Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRM9GPXHAJVR4GCPSRE445

Run Details

Duration:
17.7s
Cost:
$0.002410
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the shimmering veil, feeling the familiar tug of transition as the world around her shifted. The air was thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers, a stark contrast to the gritty urban streets she had just left behind. Here, the sun's golden rays filtered through a canopy of ancient oaks, casting a warm glow across the lush, emerald grass. "Whoa," Eva breathed, her eyes wide as she took in their new surroundings. "This is... wow." Nyx emerged silently, their ethereal form coalescing from the shadows. "Welcome to the Fae Grove," they murmured, their voice a whisper on the gentle breeze. Rory turned slowly, drinking in the details of the otherworldly landscape. Towering standing stones, their surfaces weathered by time, ringed the clearing. Vibrant blooms of every hue imaginable carpeted the ground, their petals stirring as if caressed by an unseen hand. The air hummed with the buzzing of unseen insects, an oddly soothing symphony. "It's beautiful," Rory breathed, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings on the nearest monolith. Isolde emerged from behind one of the ancient oaks, her silver hair cascading down her back. "Welcome, children of Earth," she said, her voice lilting and musical. "I have been expecting you." Nyx inclined their head respectfully. "Greetings, Seer. We have come as you requested." Isolde's lavender eyes swept over the group, a hint of a smile playing at the corners of her lips. "Indeed. I have a task for you all — a quest, if you will. One that will test the limits of your courage and cunning." Rory felt a thrill of anticipation. "What kind of task?" "There is a rift in the Veil, a weakening in the barrier between our worlds." Isolde's expression grew grave. "Dark forces have taken notice, and they seek to exploit this vulnerability for their own nefarious purposes." Eva shuddered. "Dark forces? Like what, demons?" Isolde inclined her head. "Precisely. A powerful demon lord named Belphegor has set his sights on breaching the Veil. If he succeeds, the consequences could be catastrophic." Rory's brow furrowed. "How do we stop him?" "You must journey to Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, and retrieve an artifact of great power — the Heartstone Pendant." Isolde's gaze settled on Rory. "This pendant is the key to sealing the rift and preventing Belphegor's invasion." Rory's fingers instinctively went to the pendant that hung at her throat, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth. "This pendant? But I was given this by an anonymous benefactor. I don't know anything about its significance." Isolde's lips curved in a enigmatic smile. "All will be revealed in due time, child of Earth. For now, you must trust in the power of the Heartstone and your own resolve." Nyx stepped forward, their form shimmering as they moved. "We will do as you ask, Seer. What can you tell us of this realm of Dymas?" "Dymas is a place of excess and indulgence, where the sin of Gluttony holds sway." Isolde's expression darkened. "It is ruled by the demon lord Belphegor, who revels in the decadence of his domain. You must be wary, for his influence runs deep." Eva swallowed hard. "And how exactly are we supposed to just stroll in and steal this Heartstone Pendant from under his nose?" Isolde's gaze was unwavering. "That, young one, is where your courage and cunning will be tested. The pendant is heavily guarded, and Belphegor is a formidable foe. But I have faith that together, you will find a way." Rory took a deep breath, squaring her shoulders. "Alright, team. Looks like we're going on a heist." They set out through the Fae Grove, the shifting nature of time making it impossible to gauge how long they traveled. Rory marveled at the ethereal beauty that surrounded them — towering trees, gnarled and ancient, their branches reaching towards the warm amber sky. Exotic blooms of every imaginable hue dotted the forest floor, their petals rustling in the gentle breeze. As they walked, Nyx's form flickered and wavered, their presence ebbing and flowing like the shadows themselves. "The Veil is thin here," they murmured. "We are but a step away from the demon realm." Rory glanced down at the pendant, its crimson glow pulsing in time with her heartbeat. "Is this really the key to stopping Belphegor?" "It is," Nyx replied simply. "The Heartstone is imbued with ancient magic, a remnant of the Fae Courts. Its power can disrupt the demonic forces that seek to breach the Veil." "And you're sure I'm the one who's supposed to wield it?" Rory asked, her brow furrowed. "I'm just a normal human, not some grand hero destined for this kind of quest." Nyx's glowing violet eyes met hers, their expression unreadable. "You underestimate yourself, Aurora Carter. The Heartstone has chosen you for a reason." Rory opened her mouth to respond, but a sudden rustling in the undergrowth interrupted her. Isolde raised a hand, her lavender eyes narrowing. "We are close. Be on your guard." The group pressed on, the forest growing denser and more wild the deeper they ventured. Rory could feel the air growing warmer, thick with the scent of exotic spices and the faint tang of brimstone. Suddenly, the trees fell away, revealing a vast, undulating landscape. Sprawling vineyards and lush orchards stretched out as far as the eye could see, their bounty ripe and bursting with color. In the distance, the unmistakable silhouette of a grand, palatial structure rose up against the amber sky. "Dymas," Nyx murmured, their voice tinged with reverence and dread. Rory gripped the Fae-forged blade at her side, her knuckles whitening. "Alright, team. Let's do this."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:13.961Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx replied simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.629
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.057
78.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"symphony"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"anticipation"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"furrowed"
count2
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"enigmatic"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"unwavering"
count1
15
word"marveled"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"wavered"
count1
18
word"disrupt"
count1
19
word"unreadable"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"structure"
count1
22
word"tinged"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stark"
2"whisper"
3"otherworldly"
4"symphony"
5"tracing"
6"intricate"
7"cascading"
8"anticipation"
9"grave"
10"furrowed"
11"warmth"
12"enigmatic"
13"resolve"
14"unwavering"
15"marveled"
16"flickered"
17"wavered"
18"disrupt"
19"unreadable"
20"could feel"
21"structure"
22"tinged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
70.65% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences46
matches
0"a thrill of anticipation"
1"felt a thrill"
2"y with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords943
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount523
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Rory14
Isolde9
Eva3
Fae2
Grove1
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.162
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount943
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
97.08% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean29.47
std14.43
cv0.49
sampleLengths
062
116
225
354
414
532
613
744
810
936
107
1127
128
1338
1438
1532
1626
1743
1822
1938
2017
2161
2234
2323
2431
2531
2622
2730
2835
2948
3010
3116
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs93
matches
0"was unwavering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences70
ratio0.014
matches
0"Rory marveled at the ethereal beauty that surrounded them — towering trees, gnarled and ancient, their branches reaching towards the warm amber sky."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount523
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02676864244741874
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.017208413001912046
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean13.47
std7.07
cv0.525
sampleLengths
018
123
221
313
43
510
615
711
811
919
1013
1114
1216
1311
145
155
168
1719
1825
196
204
2119
2217
232
245
254
2623
273
285
2925
3013
3120
3218
337
3425
359
3617
3718
3825
393
4019
414
4234
438
449
4521
4623
4717
4817
497
80.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4857142857142857
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners34
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Suddenly, the trees fell away,"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount3
totalSentences44
matches
0"they murmured, their voice a"
1"she said, her voice lilting"
2"They set out through the"
ratio0.068
39.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences44
matches
0"Rory stepped through the shimmering"
1"The air was thick with"
2"Here, the sun's golden rays"
3"Eva breathed, her eyes wide"
4"Nyx emerged silently, their ethereal"
5"they murmured, their voice a"
6"Rory turned slowly, drinking in"
7"The air hummed with the"
8"Rory breathed, her fingers tracing"
9"Isolde emerged from behind one"
10"she said, her voice lilting"
11"Nyx inclined their head respectfully."
12"Isolde's lavender eyes swept over"
13"Rory felt a thrill of"
14"Isolde's expression grew grave"
15"Isolde inclined her head."
16"Rory's brow furrowed."
17"Isolde's gaze settled on Rory"
18"Rory's fingers instinctively went to"
19"Isolde's lips curved in a"
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Vibrant blooms of every hue imaginable carpeted the ground, their petals stirring as if caressed by an unseen hand."
1"Rory marveled at the ethereal beauty that surrounded them — towering trees, gnarled and ancient, their branches reaching towards the warm amber sky."
2"As they walked, Nyx's form flickered and wavered, their presence ebbing and flowing like the shadows themselves."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Eva breathed, her eyes wide as she took in their new surroundings"
1"they murmured, their voice a whisper on the gentle breeze"
2"Rory breathed, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings on the nearest monolith"
3"she said, her voice lilting and musical"
4"Rory asked, her brow furrowed"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"they murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory breathed (breathe)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.286
77.1907%