| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 724 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 724 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "kaleidoscope" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "treacherous" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "ensuring" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 46.88% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "felt a thrill" | | 2 | "a sense of determination" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 723 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 536 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.05 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Rory | 9 | | Nyx | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Guardian | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Varga" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Guardian" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.474 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "trunk that seemed to twist and writhe like a living serpent" | | 1 | "silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around them" | | 2 | "birds that seemed to materialize out of thin air, their feathers a kaleidoscope of colors that reflected the shifting hues of the flowers" | | 3 | "colors that seemed to shift and writhe like a living thing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 723 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.97% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 38.05 | | std | 15.96 | | cv | 0.419 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 24 |
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| 83.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "was punctuated" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 91 | | matches | | |
| 65.64% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 37 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "The statue depicted a creature Rory had never seen before – its body was that of a great cat, but its face was a swirling vortex of colors that seemed to shift and writhe like a living thing." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 537 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, emerald-green moss" |
| | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.0074487895716946 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0037243947858473 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 37 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 37 | | mean | 19.54 | | std | 7.83 | | cv | 0.401 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 24 |
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| 81.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4864864864864865 | | totalSentences | 37 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "they asked, their voice like" | | 1 | "she said, a small smile" | | 2 | "they said, their voice laced" | | 3 | "she said, her eyes meeting" | | 4 | "She was ready to face" |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's feet sank into the" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 3 | "Isolde Varga walked at the" | | 4 | "Rory breathed, her voice barely" | | 5 | "Isolde's gaze was cast upwards," | | 6 | "Nyx paused beside Rory, their" | | 7 | "they asked, their voice like" | | 8 | "Isolde's silver hair rustled as" | | 9 | "Rory's eyes were fixed on" | | 10 | "she said, a small smile" | | 11 | "Rory felt as though she" | | 12 | "Isolde led them to a" | | 13 | "The statue depicted a creature" | | 14 | "Isolde said, her voice full" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer to the" | | 16 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 17 | "A burst of energy exploded" | | 18 | "Rory leapt to their side," | | 19 | "Isolde asked, her voice tinged" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was heavy with the scent of wildflowers, their colors blurring together in a kaleidoscope of hues that defied the natural world." | | 1 | "Nyx paused beside Rory, their form coalescing from a dark mist to a humanoid silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around them." | | 2 | "Rory's eyes were fixed on the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its crimson glow pulsing softly in response to the magic that permeated the air." | | 3 | "As they ventured deeper, the silence was punctuated by the soft chirping of birds that seemed to materialize out of thin air, their feathers a kaleidoscope of c…" | | 4 | "Rory felt as though she was walking through a dream, her senses overwhelmed by the sheer wonder of it all." | | 5 | "Nyx drifted closer to the statue, their form merging with the shadows until they seemed to become one with the dark, swirling colors." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory breathed, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "she said, a small smile playing on her lips" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice full of reverence" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |