| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured wildly [wildly]" | | 1 | "He stepped back [back]" | | 2 | "Lucien said sharply [sharply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.519 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 72.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1446 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "ever so slightly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "ever so slightly" | | 5 | "slightly" | | 6 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1446 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chaotic" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "sanctuary" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "furrowing" | | 9 | "tinged" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "simmering" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "racing" | | 18 | "pawn" | | 19 | "palpable" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "resolved" | | 22 | "loomed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "sent a chill through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1433 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 926 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Accepting | 1 | | Lucien | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if gauging whether she’d slam the door in his impeccably polished face" | | 1 | "felt like blades in the air, cutting th" | | 2 | "er, a sport he apparently had not outgrown" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1433 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 32.57 | | std | 14.74 | | cv | 0.453 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 42 | | 43 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one an unnerving amber and the other a soulless black—remained fixed on hers, as if gauging whether she’d slam the door in his impeccably polished face." | | 1 | "She dared to meet his gaze, the memory of darker days surfacing unbidden—his laughter echoing in her mind, the passion they shared, and the heartbreak that had split them apart." | | 2 | "He seemed to weigh her words—even the unguarded ones—and the moment stretched with the tension of unaddressed feelings." | | 3 | "Her heart clattered in her chest, anxiety tinged with something darker—dread." | | 4 | "“Protect me? Don’t be ridiculous.” The fire in her veins burned hotter; the idea sent a chill through her." | | 5 | "The accusation incited a firestorm of emotions—resentment, fear, but beneath it all, an undeniable spark of the attraction she’d fought to suppress." | | 6 | "As words hung silently between them like unwelcome guests, she felt that familiar pull—an aching desire to give in, to succumb to the past, intermixed with a reminder of the pain that had severed them apart." | | 7 | "“There’s danger, Rory. And it’s not just me; it’s threatening everything you’ve built since I left. You need to decide if you’re ready to face it.”" | | 8 | "Everything around them shrank to that one point—the door that had just opened, the figure standing there, the past they hadn’t resolved, and the dangerous future that loomed ahead." |
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| 95.59% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 937 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04375667022411953 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021344717182497332 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 16.66 | | std | 7.35 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 75.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.46511627906976744 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one an unnerving" | | 1 | "she snapped, her voice sharper" | | 2 | "He had always enjoyed poking" | | 3 | "She arched an eyebrow, crossing" | | 4 | "He straightened, pushing off the" | | 5 | "she shot back, still lingering" | | 6 | "He took a step closer," | | 7 | "She dared to meet his" | | 8 | "she replied, trying to maintain" | | 9 | "he countered, his brows furrowing" | | 10 | "She gestured wildly, frustration boiling" | | 11 | "He seemed to weigh her" | | 12 | "he said, his casual tone" | | 13 | "Her heart clattered in her" | | 14 | "His tone shifted, dropping any" | | 15 | "she replied, bitterness dripping from" | | 16 | "His jaw tightened, the vulnerability" | | 17 | "she asked, the walls threatening" | | 18 | "He stepped closer, his voice" | | 19 | "He frowned, shaking his head" |
| | ratio | 0.548 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open with" | | 1 | "Aurora stood in the cramped" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, sauntered" | | 3 | "The aroma of curry wafted" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 5 | "The slicked-back platinum blond hair" | | 6 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one an unnerving" | | 7 | "she snapped, her voice sharper" | | 8 | "The words felt like blades" | | 9 | "A smirk tugged at the" | | 10 | "He had always enjoyed poking" | | 11 | "She arched an eyebrow, crossing" | | 12 | "He straightened, pushing off the" | | 13 | "she shot back, still lingering" | | 14 | "He took a step closer," | | 15 | "Rory swallowed, a sharpness lingering" | | 16 | "The past hung in the" | | 17 | "She dared to meet his" | | 18 | "she replied, trying to maintain" | | 19 | "he countered, his brows furrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.952 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could form a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The aroma of curry wafted through the air, its spices tangling with the tension coiling in her gut." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one an unnerving amber and the other a soulless black—remained fixed on hers, as if gauging whether she’d slam the door in his impeccab…" | | 2 | "She dared to meet his gaze, the memory of darker days surfacing unbidden—his laughter echoing in her mind, the passion they shared, and the heartbreak that had …" | | 3 | "As words hung silently between them like unwelcome guests, she felt that familiar pull—an aching desire to give in, to succumb to the past, intermixed with a re…" | | 4 | "His face hardened for a moment before he closed the space between them, invading her personal bubble in a way that made her entire body pulse with warmth." | | 5 | "Everything around them shrank to that one point—the door that had just opened, the figure standing there, the past they hadn’t resolved, and the dangerous futur…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "she snapped, her voice sharper than she intended" | | 1 | "she replied, trying to maintain the steely edge to her voice" | | 2 | "he said, his casual tone fracturing under the seriousness of the statement" | | 3 | "she replied, bitterness dripping from each word" | | 4 | "He stepped, his voice dropping to the velvety depth she remembered" | | 5 | "She waved, the hurt spilling into her voice despite her best efforts" | | 6 | "she spat, and an ache bloomed in her throat" | | 7 | "she said, voice cracking, tears stinging her eyes against her will" | | 8 | "He stepped back, a teasing grin breaking through the tension" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "she spat (spit)" | | 2 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "the new arrival snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.192 | | leniency | 0.385 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |