Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRMZNEBVMQ6NDF6YKR24PJ

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.001790
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chill night air nipped at Aurora's bare arms as she stepped into the Fae Grove. The familiar ancient oaks stood silent and watchful, their gnarled branches reaching up to the inky sky like clawed fingers. She pulled her worn leather jacket tighter, wishing she had thought to grab a scarf before leaving her flat. Her footsteps crunched on the path, the sound seeming unnaturally loud in the still night. The grove was shrouded in moonlight, the muted silver glow casting long shadows that flickered and shifted at the edges of her vision. Aurora paused, straining her ears, but the only sounds were the faint rustling of leaves and her own steady breathing. Why had she come here, again? The details of her earlier decision were already slipping away, like wisps of dream. She shook her head, letting out a small sigh. It didn't matter now. All that mattered was getting back home. With a decisive nod, Aurora started walking again, keeping her pace brisk. The sooner she reached the edge of the grove, the sooner she could leave this eerie place behind. As she moved deeper into the forest, the shadows seemed to deepen, enveloping her in a cocoon of darkness. Aurora's heartbeat quickened, her footsteps faltering. She strained her eyes, trying to make out any landmarks, any sign that she was heading the right way, but the blackness was impenetrable. A twig snapped somewhere off to her left, and Aurora froze, her breath catching in her throat. Slowly, she turned her head, peering into the gloom. Her eyes frantically searched the darkness, but she saw nothing. Just endless, swallowing black. Swallowing hard, Aurora forced herself to keep walking, her steps more hesitant now. The air felt thick, almost stifling, and she had the unsettling sensation of being watched. Her fingers curled around the pendant at her throat, the familiar warmth of the Heartstone a small comfort. Another sound, this time a faint rustling, came from behind her. Aurora whirled around, her heart pounding. "Hello?" she called out, cursing the slight tremor in her voice. "Is someone there?" Silence. Shaking her head, Aurora turned back and continued on, her pace quickening. She couldn't shake the feeling that she was being followed, that something was stalking her through the shadows. Her skin prickled with unease, and she fought the urge to break into a run. Up ahead, a dim light flickered. Aurora squinted, her pace slowing as she approached what appeared to be a small fire. Relief flooded through her, and she hurried towards it, the warmth of the flames a welcome sight. As she drew closer, however, a strange sensation washed over her. The light seemed to pulse and flicker, as if it were alive. And the shadows around it seemed to move, to twist and writhe, as if they had a mind of their own. Aurora paused, her brow furrowing. Something was wrong, very wrong. She took a cautious step forward, peering into the darkness beyond the fire. And that's when she saw it. A figure, tall and gaunt, stood just beyond the firelight. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as it turned towards her, its movements jerky and unnatural. She couldn't make out any distinct features, but she knew, with a sinking feeling, that she was not alone. Instinctively, her hand went to the pendant at her throat, her fingers curling around the warm, familiar gem. The faint glow pulsed and brightened, casting a soft, crimson light over the scene. In that flickering light, Aurora caught a glimpse of the creature's face - if it could be called a face. It was a twisted, almost inhuman visage, with sunken eyes and a gaping, lipless mouth. The sight sent a shiver of terror down her spine, and she took a step back, her heart pounding in her ears. The creature let out a low, guttural growl, and Aurora knew she had to get away. She turned and fled, her lungs burning as she ran blindly through the darkness. The world around her blurred, and she could hear the creature's heavy footsteps pounding behind her, closing in. Her foot caught on a tree root, and she stumbled, nearly falling. Panic surged through her, and she pushed herself onwards, driven by pure, animal fear. The pendant at her throat pulsed with a steady, comforting rhythm, as if it were urging her on. As she ran, Aurora's mind raced, desperately searching for a way out. She knew she couldn't keep this up forever, and the creature seemed relentless in its pursuit. Her only hope was to somehow lose it in the maze of trees and shadows. Up ahead, she saw a faint glimmer of light - the edge of the grove, she realized with a surge of hope. Summoning the last of her strength, she pushed on, her lungs burning with the effort. But just as she neared the exit, a new sound reached her ears - a deep, rumbling growl, coming from directly in front of her. Aurora skidded to a halt, her eyes widening in horror as a second creature, larger and even more grotesque than the first, emerged from the shadows. She was trapped.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:36.626Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:36 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"footsteps"
count3
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"pounding"
count3
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"furrowing"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count2
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"footsteps"
3"flickered"
4"quickened"
5"gloom"
6"warmth"
7"pounding"
8"silence"
9"pulse"
10"flicker"
11"furrowing"
12"pulsed"
13"down her spine"
14"comforting"
15"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
84.68% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences62
matches
0"d with unease"
1"a surge of hope"
2"g in horror"
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords866
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount862
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Silence1
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.63
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed relentless in its pursuit"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount866
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"followed, that something"
60.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean39.36
std14.29
cv0.363
sampleLengths
055
158
240
330
449
540
646
731
81
945
1038
1144
1229
1345
1432
1557
1648
1744
1843
1937
2051
213
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was shrouded"
1"being followed"
70.13% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs154
matches
0"was heading"
1"was stalking"
2"were urging"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences63
ratio0.048
matches
0"In that flickering light, Aurora caught a glimpse of the creature's face - if it could be called a face."
1"Up ahead, she saw a faint glimmer of light - the edge of the grove, she realized with a surge of hope."
2"But just as she neared the exit, a new sound reached her ears - a deep, rumbling growl, coming from directly in front of her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount859
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03958090803259604
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011641443538998836
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean13.75
std5.93
cv0.431
sampleLengths
016
120
219
315
423
520
66
714
89
94
107
1112
1218
1319
146
1524
1617
179
1810
194
2013
2115
2218
2311
246
2511
263
271
2812
2918
3015
316
3215
3317
3411
3512
3621
375
385
3913
406
4110
4216
4319
4418
4514
4620
4715
4822
4916
68.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"All that mattered was getting"
1"Slowly, she turned her head,"
2"Just endless, swallowing black."
3"Instinctively, her hand went to"
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences61
matches
0"She pulled her worn leather"
1"Her footsteps crunched on the"
2"She shook her head, letting"
3"It didn't matter now."
4"She strained her eyes, trying"
5"Her eyes frantically searched the"
6"Her fingers curled around the"
7"she called out, cursing the"
8"She couldn't shake the feeling"
9"Her skin prickled with unease,"
10"She took a cautious step"
11"She couldn't make out any"
12"It was a twisted, almost"
13"She turned and fled, her"
14"Her foot caught on a"
15"She knew she couldn't keep"
16"Her only hope was to"
17"She was trapped."
ratio0.295
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences61
matches
0"The chill night air nipped"
1"The familiar ancient oaks stood"
2"She pulled her worn leather"
3"Her footsteps crunched on the"
4"The grove was shrouded in"
5"Aurora paused, straining her ears,"
6"The details of her earlier"
7"She shook her head, letting"
8"It didn't matter now."
9"The sooner she reached the"
10"Aurora's heartbeat quickened, her footsteps"
11"She strained her eyes, trying"
12"A twig snapped somewhere off"
13"Her eyes frantically searched the"
14"The air felt thick, almost"
15"Her fingers curled around the"
16"Another sound, this time a"
17"Aurora whirled around, her heart"
18"she called out, cursing the"
19"She couldn't shake the feeling"
ratio0.705
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The grove was shrouded in moonlight, the muted silver glow casting long shadows that flickered and shifted at the edges of her vision."
1"She strained her eyes, trying to make out any landmarks, any sign that she was heading the right way, but the blackness was impenetrable."
2"Shaking her head, Aurora turned back and continued on, her pace quickening."
3"The pendant at her throat pulsed with a steady, comforting rhythm, as if it were urging her on."
4"Summoning the last of her strength, she pushed on, her lungs burning with the effort."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
78.4541%