| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx replied simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.314 | | leniency | 0.629 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 78.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 941 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 941 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "symphony" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "anticipation" | | 9 | "grave" | | 10 | "furrowed" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "enigmatic" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "unwavering" | | 15 | "marveled" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "wavered" | | 18 | "disrupt" | | 19 | "unreadable" | | 20 | "could feel" | | 21 | "structure" | | 22 | "tinged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 70.65% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "a thrill of anticipation" | | 1 | "felt a thrill" | | 2 | "y with warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 943 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 523 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 14 | | Isolde | 9 | | Eva | 3 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.162 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 943 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.08% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 29.47 | | std | 14.43 | | cv | 0.49 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 93 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory marveled at the ethereal beauty that surrounded them — towering trees, gnarled and ancient, their branches reaching towards the warm amber sky." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 523 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.02676864244741874 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017208413001912046 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 13.47 | | std | 7.07 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 80.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the trees fell away," |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 1 | "she said, her voice lilting" | | 2 | "They set out through the" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 39.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the shimmering" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "Here, the sun's golden rays" | | 3 | "Eva breathed, her eyes wide" | | 4 | "Nyx emerged silently, their ethereal" | | 5 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 6 | "Rory turned slowly, drinking in" | | 7 | "The air hummed with the" | | 8 | "Rory breathed, her fingers tracing" | | 9 | "Isolde emerged from behind one" | | 10 | "she said, her voice lilting" | | 11 | "Nyx inclined their head respectfully." | | 12 | "Isolde's lavender eyes swept over" | | 13 | "Rory felt a thrill of" | | 14 | "Isolde's expression grew grave" | | 15 | "Isolde inclined her head." | | 16 | "Rory's brow furrowed." | | 17 | "Isolde's gaze settled on Rory" | | 18 | "Rory's fingers instinctively went to" | | 19 | "Isolde's lips curved in a" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Vibrant blooms of every hue imaginable carpeted the ground, their petals stirring as if caressed by an unseen hand." | | 1 | "Rory marveled at the ethereal beauty that surrounded them — towering trees, gnarled and ancient, their branches reaching towards the warm amber sky." | | 2 | "As they walked, Nyx's form flickered and wavered, their presence ebbing and flowing like the shadows themselves." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva breathed, her eyes wide as she took in their new surroundings" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper on the gentle breeze" | | 2 | "Rory breathed, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings on the nearest monolith" | | 3 | "she said, her voice lilting and musical" | | 4 | "Rory asked, her brow furrowed" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.229 | | leniency | 0.457 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |