| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She spun around [around]" | | 1 | "It chuckled softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.789 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 76.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "hungrily" | | 4 | "reluctantly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsms | 44 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "sinister" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "resolve" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "cacophony" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "flawless" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "chill" | | 21 | "depths" | | 22 | "perfect" | | 23 | "raced" | | 24 | "pulsed" | | 25 | "glistening" | | 26 | "looming" | | 27 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "felt uneasy" | | 1 | "felt a tug" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1255 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1149 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if responding to an unseen presence lurking at the periphery" | | 1 | "seemed hungry their invisible jaws gaping wide to swallow her whole" | | 2 | "appeared unnatural" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1255 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 39.22 | | std | 19.77 | | cv | 0.504 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was waiting" | | 2 | "were entering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.183 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with the heady scent of wildflowers—no, that was a deception, a tantalising tease that played tricks on the mind." | | 1 | "The sound wasn’t shy; it drew nearer, a snaking reality that coiled around her anxiety." | | 2 | "A quick glance over her shoulder confirmed nothing—only darkness pooling like spilled ink." | | 3 | "But even the pendant felt uneasy tonight—tonight, it pulsated wildly as if responding to an unseen presence lurking at the periphery." | | 4 | "She recalled the last time she had entered such a world; the horrors still clung like cobwebs in her mind." | | 5 | "The midnight blooms shifted, petals shimmering against an unseen breeze, but no wind caressed her skin; instead, the world felt thick and electric." | | 6 | "As if it was waiting—waiting for her to make a choice." | | 7 | "Another sound flickered at the edge of her perception—an insistent whisper, twisting around her thoughts, beckoning, beckoning." | | 8 | "This couldn’t be just a beautiful fantasy; she could feel the tension crawling over her skin, the sinister awareness of something observing her." | | 9 | "A shuffling ahead caught her attention—a figure hunched low, just inside the tree line, obscured by shifting leaves." | | 10 | "Its features were flawless, skin shimmered like opalescent glass but marred by absence—a hollow gaze that offered no comfort or warmth, only an unsettling chill." | | 11 | "“You seek that which is lost; you seek that which is hidden.”" | | 12 | "In the depths of her peripheral vision, eyes flickered and glowed—a roll of amber orbs watching, waiting." | | 13 | "The fear she had contained no longer felt distant—it was real, alive, powerful, and looming like a darkness that could swallow her whole." | | 14 | "The woods murmured with secrets, beckoning her with half-formed whispers—she could almost hear the soft song of the Fae dancing in the air, yet an impending dread snared her heart, wrenching at the kernel of her resolve." |
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| 91.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1160 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.05 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014655172413793103 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 15.3 | | std | 6.66 | | cv | 0.435 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 84.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.524390243902439 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a sharp tang of" | | 1 | "Suddenly, something darted past, just" | | 2 | "More shadows stirred, each one" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She had entered The Fae" | | 1 | "she whispered under her breath," | | 2 | "She gripped the silver chain" | | 3 | "she murmured, though doubt crept" | | 4 | "She recalled the last time" | | 5 | "She could do this." | | 6 | "She felt a tug in" | | 7 | "She spun around, her heart" | | 8 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 9 | "She stepped further into the" | | 10 | "she whispered, a tremor in" | | 11 | "She felt her breath falter" | | 12 | "She took a step back," | | 13 | "she demanded, voice ringing with" | | 14 | "Its features were flawless, skin" | | 15 | "it spoke, voice like silver" | | 16 | "It chuckled softly, words sibilant" | | 17 | "it was real and becoming" | | 18 | "she commanded, voice trembling just" | | 19 | "Her heart raced, pounding like" |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 94.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stumbled through the underbrush," | | 1 | "She had entered The Fae" | | 2 | "The air was thick." | | 3 | "she whispered under her breath," | | 4 | "A sharp rustling came from" | | 5 | "The sound wasn’t shy; it" | | 6 | "A quick glance over her" | | 7 | "She gripped the silver chain" | | 8 | "The grove was a pocket" | | 9 | "Aurora had seen the changes" | | 10 | "A revelation awaited her within" | | 11 | "The legends of the Fae" | | 12 | "she murmured, though doubt crept" | | 13 | "She recalled the last time" | | 14 | "She could do this." | | 15 | "Flowers swayed gently, colours glowing" | | 16 | "Aurora stepped forward, entranced by" | | 17 | "She felt a tug in" | | 18 | "a voice threaded through the" | | 19 | "She spun around, her heart" |
| | ratio | 0.731 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, tonight was different, or" | | 1 | "As if it was waiting—waiting" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with the heady scent of wildflowers—no, that was a deception, a tantalising tease that played tricks on the mind." | | 1 | "With each hesitant step, she felt the ancient oak standing stones drawing closer, their weathered faces expressionless yet watchful, as if they bore witness to …" | | 2 | "The sound wasn’t shy; it drew nearer, a snaking reality that coiled around her anxiety." | | 3 | "But even the pendant felt uneasy tonight—tonight, it pulsated wildly as if responding to an unseen presence lurking at the periphery." | | 4 | "She felt a tug in her chest, a resonant call that drew her in." | | 5 | "Another sound flickered at the edge of her perception—an insistent whisper, twisting around her thoughts, beckoning, beckoning." | | 6 | "The cacophony of leaves, the rustling grass, all thrummed to the same muted pulse, an undertone that felt as though she were entering the heart of the grove its…" | | 7 | "Its features were flawless, skin shimmered like opalescent glass but marred by absence—a hollow gaze that offered no comfort or warmth, only an unsettling chill…" | | 8 | "The fear she had contained no longer felt distant—it was real, alive, powerful, and looming like a darkness that could swallow her whole." | | 9 | "The woods murmured with secrets, beckoning her with half-formed whispers—she could almost hear the soft song of the Fae dancing in the air, yet an impending dre…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her pulse a dull thump in her ears" | | 1 | "She spun around, her heart galloping wildly once again" | | 2 | "she demanded, voice ringing with defiance more than confidence" | | 3 | "Aurora shouted, the fright pumped through her veins, igniting instinct over composure" | | 4 | "she commanded, voice trembling just enough to reveal doubt" | | 5 | "She cried, unable to suppress the fear clawing at her throat" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "it spoke (speak)" | | 5 | "It chuckled softly (chuckle)" | | 6 | "Aurora shouted (shout)" | | 7 | "the apparition laughed (laugh)" | | 8 | "She cried (cry)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.947 | |