Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNJBTRRJTD6F3TY3C8SZ7

Run Details

Duration:
35.4s
Cost:
$0.011992

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and lemon polish, the kind of scent that clung to the wood like a second skin. Rory wiped her hands on her jeans, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim light as she reached for the glass Silas had slid across the bar. The ice clinked against the sides, a sharp sound in the quiet hum of the evening. She hadn’t meant to come in. The delivery had taken longer than usual—Yu-Fei’s cousin had insisted on showing her the new wok, as if she hadn’t seen one before—and by the time she’d locked her bike out front, the neon sign above the door had already flickered to life. The green glow seeped through the grimy window, pulling her inside like a moth. Silas was wiping down the counter, his signet ring glinting under the low lights. He didn’t look up right away. "You’re late." "Traffic." She took a sip, the bourbon burning just enough to make her throat tighten. "And Yu-Fei’s cousin." A smirk tugged at the corner of his mouth. "Still working for the dragon lady, then?" "Someone’s got to keep this city fed." She swirled the glass, watching the amber liquid lap at the edges. The bar was empty except for the two of them, the kind of quiet that settled in the bones. She should’ve left. But the warmth of the alcohol had already unspooled something in her chest, and she found herself leaning into the counter, elbows pressing into the polished wood. Silas set the rag down. His hazel eyes flicked over her, sharp as ever, like he was cataloging every change since the last time. "You look different." "Five years’ll do that." "Not just the years." He tilted his head, the grey streaks in his auburn hair catching the light. "You’re softer." She laughed, but it came out wrong, too quick, too brittle. "Soft? That’s a first." He didn’t smile. Just studied her, the way he used to when she’d come in here at nineteen, all sharp edges and borrowed bravado, running from something she wouldn’t name. Back then, he’d been the one to hand her a drink and say, *Talk or don’t, but you’re not leaving until you’ve got a plan.* Now, he just waited. Rory traced the rim of her glass. "I heard you retired." "Officially." He tapped his knee, the one that still gave him trouble. "Unofficially, I still know where the bodies are buried." "Literally or figuratively?" "Both." A beat of silence. The kind that stretched too long, too heavy. She should’ve asked about the bar, about the hidden room behind the bookshelf, about the life he’d built after the one that had nearly broken him. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the weight of all the things they weren’t saying. "You ever think about leaving?" she asked instead. "Every damn day." He poured himself a finger of whiskey, neat. "But this city’s got its hooks in me. Same as it’s got its hooks in you." She wanted to argue. Wanted to say she was different now, that she’d left Cardiff and Evan and the girl who’d flinched at raised voices behind her. But the lie tasted sour, and she swallowed it down with the last of her drink. Silas refilled her glass without asking. "You ever hear from him?" The question hit like a punch. She wrapped her fingers around the glass, knuckles whitening. "No." "Good." "Not like that." She exhaled, sharp. "He’s not—he’s not the reason I left." "Doesn’t matter why you left. Only matters that you did." He leaned forward, just slightly, the signet ring pressing into the wood. "You ever think about going back?" The words settled between them, heavy as the silence that followed. She could see it—the train tickets, the familiar streets, the way her mother’s voice would crack when she answered the door. But then there was Evan’s laugh, the way it had curled around her name like a noose, and the thought of it made her stomach twist. "No," she said, too quickly. "There’s nothing for me there." Silas didn’t call her on the lie. Just nodded, like he’d expected it. "Then what are you still doing here?" The question hung in the air, sharp as a blade. She opened her mouth, then closed it. The truth was, she didn’t know. London had been an escape, a place to lose herself in the crowd, in the rhythm of deliveries and late-night shifts and the quiet hum of the city. But escapes had a way of becoming cages, and she’d been here long enough to feel the bars. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. Then, slowly, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a set of keys. He slid them across the bar, the metal cold against her fingers. "What’s this?" "The flat above the bar." He took a sip of his whiskey. "It’s yours if you want it." She stared at the keys, the weight of them unfamiliar in her palm. "Why?" "Because you look like you could use a place to land." He set his glass down. "And because I owe you." "You don’t owe me anything." "Don’t I?" His voice was quiet, but it carried the weight of years. "You were the only one who didn’t treat me like a relic when I came back from Prague. You didn’t ask questions. Didn’t offer pity. Just handed me a drink and told me to get on with it." She remembered. The night he’d limped in here, his face a mask of pain and something darker, something she hadn’t been able to name. She’d been twenty then, still raw from Cardiff, still jumping at shadows. But she’d recognized the look in his eyes—the one that said he’d seen too much and wasn’t sure he wanted to see anything else. She’d poured him a whiskey and slid it across the bar. *Drink up. Then tell me what you need.* He’d laughed, just once, sharp and bitter. *I need a new knee.* *Then get one,* she’d said. *But first, drink.* Now, she turned the keys over in her hand, the metal biting into her skin. "I can’t afford this." "You can work it off." He nodded toward the back of the bar. "I could use someone to manage the books. And the deliveries." She should’ve said no. Should’ve walked out, gotten on her bike, and lost herself in the London night. But the keys were warm now, and the weight of them felt like an anchor, something solid in the storm. "Fine," she said, pocketing them. "But I’m keeping my job at the restaurant." Silas smirked. "Wouldn’t expect anything less." She took another sip of her drink, the bourbon smoother this time. The bar felt different now, the air less heavy, the weight of the past a little lighter. But as she looked at Silas, at the lines around his eyes and the way his hands still moved with the precision of a man who’d spent a lifetime keeping secrets, she knew some things never really changed. "You ever miss it?" she asked. "The field work?" He was quiet for a long moment. Then he reached for the bottle, pouring himself another drink. "Every damn day." She nodded, like she understood. But the truth was, she didn’t. Not really. She’d run from her past, but Silas had built his life around his. And as the neon sign outside flickered, casting shadows across the bar, she wondered if either of them would ever really be free.
total_cost0.011992

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.326
leniency0.652
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.043
76.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1271
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1271
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"weight"
count4
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"carried the weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"glinting"
2"warmth"
3"flicked"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
8"stomach"
9"unreadable"
10"carried the weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords31
totalWords1263
ratio0.025
matches
0"Talk or don’t, but you’re not leaving until you’ve got a plan."
1"Drink up. Then tell me what you need."
2"I need a new knee."
3"Then get one,"
4"But first, drink."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1020
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Yu1
Fei1
Cardiff2
Evan2
London2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Fei"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an anchor, something solid in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1263
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.78
std20.79
cv0.807
sampleLengths
068
163
222
318
416
568
627
74
820
915
1055
114
1211
1321
143
151
1656
178
1827
1943
2011
2116
221
2313
2428
2558
2610
2720
2869
2932
302
3118
3214
3321
345
3551
3660
3719
3812
398
4019
4124
4238
4313
446
4567
469
4720
4849
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was cataloging"
2"weren’t saying"
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"The delivery had taken longer than usual—Yu-Fei’s cousin had insisted on showing her the new wok, as if she hadn’t seen one before—and by the time she’d locked her bike out front, the neon sign above the door had already flickered to life."
1"She could see it—the train tickets, the familiar streets, the way her mother’s voice would crack when she answered the door."
2"But she’d recognized the look in his eyes—the one that said he’d seen too much and wasn’t sure he wanted to see anything else."
94.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1026
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04580896686159844
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00682261208576998
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.89
std8.62
cv0.791
sampleLengths
023
129
216
36
443
514
614
76
82
915
103
119
127
1319
1419
153
1627
175
1819
193
204
2118
222
2311
244
253
2627
2725
284
297
304
3112
329
333
341
354
368
3726
3818
398
4011
4116
424
4323
4416
456
465
476
489
491
58.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.35344827586206895
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just studied her, the way"
1"Just nodded, like he’d expected"
2"Then, slowly, he reached into"
3"Then tell me what you"
4"*Then get one,* she’d said."
5"Then he reached for the"
ratio0.075
40.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences80
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to come"
1"He didn’t look up right"
2"She took a sip, the"
3"She swirled the glass, watching"
4"She should’ve left."
5"His hazel eyes flicked over"
6"He tilted his head, the"
7"She laughed, but it came"
8"He didn’t smile."
9"He tapped his knee, the"
10"She should’ve asked about the"
11"she asked instead"
12"He poured himself a finger"
13"She wanted to argue."
14"She wrapped her fingers around"
15"She exhaled, sharp"
16"He leaned forward, just slightly,"
17"She could see it—the train"
18"she said, too quickly"
19"She opened her mouth, then"
ratio0.45
97.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences80
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The ice clinked against the"
3"She hadn’t meant to come"
4"The delivery had taken longer"
5"The green glow seeped through"
6"Silas was wiping down the"
7"He didn’t look up right"
8"She took a sip, the"
9"A smirk tugged at the"
10"She swirled the glass, watching"
11"The bar was empty except"
12"She should’ve left."
13"Silas set the rag down."
14"His hazel eyes flicked over"
15"He tilted his head, the"
16"She laughed, but it came"
17"He didn’t smile."
18"Rory traced the rim of"
19"He tapped his knee, the"
ratio0.725
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now, he just waited."
1"*But first, drink.*"
2"Now, she turned the keys"
ratio0.038
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The delivery had taken longer than usual—Yu-Fei’s cousin had insisted on showing her the new wok, as if she hadn’t seen one before—and by the time she’d locked …"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She took, the bourbon burning just enough to make her throat tighten"
1"He poured, neat"
2"She exhaled, sharp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.4963%