Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRMN91VADMJMQ43S5KSVDD

Run Details

Duration:
5.8s
Cost:
$0.000202

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp stone and something older, something that clung to the air like the scent of rusted iron. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the cracked tiles, her boots crunching on broken glass. The flickering fluorescents above buzzed weakly, their light casting long, jagged shadows across the walls. She’d been here before—once, twice—always with the same hollow feeling settling in her gut. “You’re late,” DS Carter muttered from where he leaned against a rusted escalator. His tie hung loose, sleeves rolled up to his elbows. “Thought you’d forgotten.” Harlow didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The body was the same as the reports described—a woman, face down in a puddle of something dark and glistening. Not blood. Not quite. The air around her was wrong, thick with the stench of old magic. Carter followed her gaze. “Yeah, that’s her. Name’s Lila Vex. Worked at the museum. Said she was researching something ‘unsettling’ before she vanished.” Harlow crouched, fingers brushing the woman’s wrist. No pulse. No breath. Just cold, dead flesh. She turned the body slightly, revealing the back of Lila’s neck. A jagged mark, too precise to be a scratch. A symbol, etched in something that looked like dried blood—or something darker. “You see this?” Harlow asked, voice low. Carter crouched beside her, squinting. “What, the mark?” “No. The *way* it’s done.” She traced the edges with her thumb. “No pressure. No drag. Like it was stamped, not carved.” Carter exhaled through his nose. “Could’ve been a knife. Sharp one.” “Sharp enough to leave no drag?” Harlow stood, brushing dirt from her knees. “And look at her hands.” She pointed to Lila’s fingers, curled as if she’d been trying to grip something just before she died. “No defensive wounds. No struggle marks. She didn’t fight.” Carter frowned. “So what, she just… let it happen?” “Or she didn’t see it coming.” Harlow’s gaze flicked to the far corner of the station, where the walls seemed to pulse faintly, like veins under skin. “You feel that?” Carter hesitated. “Feel what?” “The air.” Harlow stepped closer to the wall, pressing her palm against the cold stone. “It’s *wrong*. Like the room’s holding its breath.” Carter didn’t move. “You’re talking like this is supernatural.” “Am I?” Harlow turned, her sharp jaw set. “Or am I just saying what the evidence suggests?” Carter opened his mouth, then closed it. He didn’t have an answer. Harlow’s eyes darted to the ceiling, where the fluorescents flickered again. A shadow moved—just for a second—before the light steadied. She didn’t say anything. She didn’t have to. Carter cleared his throat. “Alright, let’s take notes. What do we know?” Harlow didn’t answer right away. Instead, she walked to the far end of the station, where the tracks curved into darkness. The air here was thicker, heavier. She crouched, running her fingers along the edge of a rusted platform. Something glinted beneath her touch—a small brass object, half-buried in the grime. She pulled it free. The Veil Compass. Carter’s voice cut through the silence. “What the hell is *that*?” Harlow didn’t look up. “That, Detective, is a problem.” Carter stepped closer, squinting at the compass. The needle didn’t point north. It didn’t point anywhere. It just… *hung*, as if waiting for something. “Where’d you find it?” Carter asked. “Under her.” Harlow stood, holding the compass out between them. “In her hand.” Carter’s expression darkened. “You’re saying she brought it here?” “Or it brought her.” Harlow’s voice was quiet, deadly. “And now we need to find out who else she was looking for.” Carter exhaled sharply. “You think this is connected to the museum?” Harlow didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The way the air hummed, the way the shadows moved—it wasn’t just a crime scene. It was a warning. And she wasn’t going to ignore it.
total_cost0.00020240000000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount648
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount648
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"pulse"
2"etched"
3"traced"
4"flicked"
5"flickered"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords639
ratio0.006
matches
0"way"
1"wrong"
2"that"
3"hung"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount465
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.01
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Carter"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow14
Quinn1
Carter14
Lila2
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Carter"
3"Lila"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like dried blood—or something dark"
1"as if waiting for something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount639
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean19.97
std15.49
cv0.776
sampleLengths
066
126
244
323
447
57
68
722
811
945
109
1130
124
1323
149
1517
1612
1728
1812
1951
204
213
2211
239
2424
256
2613
279
2822
2911
3026
317
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences82
ratio0.073
matches
0"She’d been here before—once, twice—always with the same hollow feeling settling in her gut."
1"The body was the same as the reports described—a woman, face down in a puddle of something dark and glistening."
2"A symbol, etched in something that looked like dried blood—or something darker."
3"A shadow moved—just for a second—before the light steadied."
4"Something glinted beneath her touch—a small brass object, half-buried in the grime."
5"The way the air hummed, the way the shadows moved—it wasn’t just a crime scene."
96.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount474
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.04430379746835443
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010548523206751054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean7.79
std5.37
cv0.689
sampleLengths
023
114
215
314
413
510
63
73
84
920
102
112
1213
134
1419
157
162
172
184
1911
209
2112
227
235
243
2512
2610
275
286
2913
3023
319
322
337
3427
353
362
372
3815
398
403
416
428
439
447
455
4611
479
484
494
55.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3780487804878049
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"Just cold, dead flesh."
1"Instead, she walked to the"
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences55
matches
0"She’d been here before—once, twice—always"
1"His tie hung loose, sleeves"
2"She didn’t have to."
3"She turned the body slightly,"
4"She traced the edges with"
5"She pointed to Lila’s fingers,"
6"He didn’t have an answer."
7"She didn’t say anything."
8"She didn’t have to."
9"She crouched, running her fingers"
10"She pulled it free."
11"It didn’t point anywhere."
12"She didn’t have to."
13"It was a warning."
ratio0.255
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"The flickering fluorescents above buzzed"
3"She’d been here before—once, twice—always"
4"DS Carter muttered from where"
5"His tie hung loose, sleeves"
6"Harlow didn’t answer."
7"She didn’t have to."
8"The body was the same"
9"The air around her was"
10"Carter followed her gaze."
11"Harlow crouched, fingers brushing the"
12"She turned the body slightly,"
13"A jagged mark, too precise"
14"A symbol, etched in something"
15"Harlow asked, voice low"
16"Carter crouched beside her, squinting."
17"She traced the edges with"
18"Carter exhaled through his nose."
19"Harlow stood, brushing dirt from"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp stone and something older, something that clung to the air like the scent of rusted iron."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow asked, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"DS Carter muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.067
78.1668%