Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRN9K5F4Y3R7Y3T4M72MZ1

Run Details

Duration:
21.1s
Cost:
$0.000868
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, or Rory as she was known to her friends, slid onto the stool at the bar, unwinding her scarf as she gazed up at the familiar maps plastered on the walls of The Raven's Nest. The bar's green neon sign outside had beckoned her in from the chilly autumn evening, promising warmth and the comforting hum of hushed conversations. As she waited for Silas to notice her, she scanned the room, recognizing a few regulars huddled in the corner, their laughter and debates mingling with the faint scent of wood polish and spilled beer. Silas, ever the observant one, caught her eye and raised a hand in greeting, his neatly trimmed beard twitching with a hint of a smile. Rory smiled back, feeling a sense of ease wash over her as she settled in for a quiet drink. The door swung open behind her, admitting a gust of cool air and a burst of street noise, but Rory didn't turn, too comfortable in the warm cocoon of the bar. It wasn't until she heard her name – "Rory?" – spoken with a blend of hesitation and curiosity, that she turned to face the newcomer. Her eyes widened as she took in the figure standing by the entrance, his eyes locked on hers with a mixture of surprise and wariness. "Evan?" she whispered, the word barely audible over the gentle hum of conversation. The man standing before her, Evan, her ex-boyfriend, looked nothing like the charming, affable young man she'd once loved. His hair was longer, messier, and his eyes, once bright and full of mirth, had lost their luster. A scruff of stubble clung to his jawline, and his clothes hung loose on his frame, giving him a gaunt appearance. The change was jarring, and for a moment, Rory struggled to reconcile the man before her with the memories she'd stored away. Evan's gaze, however, held a glimmer of the old spark, a hint of the warm smile that had once been able to disarm her in an instant. "Rory," he repeated, taking a step closer, his voice low and rough around the edges. As the patrons of the bar continued their conversations, oblivious to the sudden tension, Silas appeared at Rory's elbow, his eyes flicking between the two, his expression a mask of polite curiosity. "Can I get you something to drink, love?" he asked Rory, his tone neutral. Rory hesitated, unsure whether to acknowledge Evan or keep her distance. The memories she'd tried to bury for so long threatened to resurface, and she wasn't certain she was ready to confront them. Silas, sensing her unease, leaned in closer, his voice taking on a conspiratorial tone. "Why don't I get you both a drink? On the house." With a nod, Rory slid off the stool, her eyes never leaving Evan's face as she led him to a quiet corner table by the window. The dim lighting seemed to swallow them whole, leaving the rest of the bar at a distance. Silas, with an air of discretion, deposited two whiskeys on their table before melting away into the crowd. Evan sat, his eyes darting around the bar, taking in the familiar maps and photographs, the worn wooden tables, and the quiet, intent faces of the patrons. "I never thought I'd run into you here," he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper. Rory wrapped her fingers around her glass, the cool liquid a comforting presence in her hand. "What are you doing in London?" she asked, her tone even, though her heart still thudded in her chest. Evan's gaze dropped, his eyes lingering on the tabletop before drifting back to hers. "I've been living here for a while. Trying to...get my life together." The unspoken words hung in the air, heavy with regret and what-ifs. Rory's fingers tightened around her glass, the whiskey's amber glow reflecting the turmoil brewing inside her. She had thought she'd long since closed the door on this chapter of her life, but Evan's presence had pried it open, revealing the unhealed wounds and unresolved questions. As the silence between them stretched, Rory found herself drawn into the past, reliving memories she'd tried to erase. The laughter, the fights, the moments of tenderness – all of it swirled together, a bittersweet reminder of what could never be again. The sound of clinking glasses and muted laughter from the rest of the bar seemed to grow louder, a jarring contrast to the weight of their unspoken words. Rory's eyes met Evan's, and for an instant, they simply looked at each other, the connection between them still palpable, yet frayed and fragile. As the moment hung, Silas appeared with a discreet smile, refilling their glasses with a silent understanding that this was a conversation that required no interruptions. With a nod, he retreated, leaving the two old friends to navigate the treacherous landscape of their shared past. Rory's fingers loosened around her glass, her eyes never leaving Evan's face as she whispered, "What happened to you?" The question, simple as it was, held a world of meaning. It was an invitation, a challenge, and a plea all at once – a chance for Evan to confront the choices he'd made, the paths he'd taken, and the consequences that had led him to this point. As the silence between them grew, Rory's heart thudded in anticipation, wondering what secrets Evan would reveal, and what truths she was ready to confront.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:46.793Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"Rory's fingers loosened around [around]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.778
leniency1
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.286
94.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"sense of"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"tenderness"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"palpable"
count1
14
word"navigate"
count1
15
word"treacherous"
count1
16
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"comforting"
3"scanned"
4"sense of"
5"comfortable"
6"tension"
7"whisper"
8"unspoken"
9"silence"
10"tenderness"
11"reminder"
12"weight"
13"palpable"
14"navigate"
15"treacherous"
16"anticipation"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
84.35% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences41
matches
0"y with regret"
1"d in anticipation"
3.48% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences43
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords914
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount861
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory14
Raven1
Nest1
Silas6
Evan11
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.687
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount914
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
77.30% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean48.11
std20.23
cv0.421
sampleLengths
096
175
250
313
480
542
646
758
861
944
1035
1126
1257
1342
1452
1545
1619
1748
1825
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"was known"
1"was, held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs134
matches
0"was jarring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences43
ratio0.07
matches
0"It wasn't until she heard her name – \"Rory?\" – spoken with a blend of hesitation and curiosity, that she turned to face the newcomer."
1"The laughter, the fights, the moments of tenderness – all of it swirled together, a bittersweet reminder of what could never be again."
2"It was an invitation, a challenge, and a plea all at once – a chance for Evan to confront the choices he'd made, the paths he'd taken, and the consequences that had led him to this point."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount859
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"charming, affable young man"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.025611175785797437
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006984866123399301
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences43
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
70.95% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences43
mean21.26
std6.96
cv0.327
sampleLengths
037
124
235
325
419
531
625
725
813
919
1018
1121
1222
1327
1415
1532
1614
1711
1822
1914
2011
2126
2217
2318
2427
2517
2616
2719
2814
2912
3012
3116
3229
3319
3423
3528
3624
3726
3819
3919
4011
4137
4225
59.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.37209302325581395
totalSentences43
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences41
matches
0"It wasn't until she heard"
1"Her eyes widened as she"
2"she whispered, the word barely"
3"His hair was longer, messier,"
4"he repeated, taking a step"
5"he asked Rory, his tone"
6"he said finally, his voice"
7"she asked, her tone even,"
8"She had thought she'd long"
9"It was an invitation, a"
ratio0.244
45.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences41
matches
0"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
1"The bar's green neon sign"
2"Silas, ever the observant one,"
3"Rory smiled back, feeling a"
4"The door swung open behind"
5"It wasn't until she heard"
6"Her eyes widened as she"
7"she whispered, the word barely"
8"The man standing before her,"
9"His hair was longer, messier,"
10"A scruff of stubble clung"
11"The change was jarring, and"
12"Evan's gaze, however, held a"
13"he repeated, taking a step"
14"he asked Rory, his tone"
15"Rory hesitated, unsure whether to"
16"The memories she'd tried to"
17"Silas, sensing her unease, leaned"
18"The dim lighting seemed to"
19"Silas, with an air of"
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Silas, sensing her unease, leaned in closer, his voice taking on a conspiratorial tone."
1"Evan sat, his eyes darting around the bar, taking in the familiar maps and photographs, the worn wooden tables, and the quiet, intent faces of the patrons."
2"Evan's gaze dropped, his eyes lingering on the tabletop before drifting back to hers."
3"It was an invitation, a challenge, and a plea all at once – a chance for Evan to confront the choices he'd made, the paths he'd taken, and the consequences that…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she whispered, the word barely audible over the gentle hum of conversation"
1"he asked, his tone neutral"
2"he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she heard (hear)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
63.7328%