. “Hello?” she called, her voice trembling slightly. No response. Just the rustle of grass, the distant hoot of an owl. Aurora stepped closer to the standing stones, their surfaces etched with ancient symbols that seemed to shimmer in the moonlight. She reached out, fingers brushing against the cool bark. A shiver ran down her spine. “Is anyone there?” A low growl rumbled from the shadows, deep and resonant. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She turned, scanning the darkness, but the source remained hidden. “Show yourself!” she demanded, her voice stronger than she felt. The growl faded, replaced by a soft, mocking laughter that echoed through the grove. It sent chills racing down her arms. She took a step back, heart pounding. “Just a trick of the mind,” she told herself, but doubt gnawed at her. The Heartstone grew warmer, pulsing in rhythm with her racing heart. She fished it out, holding it up to the moonlight. The deep crimson glimmered, casting a faint glow that illuminated the area around her. “Where are you?” she whispered, desperation creeping into her voice. A figure flickered at the edge of her vision, a silhouette that vanished as quickly as it appeared. Aurora’s breath quickened. She turned, but the grove remained empty, the shadows deepening. “Enough games!” she shouted, anger flaring. The laughter returned, echoing through the trees, mocking her. “Who are you?” she demanded, her voice steadying. “Just a friend,” a voice replied, smooth and silky, wrapping around her like smoke. Aurora’s heart raced. She spun around, searching for the source. “Show yourself!” The figure stepped into the light, a tall, ethereal being with shimmering skin that glowed faintly. Its eyes, dark and endless, locked onto hers. “Why do you seek the portal?” it asked, voice dripping with curiosity. “I need to know the truth,” Aurora replied, defiance rising within her. The being tilted its head, a smile playing on its lips. “Truth is a slippery thing, dear girl. Are you sure you want to find it?” “I have to,” she insisted, gripping the Heartstone tightly. The being’s smile widened, revealing sharp teeth. “Very well. But be warned, the truth may not be what you expect.” With a wave of its hand, the air shimmered, and a portal flickered into existence, swirling with colors that defied description. Aurora felt the pull, a magnetic force drawing her closer. “Step through, if you dare,” the being taunted, its voice echoing in the grove. Aurora hesitated, the warmth of the Heartstone fading as doubt crept in. “Why do you hesitate?” the being pressed, stepping closer. “I’m not afraid,” she lied, though her heart raced. “Then prove it.” The shadows around her thickened, swirling like smoke. Aurora’s breath quickened as the laughter echoed again, louder this time, surrounding her. “Enough!” she shouted, her voice breaking through the cacophony. The laughter ceased, replaced by an oppressive silence. The being’s expression shifted, curiosity replaced by something darker. “Very well,” it said, voice low and dangerous. “But remember, you asked for this.” With a deep breath, Aurora stepped toward the portal, the Heartstone pulsing in her hand. The air crackled with energy, and she felt the world shift around her. As she crossed the threshold, the grove faded, replaced by a blinding light. She stumbled, disoriented, the laughter echoing in her ears. “Welcome to the truth,” the being’s voice whispered, fading into the distance. Aurora blinked, the light dimming to reveal a new landscape, one that felt both familiar and foreign. The air buzzed with energy, and she sensed the weight of unseen eyes watching her. “Where am I?” she murmured, heart racing. A rustle behind her made her spin around, but nothing was there. Just shadows, shifting and swirling, as if alive. “Show yourself!” she called, but the only response was silence. The Heartstone pulsed again, a steady reminder of her purpose. She took a step forward, determination flooding her veins. “Let’s find out what’s really going on,” she whispered, the shadows closing in around her.
total_cost0.00089655

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.778
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
61.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount899
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"tightly"
4"very"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount899
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"raced"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"echoed"
count3
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"racing"
count3
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count2
15
word"quickened"
count2
16
word"echoing"
count3
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"magnetic"
count1
19
word"cacophony"
count1
20
word"oppressive"
count1
21
word"familiar"
count1
22
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"raced"
6"whisper"
7"pulsed"
8"silence"
9"echoed"
10"etched"
11"down her spine"
12"racing"
13"pounding"
14"flickered"
15"quickened"
16"echoing"
17"shimmered"
18"magnetic"
19"cacophony"
20"oppressive"
21"familiar"
22"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords899
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount784
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone7
Pendant1
Aurora12
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.735
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shimmer in the moonlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount899
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean18.73
std12.47
cv0.666
sampleLengths
057
146
210
330
441
547
67
713
835
93
1026
1110
1228
1314
1435
1510
1631
176
189
198
2014
2110
222
2324
2412
2512
2626
279
2820
2931
3014
3112
329
339
343
3521
369
3717
3814
3928
4022
4112
4232
437
4420
4510
4619
4715
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"being tilted"
1"being taunted"
2"being pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences84
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount784
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02806122448979592
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008928571428571428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean10.7
std4.52
cv0.423
sampleLengths
013
116
228
317
412
55
612
710
89
93
107
1111
1214
1317
1410
1516
1617
1714
187
192
2011
2120
229
236
243
2510
266
2710
2810
2914
307
317
3214
3311
3410
3514
3610
3718
383
3910
406
419
428
4314
443
457
462
4716
488
4912
54.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just the whisper of leaves,"
1"Just the rustle of grass,"
2"Just shadows, shifting and swirling,"
ratio0.039
58.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences77
matches
0"She had come here for"
1"She paused, scanning the clearing."
2"she muttered, though the words"
3"She turned, eyes darting, but"
4"she whispered to herself, forcing"
5"She had to find the"
6"She could almost hear her"
7"she called, her voice trembling"
8"She reached out, fingers brushing"
9"She turned, scanning the darkness,"
10"she demanded, her voice stronger"
11"It sent chills racing down"
12"She took a step back,"
13"she told herself, but doubt"
14"She fished it out, holding"
15"she whispered, desperation creeping into"
16"She turned, but the grove"
17"she shouted, anger flaring"
18"she demanded, her voice steadying"
19"She spun around, searching for"
ratio0.403
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences77
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Fae"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had come here for"
3"The moon hung low, casting"
4"Each step felt heavy, as"
5"She paused, scanning the clearing."
6"Shadows danced at the edges"
7"she muttered, though the words"
8"A rustle came from the"
9"Aurora’s heart raced."
10"She turned, eyes darting, but"
11"she whispered to herself, forcing"
12"She had to find the"
13"The Heartstone pulsed gently against"
14"The sounds of the outside"
15"She could almost hear her"
16"she called, her voice trembling"
17"Aurora stepped closer to the"
18"She reached out, fingers brushing"
19"A shiver ran down her"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She had come here for answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her."
1"The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness."
2"Aurora stepped closer to the standing stones, their surfaces etched with ancient symbols that seemed to shimmer in the moonlight."
3"The deep crimson glimmered, casting a faint glow that illuminated the area around her."
4"The figure stepped into the light, a tall, ethereal being with shimmering skin that glowed faintly."
5"With a wave of its hand, the air shimmered, and a portal flickered into existence, swirling with colors that defied description."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she muttered, though the words felt hollow"
1"she called, her voice trembling slightly"
2"she demanded, her voice stronger than she felt"
3"she whispered, desperation creeping into her voice"
4"she demanded, her voice steadying"
5"it asked, voice dripping with curiosity"
6"Aurora replied, defiance rising within her"
7"the being taunted, its voice echoing in the grove"
8"she lied, though her heart raced"
9"she shouted, her voice breaking through the cacophony"
10"it said, voice low and dangerous"
11"she murmured, heart racing"
12"she whispered, the shadows closing in around her"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she shouted (shout)"
5"she demanded (demand)"
6"she insisted (insist)"
7"the being taunted (be taunt)"
8"the being pressed (be)"
9"she lied (lie)"
10"she shouted (shout)"
11"the being’s voice whispered (whisper)"
12"she murmured (murmur)"
13"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.778
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
75.2897%