Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRMTYZ76SHCJ9NS1CFG3YC

Run Details

Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.008592

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow bleeding through the thin fabric of her shirt like a slow-burning ember. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, the weight of the delivery bag from Golden Empress pressing into her shoulder. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces frozen in silent screams. She shouldn’t have come. Not at night. Not alone. But the pendant had pulsed against her skin all evening, a steady, insistent warmth that grew hotter the closer she got to Richmond Park. And then there was the message, slipped into her pocket during her last delivery: *"The Grove. Midnight. Come alone."* No signature. No explanation. Just the same handwriting as the note that had arrived with the pendant weeks ago. The air smelled wrong. Too sweet, like rotting flowers. The wildflowers that should have carpeted the grove were wilted, their petals blackened at the edges. The standing stones cast long, jagged shadows in the moonlight, stretching toward her like skeletal fingers. Rory stepped between them. The world tilted. A breath of wind that wasn’t wind brushed against her neck, and for a second, the trees seemed to lean in, their branches creaking like old bones. She swallowed hard and kept walking. The clearing opened up before her, bathed in silver light. The grass here was still green, but the blades trembled, though there was no breeze. At the center of the grove stood a single oak, its trunk wider than three men, its roots twisting into the earth like veins. A hollow gaped in its side, dark and yawning. The pendant flared hot against her skin. She reached for it, fingers brushing the smooth crimson stone. The glow pulsed in time with her heartbeat, faster now. Something moved in the hollow of the tree. A shadow. A shape. "Hello?" Her voice sounded too loud, too sharp. No answer. Just the rustle of leaves that shouldn’t have been moving. She took a step closer. The hollow wasn’t empty. Something glinted inside—a pair of eyes, reflecting the moonlight like a cat’s. Then they blinked out. Rory froze. A whisper slithered through the grove, so soft she almost missed it. Her name. *"Aurora."* She spun, heart hammering. Nothing. Just the trees, the stones, the unnatural stillness. Then the ground beneath her feet trembled. Not an earthquake. Something deeper. Something alive. The roots of the great oak twitched. She stumbled back, nearly tripping over her own feet. The roots writhed, slithering across the grass like serpents, inching toward her. The pendant burned now, searing her skin, but she couldn’t look away. A hand shot out from the hollow. Long fingers, pale as bone, wrapped around the edge of the tree. Then another. A figure dragged itself into the moonlight, crawling on all fours like a broken thing. Rory’s breath hitched. It was a woman—or it had been. Her skin was stretched too tight over sharp angles, her limbs too long, her joints bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach clench. Dark hair hung in matted strands around a face that was almost familiar. Almost human. The woman lifted her head. Her eyes were black. No whites. No pupils. Just endless dark. "Rory," the thing whispered, its voice like dry leaves scraping stone. "You came." Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She should run. She should scream. But her feet were rooted to the spot, her body locked in place by something deeper than fear. The thing smiled. Its lips split too wide, too many teeth glinting in the moonlight. "Do you know who I am?" Rory shook her head, mute. The thing tilted its head, studying her. "No. Of course you don’t." It pushed itself up, standing on legs that bent backward at the knee. "But you will." The roots coiled around Rory’s ankles. She gasped, yanking against them, but they held fast, tightening like ropes. The pendant flared white-hot, searing through her shirt, branding her skin. She cried out, more in shock than pain, and the thing in front of her laughed—a sound like breaking glass. "You feel it, don’t you?" it crooned, taking a step closer. "The pull. The call." Its fingers twitched at its sides. "You’re one of us now." Rory’s vision swam. The grove spun around her, the trees blurring into streaks of black and silver. The thing’s voice echoed in her skull, whispering words she couldn’t understand but somehow knew. The roots dragged her forward. She fought, digging her heels into the earth, but the ground beneath her was soft, giving way like quicksand. The thing’s hand closed around her wrist, its grip cold as death. Its fingers traced the crescent scar on her skin, and for a heartbeat, the world went still. Then the thing leaned in, its breath reeking of damp earth and decay. "You’ve been marked," it murmured. "And now, you’re mine."
total_cost0.008592

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount835
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount835
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"searing"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"trembled"
5"whisper"
6"searing"
7"stomach"
8"familiar"
9"pulse"
10"glinting"
11"echoed"
12"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords829
ratio0.007
matches
0"\"The Grove. Midnight. Come alone.\""
1"\"Aurora.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount784
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory9
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Empress"
places
0"Golden"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.926
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces frozen in silent screams"
1"looked like faces frozen in silent scream"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount829
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean22.41
std18.07
cv0.807
sampleLengths
072
19
262
341
44
536
658
77
832
98
1012
1125
122
1315
1413
1514
167
1733
187
1929
203
2145
225
2311
2413
2530
2621
275
2828
296
3043
3126
3232
335
3448
3513
369
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"were wilted"
1"was stretched"
2"were rooted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences94
ratio0.043
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces frozen in silent screams."
1"Something glinted inside—a pair of eyes, reflecting the moonlight like a cat’s."
2"It was a woman—or it had been."
3"She cried out, more in shock than pain, and the thing in front of her laughed—a sound like breaking glass."
78.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount790
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
1"tight over sharp angles,"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.05063291139240506
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012658227848101266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean8.82
std6.69
cv0.759
sampleLengths
023
120
229
34
43
52
624
721
82
915
104
115
1216
1316
144
153
1627
176
1810
1915
2024
219
227
2310
2410
258
262
272
288
292
3010
315
324
3312
344
352
3612
372
381
394
401
418
427
433
442
452
467
479
4812
4912
39.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2553191489361702
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences73
matches
0"Just the same handwriting as"
1"Too sweet, like rotting flowers."
2"Just the rustle of leaves"
3"Then they blinked out."
4"Just the trees, the stones,"
5"Then the ground beneath her"
6"Just endless dark."
7"Then the thing leaned in,"
ratio0.11
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences73
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She shouldn’t have come."
2"She swallowed hard and kept"
3"She reached for it, fingers"
4"Her voice sounded too loud,"
5"She took a step closer."
6"She spun, heart hammering."
7"She stumbled back, nearly tripping"
8"It was a woman—or it"
9"Her skin was stretched too"
10"Her eyes were black."
11"She should run."
12"She should scream."
13"Its lips split too wide,"
14"It pushed itself up, standing"
15"She gasped, yanking against them,"
16"She cried out, more in"
17"it crooned, taking a step"
18"Its fingers twitched at its"
19"She fought, digging her heels"
ratio0.288
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"She shouldn’t have come."
4"The air smelled wrong."
5"The wildflowers that should have"
6"The standing stones cast long,"
7"Rory stepped between them."
8"The world tilted."
9"A breath of wind that"
10"She swallowed hard and kept"
11"The clearing opened up before"
12"The grass here was still"
13"A hollow gaped in its"
14"The pendant flared hot against"
15"She reached for it, fingers"
16"The glow pulsed in time"
17"Something moved in the hollow"
18"Her voice sounded too loud,"
19"She took a step closer."
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces fro…"
1"But the pendant had pulsed against her skin all evening, a steady, insistent warmth that grew hotter the closer she got to Richmond Park."
2"Her skin was stretched too tight over sharp angles, her limbs too long, her joints bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach clench."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the thing whispered (whisper)"
1"it murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.308
80.8272%