| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Rory's fingers loosened around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.778 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 94.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "comfortable" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "tenderness" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "palpable" | | 14 | "navigate" | | 15 | "treacherous" | | 16 | "anticipation" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 84.35% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "y with regret" | | 1 | "d in anticipation" |
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| 3.48% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 914 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.70% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 861 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Evan | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.687 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 914 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.30% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 48.11 | | std | 20.23 | | cv | 0.421 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 25 |
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| 88.15% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 43 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't until she heard her name – \"Rory?\" – spoken with a blend of hesitation and curiosity, that she turned to face the newcomer." | | 1 | "The laughter, the fights, the moments of tenderness – all of it swirled together, a bittersweet reminder of what could never be again." | | 2 | "It was an invitation, a challenge, and a plea all at once – a chance for Evan to confront the choices he'd made, the paths he'd taken, and the consequences that had led him to this point." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 859 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "charming, affable young man" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.025611175785797437 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006984866123399301 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 43 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 70.95% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 43 | | mean | 21.26 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.327 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 25 |
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| 59.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.37209302325581395 | | totalSentences | 43 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't until she heard" | | 1 | "Her eyes widened as she" | | 2 | "she whispered, the word barely" | | 3 | "His hair was longer, messier," | | 4 | "he repeated, taking a step" | | 5 | "he asked Rory, his tone" | | 6 | "he said finally, his voice" | | 7 | "she asked, her tone even," | | 8 | "She had thought she'd long" | | 9 | "It was an invitation, a" |
| | ratio | 0.244 | |
| 45.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory as" | | 1 | "The bar's green neon sign" | | 2 | "Silas, ever the observant one," | | 3 | "Rory smiled back, feeling a" | | 4 | "The door swung open behind" | | 5 | "It wasn't until she heard" | | 6 | "Her eyes widened as she" | | 7 | "she whispered, the word barely" | | 8 | "The man standing before her," | | 9 | "His hair was longer, messier," | | 10 | "A scruff of stubble clung" | | 11 | "The change was jarring, and" | | 12 | "Evan's gaze, however, held a" | | 13 | "he repeated, taking a step" | | 14 | "he asked Rory, his tone" | | 15 | "Rory hesitated, unsure whether to" | | 16 | "The memories she'd tried to" | | 17 | "Silas, sensing her unease, leaned" | | 18 | "The dim lighting seemed to" | | 19 | "Silas, with an air of" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas, sensing her unease, leaned in closer, his voice taking on a conspiratorial tone." | | 1 | "Evan sat, his eyes darting around the bar, taking in the familiar maps and photographs, the worn wooden tables, and the quiet, intent faces of the patrons." | | 2 | "Evan's gaze dropped, his eyes lingering on the tabletop before drifting back to hers." | | 3 | "It was an invitation, a challenge, and a plea all at once – a chance for Evan to confront the choices he'd made, the paths he'd taken, and the consequences that…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the word barely audible over the gentle hum of conversation" | | 1 | "he asked, his tone neutral" | | 2 | "he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she heard (hear)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "he repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |