Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRN57JZS99FX9NVBBRQFVB

Run Details

Duration:
36.9s
Cost:
$0.014205
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones cast eerie shadows under the pale moonlight, their rough-hewn surfaces like sentinels guarding the entrance to the Fae Grove. Rory felt a shiver, as if the air itself was laden with warning, as she stepped beyond their protective boundary. Something felt off—a nagging sense of unease that permeated the serenity of the place. Wildflowers, vibrant even at night, whispered in a gentle breeze. She crouched, running her hand over the soft petals, their sweetness almost overwhelming. As she inhaled the fragrance, a faint sound reached her ears, like the rustling of leaves, but there wasn't a breath of wind. Straightening, Rory scanned the grove, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. Nothing. She thought of the Heartstone Pendant, its faint pulse a reminder of her task. Eva's message had been urgent, imploring Rory to find the portal and bring help. "It's here," she murmured, thinking of the warmer glow the pendant took on as she neared. But where in this otherworldly place was she to look? A sudden movement caught her eye, something slipping between trees on the grove's edge. She blinked, focusing on the spot, but saw nothing. "A trick of the light," she told herself, advancing cautiously, her footsteps on the soft earth barely audible. As she moved further, the heartstone's glow dimmed, then flared. She stopped, listening to the night. Something skittered across her path, too fast to identify, but it left no trace in the grass. Rory's breath quickened. Was it the portal? But no, it couldn't be; the stone's glow was now faint. She turned back, eyes sweeping the dark. Had she imagined the movement? A noise from behind, distinct this time, like a twig snapping underfoot. Spinning around, Rory faced the encroaching trees, their branches stretching like accusatory fingers. "Who's there?" she called, her voice filling the silence, rebounding off the ancient oaks. Nothing responded, save for the distant hoot of an owl. She began to back away, eyes never leaving the forest's edge, her retreat slow and deliberate. If someone—or something—was there, she didn't want to appear weak or scared. Her heart pounded as she imagined unseen eyes watching her every move. Maybe the pendant's warmth was protecting her, keeping the uninvited force at bay. A gust of wind brought with it a sound, not wild but controlled, almost musical. "What the hell was that?" she whispered, the hair on her arms standing on end. Her mind ran through the stories she'd heard in the bar—faint echoes of Fae lore. What if something malevolent was here, hidden by the night? She turned again, this time heading towards where she thought the sound had come from. Her eyes darted, seeking any sign of life, but the grove remained silent, almost mocking her with its tranquility. "This is absurd," she muttered, digging her nails into her palms, forcing herself to move. Then she saw it. A tree, but not like the others. It stood taller, its trunk broader, as if it had consumed the life of a dozen lesser trees to gain such stature. At its base, a hollow shone with an ethereal light. The pendant flared. She froze, her breath caught in her throat. This was it—the portal. But why was it here, exposed and unattended? Her eyes scanned the grove once more, seeking any hint of danger. "Eva?" she called, hoping her friend would materialize to guide her. But the grove remained silent, the only sound her shallow breathing. Slowly, she approached the tree, her steps deliberate. The heartstone's pulse grew stronger, heating against her skin. She reached the trunk, running her fingers over the rough bark, feeling a connection, like a live current coursing through it. "I'm here," she whispered, not sure if it was to the tree or to an unseen presence. A whispering, faint at first, then growing louder, filled her ears. The language was alien, resonating like music, yet it carried an unsettling resonance. She pressed herself against the tree, seeking solace in its solidity. Her eyes frantically searched the night, but the whispering continued, beckoning, the words resonating like a song, drawing her closer. Rory stepped back, facing the heart of the grove, the whispering coaxing her. The portal seemed to pulse, alive with a light of its own, its allure irresistible. She inched towards it, her hand clutching the pendant. The whispers grew more insistent, filling her mind, as if urging her to enter the portal, to succumb. But to what? She shook her head, dispelling the allure. This wasn't right. The whispers weren't friendly, their purpose unclear. Her grip on the heartstone tightened as she took a step back, intending to flee. But her retreat was halted by a figure emerging from the shadows. It was a woman, but not like any Rory had ever seen before. Her features were ethereal, her eyes an exotic shade of emerald, her hair a shock of white flames. "Come," she beckoned, her voice like honey, her gaze intense. Rory's legs froze, the heartstone's pulse matching her own quickening heartbeat. "Who... who are you?" she managed, her voice hoarse. The woman smiled, a movement that held both promise and threat. "You know me."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.9
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count4
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"resonance"
count1
12
word"solace"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"sense of"
2"scanned"
3"pulse"
4"reminder"
5"otherworldly"
6"footsteps"
7"quickened"
8"silence"
9"warmth"
10"echoes"
11"resonance"
12"solace"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences73
matches
0"felt a shiver"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords866
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount838
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove1
Rory8
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if urging her to enter the portal, to succumb"
84.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.155
wordCount866
matches
0"not wild but controlled, almost musical"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean50.94
std6.85
cv0.134
sampleLengths
056
159
254
357
447
549
653
755
849
943
1057
1155
1255
1358
1444
1541
1634
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was halted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was protecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences74
ratio0.068
matches
0"Something felt off—a nagging sense of unease that permeated the serenity of the place."
1"But no, it couldn't be; the stone's glow was now faint."
2"If someone—or something—was there, she didn't want to appear weak or scared."
3"Her mind ran through the stories she'd heard in the bar—faint echoes of Fae lore."
4"This was it—the portal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount844
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02962085308056872
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008293838862559242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean11.7
std5.03
cv0.43
sampleLengths
022
120
214
310
413
523
612
71
814
914
1016
1110
1214
139
1418
1510
166
1717
183
194
2011
217
225
2312
2413
2514
2610
2716
2812
2912
3013
3115
3215
3315
3410
3515
3619
3715
384
397
4022
4110
423
438
444
458
4612
4711
4811
498
60.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.36486486486486486
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Maybe the pendant's warmth was"
1"Then she saw it."
2"Slowly, she approached the tree,"
ratio0.042
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences72
matches
0"She crouched, running her hand"
1"She thought of the Heartstone"
2"she murmured, thinking of the"
3"She blinked, focusing on the"
4"she told herself, advancing cautiously,"
5"She stopped, listening to the"
6"She turned back, eyes sweeping"
7"she called, her voice filling"
8"She began to back away,"
9"Her heart pounded as she"
10"she whispered, the hair on"
11"Her mind ran through the"
12"She turned again, this time"
13"Her eyes darted, seeking any"
14"she muttered, digging her nails"
15"It stood taller, its trunk"
16"She froze, her breath caught"
17"Her eyes scanned the grove"
18"she called, hoping her friend"
19"She reached the trunk, running"
ratio0.417
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences72
matches
0"The standing stones cast eerie"
1"Rory felt a shiver, as"
2"Something felt off—a nagging sense"
3"Wildflowers, vibrant even at night,"
4"She crouched, running her hand"
5"She thought of the Heartstone"
6"Eva's message had been urgent,"
7"she murmured, thinking of the"
8"A sudden movement caught her"
9"She blinked, focusing on the"
10"she told herself, advancing cautiously,"
11"She stopped, listening to the"
12"Something skittered across her path,"
13"Rory's breath quickened."
14"She turned back, eyes sweeping"
15"A noise from behind, distinct"
16"she called, her voice filling"
17"Nothing responded, save for the"
18"She began to back away,"
19"Her heart pounded as she"
ratio0.75
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"If someone—or something—was there, she"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory felt a shiver, as if the air itself was laden with warning, as she stepped beyond their protective boundary."
1"Straightening, Rory scanned the grove, her eyes adjusting to the dim light."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called, her voice filling the silence, rebounding off the ancient oaks"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.571
80.4538%