Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRMYE0E5QWXPQ5AJX1HVQ1

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn strode into the dimly lit space, the echoes of her steps reverberating off the tiled walls of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Tonight, The Veil Market had chosen this subterranean location, shrouded in obscurity and tinged with the scent of aged metal. A scene lined with the bizarre flickered under intermittent fluorescent lights, market stalls transformed into exhibits of peculiar crime. Her worn leather watch ticked softly, marking the time as she absorbed the decadent atmosphere, evidence of unknown misdeeds filling her field of vision. Kneeling amidst it all was her colleague, Sergeant Ford, his brow furrowed with concentration. Nearby, a patch of crimson spread across the damp concrete, a stark contrast to the mosaic of colourful tarpaulins draped across vendor stalls. “Ford,” Harlow called out, her voice holding the authority of years in service. He looked up, meeting her gaze, revealing a face caught between speculation and misunderstanding. “Quinn. Glad you're here. It's strange, even for this place.” She closed the distance, weaving past stalls cluttered with enchanted relics and prohibited blends. Her eyes settled on the focus of Ford’s scrutiny—a body laid out, limbs at uncanny angles, slightly obscured by a tent corner. A chalk outline already traced its contour, but the tale it spun was incomplete, fragments left to be deciphered. “What have we got?” she queried, her stare unwavering. “Victim’s got traces of ritual markings, probably from the market’s merchandise, but…” Ford shook his head, struggling to articulate the dissonance. She crouched beside him, tracing her fingertips along the rough cement but stopping just shy of the stains that darkened it. Her eyes flickered to the surrounding scene, scanning for the unfamiliar in the familiar. “The markings don’t match anything I’ve seen before,” Ford continued, frustration lining his words. “It's like they were meant to confuse.” Harlow remained silent, her mind a whirl of connections and possibilities. Her gaze drifted across the array of items at the stall—each piece bearing a significance lost beneath the surface of its sales. Then, her focus shifted to the scattered contents of a nearby satchel, its interior littered with paraphernalia—artifacts and alchemical tools, akin to the kind she’d seen in Eva's own collection. Something clicked. “Look closer,” she urged, pointing to the items strewn haphazardly beside the body. “The placement isn't random. There's an intention behind how they're arranged.” Ford frowned, squinting as though expecting the trinkets and talismans to reveal their secrets openly. “You think this is some kind of setup?” “I think someone wants it to appear one way, but it’s all smoke and mirrors,” Harlow replied. Her sharp jawline tightened with concentration. She moved with deliberate precision, probing the scene for nuances, discerning those details that fell under the radar of common interpretation. There, at the stall’s edge, an anomaly caught her eye—a peculiar compass, lying atop a blood-stained rag. Its verdigris-coated casing held a strange allure, sigils etched delicately across its tarnished face. She picked it up gingerly, its needle remaining still despite the air heavy with supernatural energy. “This won't guide anyone anywhere tonight,” she mused, its quiet abandon speaking volumes. “The compass is deliberately deactivated.” Ford’s skepticism stayed rooted, but curiosity tinged his posture. “Deactivated? On purpose?” “Someone's pulling the strings,” she hypothesized, feeling the weight of the compass settle into her palm. “This is part of a larger picture.” Her mind flicked back to the codex of The Veil Market, hinting at the labyrinth of secrets nestled within its transient walls. She turned the compass in her hand, tracing its contours, a growing certainty that each stall harboured truths cloaked in shadows. “This market's notorious for disguising its sins as commerce,” she reflected aloud. The memory of her lost partner, DS Morris, lingered at the edge of her mind, his unexplained demise intertwined with the same world now surrounding her. Ford remained unconvinced, yet amidst his skepticism, a glimmer of intrigue sparked across his features. “You think the market’s involved?” “What we see is merely the tip of the iceberg,” she replied, standing, the compass still clutched tight. “There’s more beneath the surface, always is.” Stepping away, she retraced her steps, paying heed to the placement of items as though they were signposts pointing toward deeper truths. The market buzzed with activity, the gathering nocturnal throng unaware, or uncaring, of the tragedy nestled amid its stalls. Each vendor eyed her warily, their faces a blend of curiosity and indifference. She felt their scrutiny but met it head-on, knowing the veil of deception held thin around her. “Look at these,” she indicated toward Ford, drawing his attention to the rest of the scene. The very ordinary could often mask the extraordinary, waiting for a perceptive mind to unearth the secrets. Then, amidst the clamour and barter, hidden away from prying eyes, she spied a small, obscure inscription on the market’s stone wall—concealed beneath a wilting banner. Though its language was foreign, Harlow’s understanding stretched beyond the norm, Eva’s teachings at the museum revealing symbols whose meanings transcended time and place. “It's here,” she murmured, urgency threading through her words. The piece they faced twisted reality, a puzzle shaped by conjurer's hands, weaving stories designed to mislead. Ford joined her, peering at the wall as though it might speak the truth aloud. “Are we missing something?” Harlow’s eyes narrowed, unravelling the significance, the intricacies laid bare beneath the weight of her scrutiny. “Think of it as misdirection. The real story lies beyond what these simple symbols suggest.” She turned, fixing Ford with a deliberate look, her own determination echoed across his uncertainty. “We must tread carefully. The stakes are hidden, but high.” “As always,” Ford nodded, offering her the assurance that kept their partnership steadfast amidst the anomalies they met with. “I’ll follow your lead.” Harlow let a rare smile surface, the sharp outline of her jaw softened just a fraction. His trust was a welcome reprieve, even as mysteries closed thick around them. As they moved through The Veil Market's labyrinthine passages once more, the echoes of their discovery hovered within reach. Each turn suggested mysteries entangled with reality, Harlow’s expertise allowing her to untangle the web that sought to ensnare them both. Beneath the salaryman guise, beneath the patina of verdigris, lay the art of deception—crafted with precision in a world that thrived on secrets. And at its heart, the truth lay dormant, awaiting only the touch of insight to raise its mask. Harlow had no intention of leaving the night's puzzle unsolved.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she reflected aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
72.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"warily"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
3"warily"
4"very"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"echoes"
count2
1
word"tinged"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"amidst"
count4
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"mosaic"
count1
7
word"uncanny"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"intrigue"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"tinged"
2"flickered"
3"amidst"
4"furrowed"
5"stark"
6"mosaic"
7"uncanny"
8"traced"
9"unwavering"
10"tracing"
11"scanning"
12"familiar"
13"etched"
14"weight"
15"flicked"
16"intrigue"
17"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1084
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount910
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Ford"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow9
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden1
Veil3
Market3
Sergeant1
Ford11
Eva2
Morris1
Stepping1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Sergeant"
4"Ford"
5"Eva"
6"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.896
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though expecting the trinkets and talismans to reveal their secrets openly"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1084
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.11
std15.54
cv0.516
sampleLengths
065
161
213
324
455
59
621
735
821
963
102
1124
1223
1323
1452
1516
1618
1712
1823
1943
2038
2120
2225
2341
2430
2533
2650
2726
2819
2931
3025
3123
3229
3340
3441
3510
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences71
ratio0.085
matches
0"Her eyes settled on the focus of Ford’s scrutiny—a body laid out, limbs at uncanny angles, slightly obscured by a tent corner."
1"Her gaze drifted across the array of items at the stall—each piece bearing a significance lost beneath the surface of its sales."
2"Then, her focus shifted to the scattered contents of a nearby satchel, its interior littered with paraphernalia—artifacts and alchemical tools, akin to the kind she’d seen in Eva's own collection."
3"There, at the stall’s edge, an anomaly caught her eye—a peculiar compass, lying atop a blood-stained rag."
4"Then, amidst the clamour and barter, hidden away from prying eyes, she spied a small, obscure inscription on the market’s stone wall—concealed beneath a wilting banner."
5"Beneath the salaryman guise, beneath the patina of verdigris, lay the art of deception—crafted with precision in a world that thrived on secrets."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"under intermittent fluorescent lights,"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.028291621327529923
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01088139281828074
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean15.27
std6.19
cv0.406
sampleLengths
026
120
219
324
414
523
613
714
810
914
1022
1119
129
1321
1421
1514
1614
177
1811
1922
2030
212
2213
2311
2415
258
2617
276
2821
2917
3014
3116
3213
335
349
353
3616
377
3822
3921
4012
4126
4215
435
4418
457
4622
4719
4813
4917
82.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.49295774647887325
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Then, her focus shifted to"
1"Then, amidst the clamour and"
ratio0.036
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"He looked up, meeting her"
2"She closed the distance, weaving"
3"Her eyes settled on the"
4"she queried, her stare unwavering"
5"She crouched beside him, tracing"
6"Her eyes flickered to the"
7"Her gaze drifted across the"
8"she urged, pointing to the"
9"Her sharp jawline tightened with"
10"She moved with deliberate precision,"
11"Its verdigris-coated casing held a"
12"She picked it up gingerly,"
13"she mused, its quiet abandon"
14"she hypothesized, feeling the weight"
15"Her mind flicked back to"
16"She turned the compass in"
17"she reflected aloud"
18"she replied, standing, the compass"
19"She felt their scrutiny but"
ratio0.429
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn strode into"
1"Tonight, The Veil Market had"
2"A scene lined with the"
3"Her worn leather watch ticked"
4"Harlow called out, her voice"
5"He looked up, meeting her"
6"She closed the distance, weaving"
7"Her eyes settled on the"
8"A chalk outline already traced"
9"she queried, her stare unwavering"
10"Ford shook his head, struggling"
11"She crouched beside him, tracing"
12"Her eyes flickered to the"
13"Ford continued, frustration lining his"
14"Harlow remained silent, her mind"
15"Her gaze drifted across the"
16"she urged, pointing to the"
17"Ford frowned, squinting as though"
18"Her sharp jawline tightened with"
19"She moved with deliberate precision,"
ratio0.839
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Though its language was foreign,"
ratio0.018
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He looked up, meeting her gaze, revealing a face caught between speculation and misunderstanding."
1"She crouched beside him, tracing her fingertips along the rough cement but stopping just shy of the stains that darkened it."
2"Ford frowned, squinting as though expecting the trinkets and talismans to reveal their secrets openly."
3"She moved with deliberate precision, probing the scene for nuances, discerning those details that fell under the radar of common interpretation."
4"Stepping away, she retraced her steps, paying heed to the placement of items as though they were signposts pointing toward deeper truths."
5"Each turn suggested mysteries entangled with reality, Harlow’s expertise allowing her to untangle the web that sought to ensnare them both."
6"Beneath the salaryman guise, beneath the patina of verdigris, lay the art of deception—crafted with precision in a world that thrived on secrets."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Harlow called out, her voice holding the authority of years in service"
1"she queried, her stare unwavering"
2"Ford shook, struggling to articulate the dissonance"
3"Ford continued, frustration lining his words"
4"she mused, its quiet abandon speaking volumes"
5"she murmured, urgency threading through her words"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Harlow called out (call out)"
1"she queried (query)"
2"Ford continued (continue)"
3"she urged (urge)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.385
78.0099%