| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.238 | | leniency | 0.476 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 95.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1197 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1197 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "jaw clenched" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "electric" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1183 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 743 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Lucien | 8 | | French | 1 | | Latin | 1 | | Hindi | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.962 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if carving each syllable" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.845 | | wordCount | 1183 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 24.65 | | std | 15.02 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Someone jolted on the other side—shuffling thuds and the scuff of a box shoved off its perch." | | 1 | "Heterochromatic eyes swept over her—amber and black; human and not." | | 2 | "Books unfurled themselves in piles; a battered chessboard was mid-game against no opponent." | | 3 | "Aurora tensed, glancing toward the window—iron bars, a cracked hoarding blown in from Brick Lane." | | 4 | "The foot of space, the bruise of what lingers—mistrust, want, unspent words." | | 5 | "His voice—barely above a whisper—tangled everything between them in tense, electric air." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 750 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.017333333333333333 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0026666666666666666 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.38 | | std | 5.99 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 55.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.33653846153846156 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 14.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "He filled the doorway with" | | 1 | "He looked anywhere but at" | | 2 | "His accent lingered on the" | | 3 | "He did not smile." | | 4 | "Her own voice broke, scraped" | | 5 | "She pushed her hair behind" | | 6 | "He pressed one gloved palm" | | 7 | "She jerked a thumb over" | | 8 | "He did not sound like" | | 9 | "She stepped back, tracking his" | | 10 | "She bristled, fighting the urge" | | 11 | "He loosened his tie as" | | 12 | "She watched him sidelong, measuring" | | 13 | "Her hands found each other," | | 14 | "He held her gaze a" | | 15 | "Her tone shifted, forced lightness" | | 16 | "He traced the rim of" | | 17 | "She barked a laugh, hollow." | | 18 | "His hand tightened on the" | | 19 | "It crawled between them, all" |
| | ratio | 0.514 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Someone jolted on the other" | | 1 | "Another knock, less patient." | | 2 | "The chain screeched, the last" | | 3 | "The door swung open." | | 4 | "Aurora Carter froze, hand still" | | 5 | "He filled the doorway with" | | 6 | "He looked anywhere but at" | | 7 | "His accent lingered on the" | | 8 | "He did not smile." | | 9 | "Her own voice broke, scraped" | | 10 | "She pushed her hair behind" | | 11 | "He pressed one gloved palm" | | 12 | "She jerked a thumb over" | | 13 | "Ptolemy, the cat, slipped between" | | 14 | "The animal fixed Lucien with" | | 15 | "He did not sound like" | | 16 | "She stepped back, tracking his" | | 17 | "The room swallowed him, the" | | 18 | "Scrolls spilled from the sofa" | | 19 | "Books unfurled themselves in piles;" |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His accent lingered, as if carving each syllable" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.048 | | leniency | 0.095 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |