| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 39 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He glanced around [around]" | | 1 | "His fingers flicked nervously [nervously]" | | 2 | "The quiet rushed back [back]" | | 3 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.639 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.103 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 92.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1289 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1289 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "beacon" | | 3 | "solace" | | 4 | "methodical" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "navigated" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "furrowed" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "eyebrow" | | 15 | "etching" | | 16 | "unspoken" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "loomed" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "pulse" | | 21 | "flicked" | | 22 | "clenching" | | 23 | "facade" | | 24 | "unraveling" | | 25 | "tension" | | 26 | "dancing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "time stood still" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "time stood still" | | 1 | "the weight of their silence" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1279 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 964 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Peter" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Peter | 7 | | States | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Decisions | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Peter" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Decisions" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for answers among the bottles" | | 1 | "felt like time stood still, the weight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1279 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 23.69 | | std | 14.66 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "She recognized him immediately—the posture, the sharp jawline, the familiar confidence." | | 1 | "Time had sculpted him; broad shoulders filled his coat, and though his hair went a touch greyer, the same charisma radiated from his presence." | | 2 | "A million memories flooded back, tangled with what she had become since they last met—since everything that had happened." | | 3 | "“Work. Just passing through.” He leaned against the bar, close enough for her to catch the distinct scent of his cologne—woodsy and warm—familiar and foreign all at once." | | 4 | "She recalled the sudden shift in Peter's life—his job on the other side of the world, the silence that followed, the ache of distance." | | 5 | "“I’m back to studying law.” Her voice flickered as she touched the crescent scar on her wrist—a constant reminder of her childhood, her past." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 973 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.022610483042137718 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009249743062692703 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.92 | | std | 6.22 | | cv | 0.482 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 76.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.48484848484848486 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 1 | "He polished the fine glassware" | | 2 | "She recognized him immediately—the posture," | | 3 | "He shook off the cold," | | 4 | "She hadn’t seen him since" | | 5 | "He approached, a tentative smile" | | 6 | "She kept her voice light," | | 7 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 8 | "He glanced around, taking in" | | 9 | "They had been inseparable once," | | 10 | "She recalled the sudden shift" | | 11 | "he asked, breaking the quiet" | | 12 | "she replied, the shadows creeping" | | 13 | "His brow furrowed, concern flickering" | | 14 | "Her voice flickered as she" | | 15 | "He shifted, glancing at the" | | 16 | "She forced a smile, trying" | | 17 | "She stiffened, defensive instinct kicking" | | 18 | "he clarified, his eyes narrowing" | | 19 | "She cut him off, the" |
| | ratio | 0.605 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest pulsed to" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter perched on a" | | 2 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 3 | "Silas Blackwood stood behind the" | | 4 | "He polished the fine glassware" | | 5 | "The faint sound of laughter" | | 6 | "A figure slipped in, a" | | 7 | "Aurora's heart jolted." | | 8 | "She recognized him immediately—the posture," | | 9 | "He shook off the cold," | | 10 | "Time had sculpted him; broad" | | 11 | "She hadn’t seen him since" | | 12 | "Life spiraled rapidly since those" | | 13 | "Peter’s voice carried across the" | | 14 | "Aurora’s lips curved, but beneath" | | 15 | "A million memories flooded back," | | 16 | "He approached, a tentative smile" | | 17 | "She kept her voice light," | | 18 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 19 | "He glanced around, taking in" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter perched on a stool, her black hair, sleek and straight, framed her bright blue eyes that scanned the room with a mix of curiosity and nostalgia." | | 1 | "She recalled the sudden shift in Peter's life—his job on the other side of the world, the silence that followed, the ache of distance." | | 2 | "Peter nodded, his gaze slipping back to her with a intensity that made her uncomfortable." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 39 | | uselessAdditionCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Peter’s voice carried, disbelief coloring his tone as he navigated through the crowd" | | 1 | "She kept, but her heart drummed unevenly in her chest" | | 2 | "she replied, the shadows creeping into her gaze" | | 3 | "he clarified, his eyes narrowing with sincerity" | | 4 | "She cut, the sting of old wounds flaring" | | 5 | "she snapped, the sharpness of her voice ricocheting through the bar" | | 6 | "he ventured, eyes reflecting regret" | | 7 | "He leaned, sincerity threading through his voice" | | 8 | "Her fingers tapped, the beat echoing her pulse" | | 9 | "she replied, the words tumbling out sharper than intended" | | 10 | "he fired back, frustration mingling with an undercurrent of something softer" | | 11 | "she interrupted, the edge of her remark draped in resignation" | | 12 | "he responded, earnestness flickering in his eyes" | | 13 | "she said finally, the word hanging between them like a bridge" |
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| 68.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he clarified (clarify)" | | 1 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "she interrupted (interrupt)" | | 3 | "he responded (respond)" | | 4 | "The quiet rushed back (rush)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.164 | | leniency | 0.328 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.164 | |