| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 66.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 896 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 896 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "chilling" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "otherworldly" | | 14 | "charged" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "profound" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" | | 1 | "heart hammered in her chest" | | 2 | "a sense of dread" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 898 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 881 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 6 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Silence | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Isolde | 1 | | Queen | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.649 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "silence that seemed to press in around her" | | 1 | "melody that seemed to echo all around her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 898 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 41.08% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 37.42 | | std | 10.99 | | cv | 0.294 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 15 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "been given" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was enveloped" |
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| 72.61% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was beginning" | | 2 | "was being" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "She was being ridiculous – this was the Fae Grove, a place she had visited countless times." | | 1 | "Aurora lunged, but it was too late – the paper vanished into the darkness." | | 2 | "She had to get to the Fae realm, had to escape this thing before it –" | | 3 | "But something was different – the air was charged with a primal, unsettling energy, and the trees seemed to loom even taller, their branches reaching towards the inky sky." | | 4 | "Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she recognized the woman – Isolde, the Fae Queen herself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 877 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.02394526795895097 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014823261117445839 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 13.82 | | std | 5.99 | | cv | 0.433 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 60.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.36923076923076925 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a low growl reached" | | 1 | "Cautiously, Aurora began to explore" | | 2 | "Suddenly, a faint whisper reached" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 97.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 1 | "She was being ridiculous –" | | 2 | "She continued on, her footsteps" | | 3 | "She unfolded the paper, squinting" | | 4 | "she cried, her voice sounding" | | 5 | "She stared at the stones," | | 6 | "She couldn't remember the exact" | | 7 | "she called, cursing the tremor" | | 8 | "She was beginning to regret" | | 9 | "Her heart leapt into her" | | 10 | "She fell to the ground," | | 11 | "She had to get to" | | 12 | "Her hand closed around the" | | 13 | "She emerged in a clearing," | | 14 | "She strained her ears, listening" | | 15 | "She froze, her gaze darting" | | 16 | "she called out, her voice" | | 17 | "Her eyes were hollow, her" | | 18 | "she said, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 97.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's heart hammered in her" | | 1 | "The familiar scent of wildflowers" | | 2 | "The usual birdsong was absent," | | 3 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 4 | "A twig snapped behind her," | | 5 | "Aurora took a deep breath," | | 6 | "She was being ridiculous –" | | 7 | "She continued on, her footsteps" | | 8 | "The air grew colder, her" | | 9 | "A shiver ran down her" | | 10 | "Aurora paused, reaching into her" | | 11 | "She unfolded the paper, squinting" | | 12 | "Aurora lunged, but it was" | | 13 | "she cried, her voice sounding" | | 14 | "She stared at the stones," | | 15 | "She couldn't remember the exact" | | 16 | "A faint rustling in the" | | 17 | "she called, cursing the tremor" | | 18 | "Nothing moved, save for the" | | 19 | "Aurora's breath caught in her" |
| | ratio | 0.726 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar scent of wildflowers filled the air, but something felt off, a prickling at the back of her neck that had her gripping the Heartstone pendant at he…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she cried, her voice sounding small and hollow in the oppressive silence" | | 1 | "Aurora stammered, her fingers fumbling with the knife" | | 2 | "she called out, her voice trembling" | | 3 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she cried (cry)" | | 1 | "Aurora stammered (stammer)" | | 2 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |