Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNEQQQ71Q7PN23DFDSBXH

Run Details

Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.014098
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped into The Raven's Nest, instantly recognisable from her childhood memories. The dimly light soaked into her senses, an eerie familiarity. "Si, you old dog!" called a voice from one of the booths. "Look who finally graced us with their presence." Aurora slipped off her backpack, her heart pounding with both excitement and anxiety at the sound of that rough voice. The man who'd spoken had to be Silas. He rose from the booth with a sigh and began ambling towards her, his silver signet ring flashing in the dim glow from a dozen flickering candles. "Rory," he greeted her with a crooked smile, extending a hand. "It's bloody well good to see you. Heart nearly stopped, it did, seeing you walk in like some sort of…of spirit." "Si, don't be daft," she said, her voice small and nervous as she looked up at her old friend's now greyed auburn hair, and noticed the slight limp tugging at his left leg. "Could've sworn you were never one for superstition." "Aye. You're right there, mate," he agreed, wincing as he stretched his stiff leg. "Just, well. When you see someone you thought you'd lose in Prague like I did, it starts raising ghosts. We're all ghosts to be true, wandering endless orbits away from each other like fuckin' planets." Rory's stomach felt queasy, her throat like a barren desert, at the casual mention of that place, that time. "Silas. I don't know what all Eva told you, I'm sorry I've not been the friend you remember. I think 'bout those days all the time. Too much, maybe." "Hey. No. There's nothing to be sorry about. If anyone is, it's those other tossers that forced the pair of us away, sent you down all those darker paths to get away from all that shite. Don't forget your roots though, kiddo." She smiled softly, studying the warm face he'd not let himself change over the years, other than the grey in his hair and the scars she didn't dare ask about. "Right, well. I came for the gig, not a guilt trip." "Good, good. Come, we've a table set aside for you and the gang." "Gang?" "Ah, hah! Didn't she mention it'd be a reunion?" Rory threw up her hands and laughed as Silas chuckled, leaning on her shoulder before leading her over to the corner of the bar. All eyes were on her as she moved in front of the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance, and suddenly she wondered, nervously, what hell others might've kept from her. What secrets they'd kept hidden over the decades. She knew well the cloak and dagger group Silas had gathered around him, knew they met in secret within that hidden back room Silas kept covered with one of his grandfather's musty old bookshelves—just like a glitzy Hollywood caper. Quite the jolly retirement gig for a former spy. He listened to gossip, secrets, and state-level intel from within this innermost circle of contacts he'd fostered from his days abroad. Once they were seated, his rag-tag crew breaking from their tense camaraderie to greet her, her heart leapt to see familiar faces. They looked a little worse for wear, but the same sharp eyes flashed with recognition and welcome. Here, was Eva, Silas' gung-ho niece with a knack for illegal tech and a soft spot for pickpocketing and pinching internet secrets. Dark russet hair splayed everywhere, and a cheeky grin, just as Rory remembered. Just a bit more worn. Dutra followed, her usual smirk chiselled across her face, a fat cigarillo resting between her lips, and with matching threaded through the brim of her old-timey fedora. She unceremoniously poured herself a drink from the smallest of their bottles the table. "Oh, and you didn't think I'd miss this one, did you Si?" Johnny asked, his accent positively drenched in thick, syrupy Brummie tones. He never had been the quiet type. Rory recalled a decade ago, Johnny having been the wildcard of their inner circle, a jokester and jester. He'd always been partial to the odd impromptu lap dance or karaoke session at the office Christmas party. Now, he shuffled in looking like an anemic, disheveled mess. "And that makes all of us, then?" Rory asked, nervously. "That it does. And now we just need to wait for the Copper Cat to show and our little game of time travel can begin," Silas said, his gaze dropping to his pint. He seemed to be much more comfortable looking at the beautifully crafted Guinness rather than her eyes for very long. He took a deep swig and wiped his mouth. Rory shot a glance around the room. How many of them were former spooks, how many government types or gangsters or activists or attackers, behind these faces? "If I'd known it was going be a trap, I'd've at least stuck around the flat and spied on you all over video chat," Eva joked. "Oh, I'd've paid good money to hear that Yorkshire gob all over my screen!" Johnny retorted with a smirk.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount850
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"nervously"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount850
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"dance"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"stomach"
2"familiar"
3"dance"
4"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords845
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount553
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora1
Silas5
Rory7
Hollywood1
Eva2
Dark1
Brummie1
Johnny3
Christmas1
Guinness1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Brummie"
5"Johnny"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0.867
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount845
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean38.41
std23.13
cv0.602
sampleLengths
022
120
220
367
441
549
648
742
841
913
101
119
1263
1369
1439
1540
1641
1776
1810
1989
2026
2119
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"were seated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs87
matches(empty)
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences47
ratio0.021
matches
0"She knew well the cloak and dagger group Silas had gathered around him, knew they met in secret within that hidden back room Silas kept covered with one of his grandfather's musty old bookshelves—just like a glitzy Hollywood caper."
96.43% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount431
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.04408352668213457
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.013921113689095127
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean17.98
std9.6
cv0.534
sampleLengths
012
110
212
38
420
58
627
711
821
933
108
1114
1235
1319
1429
1542
1630
1711
1813
191
209
2124
2231
238
2439
259
2621
2722
2817
2922
3013
315
3227
3314
3423
357
3618
3718
3810
3910
4033
4120
429
437
4420
4526
4619
97.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6595744680851063
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences36
matches
0"Quite the jolly retirement gig"
1"Once they were seated, his"
2"Just a bit more worn."
ratio0.083
75.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences36
matches
0"He rose from the booth"
1"he greeted her with a"
2"she said, her voice small"
3"he agreed, wincing as he"
4"She smiled softly, studying the"
5"She knew well the cloak"
6"He listened to gossip, secrets,"
7"They looked a little worse"
8"She unceremoniously poured herself a"
9"He never had been the"
10"He'd always been partial to"
11"He seemed to be much"
12"He took a deep swig"
ratio0.361
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences36
matches
0"Rory stepped into The Raven's"
1"The dimly light soaked into"
2"Aurora slipped off her backpack,"
3"The man who'd spoken had"
4"He rose from the booth"
5"he greeted her with a"
6"she said, her voice small"
7"he agreed, wincing as he"
8"Rory's stomach felt queasy, her"
9"She smiled softly, studying the"
10"Rory threw up her hands"
11"She knew well the cloak"
12"He listened to gossip, secrets,"
13"They looked a little worse"
14"Here, was Eva,"
15"Dutra followed, her usual smirk"
16"She unceremoniously poured herself a"
17"Johnny asked, his accent positively"
18"He never had been the"
19"Rory recalled a decade ago,"
ratio0.75
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"Now, he shuffled in looking"
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Johnny asked, his accent positively drenched in thick, syrupy Brummie tones"
1"Rory asked, nervously"
2"Silas said, his gaze dropping to his pint"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"Eva joked (joke)"
2"Johnny retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.316
88.6862%