Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRM9KGJQPS8292TM9S4QCS

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Duration:
25.9s
Cost:
$0.001026

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses punctuating the air like a heartbeat. Dim light flickered from the green neon sign outside, casting a soft glow on the faces of patrons scattered across the bar. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a practiced ease. He caught sight of Rory as she slipped through the door, her straight black hair framing her bright blue eyes, a stark contrast to the muted tones of the bar. Rory took a moment to absorb the familiar surroundings. The walls, lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs, whispered stories of the past. She felt a pang of nostalgia, a bittersweet reminder of the life she had left behind. She approached the bar, her heart racing slightly. “Evening, Rory,” Silas greeted, his voice steady, though a hint of warmth crept in. He set the glass down and leaned against the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light. “Si,” she replied, a smile breaking through her initial apprehension. “It’s been a while.” “Too long,” he said, his eyes narrowing slightly as he studied her. “You look... different.” “Yeah, well, life has a way of doing that.” She shrugged, trying to dismiss the weight of his gaze. “How’s the bar?” “Still standing, somehow.” He chuckled, but the sound held a trace of something deeper. “You know how it is. People come and go, but the stories? They linger.” Rory nodded, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit she had developed over the years. “I’ve got a few stories of my own now.” “Care to share?” Silas leaned in, his interest piqued. “Not tonight.” She glanced around, avoiding his penetrating gaze. “Just... catching up.” “Right.” He straightened, the momentary connection slipping away. “What brings you back to Soho?” “Just delivering some food. Part-time gig at Golden Empress.” She gestured vaguely, her voice steady despite the flutter in her stomach. “You know how it is.” “Still hustling, I see.” Silas’s expression softened, but a shadow crossed his face. “You always were good at that.” “Yeah, well, it’s not like I had much choice.” She forced a laugh, but it felt hollow. “What about you? Still running this place?” “More or less.” He gestured to the bar, the patrons lost in their own worlds. “It’s a front, really. Keeps me connected.” “Connected to what?” Rory raised an eyebrow, curiosity piqued. “Old friends, old enemies.” He paused, his gaze drifting to the back room, hidden behind a bookshelf. “You know how it goes.” “Right.” She shifted, the weight of unspoken words hanging between them. “I remember.” “Do you?” Silas’s voice dropped, a challenge lacing his tone. “Do you really?” Rory’s heart raced. “I remember the good times, Si. The laughter, the plans we made.” “And the plans that fell apart?” His eyes darkened, the warmth replaced by something colder. “You vanished, Rory. Just like that.” “I had my reasons.” She clenched her jaw, the memories flooding back—Evan’s anger, the suffocating weight of expectations. “You know that.” “Do I?” Silas leaned closer, his voice low. “You left without a word. No explanation, no goodbye.” “I was trying to survive.” Her voice trembled, but she held his gaze. “You don’t know what it was like.” “Then tell me.” He crossed his arms, the challenge clear. “What was it like?” Rory took a deep breath, the air thick with tension. “It was suffocating. I felt trapped, like I was drowning. I had to get out.” “And you thought disappearing was the answer?” Silas’s brow furrowed, disappointment etched on his face. “You could have reached out.” “I didn’t know how.” She looked away, the shame creeping in. “I thought I could handle it on my own.” “Clearly.” He scoffed, the bitterness in his tone cutting deeper than she expected. “And now? You think you’ve got it all figured out?” “I’m trying.” She met his gaze, defiance sparking in her eyes. “I’m not the same person I was back then.” “Are you sure about that?” Silas’s voice softened, but the challenge remained. “You still run from things, Rory. You always have.” “Maybe I do.” She clenched her fists, frustration bubbling beneath the surface. “But I’m not that scared girl anymore. I’ve fought for everything I have.” “Fighting doesn’t mean you’ve won.” He leaned back, studying her. “You’ve changed, but have you really grown?” Rory’s breath caught in her throat. “What do you want from me, Silas?” “Just the truth.” He shrugged, his expression unreadable. “You’re here now. What do you want?” “I want...” She hesitated, the weight of his question pressing down on her. “I want to reconnect. I want to know if we can still be friends.” “Friends?” He raised an eyebrow, skepticism lacing his tone. “After all this time?” “Why not?” She leaned forward, desperation creeping into her voice. “We had something good once. I miss that.” “Do you?” Silas’s gaze pierced through her, searching for something hidden beneath the surface. “Or do you miss the idea of it?” Rory opened her mouth to respond, but the words caught in her throat. She felt the truth of his question, the weight of the years pressing down on her. “Maybe I miss both,” she finally admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. “But I want to try. I want to see if we can find our way back.” Silas studied her, the silence stretching between them like a chasm. The bar buzzed around them, but in that moment, it felt like they were the only two people in the world. “Alright,” he said finally, his voice steady. “Let’s see where this goes.” Rory’s heart lifted, a flicker of hope igniting within her. “Really?” “Yeah.” He nodded, a hint of a smile breaking through. “But it won’t be easy. We’ve both changed.” “I know.” She smiled back, a genuine warmth spreading through her. “But I’m willing to try.” “Good.” Silas raised his glass, a silent toast to the past and the uncertain future. Rory lifted her own, the clink of glass echoing in the dim light. The weight of time and unspoken regret lingered, but for the first time in years, she felt a glimmer of possibility.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags38
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"She looked away [away]"
3"He leaned back [back]"
4"she finally admitted [finally]"
5"he said finally [finally]"
6"She smiled back [back]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.494
leniency0.987
rawRatio0.184
effectiveRatio0.182
66.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count4
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"pang"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count3
9
word"apprehension"
count1
10
word"weight"
count6
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count2
14
word"unspoken"
count2
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"furrowed"
count1
19
word"etched"
count1
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
22
word"silence"
count1
23
word"flicker"
count1
24
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"practiced ease"
3"stark"
4"familiar"
5"pang"
6"reminder"
7"racing"
8"warmth"
9"apprehension"
10"weight"
11"tracing"
12"stomach"
13"eyebrow"
14"unspoken"
15"raced"
16"trembled"
17"tension"
18"furrowed"
19"etched"
20"unreadable"
21"whisper"
22"silence"
23"flicker"
24"echoing"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"clenched her fists"
2"the weight of unspoken words"
3"a flicker of hope"
96.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences58
matches
0"a pang of nostalgia"
1"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1043
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount641
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory10
Silas11
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.642
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like they were the only two people"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1043
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean21.73
std12.37
cv0.569
sampleLengths
090
147
231
314
415
522
628
730
89
912
1014
1126
1219
1324
1422
159
1622
1713
1813
1915
2021
2121
2217
2320
2414
2525
2620
2720
2823
2920
3021
3125
3217
3313
3415
3527
3613
3718
3822
3929
4029
4132
4212
4311
4418
4516
4615
4734
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences97
ratio0.01
matches
0"“I had my reasons.” She clenched her jaw, the memories flooding back—Evan’s anger, the suffocating weight of expectations."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02321981424148607
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010835913312693499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean10.75
std5.26
cv0.49
sampleLengths
020
122
218
330
49
514
616
78
814
917
1010
114
1212
133
1419
153
1614
1714
1821
199
209
219
223
238
246
2521
265
2713
286
2917
307
3115
327
339
3417
355
3611
372
3810
393
403
4112
4215
436
4418
453
468
479
4813
497
63.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41237113402061853
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences58
matches
0"He caught sight of Rory"
1"She felt a pang of"
2"She approached the bar, her"
3"He set the glass down"
4"she replied, a smile breaking"
5"he said, his eyes narrowing"
6"She shrugged, trying to dismiss"
7"He chuckled, but the sound"
8"She glanced around, avoiding his"
9"He straightened, the momentary connection"
10"She gestured vaguely, her voice"
11"She forced a laugh, but"
12"He gestured to the bar,"
13"He paused, his gaze drifting"
14"She shifted, the weight of"
15"His eyes darkened, the warmth"
16"She clenched her jaw, the"
17"Her voice trembled, but she"
18"He crossed his arms, the"
19"She looked away, the shame"
ratio0.569
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Silas stood behind the counter,"
2"He caught sight of Rory"
3"Rory took a moment to"
4"The walls, lined with old"
5"She felt a pang of"
6"She approached the bar, her"
7"Silas greeted, his voice steady,"
8"He set the glass down"
9"she replied, a smile breaking"
10"he said, his eyes narrowing"
11"She shrugged, trying to dismiss"
12"He chuckled, but the sound"
13"Rory nodded, her fingers tracing"
14"Silas leaned in, his interest"
15"She glanced around, avoiding his"
16"He straightened, the momentary connection"
17"She gestured vaguely, her voice"
18"Silas’s expression softened, but a"
19"She forced a laugh, but"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags38
uselessAdditionCount25
matches
0"Silas greeted, his voice steady, though a hint of warmth crept in"
1"she replied, a smile breaking through her initial apprehension"
2"he said, his eyes narrowing slightly as he studied her"
3"She shrugged, trying to dismiss the weight of his gaze"
4"Silas leaned in, his interest piqued"
5"He straightened, the momentary connection slipping away"
6"She gestured vaguely, her voice steady despite the flutter in her stomach"
7"Silas’s expression softened, but a shadow crossed his face"
8"He gestured, the patrons lost in their own worlds"
9"She shifted, the weight of unspoken words hanging between them"
10"Silas’s voice dropped, a challenge lacing his tone"
11"His eyes darkened, the warmth replaced by something colder"
12"Silas leaned, his voice low"
13"She looked away, the shame creeping in"
14"She met, defiance sparking in her eyes"
15"Silas’s voice softened, but the challenge remained"
16"She clenched, frustration bubbling beneath the surface"
17"He shrugged, his expression unreadable"
18"She hesitated, the weight of his question pressing down on her"
19"He raised, skepticism lacing his tone"
20"She leaned, desperation creeping into her voice"
21"she finally admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
22"he said finally, his voice steady"
23"He nodded, a hint of a smile breaking through"
24"She smiled back, a genuine warmth spreading through her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
1"she finally admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.052
70.0951%