Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNJ3588BCBZKCPVFSZZ8V

Run Details

Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.000779
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of decay, its stale air thick with the tang of mildew and rotting wood. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped cautiously over the debris-strewn platform, her boots crunching on shattered glass and crumbling plaster. The crime scene stretched out before her like a twisted mocking smirk, daring her to find sense amidst chaos. "What have we got?" She asked DS Calloway, who'd been waiting for her arrival with an expression of mingled dread and bewilderment. "A right mess is what," He replied, shaking his shaggy head. "Victim's name is Reginald Potts, a regular at the Veil Market according to my sources. His body was discovered by one of the stallholders about an hour ago." Quinn arched an eyebrow, glancing around the eerie marketplace that had sprung up in this forgotten corner of London. Stalls draped in velvet and leather hugged the curved walls, hawking goods both exotic and illicit. The air hummed with whispered transactions and furtive glances, an underworld economy thriving beneath the city's notice. "Any witnesses?" Calloway snorted. "In here? You're lucky if anyone's even noticed the commotion." Her colleague watched as she approached the victim's body, sprawled across the grimy tiles like a discarded marionette. Reginald Potts was not a young man, but neither was he old enough to merit such violent dispatch. His skull had been caved in, crushed by some wickedly powerful force, and yet there were no signs of struggle or defensive wounds on his hands. "Something isn't right," Quinn muttered, kneeling down to examine the corpse more closely. "What could do this? And why here?" "The Veil Market isn't exactly known for its adherence to health and safety protocols," Calloway pointed out dryly. "Maybe our Mr. Potts just had a run-in with the wrong sort of magic." Quinn shot him a sharp glance. "Magic? That's your answer?" He raised his hands in mock surrender. "Hey, I'm just saying what everyone else is thinking, guv'nor. Some things in this place strain credulity, even for me." She didn't respond, turning instead to study the scene around her. Something about the positioning of Potts' body nagged at her, an itch she couldn't quite scratch. There was a distinct lack of blood for a wound so grievous, which suggested he'd been killed elsewhere and moved here after the fact. "What's this?" She asked suddenly, reaching out to pluck a small brass compass from beneath the corpse's limp fingers. It was old and tarnished, etched with arcane symbols that made her skin crawl. She felt a cold tingle in her fingertips as she touched it, like the echo of some distant storm. "That," Calloway said slowly, peering at the object in her hand, "is a Veil Compass. Been missing from the archives for a few months now." "Eva mentioned something about those," Quinn said, frowning as she tried to recall her friend's words. "Didn't she say they were attuned to supernatural energy? Point towards rifts or portals?" "Yeah, that's right. Cracking bit of kit if you're hunting down rogue mystics or whatever. I'm surprised our boy here managed to get his hands on it, though." Quinn didn't hear him, her mind racing as she fitted the pieces together. The compass, the lack of blood, the strange death in this most peculiar of locations... It couldn't be coincidence, could it? "I think we've been looking at this all wrong," She said quietly, rising to her feet and slipping the compass into her pocket. "Potts wasn't the target. He was just in the way." "In the way of what?" Calloway asked, bewildered. "A rift," She replied, turning to face him with a grim smile. "I think someone was trying to open a portal, and Potts got too close. That's why there's no blood - he was killed on the other side, and then brought back here." "But why would anyone want to do that? And how do you know?" Quinn tapped the compass in her pocket. "Because this little beauty is pointing straight at the wall behind you. Right where I'm guessing Potts' body was found." Calloway blinked, and then spun around, staring at the blank brickwork with newfound unease. As if on cue, the air began to shimmer and writhe, tendrils of shadow reaching out to grasp at the edges of reality. "No way," He whispered, his voice strangled with fear and awe. "That can't be..." "It is," Quinn said simply, watching as the rift grew wider, taller, darker. She could feel it tugging at her senses, whispering promises of power and secrets untold. "And we need to stop it before it gets any bigger." She glanced around the market, her gaze settling on a stall draped in crimson velvet. The owner, a wizened old woman with eyes like chips of ice, met her gaze and nodded once, slowly. "Ask her for the sigil," Calloway hissed, clutching at her sleeve. "Please, Detective, just ask." Quinn hesitated for a moment, and then strode over to the stall, her boots echoing loudly in the sudden quiet that had descended over the market. She leaned in close, speaking softly so only the crone could hear. "I need the sigil," She said, her voice barely a whisper. "The one that will close the rift." The old woman stared at her for a long heartbeat, her expression unreadable, and then reached beneath the counter. When she withdrew her hand, it was clenched around a small parchment scroll, which she held out to Quinn with a trembling hand. "Use it wisely," She murmured, her voice like the rustle of dead leaves. "And be quick about it." Quinn nodded once, grasping the parchment in shaking fingers as she turned back to the rift. It had grown even larger in the short time she'd been away, tendrils of darkness snaking out across the floor and walls, grasping at anything within reach. "Cover your eyes," She