Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRMNZMG7SR8XGDK21DV6Z1

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest pulsed to the soft thud of bass, drowning the chatter of its patrons in a cocoon of warm light and a heady mix of spirits. Aurora Carter perched on a stool, her black hair, sleek and straight, framed her bright blue eyes that scanned the room with a mix of curiosity and nostalgia. She wrapped her fingers around her glass, swirling the amber liquid as the bitter memories of the past floated just beneath the surface like ghosts. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his hazel eyes catching the glimmer of the neon green sign outside, a beacon for souls seeking solace in anonymity. He polished the fine glassware with methodical precision, the slight limp in his left leg shifting his weight. The faint sound of laughter drew his gaze to the entrance, where the door swung open, introducing the chilly night air. A figure slipped in, a tall silhouette against the dark. Aurora's heart jolted. She recognized him immediately—the posture, the sharp jawline, the familiar confidence. Peter. He shook off the cold, glancing over the bar, unaware that Aurora’s keen attention had fastened on him like a hawk. Time had sculpted him; broad shoulders filled his coat, and though his hair went a touch greyer, the same charisma radiated from his presence. She hadn’t seen him since they graduated. Had it been seven years? Life spiraled rapidly since those care-free days. “Rory?” Peter’s voice carried across the bar, disbelief coloring his tone as he navigated through the crowd. “Peter.” Aurora’s lips curved, but beneath it lay a ripple of uncertainty. A million memories flooded back, tangled with what she had become since they last met—since everything that had happened. He approached, a tentative smile breaking through his initial shock. “I didn’t expect to find you here, of all places.” “What brings you back to London?” She kept her voice light, but her heart drummed unevenly in her chest. “Work. Just passing through.” He leaned against the bar, close enough for her to catch the distinct scent of his cologne—woodsy and warm—familiar and foreign all at once. “I thought it was a myth, this place.” “It’s a good bar. Silas runs a tight ship.” “Silas…” He glanced around, taking in the dim lighting and the eclectic decor. “The Spymaster himself. Of course. You always had a knack for finding the interesting places.” Aurora toyed with her glass, her mind racing. They had been inseparable once, sharing secrets and dreams over late-night conversations. But life had frayed their bond. She recalled the sudden shift in Peter's life—his job on the other side of the world, the silence that followed, the ache of distance. “Been well?” he asked, breaking the quiet that hung between them. “Survived,” she replied, the shadows creeping into her gaze. “Survived?” His brow furrowed, concern flickering in his eyes. “I’m back to studying law.” Her voice flickered as she touched the crescent scar on her wrist—a constant reminder of her childhood, her past. “Been working odd jobs. Delivery mostly.” “Delivery. Right. That’s... interesting.” He shifted, glancing at the bar as if searching for answers among the bottles. “Yeah, you know, life.” She forced a smile, trying to mask the memories where they used to discuss future ambitions while sipping cheap wine in her broken-down flat. Peter nodded, his gaze slipping back to her with a intensity that made her uncomfortable. “You look... different.” “Different how?” She stiffened, defensive instinct kicking in. “Stronger,” he clarified, his eyes narrowing with sincerity. “More real. I guess I wasn’t expecting...” “Someone to survive?” She cut him off, the sting of old wounds flaring. “People change, Peter.” “Of course, they do.” He arched an eyebrow, worry etching deeper forms into his face. “Look, I didn’t mean to—” “But you did,” she snapped, the sharpness of her voice ricocheting through the bar. “Right.” He held up his hands, surrendering to her provocation. The brief silence felt heavier, laden with words left unspoken. They paused, studying one another as old friends reconvened in a new reality. Her chest tightened as the whirlwind of emotions threatened to spill over, memories colliding with the present. “You remember the last time we saw each other?” he ventured, eyes reflecting regret. “Yeah.” The moment unraveled in her mind like a film. Their last night together had shimmered with the wild exhilaration of youth, free of the weight they now carried. They had bared the enthralling dreams of their futures. But silence loomed afterward, suffocating. Peter’s new job had moved him to the States, while Aurora drifted, a lost ship without its anchor. “That’s ancient history.” She brushed off the topic with a wave, dismissing the nostalgia like smoke. “Is it?” He leaned closer, sincerity threading through his voice. “Maybe it shouldn’t be.” “I’ve changed.” Her fingers tapped the bar rhythmically, the beat echoing her pulse. “You said it yourself. So have you." “Not who I wanted to become.” His fingers flicked nervously at the edge of the bar, revealing how thoughts tangled beneath his calm exterior. “I thought it was what I wanted. But running from everything...” “You left,” she replied, the words tumbling out sharper than intended. “You didn’t look back.” “I thought you’d be okay,” he countered, clenching his jaw. “I thought you’d thrive in Cardiff. You were always the strong one.” “Strong?” A bitter laugh escaped her lips. “I ran from Cardiff, remember? I fled from everything, including—” She cut herself off as the mention of Evan threatened to spill out. “From Evan?” Peter’s brows shot up, surprise blending with concern. “Are we going to drag past mistakes into this?” She swallowed down the revelation, shaking her head. “You don’t get to throw stones from that glass house you built.” “I’m here now, Rory. I want to know you.” His voice dropped, raw and urgent. “Know me?” The challenge sent heat rushing through her. “The real me or the version of me you created when you left?” “I never left because of you,” he fired back, frustration mingling with an undercurrent of something softer. “It was the job, the opportunity—I thought it would mean something.” “What did it mean?” She leaned in, probing into the cracks of his facade. “You achieved your dreams, but at what cost?” They remained in that moment, two old friends unraveling years of unspoken regret. Shadows flickered in the bar as patrons laughed and talked around them. But here, it felt like time stood still, the weight of their silence hanging between them like heavy curtains. “Silas!” A lean patron called from the other side of the bar, breaking their confrontation. Silas leaned in, ear bent toward the shout, glancing over with a slight frown. “Got to run the bar, Rory. Can we—?” “Yeah, we can,” she interrupted, the edge of her remark draped in resignation. She rubbed her wrist, the gesture almost instinctive, a plea for reassurance. He watched her, moments ticking away like uneasy hands on a clock, then inclined his head slightly. “Meet me later? We can... talk properly.” “What would be the point?” She met his gaze defiantly. “Because I want to understand,” he responded, earnestness flickering in his eyes. “I’m still figuring myself out.” The quiet rushed back, layering tension anew. “Some things have to be faced, Rory. Don’t shut the door now.” Decisions clashed inside her mind, flaring against the backdrop of the bar’s muted sounds. “Fine,” she said finally, the word hanging between them like a bridge. “We’ll talk later.” Peter mirrored her resignation, caught in the pull of old ties, histories interwoven on this unexpected night. The music thrummed on, oblivious to the dancing ghosts of their shared past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags39
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
1"His fingers flicked nervously [nervously]"
2"The quiet rushed back [back]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.639
leniency1
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.103
92.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"solace"
count1
4
word"methodical"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"navigated"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count4
10
word"furrowed"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count2
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"eyebrow"
count1
15
word"etching"
count1
16
word"unspoken"
count2
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"loomed"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"pulse"
count1
21
word"flicked"
count1
22
word"clenching"
count1
23
word"facade"
count1
24
word"unraveling"
count1
25
word"tension"
count1
26
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"scanned"
2"beacon"
3"solace"
4"methodical"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"navigated"
8"racing"
9"silence"
10"furrowed"
11"flickered"
12"reminder"
13"intensity"
14"eyebrow"
15"etching"
16"unspoken"
17"shimmered"
18"loomed"
19"echoing"
20"pulse"
21"flicked"
22"clenching"
23"facade"
24"unraveling"
25"tension"
26"dancing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"time stood still"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"time stood still"
1"the weight of their silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1279
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount964
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Peter"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Aurora6
Peter7
States1
Evan1
Silas2
Decisions1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Peter"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
7"Decisions"
places
0"States"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if searching for answers among the bottles"
1"felt like time stood still, the weight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1279
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean23.69
std14.66
cv0.619
sampleLengths
081
165
225
364
417
531
620
719
836
99
1028
1150
1211
139
149
1530
1618
1728
1818
198
2015
2116
2220
2314
2420
2530
2614
2738
2823
2916
3014
3120
3235
3315
3422
3530
3610
3729
3815
3922
4028
4122
4244
4329
448
4525
4624
4710
4812
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences99
ratio0.061
matches
0"She recognized him immediately—the posture, the sharp jawline, the familiar confidence."
1"Time had sculpted him; broad shoulders filled his coat, and though his hair went a touch greyer, the same charisma radiated from his presence."
2"A million memories flooded back, tangled with what she had become since they last met—since everything that had happened."
3"“Work. Just passing through.” He leaned against the bar, close enough for her to catch the distinct scent of his cologne—woodsy and warm—familiar and foreign all at once."
4"She recalled the sudden shift in Peter's life—his job on the other side of the world, the silence that followed, the ache of distance."
5"“I’m back to studying law.” Her voice flickered as she touched the crescent scar on her wrist—a constant reminder of her childhood, her past."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount973
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.022610483042137718
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009249743062692703
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.92
std6.22
cv0.482
sampleLengths
028
128
225
326
418
521
610
73
811
91
1021
1124
127
135
147
1517
1612
1719
1810
1910
2019
2128
228
239
2413
2515
268
2712
286
2924
3011
319
329
3324
346
3518
3628
3715
383
398
408
417
4213
433
4415
455
4614
4710
4810
4913
76.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.48484848484848486
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences76
matches
0"She wrapped her fingers around"
1"He polished the fine glassware"
2"She recognized him immediately—the posture,"
3"He shook off the cold,"
4"She hadn’t seen him since"
5"He approached, a tentative smile"
6"She kept her voice light,"
7"He leaned against the bar,"
8"He glanced around, taking in"
9"They had been inseparable once,"
10"She recalled the sudden shift"
11"he asked, breaking the quiet"
12"she replied, the shadows creeping"
13"His brow furrowed, concern flickering"
14"Her voice flickered as she"
15"He shifted, glancing at the"
16"She forced a smile, trying"
17"She stiffened, defensive instinct kicking"
18"he clarified, his eyes narrowing"
19"She cut him off, the"
ratio0.605
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences76
matches
0"The Raven's Nest pulsed to"
1"Aurora Carter perched on a"
2"She wrapped her fingers around"
3"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
4"He polished the fine glassware"
5"The faint sound of laughter"
6"A figure slipped in, a"
7"Aurora's heart jolted."
8"She recognized him immediately—the posture,"
9"He shook off the cold,"
10"Time had sculpted him; broad"
11"She hadn’t seen him since"
12"Life spiraled rapidly since those"
13"Peter’s voice carried across the"
14"Aurora’s lips curved, but beneath"
15"A million memories flooded back,"
16"He approached, a tentative smile"
17"She kept her voice light,"
18"He leaned against the bar,"
19"He glanced around, taking in"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Aurora Carter perched on a stool, her black hair, sleek and straight, framed her bright blue eyes that scanned the room with a mix of curiosity and nostalgia."
1"She recalled the sudden shift in Peter's life—his job on the other side of the world, the silence that followed, the ache of distance."
2"Peter nodded, his gaze slipping back to her with a intensity that made her uncomfortable."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags39
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"Peter’s voice carried, disbelief coloring his tone as he navigated through the crowd"
1"She kept, but her heart drummed unevenly in her chest"
2"she replied, the shadows creeping into her gaze"
3"he clarified, his eyes narrowing with sincerity"
4"She cut, the sting of old wounds flaring"
5"she snapped, the sharpness of her voice ricocheting through the bar"
6"he ventured, eyes reflecting regret"
7"He leaned, sincerity threading through his voice"
8"Her fingers tapped, the beat echoing her pulse"
9"she replied, the words tumbling out sharper than intended"
10"he fired back, frustration mingling with an undercurrent of something softer"
11"she interrupted, the edge of her remark draped in resignation"
12"he responded, earnestness flickering in his eyes"
13"she said finally, the word hanging between them like a bridge"
68.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he clarified (clarify)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"she interrupted (interrupt)"
3"he responded (respond)"
4"The quiet rushed back (rush)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.328
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.164
71.6227%