Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRMPGDYH7FJG0R9X960T6N

Run Details

Duration:
42.8s
Cost:
$0.036531
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest, grateful for the familiar warmth that greeted her. February winds had cut through her jacket, and her fingers had gone numb on the short walk from Golden Empress. The delivery run had been her last of the day, and she'd promised herself a drink before heading upstairs to her flat. The bar hummed with Tuesday night regulars—not packed, but comfortable. A trio of businessmen nursed whiskies in the corner booth, two women shared wine at a high-top near the window, and a few solo drinkers were scattered along the bar. Jazz played softly through the speakers, a Miles Davis piece that Silas favored. "Evening, Rory." Silas looked up from polishing a glass. The light caught his signet ring as he worked. "Rough day?" "Just cold." She hoisted herself onto her usual stool at the far end of the bar. "Something warm would be nice." Silas nodded and reached for a bottle of Irish whiskey—her father's influence on her palate. He added a cinnamon stick and a splash of hot water, sliding it across to her. "On the house. You look like you could use it." Aurora wrapped her fingers around the glass, letting the heat seep into her skin. "Thanks, Si. Not going to argue with that." She'd just taken her first sip when the door opened again, letting in another blast of cold air. She didn't look up immediately, but something about the newcomer's hesitation made her turn. The man who stood just inside the doorway was scanning the room with the careful assessment of someone in unfamiliar territory. His attention caught on her, and Aurora felt the recognition hit her like a physical blow. "Marcus?" The name fell from her lips before she could think better of it. He looked different—of course he did, it had been seven years. The university boy was gone, replaced by a man with a tailored overcoat and hair cropped close to his head where it had once fallen in his eyes. But the way he tilted his head at the sound of his name was achingly familiar. "Rory Carter?" His surprise mirrored her own. "Christ, what are the odds?" Marcus crossed to her, movements more deliberate than she remembered. The loose-limbed energy of youth had been replaced by something more contained. "I heard you were in London, but..." He gestured vaguely. "It's been a long time." "Seven years, give or take." Aurora motioned to the stool beside her. "Join me?" He slipped off his coat—cashmere, she noted—and settled beside her with a nod to Silas. "Scotch, neat. Whatever's good." Silas raised an eyebrow at Aurora, the silent question clear: Friend or trouble? She gave a small nod, and he relaxed marginally as he poured Marcus's drink. "So." Marcus turned to her once Silas moved away. "You're not what I expected to find in a Soho bar on a Tuesday night." "I live upstairs, actually." She gestured toward the ceiling. "What about you? Last I heard you were at a firm in Edinburgh." "I was." He took a sip of his scotch. "Made partner last year. I'm in London for meetings—potential expansion." There was a practiced smoothness to his words that hadn't been there when they were twenty. Back then, Marcus had stumbled over explanations, gone red-faced during presentations. This polished version felt like a stranger wearing her friend's face. "Congratulations." She meant it, despite the odd hollowness in her chest. "That's what you always wanted, isn't it?" Something flickered across his face—too quick to read. "It is. And you? Did you finish the law degree?" The question landed like a stone. Aurora looked down at her whiskey. "No. Turns out I wasn't cut out for following my father's footsteps after all." "But you were brilliant." The words burst from him, unpolished in a way that suddenly made him recognizable again. "Top of our class before I transferred. Everyone knew you'd be the success story." She laughed, a short sound without humor. "Everyone was wrong. I dropped out in third year." "Why?" The simple question held genuine confusion. "What happened?" Aurora hesitated, weighing how much to tell him. The Evan story? The panic attacks during exams? The crushing realization that she was living someone else's dream? "Life happened." She settled on the simplest version. "I deliver Chinese food now. And help Silas here with the books sometimes." Marcus looked around the bar with new eyes, taking in the worn leather booths, the slightly scuffed floor, the maps on the walls. "Are you happy?" The directness caught her off guard. The Marcus she'd known would have made awkward small talk, offered platitudes. "Sometimes." The honesty surprised her. "Are you?" He turned his glass in his hands. "Sometimes." Silence stretched between them, filled with the weight of divergent paths and abandoned possibilities. "I looked for you," he said finally. "After you disappeared. No one knew where you'd gone." "I needed a fresh start." Aurora traced the crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous habit. "After everything with Evan, and then failing my exams... I just couldn't face everyone." "Evan." Marcus's voice hardened. "I heard what he did. I should have—" "Don't." She cut him off gently. "It wasn't your responsibility." "But I knew something was wrong. I just didn't know how to ask." His perfectly manicured nails dug into his palm. "I was a coward." Silas limped by, refilling their glasses without comment. The hazel eyes that had seen too much during his intelligence days flickered between them, assessing. "You're not the only one with regrets." Aurora sipped her whiskey, letting it burn away the tightness in her throat. "I've spent seven years running from mine." "What would you have done differently?" Marcus asked. "If you could go back?" Aurora considered the question. The past stretched behind her like a labyrinth of wrong turns and missed chances. "I would have been brave enough to admit I was drowning before I went under." She met his eyes directly. "What about you?" Marcus looked away, out toward the rain-spattered windows of the bar. "I would have told you the truth." "Which truth?" "That I was in love with you." He said it simply, like stating the weather. "That watching you with Evan was killing me. That I transferred to Edinburgh because I couldn't bear it anymore." The words hung between them. Aurora's fingers tightened around her glass. "I never knew." Her voice was barely audible over the jazz. "That was the point." Marcus's smile didn't reach his eyes. "I was terrified of losing you completely. And then I lost you anyway." Aurora looked at him—really looked. Beneath the expensive haircut and confident posture, she caught glimpses of the boy she'd known. The one who'd helped her study for constitutional law until 3 AM. Who'd brought her soup when she had the flu. Who'd walked her home after parties without complaint. "We were just kids," she said gently. "Were we? Sometimes I think we were more honest then than I've been since." He drained his glass. "I built this life that looks perfect on paper. Made partner by thirty-two. Flat in Edinburgh's New Town. Holidays in the Mediterranean. And most days I feel like I'm just going through the motions." "At least you finished what you started." Aurora didn't mean for the words to sound bitter, but they did. "Did I? Or did I just follow the path of least resistance?" Marcus laughed hollowly. "God, look at us. What a mess we've made." "Not a mess." Aurora shook her head. "Just... different choices than we planned." Silas appeared at the end of the bar, checking a pocket watch—his signal that it was nearing closing time. "I should go." Marcus reached for his coat. "Early meeting tomorrow." Aurora nodded, suddenly reluctant to see him leave. "It was good to see you, Marcus." He stood, hesitating. "Maybe we could... I don't know, get coffee while I'm in town? Catch up properly?" The question hung between them—an offering, not a demand. A possible bridge across the years that had separated them. "I'd like that." She pulled out her phone. "Same number?" "Same number." He smiled, and for a moment, she saw the boy she'd known in the man before her. "Some things don't change, I guess." They exchanged contacts in silence, the small task filling the space where words failed. "Goodnight, Rory." "Goodnight, Marcus." He walked toward the door, his reflection fragmenting in the rain-streaked windows. Just before leaving, he turned back. "For what it's worth, I think you would have made a terrible lawyer." Aurora laughed, startled by the unexpected truth. "I think you're right." The door closed behind him. Silas approached, leaning his weight on the bar to take pressure off his bad knee. "Old friend?" he asked, the casual question carrying layers of concern. Aurora looked down at the new contact in her phone, a small link to the past she'd tried to outrun. "Yes." She slid her empty glass toward him. "An old friend."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:27.249Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"she said gently [gently]"
3"Marcus laughed hollowly [hollowly]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.121
effectiveRatio0.099
70.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count2
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"gently"
4"perfectly"
5"completely"
6"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"potential"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"comfortable"
3"scanning"
4"eyebrow"
5"potential"
6"flickered"
7"footsteps"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"traced"
11"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1506
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount999
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Tuesday1
Miles1
Davis1
Silas9
Irish1
Aurora17
Marcus12
Friend1
Evan1
persons
0"Davis"
1"Silas"
2"Aurora"
3"Marcus"
4"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Golden"
globalScore0.649
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a stranger wearing her friend"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.664
wordCount1506
matches
0"not packed, but comfortable"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean19.82
std11.96
cv0.604
sampleLengths
059
153
220
321
431
510
622
732
837
914
1055
1112
1222
1315
1414
1515
164
1727
1824
1922
2019
2138
2218
2318
2412
2514
2633
2716
289
2926
3021
3123
323
3318
347
358
3614
3716
3830
3912
4010
4125
4224
4327
4413
4518
4623
4718
482
4934
94.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"been seven"
1"was gone"
2"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was scanning"
1"was nearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences143
ratio0.056
matches
0"The bar hummed with Tuesday night regulars—not packed, but comfortable."
1"Silas nodded and reached for a bottle of Irish whiskey—her father's influence on her palate."
2"He looked different—of course he did, it had been seven years."
3"He slipped off his coat—cashmere, she noted—and settled beside her with a nod to Silas."
4"Something flickered across his face—too quick to read."
5"Aurora looked at him—really looked."
6"Silas appeared at the end of the bar, checking a pocket watch—his signal that it was nearing closing time."
7"The question hung between them—an offering, not a demand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1013
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.0384995064165844
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01678183613030602
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean10.53
std5.98
cv0.568
sampleLengths
017
120
222
310
430
513
69
79
82
916
105
1115
1216
1310
1414
158
1618
1714
1821
1916
2014
2111
2228
2316
247
255
2610
2712
2810
295
3012
312
3215
334
3413
3514
369
3715
389
3913
409
4110
4216
4311
4411
4511
467
478
4810
496
68.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.44755244755244755
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners64
34.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Just before leaving, he turned"
ratio0.01
90.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences96
matches
0"She hoisted herself onto her"
1"He added a cinnamon stick"
2"She'd just taken her first"
3"She didn't look up immediately,"
4"His attention caught on her,"
5"He looked different—of course he"
6"His surprise mirrored her own"
7"He gestured vaguely"
8"He slipped off his coat—cashmere,"
9"She gave a small nod,"
10"She gestured toward the ceiling"
11"He took a sip of"
12"She meant it, despite the"
13"She laughed, a short sound"
14"She settled on the simplest"
15"He turned his glass in"
16"he said finally"
17"She cut him off gently"
18"His perfectly manicured nails dug"
19"She met his eyes directly"
ratio0.323
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences96
matches
0"Aurora pushed open the door"
1"February winds had cut through"
2"The delivery run had been"
3"The bar hummed with Tuesday"
4"A trio of businessmen nursed"
5"Jazz played softly through the"
6"Silas looked up from polishing"
7"The light caught his signet"
8"She hoisted herself onto her"
9"Silas nodded and reached for"
10"He added a cinnamon stick"
11"Aurora wrapped her fingers around"
12"She'd just taken her first"
13"She didn't look up immediately,"
14"The man who stood just"
15"His attention caught on her,"
16"The name fell from her"
17"He looked different—of course he"
18"The university boy was gone,"
19"His surprise mirrored her own"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The man who stood just inside the doorway was scanning the room with the careful assessment of someone in unfamiliar territory."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he asked, the casual question carrying layers of concern"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Marcus laughed hollowly (laugh)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.025
81.2045%