| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 835 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 835 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 829 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Grove. Midnight. Come alone.\"" | | 1 | "\"Aurora.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 784 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Empress" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.926 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces frozen in silent screams" | | 1 | "looked like faces frozen in silent scream" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 829 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 22.41 | | std | 18.07 | | cv | 0.807 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 9 |
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| 93.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "were wilted" | | 1 | "was stretched" | | 2 | "were rooted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces frozen in silent screams." | | 1 | "Something glinted inside—a pair of eyes, reflecting the moonlight like a cat’s." | | 2 | "It was a woman—or it had been." | | 3 | "She cried out, more in shock than pain, and the thing in front of her laughed—a sound like breaking glass." |
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| 78.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 790 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" | | 1 | "tight over sharp angles," |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.05063291139240506 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0012658227848101266 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 8.82 | | std | 6.69 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 39.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2553191489361702 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same handwriting as" | | 1 | "Too sweet, like rotting flowers." | | 2 | "Just the rustle of leaves" | | 3 | "Then they blinked out." | | 4 | "Just the trees, the stones," | | 5 | "Then the ground beneath her" | | 6 | "Just endless dark." | | 7 | "Then the thing leaned in," |
| | ratio | 0.11 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "She swallowed hard and kept" | | 3 | "She reached for it, fingers" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 5 | "She took a step closer." | | 6 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 7 | "She stumbled back, nearly tripping" | | 8 | "It was a woman—or it" | | 9 | "Her skin was stretched too" | | 10 | "Her eyes were black." | | 11 | "She should run." | | 12 | "She should scream." | | 13 | "Its lips split too wide," | | 14 | "It pushed itself up, standing" | | 15 | "She gasped, yanking against them," | | 16 | "She cried out, more in" | | 17 | "it crooned, taking a step" | | 18 | "Its fingers twitched at its" | | 19 | "She fought, digging her heels" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 69.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 4 | "The air smelled wrong." | | 5 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 6 | "The standing stones cast long," | | 7 | "Rory stepped between them." | | 8 | "The world tilted." | | 9 | "A breath of wind that" | | 10 | "She swallowed hard and kept" | | 11 | "The clearing opened up before" | | 12 | "The grass here was still" | | 13 | "A hollow gaped in its" | | 14 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 15 | "She reached for it, fingers" | | 16 | "The glow pulsed in time" | | 17 | "Something moved in the hollow" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 19 | "She took a step closer." |
| | ratio | 0.781 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—too many angles, too many knots that looked like faces fro…" | | 1 | "But the pendant had pulsed against her skin all evening, a steady, insistent warmth that grew hotter the closer she got to Richmond Park." | | 2 | "Her skin was stretched too tight over sharp angles, her limbs too long, her joints bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach clench." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the thing whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |