| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.9 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 872 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 872 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "solace" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 866 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 838 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if urging her to enter the portal, to succumb" |
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| 84.53% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.155 | | wordCount | 866 | | matches | | 0 | "not wild but controlled, almost musical" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 50.94 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.134 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "Something felt off—a nagging sense of unease that permeated the serenity of the place." | | 1 | "But no, it couldn't be; the stone's glow was now faint." | | 2 | "If someone—or something—was there, she didn't want to appear weak or scared." | | 3 | "Her mind ran through the stories she'd heard in the bar—faint echoes of Fae lore." | | 4 | "This was it—the portal." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 844 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02962085308056872 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008293838862559242 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 11.7 | | std | 5.03 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 60.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.36486486486486486 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe the pendant's warmth was" | | 1 | "Then she saw it." | | 2 | "Slowly, she approached the tree," |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 53.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She crouched, running her hand" | | 1 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 2 | "she murmured, thinking of the" | | 3 | "She blinked, focusing on the" | | 4 | "she told herself, advancing cautiously," | | 5 | "She stopped, listening to the" | | 6 | "She turned back, eyes sweeping" | | 7 | "she called, her voice filling" | | 8 | "She began to back away," | | 9 | "Her heart pounded as she" | | 10 | "she whispered, the hair on" | | 11 | "Her mind ran through the" | | 12 | "She turned again, this time" | | 13 | "Her eyes darted, seeking any" | | 14 | "she muttered, digging her nails" | | 15 | "It stood taller, its trunk" | | 16 | "She froze, her breath caught" | | 17 | "Her eyes scanned the grove" | | 18 | "she called, hoping her friend" | | 19 | "She reached the trunk, running" |
| | ratio | 0.417 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones cast eerie" | | 1 | "Rory felt a shiver, as" | | 2 | "Something felt off—a nagging sense" | | 3 | "Wildflowers, vibrant even at night," | | 4 | "She crouched, running her hand" | | 5 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 6 | "Eva's message had been urgent," | | 7 | "she murmured, thinking of the" | | 8 | "A sudden movement caught her" | | 9 | "She blinked, focusing on the" | | 10 | "she told herself, advancing cautiously," | | 11 | "She stopped, listening to the" | | 12 | "Something skittered across her path," | | 13 | "Rory's breath quickened." | | 14 | "She turned back, eyes sweeping" | | 15 | "A noise from behind, distinct" | | 16 | "she called, her voice filling" | | 17 | "Nothing responded, save for the" | | 18 | "She began to back away," | | 19 | "Her heart pounded as she" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "If someone—or something—was there, she" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt a shiver, as if the air itself was laden with warning, as she stepped beyond their protective boundary." | | 1 | "Straightening, Rory scanned the grove, her eyes adjusting to the dim light." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice filling the silence, rebounding off the ancient oaks" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |