Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNQ5MSS9QFFZ7VC041HE0

Run Details

Duration:
13.4s
Cost:
$0.001889
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's heart hammered in her chest as she stepped into the Fae Grove, the ancient standing stones casting long shadows in the moonlight. The familiar scent of wildflowers filled the air, but something felt off, a prickling at the back of her neck that had her gripping the Heartstone pendant at her throat. The usual birdsong was absent, replaced by an eerie silence that seemed to press in around her. Her boots crunched on the undergrowth, the only sound to break the stillness. As she ventured deeper into the grove, the trees seemed to loom closer, their twisted branches reaching out like grasping claws. A twig snapped behind her, and she whirled around, her hand flying to the knife at her belt. But there was nothing there, only the gentle sway of the leaves. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to calm her nerves. She was being ridiculous – this was the Fae Grove, a place she had visited countless times. There was no reason to be afraid. Still, the unease refused to abate. She continued on, her footsteps slow and cautious. The air grew colder, her breath misting before her. A shiver ran down her spine, and she couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. Ahead, the standing stones loomed, their ancient symbols etched into the weathered surface. Aurora paused, reaching into her pocket for the scrap of parchment she had been given. According to the instructions, she was supposed to recite a passage, to open a doorway to the Fae realm. She unfolded the paper, squinting in the dim light. But as she began to read the words, a sudden gust of wind whipped through the grove, snatching the parchment from her hands. Aurora lunged, but it was too late – the paper vanished into the darkness. "No!" she cried, her voice sounding small and hollow in the oppressive silence. She stared at the stones, her mind racing. What was she supposed to do now? She couldn't remember the exact wording of the incantation. A faint rustling in the undergrowth caught her attention, and she spun around, her hand tightening on the hilt of her knife. "Who's there?" she called, cursing the tremor in her voice. Silence. Nothing moved, save for the swaying branches overhead. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as a sense of dread crept up her spine. She was beginning to regret coming here alone. Suddenly, a low growl reached her ears, and she whirled around to see a pair of glowing eyes emerge from the shadows. Her heart leapt into her throat as a massive, shadowy figure stepped forward, its form indistinct and menacing. "W-what are you?" Aurora stammered, her fingers fumbling with the knife. The creature let out a bone-chilling howl, and she stumbled backwards, her foot catching on a root. She fell to the ground, the knife clattering from her grasp. The creature advanced, its growls echoing through the grove. Aurora's mind raced, desperately trying to remember the incantation. She had to get to the Fae realm, had to escape this thing before it – Her hand closed around the Heartstone pendant, and a faint warmth spread through her. Squeezing her eyes shut, she began to recite the words, the incantation flowing from her lips with a clarity she hadn't expected. As the last syllable left her mouth, a blinding light flared, and Aurora felt the ground tremble beneath her. The creature let out a deafening roar, its shadow suddenly obscured by a shimmering veil. Aurora opened her eyes, gasping at the sight before her. The standing stones had come alive, pulsing with a vibrant, otherworldly energy. A shimmering portal had opened between them, the air shimmering and distorting. Without hesitation, Aurora scrambled to her feet and dove through the portal, the creature's howls fading behind her as she was enveloped in a whirlwind of color and sound. She emerged in a clearing, the familiar sight of the Fae Grove greeting her. But something was different – the air was charged with a primal, unsettling energy, and the trees seemed to loom even taller, their branches reaching towards the inky sky. Cautiously, Aurora began to explore her surroundings, her heart still racing. The Heartstone pendant pulsed with a steady warmth, and she gripped it tightly, drawing comfort from its glow. As she ventured deeper into the grove, Aurora couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched. The silence was oppressive, broken only by the occasional rustle of leaves or the snap of a twig. She strained her ears, listening for any sign of movement, but the forest remained eerily still. Suddenly, a faint whisper reached her ears, barely audible over the pounding of her heart. She froze, her gaze darting from one shadowy corner to the next. The whisper grew louder, a haunting melody that seemed to echo all around her. Aurora swallowed hard, her mouth dry. "H-hello?" she called out, her voice trembling. "Is anyone there?" The whisper fell silent, and for a moment, Aurora dared to hope that she had imagined it. But then, a figure emerged from the trees, its form pale and ethereal. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she recognized the woman – Isolde, the Fae Queen herself. Her eyes were hollow, her expression one of profound sorrow. "Aurora Carter," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "You should not have come."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:56:00.696Z" 2/19/2026, 10:56:00 AM
model"anthropic/claude-3-haiku"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count3
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"cautiously"
2"tightly"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count2
7
word"racing"
count2
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"chilling"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count2
13
word"otherworldly"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count4
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"echo"
count1
19
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"down her spine"
4"loomed"
5"etched"
6"oppressive"
7"racing"
8"sense of"
9"chilling"
10"echoing"
11"raced"
12"warmth"
13"otherworldly"
14"charged"
15"pulsed"
16"whisper"
17"pounding"
18"echo"
19"profound"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
2
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"heart hammered in her chest"
2"a sense of dread"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"a sense of dread"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords898
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount881
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae6
Grove3
Heartstone3
Silence1
Aurora15
Isolde1
Queen1
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.649
windowScore0.833
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"silence that seemed to press in around her"
1"melody that seemed to echo all around her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount898
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"hope that she"
41.08% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean37.42
std10.99
cv0.294
sampleLengths
053
151
264
338
447
546
637
732
832
940
1039
1134
1236
1334
1434
1529
1643
1729
1851
1941
2016
2130
2227
2315
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"been given"
1"was supposed"
2"was enveloped"
72.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was being"
1"was beginning"
2"was being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences65
ratio0.077
matches
0"She was being ridiculous – this was the Fae Grove, a place she had visited countless times."
1"Aurora lunged, but it was too late – the paper vanished into the darkness."
2"She had to get to the Fae realm, had to escape this thing before it –"
3"But something was different – the air was charged with a primal, unsettling energy, and the trees seemed to loom even taller, their branches reaching towards the inky sky."
4"Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she recognized the woman – Isolde, the Fae Queen herself."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount877
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02394526795895097
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014823261117445839
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean13.82
std5.99
cv0.433
sampleLengths
023
130
217
313
421
518
612
710
817
97
106
118
129
1315
1413
1515
1619
179
1823
1914
2013
218
227
239
2422
2510
261
278
2815
298
3022
3118
3211
3317
3411
359
369
3716
3814
3922
4019
4115
4210
4312
4412
4529
4614
4729
4811
4918
60.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.36923076923076925
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Suddenly, a low growl reached"
1"Cautiously, Aurora began to explore"
2"Suddenly, a faint whisper reached"
ratio0.048
97.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her boots crunched on the"
1"She was being ridiculous –"
2"She continued on, her footsteps"
3"She unfolded the paper, squinting"
4"she cried, her voice sounding"
5"She stared at the stones,"
6"She couldn't remember the exact"
7"she called, cursing the tremor"
8"She was beginning to regret"
9"Her heart leapt into her"
10"She fell to the ground,"
11"She had to get to"
12"Her hand closed around the"
13"She emerged in a clearing,"
14"She strained her ears, listening"
15"She froze, her gaze darting"
16"she called out, her voice"
17"Her eyes were hollow, her"
18"she said, her voice barely"
ratio0.306
97.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora's heart hammered in her"
1"The familiar scent of wildflowers"
2"The usual birdsong was absent,"
3"Her boots crunched on the"
4"A twig snapped behind her,"
5"Aurora took a deep breath,"
6"She was being ridiculous –"
7"She continued on, her footsteps"
8"The air grew colder, her"
9"A shiver ran down her"
10"Aurora paused, reaching into her"
11"She unfolded the paper, squinting"
12"Aurora lunged, but it was"
13"she cried, her voice sounding"
14"She stared at the stones,"
15"She couldn't remember the exact"
16"A faint rustling in the"
17"she called, cursing the tremor"
18"Nothing moved, save for the"
19"Aurora's breath caught in her"
ratio0.726
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The familiar scent of wildflowers filled the air, but something felt off, a prickling at the back of her neck that had her gripping the Heartstone pendant at he…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she cried, her voice sounding small and hollow in the oppressive silence"
1"Aurora stammered, her fingers fumbling with the knife"
2"she called out, her voice trembling"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she cried (cry)"
1"Aurora stammered (stammer)"
2"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.6
69.6946%