shouted at Calloway as she approached, holding up the scroll with one hand and reaching into her pocket for the compass with the other. She traced the sigil on the parchment, her fingers trembling with concentration, and then pressed it against the compass' face. For a heartbeat, nothing happened. And then the shadows began to recede, writhing and hissing like snakes as they were dragged back into the void. The rift shuddered and contracted, shrinking down to a pinprick of darkness before winking out entirely. Silence descended, broken only by the sound of Quinn's ragged breathing and the distant whispers of the market. Calloway stared at her, his eyes wide with a mixture of fear and respect. "What was that?" He asked finally, his voice hoarse. Quinn met his gaze, her own eyes haunted by the memory of what she'd just seen. "A warning," She said quietly. "And maybe a message. There's something out there, Calloway. Something we can't even begin to understand." She turned away, her hands still shaking as she slipped the compass and scroll into her pocket. The Veil Market seemed to close in around her, suffocating in its secrets and lies, and she knew then that nothing would ever be the same again.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:55:55.498Z" 2/19/2026, 10:55:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"She asked suddenly [suddenly]"
1"Calloway said slowly [slowly]"
2"She said quietly [quietly]"
3"Quinn said simply [simply]"
4"He asked finally [finally]"
5"She said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.316
effectiveRatio0.316
74.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"wickedly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"wickedly"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"newfound"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"amidst"
2"eyebrow"
3"velvet"
4"etched"
5"echo"
6"racing"
7"newfound"
8"could feel"
9"echoing"
10"whisper"
11"unreadable"
12"traced"
13"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences59
matches
0"d with fear"
21.79% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount839
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Calloway9
London1
Potts1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Calloway"
3"Potts"
4"Market"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.725
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.842
wordCount1188
matches
0"not a young man, but neither was he old enough to merit such violent dispatch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
91.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean31.26
std14.76
cv0.472
sampleLengths
056
122
239
352
42
512
662
720
832
910
1027
1151
1252
1325
1430
1528
1634
1733
188
1944
2013
2127
2237
2314
2439
2534
2615
2738
2818
2942
3018
3143
3248
3341
3432
359
3637
3744
81.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences59
matches
0"been caved"
1"been killed"
2"was clenched"
3"were dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
90.99% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount676
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.05029585798816568
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014792899408284023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean15.23
std6.92
cv0.454
sampleLengths
019
118
219
322
411
528
619
716
817
92
102
1110
1218
1318
1426
1513
167
1718
1814
196
204
217
2220
2311
2416
2524
2619
2714
2819
2925
3016
3114
3228
3313
3415
356
3623
3710
388
3912
4032
4113
427
4320
4414
4523
4611
473
4813
4915
82.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences58
matches
0"She asked DS Calloway, who'd"
1"He replied, shaking his shaggy"
2"Her colleague watched as she"
3"His skull had been caved"
4"He raised his hands in"
5"She didn't respond, turning instead"
6"She asked suddenly, reaching out"
7"It was old and tarnished,"
8"She felt a cold tingle"
9"It couldn't be coincidence, could"
10"She said quietly, rising to"
11"She replied, turning to face"
12"He whispered, his voice strangled"
13"She could feel it tugging"
14"She glanced around the market,"
15"She leaned in close, speaking"
16"She said, her voice barely"
17"She murmured, her voice like"
18"It had grown even larger"
19"She shouted at Calloway as"
ratio0.414
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences58
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped cautiously"
2"The crime scene stretched out"
3"She asked DS Calloway, who'd"
4"He replied, shaking his shaggy"
5"Quinn arched an eyebrow, glancing"
6"Stalls draped in velvet and"
7"The air hummed with whispered"
8"Her colleague watched as she"
9"Reginald Potts was not a"
10"His skull had been caved"
11"Quinn muttered, kneeling down to"
12"Calloway pointed out dryly"
13"Quinn shot him a sharp"
14"He raised his hands in"
15"She didn't respond, turning instead"
16"Something about the positioning of"
17"She asked suddenly, reaching out"
18"It was old and tarnished,"
19"She felt a cold tingle"
ratio0.914
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"As if on cue, the"
ratio0.017
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped cautiously over the debris-strewn platform, her boots crunching on shattered glass and crumbling plaster."
1"Quinn arched an eyebrow, glancing around the eerie marketplace that had sprung up in this forgotten corner of London."
2"As if on cue, the air began to shimmer and writhe, tendrils of shadow reaching out to grasp at the edges of reality."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Calloway asked, bewildered"
1"She replied, turning to face him with a grim smile"
2"She said, her voice barely a whisper"
14.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"He whispered (whisper)"
2"Calloway hissed (hiss)"
3"She murmured (murmur)"
4"She shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.919
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.27
74.5050%